View Full Version : YDK 0-2 vs. Work 0-2 - YDK WINS
Sn00p
09-01-2015, 08:47 AM
The 1-2 Punch League
Week 4
All rules apply: No feeding, biting, swaying. Due on Thursday... NO EXT AT ALL.
REBUTTAL AND REMATCH OPTIONS - Agreement on rebuttal battle + first bars due Wednesday. Check the new rule thread for specifics. If agreement/bars are not in on Wednesday it will be treated as a normal battle.
Preview By Sharp
tbc
YDK Work
Ain't no bullets flyin ima put you down, and use a closed palm to do it
Cuz the only thing I'm putting in work is a jar of embalming fluid
I should show your daughter what my penis about
So her blowing on dandelions won't be the only time she has some seed in her mouth
Ghost1
09-04-2015, 09:38 AM
Dandelion seeds? ....in ur mouth? From blowing one? Not ever. Lmao dafuq
V ydk
lmao I can't lie, I like Work's shit
YDK is good too but I'm guessing Work talking them little white shits that fly off the flower head when you blow?
The idea is cool to me. I'm going with Work this week.
Vote work more creative more fresh
Greed
09-06-2015, 12:56 PM
V ydk
This was wierd
Useless
09-06-2015, 07:18 PM
Putting in work was basic n coulda been worded a lot better. Works bar was harsh af but fundamentally incorrect cuz u don't get the seeds in ur mouth from blowing on a dandelion. Still liked it tho tbh
V. Work
jilti
09-06-2015, 11:55 PM
V-YDK, better attempt but not really feeling either
Sharp
09-07-2015, 03:23 PM
3-3
puravida
09-07-2015, 06:20 PM
FRESHER FLIP
VOTE - work
fraze
09-07-2015, 09:29 PM
I gotta vote YDK. This battle was on some weird pedophile shit, and unnecessarily because thats not how dandylions work. YDK's bar wasn't bad but could have been set up better. Any funeral parlor tie ins could have taken it up a notch. But still I have a prob with punches that dont make sense.
Vote YDK
Sharp
09-07-2015, 09:34 PM
Close man. both suffered from wording. I thought the namelfip was just a bit better tho tbh
v/ydk
5-4 ydk
Voting for work, YDK's name flip was alright but for the build up it seemed like it could've been bigger. Work's was concise and to the point, while there was some element of it not making sense, I think it's forgivable.
El Muffin
09-08-2015, 08:50 AM
v/ydk
ur punch was okayyy. not good not bad
work,
dude ydk daughter like 3 years old yo. u didn't know but erm...he posts many pics of his daughter
get this pedo the fk outta hea
lol im jk but still
v/ydk
Sn00p
09-08-2015, 09:00 AM
ydk was decent. wording should've been better. things like using "put" two times in a bar throw me off when it's just one bar u have to write. and it didn't rly use the np to its full effect, becuz i kinda felt the punchline was more focused on the "only thing i put into u is embalming fluid" misdirection thing. but it was a decent bar.
work had similar problems. i have never gotten the seeds of a dandelion in my mouth, & not even as a kid. also, u could've used the blowing part for the wordplay as well, so it'd be a double tie-in. if u had done that, i would've voted for u 100%. as is, ur bar felt a bit lacking. pretty harsh tho, but i don't think that was enough here.
so yea, this was close as fuck. both had some wording issues, but in the end, i think ydk used his concept a bit better. props to both tho, this is one of the closest 1-2's i've ever seen.
v/ydk
SuckaFreeCashier
09-08-2015, 09:20 AM
v/ YDK
I thought he got a lot more out of his setup and the punch was more creative / hit harder than works.
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