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Victor.
08-04-2015, 02:53 PM
2 on 2 Tournament


Each team is responsible for 16 lines.
The verse MUST be posted by ONLY ONE team mate.
Sync up via PM and drop ONLY your finalized verse in this thread.
Normal rules apply, no flipping, biting, recycling, swaying/discussing votes or your opponents verses.
Basically be a faggot and ima DQ you and give you 10 Losses off rip.



DUE DATE IS THIS SUNDAY AUGUST 10 2015




there will be NO extra days, or lee way on due dates SO DONT ASK ME.




The Gentlemen - Sn00p & Knucklehead
Sharp Fox - Witty & Sharp

~RustyGunZ~
08-10-2015, 12:38 AM
Y'all marked men now...

These faker's fuckin' DEAD. Shootas gonna rape ya w/ the lead
We ain't playin' "Who Am I"... But I'mma put some paper on your heads
Pussy? We catchin' casualties. Our minds on point & dicks cause brutalities
When bitches say they like Sharp & Witty, it's not u. they mean our personalities
Ur sluts are ours, give em a thrill til they weared & the drill leaves em teared
Call us the Aristocats.. When those pussies come around we throwin' bills in the air
Can't hide from death, we got steel w/ drums no matter where u queers will run
Anywhere you walk, the Cans'll be in front of you.. That's just how we deal with BUMS
NO girl feels these chumps. & they'd never remember, let alone CALL the hobos
only time i've seen S&W leave a lasting impression, i was looking at a revolver logo
sharp looks like a nerd & plays in a jazz band... holy fk, this old FOOL is queer
we founded the Outsiders just weeks ago. how have u been in ur whole school career?!
& witty acting like he can persist in a fight? stop that, u fag
if i bar brawl w/ the Fox...
i'mma put a glass into ur eyesocket. & give u the fucking top hat to match
witty's dumb af. so i'mma take his brain out, toss his body & leave it behind...
w/ that death, u getting more F's from CoD players than from all ur teachers combined

Good day

Sharp
08-10-2015, 01:38 AM
Sn00p and Knucklehead aka Seth Canfield (because we saw the thread before you deleted it)

They found MH370 on a beach, and it got me to thinkin' 'aw shucks'
Cuz it reminds me of both u dudes...used to be fly, but now ur washed up
I bet Knuck writing all his teams bars, Snoop done screwed u, what a jerk
But it shouldn't be a surprise to see a German make a jew do all the work
He still racist scum. The Fox'll end you cuz ppl w/ power should
Ya like the Confederate flag. An SC massacre's takin you down for good
Knuck Ur team weird as fuck, we know Germans got no love for the Jew
So if Sn00p comin' with fire...he's just preparing the oven for you
Just used ur permissions to steal info. Bitch ur truly a coward
You've done fuckin nothing in moderation... including abusing ya powers
now Karaoke has your info n you're shook. You can't mask it, bruh
The way Kar bears down on u it makes sense you'd turn soft n ask for love
Sn00p u homo fuck, if anyone calls u straight it's damn lies
Even if hoes around this German queer concentrate on camp guys
Ur face'll form a dark picture when the Fox bites and Sharp hits ya
We know where u are..Knuck always with his homies at the bar...
....mitzvah

Chyeahhh!!!
08-10-2015, 11:10 AM
off tops my vote goes to sharp n Witt, appreciated the effort more in creativity and personal. Knuck and Snoop had some shit but Sharps and Witt were more effective with the personals (you niggas is racist b lol). Last half of Knucks and Snoops got with it tho. Sharp n Witt had more chemistry with the back n forths, line for line. I dug

vote Witt n Sharp

Ghost1
08-10-2015, 04:32 PM
The gentleman's verse was crazy choppy an hard to read for me.....the set ups were peculiar? Some ok punches but the wording was really questionable to me.....punches were pretty simple and or played to me. If I see another terrible see u with the cans line....smh....the rest was pretty lack luster....I did lime the glass into ur eye an top hat bar tho...thought sharp fox brought the lullz w the racist jew stuff. Pretty played out shit tho too if I'm being honest. It was an easier read tho an didn't have me like...who talks like this

Here's an example

Pussy? We catchin' casualties. Our minds on point & dicks cause brutalities

Dicks cause brutalities..........this is such a reach. No1 would ever say something like this. Should be coming off more natural in ur set ups...makes the punches crisper. Seemed rushed.

V sharp fox

Amen.
08-11-2015, 10:53 AM
These faker's fuckin' DEAD. Shootas gonna rape ya w/ the lead
We ain't playin' "Who Am I"... But I'mma put some paper on your heads
- didn't like this
Pussy? We catchin' casualties. Our minds on point & dicks cause brutalities
When bitches say they like Sharp & Witty, it's not u. they mean our personalities
- this was garbage
Ur sluts are ours, give em a thrill til they weared & the drill leaves em teared
Call us the Aristocats.. When those pussies come around we throwin' bills in the air
- mild
Can't hide from death, we got steel w/ drums no matter where u queers will run
Anywhere you walk, the Cans'll be in front of you.. That's just how we deal with BUMS
- this was tough
NO girl feels these chumps. & they'd never remember, let alone CALL the hobos
only time i've seen S&W leave a lasting impression, i was looking at a revolver logo
- tough
sharp looks like a nerd & plays in a jazz band... holy fk, this old FOOL is queer
we founded the Outsiders just weeks ago. how have u been in ur whole school career?!
- nah mild
& witty acting like he can persist in a fight? stop that, u fag
if i bar brawl w/ the Fox...
i'mma put a glass into ur eyesocket. & give u the fucking top hat to match
- this was tough
witty's dumb af. so i'mma take his brain out, toss his body & leave it behind...
w/ that death, u getting more F's from CoD players than from all ur teachers combined
- dece

vs

They found MH370 on a beach, and it got me to thinkin' 'aw shucks'
Cuz it reminds me of both u dudes...used to be fly, but now ur washed up
- mild
I bet Knuck writing all his teams bars, Snoop done screwed u, what a jerk
But it shouldn't be a surprise to see a German make a jew do all the work
- soft but cool at the same time lol think you could have been harsher w/ this
He still racist scum. The Fox'll end you cuz ppl w/ power should
Ya like the Confederate flag. An SC massacre's takin you down for good
- mild
Knuck Ur team weird as fuck, we know Germans got no love for the Jew
So if Sn00p comin' with fire...he's just preparing the oven for you
- tough
Just used ur permissions to steal info. Bitch ur truly a coward
You've done fuckin nothing in moderation... including abusing ya powers
- tough
now Karaoke has your info n you're shook. You can't mask it, bruh
The way Kar bears down on u it makes sense you'd turn soft n ask for love
- tough
Sn00p u homo fuck, if anyone calls u straight it's damn lies
Even if hoes around this German queer concentrate on camp guys
- lol damn tough
Ur face'll form a dark picture when the Fox bites and Sharp hits ya
We know where u are..Knuck always with his homies at the bar...
....mitzvah
- hahah cool I guess

1st verse started out slow man, then kind of picked up. 2nd drop was a lot more consistent with minor weak/mild attempts in the beginning an then pickin up the pace straight through as well as personals were on point and wicked straight shots rather then random concepts tossed out

Sharp & Fox w/ the edge here

Allen Knight
08-11-2015, 04:18 PM
Can't hide from death, we got steel w/ drums no matter where u queers will run
Anywhere you walk, the Cans'll be in front of you.. That's just how we deal with BUMS
NO girl feels these chumps. & they'd never remember, let alone CALL the hobos
only time i've seen S&W leave a lasting impression, i was looking at a revolver logo
& witty acting like he can persist in a fight? stop that, u fag
if i bar brawl w/ the Fox...
i'mma put a glass into ur eyesocket. & give u the fucking top hat to match


Vs


I bet Knuck writing all his teams bars, Snoop done screwed u, what a jerk
But it shouldn't be a surprise to see a German make a jew do all the work
Knuck Ur team weird as fuck, we know Germans got no love for the Jew
So if Sn00p comin' with fire...he's just preparing the oven for you
Just used ur permissions to steal info. Bitch ur truly a coward
You've done fuckin nothing in moderation... including abusing ya powers
now Karaoke has your info n you're shook. You can't mask it, bruh
The way Kar bears down on u it makes sense you'd turn soft n ask for love
Sn00p u homo fuck, if anyone calls u straight it's damn lies
Even if hoes around this German queer concentrate on camp guys


v/Sharpfox, cool battle but there was a clear winner, the gentlemen had some dope lines but some the misses hurt them an felt they coulda worded shit a lil cleaner but deal w/ bum bar was fire. wit an sharp had a crazy consistent verse filled w/ personals.. oven bar was doppe an moderation was nice...good verse. hard one for anyone to beat...Props to both on a good battle.

Cred
08-12-2015, 07:51 AM
Cans bums, Revolver logo, Fox hat to match

Vs

German/jew, Preparing over, Moderation, Camp guys

Ok this battle was nice. I expected diff tho. Sharp n witty Came wit it imo. Thought the gentleman wuda brang a more consistent verse tbh . Preparing oven was dope . They took this one pretty comfortable imo

Vote - sharp witty

jilti
08-12-2015, 10:53 AM
Paper on heads, personalities, how we deal with bums

Vs

Washed up, make a jew do all the work, preparing the oven for u, turn soft n ask for love


Sharp n fox had the most consistent verse so they get my vote

Alvin Karpis
08-12-2015, 08:17 PM
The Gentlemen - Sharp and witty line had flare, and the S&W hit, but overall a lot of lines missed

Sharp Fox - Very surprising here, expected it to be closer but you guys came very nice. Had a lot to go at w/ the german-jew angle. Got the W with consistency and less misses


V/Sharp Fox

fraze
08-13-2015, 01:44 AM
These faker's fuckin' DEAD. Shootas gonna rape ya w/ the lead
We ain't playin' "Who Am I"... But I'mma put some paper on your heads
aight
Pussy? We catchin' casualties. Our minds on point & dicks cause brutalities
When bitches say they like Sharp & Witty, it's not u. they mean our personalities
lmao at the setup. punch was decent
Ur sluts are ours, give em a thrill til they weared & the drill leaves em teared
Call us the Aristocats.. When those pussies come around we throwin' bills in the air
not really feelin it.
Can't hide from death, we got steel w/ drums no matter where u queers will run
Anywhere you walk, the Cans'll be in front of you.. That's just how we deal with BUMS
concept is straight but didn't like wording
NO girl feels these chumps. & they'd never remember, let alone CALL the hobos
only time i've seen S&W leave a lasting impression, i was looking at a revolver logo
could have worded this to hit harder. kinda light.
sharp looks like a nerd & plays in a jazz band... holy fk, this old FOOL is queer
we founded the Outsiders just weeks ago. how have u been in ur whole school career?!
meh
& witty acting like he can persist in a fight? stop that, u fag
if i bar brawl w/ the Fox...
i'mma put a glass into ur eyesocket. & give u the fucking top hat to match
ok
witty's dumb af. so i'mma take his brain out, toss his body & leave it behind...
w/ that death, u getting more F's from CoD players than from all ur teachers combined
maybe im missing something but this was weak to me



They found MH370 on a beach, and it got me to thinkin' 'aw shucks'
Cuz it reminds me of both u dudes...used to be fly, but now ur washed up
this is ok
I bet Knuck writing all his teams bars, Snoop done screwed u, what a jerk
But it shouldn't be a surprise to see a German make a jew do all the work
harsh but statementish
He still racist scum. The Fox'll end you cuz ppl w/ power should
Ya like the Confederate flag. An SC massacre's takin you down for good
ok
Knuck Ur team weird as fuck, we know Germans got no love for the Jew
So if Sn00p comin' with fire...he's just preparing the oven for you
harsh. ok punch
Just used ur permissions to steal info. Bitch ur truly a coward
You've done fuckin nothing in moderation... including abusing ya powers
nice wording
now Karaoke has your info n you're shook. You can't mask it, bruh
The way Kar bears down on u it makes sense you'd turn soft n ask for love
wording is a lil forced but i see the punch. ok
Sn00p u homo fuck, if anyone calls u straight it's damn lies
Even if hoes around this German queer concentrate on camp guys
forced. didn't setup camp
Ur face'll form a dark picture when the Fox bites and Sharp hits ya
We know where u are..Knuck always with his homies at the bar...
....mitzvah
light. not really a diss, just saying he's jewish


This was a nice battle. I like Sharp and Witty and bums from the gentlemen but I was expecting a little more from this team. More misses than I'd expect from snoop and knuck.

Sharp Fox had MH370, Confederate flag, and oven. I think the ODed a lil bit on the holocaust lines but it was a pretty consistent verse. They had a couple misses but nothing horrible and fewer misses than the Gentlemen.

Sharp Fox