Lotto Smirk vs Remy LeBeau - REMY WINS

[Hush]

10 lines


due 48 hrs from both check ins

first to 5 votes wins
3-0 KO rule in effect


Lotto Smirk Remy LeBeau



Lets make it a good one!

[Lotto Smirk]

It's over

mediorce opponents verses make u sweat, bein dope? I don't think u are able
had trouble dealing with aces, even when you brought all your best cards to the table
I'll be thanked greatly for this killing, there'll be headshots without warning
so when I'm popping open remy, we drinking that celebrating ya death till the morning
me & fraze got it locked, you'll get picked last cus u ain't a vet
ur just an unwanted tag hense when asked ppl look to the ground n just scratch thier neck
I have kids that take up my time, but this pedophile geek still won't beat me
he wouldn't be aloud near a minor so bad he's been banned of minecraft on the PC
scrapped out 2 bars cus I seen ya pic in nbl n I went a bit wild
cus u let kids draw on ya chest, no diss needed it already says pedophile

[Useless]

not wanted in nbl or fn's cus ya spit wack, while I spit ether
cus my clas sick, n on the subject ya not wanted in this summers either

Its insane u wrote that in 2015 thinking its fresh, u can't take that shit n revive it.
Sooo if u the next jenner new school.. I wanna burn it down with u bitches inside it.
Yo ur skills rising slowly but you'll never be reaching ours.
U being asterisk alot vs me, cause I got them hands that'll have u seeing stars.
17-26? This fgt tryna learn how to text battle by reading thru instructions.
I'll leave this Lot flattened like I was breaking ground for new construction.
U can count the knuckles that smash ur smirkn face just for lookn goofy.
I got them 'lucky numbers' that'll beat lotto like I was travolta in the movie.
I'm dope bro, txting on my alien shit.
Lotto is a gamble.. N u wack enough to be mistaken for one his aliases.

[Grandiloquent]

mediorce opponents verses make u sweat, bein dope? I don't think u are able
had trouble dealing with aces, even when you brought all your best cards to the table
ok
I'll be thanked greatly for this killing, there'll be headshots without warning
so when I'm popping open remy, we drinking that celebrating ya death till the morning
ok
me & fraze got it locked, you'll get picked last cus u ain't a vet
ur just an unwanted tag hense when asked ppl look to the ground n just scratch thier neck
meh didn't work IMO
I have kids that take up my time, but this pedophile geek still won't beat me
he wouldn't be aloud near a minor so bad he's been banned of minecraft on the PC
can't decide on this one I like it n hate it at the same time ?
scrapped out 2 bars cus I seen ya pic in nbl n I went a bit wild
cus u let kids draw on ya chest, no diss needed it already says pedophile
I liked this close

Its insane u wrote that in 2015 thinking its fresh, u can't take that shit n revive it.
Sooo if u the next jenner new school.. I wanna burn it down with u bitches inside it.
ok bit statement like but ok
Yo ur skills rising slowly but you'll never be reaching ours.
U being asterisk alot vs me, cause I got them hands that'll have u seeing stars.
I like the concept
17-26? This fgt tryna learn how to text battle by reading thru instructions.
I'll leave this Lot flattened like I was breaking ground for new construction.
the wording took away from this but I liked the concept
U can count the knuckles that smash ur smirkn face just for lookn goofy.
I got them 'lucky numbers' that'll beat lotto like I was travolta in the movie.
nice
I'm dope bro, txting on my alien shit.
Lotto is a gamble.. N u wack enough to be mistaken for one his aliases.
haha lotb

Hard to choose a winner. I think lotto had a more consistent ten but remy had the better jabs when they landed....

Going to go lotto for having better flow. This could go either way.

edit: change vote - sorry lotto but I reread an actually preferred remys on the second read through

vote remy

[IAmRhetoric]

mediorce opponents verses make u sweat, bein dope? I don't think u are able
had trouble dealing with aces, even when you brought all your best cards to the table
decent flip, too many words for too simple of a punch

I'll be thanked greatly for this killing, there'll be headshots without warning
so when I'm popping open remy, we drinking that celebrating ya death till the morning
wording is kinda weird but decent flip

me & fraze got it locked, you'll get picked last cus u ain't a vet
ur just an unwanted tag hense when asked ppl look to the ground n just scratch thier neck
okay i like this

I have kids that take up my time, but this pedophile geek still won't beat me
he wouldn't be aloud near a minor so bad he's been banned of minecraft on the PC
wayyyy too corny

scrapped out 2 bars cus I seen ya pic in nbl n I went a bit wild
cus u let kids draw on ya chest, no diss needed it already says pedophile
lol

Its insane u wrote that in 2015 thinking its fresh, u can't take that shit n revive it.
Sooo if u the next jenner new school.. I wanna burn it down with u bitches inside it.
nah

Yo ur skills rising slowly but you'll never be reaching ours.
U being asterisk alot vs me, cause I got them hands that'll have u seeing stars.
nice

17-26? This fgt tryna learn how to text battle by reading thru instructions.
I'll leave this Lot flattened like I was breaking ground for new construction.
nice

U can count the knuckles that smash ur smirkn face just for lookn goofy.
I got them 'lucky numbers' that'll beat lotto like I was travolta in the movie.
okay

I'm dope bro, txting on my alien shit.
Lotto is a gamble.. N u wack enough to be mistaken for one his aliases.
damn

v/ Remy

Lotto if you work on your shit i could see you being pretty dope tbh

[Yppih]

Lotto

Bar1-Thought it was cool, couldve hit harder. 2.5/5
Bar2-Cool again. 2.5/5
Bar3-Yeah wording hurt this and not the greatest execution. 1.5/5
Bar4-Wording again was horrid, barely understood what you were trying to say. Wording really messed this bar up for me. 1.5/5
Bar5-Ehhh could've been better. 2/5

Overall-10/25

You started solid and lost steam towards the end.

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Remy

Bar1-I liked it. 3/5
Bar2-W/p was sound. Cool concept. 3/5
Bar3-Cool. 2.5/5
Bar4-Cool. 2.5/5
Bar5-Haha 3/5

Overall-14/25

You were definitely more consistent, first time reading from you. You had fresh concepts though.

v/Remy - He was the attacking force and outmatched his opponents

[Havoc]

I'll be thanked greatly for this killing, there'll be headshots without warning
so when I'm popping open remy, we drinking that celebrating ya death till the morning

vs



17-26? This fgt tryna learn how to text battle by reading thru instructions.
I'll leave this Lot flattened like I was breaking ground for new construction.
U can count the knuckles that smash ur smirkn face just for lookn goofy.
I got them 'lucky numbers' that'll beat lotto like I was travolta in the movie.
I'm dope bro, txting on my alien shit.
Lotto is a gamble.. N u wack enough to be mistaken for one his aliases.


remy was more consistent and creative which lead to more quotables.. mvgt to rem for the harder hitters

[Dope girl]

Vote Remy
Better overall and concept
His verse more creative than Lotto

[Pastor Troy]

Lotto-ace, opening remy

Remy-i pretty much enjoyed the whole verse.

v-remy