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sral
09-03-2015, 07:35 AM
FINALLY it’s here – the INTERSITE INVASION begins!

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A true Netcees first, this card is stacked with some of the illest textcees still actively participating in the game today… and Veritas vs Prelec. LULZ! You’ve all seen how hotly anticipated these matchups are, you’ve read the magazine and seen the battler profiles of everyone involved, you’ve watched the Lars video magazine which set the new fucking standard for anything similar that proceeds it. The time is now. It’s official, we’ve an entire card full of classics in the making and this shit is about to go DOWNNNN!!!

Line limits: 14 lines (Unless otherwise agreed by both opponents prior to the battle)
Video battle: 3.00 (3 MINS IN LENGTH, DATSHITCRAY!)

CHECK IN’S DUE: 12 NOON TUESDAY 8TH SEPTEMBER (UK TIME)
VERSES DUE: SATURDAY 12TH SEPTEMBER (UK TIME)

Voting will only remain open for a further WEEK ONLY once battles are up and the final vote count will be tallied between both websites, ready for individual and team winners to be declared SO GET YOUR VOTES IN QUICKLY WHEN BATTLES ARE UP! Voting links etc will not be made mandatory, but is of course highly appreciated and everyone will be repped personally by President Lars!

If you’ve any questions, feel free to sraL me on the tag.

Best of luck to both sides of competitors, keep it legit, I’ve got immense love for both you guys. That’s real talk.

LET’S FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

ill nik-A JOBone

ill nik-A
09-11-2015, 11:13 PM
10 minute shit... Fuck u and ur wining

This crackers sex life is a shame, absurd
U fuck ur cousins... After RG3 & all the back-ups ran a train on her
Get killed by 5% effort from the best son cuz I got hoes to get head from
Nigga, I'm livin the dream... U still developin & ur best punches havin wet ones
told ya girl to never call me again cuz she was nothing exciting
Damn bitch keeps blowing up my horn like she head-butting a Viking
I got the blueprint on how to kill niggaz; my shits type mob
My blade will give u that work... Most people call that an inside job
this dude stinks; the effort speaks alone
I'ma give u the axe... U'll put it on ur dresser with the rest of ya cheap cologne
People read my verses for inspiration and learn how to write smarter & freely
Let's be honest ur lines aren't really there like the first down markers on TV
I got heavy hands and anyone who wants to scrap gets shamed
Punch ya eye and leave a black mass... not even Johnny Depp could reenact the pain

JOBone
09-13-2015, 03:30 PM
Doing this for Lars and Jshazo, not this lame asshole who shouldn't take battles
If these bars feel like a prison, then finishing a sentence must be chain shackles
Calling me a cracker when this "nik-a's" level of melanin is deprived
Disguise shitty writtens as a "keystyle", but you lost the element of surprise
Fuck being delicate with his pride, someone should be telling it to this guy
Text battle Hall of Fame, honorary title of "Never Been Relevent In His Liife"
You no-goodnik, this marks the expiration of your shelf life, truth hurts
For thinking his bars golden, this old man is just killing himself like Looper
With so many angles to hit him from, his guard can't be ready for that
Lars, this mark is easily getting lit up, I call this a "strike anywhere" match
Even if he technically wins on netcees from pulling this awful stunt
He's still despised by his own side while leading the polls; he's Donald Trump
I see this from a bird's eye view, strategically plot attacks when he dropped his rap
It's like viewing satellite photos on a Google app when I erase this legend off the map

sral
09-13-2015, 04:46 PM
Dope shit, thread cleaned up, OPEN FOR VOTES!

Balanced
09-13-2015, 06:23 PM
the bars I liked

Get killed by 5% effort from the best son cuz I got hoes to get head from
Nigga, I'm livin the dream... U still developin & ur best punches havin wet ones
told ya girl to never call me again cuz she was nothing exciting
Damn bitch keeps blowing up my horn like she head-butting a Viking
this dude stinks; the effort speaks alone
I'ma give u the axe... U'll put it on ur dresser with the rest of ya cheap cologne
-by far the line that got it for me. could have went a little more on the first line.
People read my verses for inspiration and learn how to write smarter & freely
Let's be honest ur lines aren't really there like the first down markers on TV
I got heavy hands and anyone who wants to scrap gets shamed
Punch ya eye and leave a black mass... not even Johnny Depp could reenact the pain

vs


Doing this for Lars and Jshazo, not this lame asshole who shouldn't take battles
If these bars feel like a prison, then finishing a sentence must be chain shackles
Cool, dig it
Calling me a cracker when this "nik-a's" level of melanin is deprived
Disguise shitty writtens as a "keystyle", but you lost the element of surprise
ur feeding off his verse the 10minute shout out in his intro...plus his opener
You no-goodnik, this marks the expiration of your shelf life, truth hurts
For thinking his bars golden, this old man is just killing himself like Looper
Even if he technically wins on netcees from pulling this awful stunt
He's still despised by his own side while leading the polls; he's Donald Trump
I see this from a bird's eye view, strategically plot attacks when he dropped his rap
It's like viewing satellite photos on a Google app when I erase this legend off the map
ehh this is close to a bite, this from Resin vs suckafree...


Heard bout the kids resin ate in past, but how he fails to resonate with fans
Since you’ve lost your direction, it’s only right I wipe a legend off the map

sraL

v/ NIK he had better punches, and fresher concepts. If ur cleared of those two claims I made, I think you should work on better concepts to flip. ALso research your opponent more, Nik-a has time in the game. Stop being lazy

Chemist
09-13-2015, 07:20 PM
ill nik-A

This crackers sex life is a shame, absurd
U fuck ur cousins... After RG3 & all the back-ups ran a train on her
-okay got a smile out of me
Get killed by 5% effort from the best son cuz I got hoes to get head from
Nigga, I'm livin the dream... U still developin & ur best punches havin wet ones
-haha good
told ya girl to never call me again cuz she was nothing exciting
Damn bitch keeps blowing up my horn like she head-butting a Viking
-clever
I got the blueprint on how to kill niggaz; my shits type mob
My blade will give u that work... Most people call that an inside job
-not feeling this one weak
this dude stinks; the effort speaks alone
I'ma give u the axe... U'll put it on ur dresser with the rest of ya cheap cologne
-by far the line that got it for me. could have went a little more on the first line.
People read my verses for inspiration and learn how to write smarter & freely
Let's be honest ur lines aren't really there like the first down markers on TV
-good
I got heavy hands and anyone who wants to scrap gets shamed
Punch ya eye and leave a black mass... not even Johnny Depp could reenact the pain
-woooo

JOBone

Doing this for Lars and Jshazo, not this lame asshole who shouldn't take battles
If these bars feel like a prison, then finishing a sentence must be chain shackles
-cool line
Calling me a cracker when this "nik-a's" level of melanin is deprived
Disguise shitty writtens as a "keystyle", but you lost the element of surprise
-this is alright
Fuck being delicate with his pride, someone should be telling it to this guy
Text battle Hall of Fame, honorary title of "Never Been Relevent In His Liife"
-LOL this was great
You no-goodnik, this marks the expiration of your shelf life, truth hurts
For thinking his bars golden, this old man is just killing himself like Looper
- good
With so many angles to hit him from, his guard can't be ready for that
Lars, this mark is easily getting lit up, I call this a "strike anywhere" match
-not bad
Even if he technically wins on netcees from pulling this awful stunt
He's still despised by his own side while leading the polls; he's Donald Trump
-could have flipped it some more
I see this from a bird's eye view, strategically plot attacks when he dropped his rap
It's like viewing satellite photos on a Google app when I erase this legend off the map
-damnnn killed this line

in all I will have to give my vote to ill nik-A.

his verse just flowed better and concept wise was a little more complex than JobONE.

Good battle from both tho.

CBA
09-13-2015, 07:54 PM
For Ill..... I'm trying to figure out how head butting a viking will blow up their horn lol. Not bad in theory and I hate to be a stickler here but I wasn't a big fan of the line. Opening stuff was solid, I felt the inside job line fell a bit flat and could've been much harder hitting.

Ditto with the axe, not bad but I felt there was probably more opportunity for word play there. The next 2 bars were solid and so was the closer.

For Job, seemed like dude wanted to go to war and his verse was just harder hitting. Aggressive stuff that went beyond just punch lines. Thought the first 4 bars were solid but nothing over the top, the "never been relevant" had me cracking up though. Looper thing is solid, although I do have to admit I looked it up.

Love any mention of Donald Trump, but as the guy above me said, I think you could've done a bit more with it. Last line was good too.

Tough call but I gotta go with Job One on this.

fraze
09-13-2015, 09:37 PM
10 minute shit... Fuck u and ur wining

This crackers sex life is a shame, absurd
U fuck ur cousins... After RG3 & all the back-ups ran a train on her
like the concept but the wording feels a little off
Get killed by 5% effort from the best son cuz I got hoes to get head from
Nigga, I'm livin the dream... U still developin & ur best punches havin wet ones
nice. liked this
told ya girl to never call me again cuz she was nothing exciting
Damn bitch keeps blowing up my horn like she head-butting a Viking
i get it but the wording is a little off. i see blowing up the horn with the hit, but i feel like you could have flipped this better
I got the blueprint on how to kill niggaz; my shits type mob
My blade will give u that work... Most people call that an inside job
this feels a little rushed to me
this dude stinks; the effort speaks alone
I'ma give u the axe... U'll put it on ur dresser with the rest of ya cheap cologne
dope concept. not directed perfectly but still good
People read my verses for inspiration and learn how to write smarter & freely
Let's be honest ur lines aren't really there like the first down markers on TV
nice.
I got heavy hands and anyone who wants to scrap gets shamed
Punch ya eye and leave a black mass... not even Johnny Depp could reenact the pain
this is straight.

Doing this for Lars and Jshazo, not this lame asshole who shouldn't take battles
If these bars feel like a prison, then finishing a sentence must be chain shackles
bars/prison a little played but cool flip
Calling me a cracker when this "nik-a's" level of melanin is deprived
Disguise shitty writtens as a "keystyle", but you lost the element of surprise
this is filler to me
Fuck being delicate with his pride, someone should be telling it to this guy
Text battle Hall of Fame, honorary title of "Never Been Relevent In His Liife"
ok i guess. doesn't hit that hard.
You no-goodnik, this marks the expiration of your shelf life, truth hurts
For thinking his bars golden, this old man is just killing himself like Looper
this was dope
With so many angles to hit him from, his guard can't be ready for that
Lars, this mark is easily getting lit up, I call this a "strike anywhere" match
meh. light diss.
Even if he technically wins on netcees from pulling this awful stunt
He's still despised by his own side while leading the polls; he's Donald Trump
nice concept, but the way you flipped it is also a self diss w/ you saying he wins. you could have done something better here
I see this from a bird's eye view, strategically plot attacks when he dropped his rap
It's like viewing satellite photos on a Google app when I erase this legend off the map
this is slick, but if this is bitten i can't give you credit.


nik had a pretty slick verse. i can see it being a key or a quick verse because most of the topics were things that he would have been seeing on TV today if he was watching football. inside job was a miss but the rest was decent or above average.

JOB has some bars. i liked looper and the closer the most. but a few of the bars were a little off or light. still waiting to here more about the closer as a bite, but even with that i think you had more misses than nik. it also seems like a few of your bars could have been considered feeding, but i won't really count that against you because i dont know the site rules over there.

nice battle on both sides but i have nik with fewer missing and a slightly more consistent verse overall.

Vote: ill nik-A

JOBone
09-13-2015, 10:23 PM
Why would anyone think I'd bite a line from a verse in the same event as if tons of people from both sites aren't going to read all the battles? lol

Pure coincidence. SuckaFreeCashier great minds think alike.

If I actually had known someone had a similar line, I would have scrapped it (though I personally like my take better) since it's obvious people are naturally going to compare and complain about it, whether it can be helped or not.

sral
09-20-2015, 03:31 PM
I don't think you bit at all.

BUMPING FOR LAST MINUTE VOTES!

Geno
09-20-2015, 05:16 PM
Not sure if you countinbgeno votes.

But tbh. Nik had a couple jou ts i liked
The other dude didnt really word his shit well or come with any really clean hits. Felt sloppy.

Nik had wet dream. Viking and cheap cologne

Job had his opener and the trump line.

V/nika