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Geno
08-10-2015, 04:36 PM
Sword brawler, i brawl sharp, your point duller
Thinkin bout beef with the god, you boy wonder
Underground king, sling baterangs with bruce
Bootlegging a duece-duece, hundred proof, the truth
al capone in these tunnels, lock, load, then shoot
Precision tuned, blow a mans earlobes to the moon
Totally gooned out, and when i fire this lazer..
It puts a whole through your dome, size of the equator
Sign up for this labor, get the work you deserve
Naturally flying off the handle, hard work for the birds
ive got a purpose to serve, red bone demons with curves
Let'er write on my dick, and watch'er eat her own words

Nigma
08-11-2015, 01:10 AM
Good shit Gen. Technically sound, transitions stood out, liked the references and plays, last bar was also standout. Only line I wasn't feeling was the equator line. You build imagery up towards a round hole in someones head and comparing it to the equator was a miss haha. Otherwise cool read