Rnd1 - Spoken vs. Lotto Smirk - OPEN FOR VOTES

[~RustyGunZ~]

The Fall Brawl

Line Limits - 10 Min / 20 Max
If not agreed upon in check ins, you must match the first drop.
All other rules apply (biting/feeding/recycling/yadayada)

Any and all swaying will be promptly deleted, and you will lose 3 votes for every offence. You have ONE second chance to stop being a bitch, then you're banned from every tourney I run from here on out. You'll also lose your spot in this one.

DUE DATE IS 10/15/15 @ 11:59 PCT / 2:59 EST

Need anything, let me know.

Lotto Smirk Spoken

[Spoken]

Check.

10 Lotto Smirk?

[Lotto Smirk]

Cool

[~RustyGunZ~]

Spoken Lotto Smirk

due tomorrow night

[Lotto Smirk]

Might need a few hours extension I should have it done late tonight but won't have internet and won't be up to make the deadline time can post when I wake

[Spoken]

Uve got a way with words that's got voters in a bind for jokes,
Cus the way they were on LSD... got me thinking they were overdosed.
No bitch respects u and neglect? Is something use mastered for correction,
Feels like 8 mile the way I got lotto grabbin his own ass for some affection.
Knuckle gone need a copy of this homi, im dumpin' em rounds
And leavin' him covered in dirt.... that's a corpse on the ground!
I mean think about it...pull out all ur raps and compare em' to spoke,
Then point out where they actually showed or had more than 10-50 posts.
Ur a warrior w/bars? I feel ur on a battle arena theme,
Showing your full potential of interests is the same results as that league.
The squad'll let the shotty go off good luck tryna creep on the deep end,
Cus if L. Odom money we'll find his body unconscious just like him.
U prolly like what's with all these nameflip... this shit is a dud,
But im just puttin emphasis on a flip like Jose Bautista wit the home run.

[Lotto Smirk]

Give it spoken

[Lotto Smirk]

ain't noticed u poor bastard, act like u live that life but can't afford a car lets get it right
only time the light'll be on spoke is if this poor bastard has to travel anywere at night
when I spit I'm loud no1'll hear u, it'll be like u hit a tall wall
n u'le be out spoken there'll be no round 2 for u in the fall brawl
I could pick apart ur style so don't act like u dope n u the don too
u struggle with flo n I don't mean the dude that destroyed u in the 1-2
no matter how many bars u add, them shits won't freshen
cus u'le be needing them lines more than nika when he's on a coke session
peeped the mag u dead fag ur chances are just slim
so if he's shooting to aim knuck's getting Harassed till he lets him have the win
bars need so much work to fix em, all the legends together wouldn't manage
u got so many fault lines but ones even chyeaah wouldn't predict to cause damage

Literally just key'd this up so u don't have a NS for the effort u put in

[sral]

Respect.

[Meth]

Uve got a way with words that's got voters in a bind for jokes,
Cus the way they were on LSD... got me thinking they were overdosed.
--man good idea bro but the wording was horrible.
No bitch respects u and neglect? Is something use mastered for correction,
Feels like 8 mile the way I got lotto grabbin his own ass for some affection.
--nah bro.
Knuckle gone need a copy of this homi, im dumpin' em rounds
And leavin' him covered in dirt.... that's a corpse on the ground!
--bleh
I mean think about it...pull out all ur raps and compare em' to spoke,
Then point out where they actually showed or had more than 10-50 posts.
--nope
Ur a warrior w/bars? I feel ur on a battle arena theme,
Showing your full potential of interests is the same results as that league.
--good idea, bad wording for an ok hit.
The squad'll let the shotty go off good luck tryna creep on the deep end,
Cus if L. Odom money we'll find his body unconscious just like him.
--seen this line 73737373 times this week no sir.
U prolly like what's with all these nameflip... this shit is a dud,
But im just puttin emphasis on a flip like Jose Bautista wit the home run.
--ok

ain't noticed u poor bastard, act like u live that life but can't afford a car lets get it right
only time the light'll be on spoke is if this poor bastard has to travel anywere at night
--this cool
when I spit I'm loud no1'll hear u, it'll be like u hit a tall wall
n u'le be out spoken there'll be no round 2 for u in the fall brawl
--nah
I could pick apart ur style so don't act like u dope n u the don too
u struggle with flo n I don't mean the dude that destroyed u in the 1-2
--ok personal
no matter how many bars u add, them shits won't freshen
cus u'le be needing them lines more than nika when he's on a coke session
--olddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
peeped the mag u dead fag ur chances are just slim
so if he's shooting to aim knuck's getting Harassed till he lets him have the win
--nah but i smirked... lol lotto smirk fuck
bars need so much work to fix em, all the legends together wouldn't manage
u got so many fault lines but ones even chyeaah wouldn't predict to cause damage
--this is ight too.

Literally just key'd this up so u don't have a NS for the effort u put in

spoken needs to up his wording a lot

smirk had a few cool lines

v/ lotto

[Flow]

Spoken lsd line was tasty and i also liked the one after it but not enough i can remember it without looking.

Lotto started off meh but as he got into his flow he got some cool keys in there like the flow personal and the last bar about chyeeeh and fault lines.

Close to call but think lotto pinched the win

Vote lotto

[Junto]

Uve got a way with words that's got voters in a bind for jokes,
Cus the way they were on LSD... got me thinking they were overdosed.
execution was weak but decent concept here
U prolly like what's with all these nameflip... this shit is a dud,
But im just puttin emphasis on a flip like Jose Bautista wit the home run.
okay....

vs.

ain't noticed u poor bastard, act like u live that life but can't afford a car lets get it right
only time the light'll be on spoke is if this poor bastard has to travel anywere at night
lol
I could pick apart ur style so don't act like u dope n u the don too
u struggle with flo n I don't mean the dude that destroyed u in the 1-2
aight
bars need so much work to fix em, all the legends together wouldn't manage
u got so many fault lines but ones even chyeaah wouldn't predict to cause damage
cool

not real familiar wit Spoken... topical head?
a couple bars wit potential but corpse on the ground, 10-50 posts, etc were no good
lotto had light on the spoke as lotb. coulda been worded better but still solid.
a couple other jabs but enough to take it in my opinion

v/ Lotto Smirk