Week 1: Witty vs. Dancake- WITTY WINS BY NS (OPEN FOR FEED)

[Split Eight]

AOWL Season V, Week 1


SUMMARY OF RULES:

Verses are due
Sunday, July 19th, 11:59p.m. PCT
Monday, July 20th 2:59a.m. EST
Monday, July 20th 7:59a.m UK
There are NO extensions.

Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Votes are due Wednesday, July 22nd, 11:00p.m. PCT/8p.m. EST/4a.m. UK. Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.

Read the full rules here! (http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=96884)

TOPIC:
http://i.imgur.com/82O9WVAh.jpg


Good luck Witty and Dancake

[Witty]

I love you.

[PancakeBrah]

And I you

[Witty]

And I you

lmao you showing?

[PancakeBrah]

I'm going to try. I just realized this was up.

[Witty]

I feel the touch, as my skin crawls; it's disgusting
The lusting stare throughout all of the thrusting
Adjusting my seat, so my customer feels at ease
And unzipping the jeans as I fall to my knees
The patron of filth for all the night's sleaze
I kiss and I lick, without meeting the eyes
Feeling the rise of demons that eat me inside
I don't do it cuz I like it, I do it for the rent
I do it for the dollar and I do it for the cent
No one's gonna save me, superman's a myth
In a world full of villains, only lex luthor can exist
My customer stares, lost in my tired eyes
Complete lack of emotion the cost of expired cries
A prisoner in plain view, frequent visitor of hell
My cell invisible, the land of pity where i dwell
Treat me like a doormat, wipe your dirty feet
Tread upon my spirit, leave me cryin' on the street
Show me I'm a dirty whore, treat me like it too
Choke my undeserving throat, beat me black n blue
Tell me that you hate me, make me gasp and weeze
You can scrape and maim me, just pay me as u leave
I'll cry as you drive away as grief makes me bezerk
I'm just a male hooker, on the street waiting for work.

[Woke]

Perfect ending with the male references, breathed the picture more life, very unexpected. Loved the verse, I want to meat a girl like this and show her a good night, at least for me.

[2tripple0]

Lol I was going to say this was dope til I realised it was about a male prostitute lol the mechanics were nice the flow was tight lol just thought u could have dealt with the topic in a different way lol can't understand why you chose to take the verse thst way but regardless it was written well and I look forward to seeing more from you. Good luck with the rest of ya shit in this league