Contenders Match: Dancake 2-1 vs. Mr. J 5-2 - J VIA NS, OPEN FOR FEED

[Adonis]

AOWL Season V, Week 10


SUMMARY OF RULES:

Verses are due
Tuesday at 9 p.m. Pacific/West Coast or Tuesday 11:59 PM Eastern / 6:00 AM Wednesday Central European/London
There are NO extensions.

Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Votes are due Friday at 4:00 p.m. Western / or Friday 7:00 PM Eastern / 1:00 AM Saturday Central European/London Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.

All competitors must vote on THREE battles and post links/ references in the voting thread.

Read the full rules here! (http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=119848)

Topic: http://100.best-poems.net/brown-penny.html

William Butler Yeats – Brown Penny

G/Luck

Mr. J Dancake

[PancakeBrah]

Yessir

[Mr. J]

Caught up in a ripple effect I ponder my next conquest
my dreams reflect from the bottom of the pond, progress
the competition needed a gift so I wish em' well..
another transaction into the future what do prisms tell??
go out there young soldier take it to them & give em' hell!!
whose the most worthy maybe x ray vision would help?

The ridges were upon us, our proper print left the peasants in awe
this world is built by one thing, no longer containing the presence of thought
battling among fellow man, pride in hand, with heart unguarded
there's no telling the amounts of people, the innocent lives they slaughtered
a disgrace...
the words stay in my thoughts as I cross into low incoming traffic
the wind pushes me back while I ponder the actions that have happened
with the Captain abandoning base in the middle of a hindering invasion..
I couldn't believe what I have read & was struck by awe, amazement!
thrown into such anxiety, my realization was on a cliffhanger
a legend. about who one is when hunger causes this anger..
all promotion aside, the story ends with such high anticipation
with this thought & change I bear, I wish for a better situation
brown penny, brown penny left over from the weekly comic..
I wish em' well brown penny, I wish em well, with change from the weekly comic...



a brown penny down into the pond, into...your...wishing well...

[Adonis]

Yessir

Closing this when I wake up in 5 hours