Rnd1 - Chyeahhh!!! vs. Tic - {Tic wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

The Fall Brawl

Line Limits - 10 Min / 20 Max
If not agreed upon in check ins, you must match the first drop.
All other rules apply (biting/feeding/recycling/yadayada)

Any and all swaying will be promptly deleted, and you will lose 3 votes for every offence. You have ONE second chance to stop being a bitch, then you're banned from every tourney I run from here on out. You'll also lose your spot in this one.

DUE DATE IS 10/15/15 @ 11:59 PCT / 2:59 EST

Need anything, let me know.

Tic Chyeahhh!!!

[Chyeahhh!!!]

check ....I got preppin to do nigga

Enter Galactic! I’mma Beast on this IE, Boy
Knuck tagged me for a body! and at the same time confirmed the mourge would ID yours
dissing me for speaking the truth? no harm done, you weren’t thinkin it through
I’m an expert on world affairs…and no chick on this Earth would get caught cheatin with you
Last I heard, you was on the come up, that verse for Unfuk had me thinkin this guy’s sick
You were set to blow, then you went down for the count, and failed to reach that final, Tic
It’s doomsday when this goon spray,
Doh Boys murked ya’ll and that’s Sad, damn son…
Your new names for the next 2 way should be Uday and Qusay
at you from all angles, but I get bent outta shape a round squares
the flow’s outta this world, U just make threads bout Mars and the water they found there
This is terrific ether, the fours will lift this geezer
Girls say you a prickless teaser & call you Tic, cuz you have to pull out your dick with tweezers
You got some sort of rep on RB? But nobody knows who you are b
Seriously I checked, even the nobodys don’t know who you are b
And the Outsiders.. a Group Home of has-beens, feel like Preme giving the beats to weaklings
If this were The Warriors, you fuckin Orphans would never get invited to the weekly meetings

[Tic]

Guess I'm going 16.

[~RustyGunZ~]

Tic

due tomorrow night

[Tic]

Forget ya predictions, weirdo. I’ll kill you before you get Raptured or fried, pal
Ya soul takes 1 Shelter Rearrange. & what this freak does immediately after he signs out
It’s not the end as we know it, STFU! We’ve had enough of ya lies
Either show some Restraint, or I’ll rip ya fuckin rib Cage out and stuff you inside
Ya girl loves to be recorded AND she’s flexible, we did all types of positions
Just wait til ya Extremophile, you’ll be stunned how any life survived the conditions
She has no respect for you, so those legs will never let you through…
Nicknamed the box Doomsday…cuz that shit never comes no matter how much prep you do
Plus ya sis got it goin onnnnn. I’m usually shy, but this dame?
I said fuck it - Went Inundated her…& that’s exactly how she described the dick game
Think you’re moving on? As if you’ll outperform me this week...
That’s such a Dead Planet renders useless the most advanced Terraforming techniques
NC hates your every post. Thinking you’re In is farrr from the truth
Faggot. You’re more of an Outsider than I’ll EVER be and I’m part of the crew
Kar bodied. That 'Hi / Bye' gimmick left you ablaze
Every verse is such a Porky, "that's all folks" should be your exiting phrase

[8===D~~~~(}:]

Enter Galactic! I’mma Beast on this IE, Boy
Knuck tagged me for a body! and at the same time confirmed the mourge would ID yours
nah wasnt feelin this
dissing me for speaking the truth? no harm done, you weren’t thinkin it through
I’m an expert on world affairs…and no chick on this Earth would get caught cheatin with you
pretty cool
Last I heard, you was on the come up, that verse for Unfuk had me thinkin this guy’s sick
You were set to blow, then you went down for the count, and failed to reach that final, Tic
dopeeee
It’s doomsday when this goon spray,
Doh Boys murked ya’ll and that’s Sad, damn son…
Your new names for the next 2 way should be Uday and Qusay
meh, wording all over the plae
at you from all angles, but I get bent outta shape a round squares
the flow’s outta this world, U just make threads bout Mars and the water they found there
alright
This is terrific ether, the fours will lift this geezer
Girls say you a prickless teaser & call you Tic, cuz you have to pull out your dick with tweezers
ehhhhh decent at best
You got some sort of rep on RB? But nobody knows who you are b
Seriously I checked, even the nobodys don’t know who you are b
a waste smh
And the Outsiders.. a Group Home of has-beens, feel like Preme giving the beats to weaklings
If this were The Warriors, you fuckin Orphans would never get invited to the weekly meetings
wasnt feelin this one


vs


Forget ya predictions, weirdo. I’ll kill you before you get Raptured or fried, pal
Ya soul takes 1 Shelter Rearrange. & what this freak does immediately after he signs out
didnt work for me, maybe im missing something idk
It’s not the end as we know it, STFU! We’ve had enough of ya lies
Either show some Restraint, or I’ll rip ya fuckin rib Cage out and stuff you inside
mehhhh
Ya girl loves to be recorded AND she’s flexible, we did all types of positions
Just wait til ya Extremophile, you’ll be stunned how any life survived the conditions
ha alright, took me a min
She has no respect for you, so those legs will never let you through…
Nicknamed the box Doomsday…cuz that shit never comes no matter how much prep you do
got em lol nice
Plus ya sis got it goin onnnnn. I’m usually shy, but this dame?
I said fuck it - Went Inundated her…& that’s exactly how she described the dick game
alright cool
Think you’re moving on? As if you’ll outperform me this week...
That’s such a Dead Planet renders useless the most advanced Terraforming techniques
wording..
NC hates your every post. Thinking you’re In is farrr from the truth
Faggot. You’re more of an Outsider than I’ll EVER be and I’m part of the crew
nah had potential but it didnt hit
Kar bodied. That 'Hi / Bye' gimmick left you ablaze
Every verse is such a Porky, "that's all folks" should be your exiting phrase
bit light but ok


chyeah had 3 good ones

Tic had 4 good ones


This was close, both had some dope shit and had some misses. Could go either way really depending on voters taste n shit..

Vote Tic

[Meth]

check ....I got preppin to do nigga

Enter Galactic! I’mma Beast on this IE, Boy
Knuck tagged me for a body! and at the same time confirmed the mourge would ID yours
--meh, weird execution kind of under developed.
dissing me for speaking the truth? no harm done, you weren’t thinkin it through
I’m an expert on world affairs…and no chick on this Earth would get caught cheatin with you
--this is ok/solid.
Last I heard, you was on the come up, that verse for Unfuk had me thinkin this guy’s sick
You were set to blow, then you went down for the count, and failed to reach that final, Tic
--damn i liked this.
It’s doomsday when this goon spray,
Doh Boys murked ya’ll and that’s Sad, damn son…
Your new names for the next 2 way should be Uday and Qusay
--nah
at you from all angles, but I get bent outta shape a round squares
the flow’s outta this world, U just make threads bout Mars and the water they found there
--beh
This is terrific ether, the fours will lift this geezer
Girls say you a prickless teaser & call you Tic, cuz you have to pull out your dick with tweezers
--needed something more, decent idea.
You got some sort of rep on RB? But nobody knows who you are b
Seriously I checked, even the nobodys don’t know who you are b
--nah filler as fuck
And the Outsiders.. a Group Home of has-beens, feel like Preme giving the beats to weaklings
If this were The Warriors, you fuckin Orphans would never get invited to the weekly meetings
--missing something

Forget ya predictions, weirdo. I’ll kill you before you get Raptured or fried, pal
Ya soul takes 1 Shelter Rearrange. & what this freak does immediately after he signs out
--a eency weincy bit forced but ill accept it, coool.
It’s not the end as we know it, STFU! We’ve had enough of ya lies
Either show some Restraint, or I’ll rip ya fuckin rib Cage out and stuff you inside
--ok
Ya girl loves to be recorded AND she’s flexible, we did all types of positions
Just wait til ya Extremophile, you’ll be stunned how any life survived the conditions
--meh
She has no respect for you, so those legs will never let you through…
Nicknamed the box Doomsday…cuz that shit never comes no matter how much prep you do
--hot.
Plus ya sis got it goin onnnnn. I’m usually shy, but this dame?
I said fuck it - Went Inundated her…& that’s exactly how she described the dick game
--solid.
Think you’re moving on? As if you’ll outperform me this week...
That’s such a Dead Planet renders useless the most advanced Terraforming techniques
--nah planet/plan it nah
NC hates your every post. Thinking you’re In is farrr from the truth
Faggot. You’re more of an Outsider than I’ll EVER be and I’m part of the crew
--lol
Kar bodied. That 'Hi / Bye' gimmick left you ablaze
Every verse is such a Porky, "that's all folks" should be your exiting phrase
--nah direction u took was weird and i didnt like it

coool battle,. chyeahh had some stuff but tic dropped some fucking dope lines

v/ tic

[Junto]

dissing me for speaking the truth? no harm done, you weren’t thinkin it through
I’m an expert on world affairs…and no chick on this Earth would get caught cheatin with you
lmao are you though..... this was solid
Last I heard, you was on the come up, that verse for Unfuk had me thinkin this guy’s sick
You were set to blow, then you went down for the count, and failed to reach that final, Tic
heat
It’s doomsday when this goon spray,
Doh Boys murked ya’ll and that’s Sad, damn son…
Your new names for the next 2 way should be Uday and Qusay
this is nice too man... unorthodox but I like it
at you from all angles, but I get bent outta shape a round squares
the flow’s outta this world, U just make threads bout Mars and the water they found there
cool concept. execution coulda been way better
This is terrific ether, the fours will lift this geezer
Girls say you a prickless teaser & call you Tic, cuz you have to pull out your dick with tweezers
haha aight

vs.

Forget ya predictions, weirdo. I’ll kill you before you get Raptured or fried, pal
Ya soul takes 1 Shelter Rearrange. & what this freak does immediately after he signs out
wording a bit off but the concept carried it for me... good start
Ya girl loves to be recorded AND she’s flexible, we did all types of positions
Just wait til ya Extremophile, you’ll be stunned how any life survived the conditions
lol... ex stream a file. creative as hell... punch was cool
She has no respect for you, so those legs will never let you through…
Nicknamed the box Doomsday…cuz that shit never comes no matter how much prep you do
fire
Plus ya sis got it goin onnnnn. I’m usually shy, but this dame?
I said fuck it - Went Inundated her…& that’s exactly how she described the dick game
self-hype but nice play
NC hates your every post. Thinking you’re In is farrr from the truth
Faggot. You’re more of an Outsider than I’ll EVER be and I’m part of the crew
haha nothin crazy but works
Kar bodied. That 'Hi / Bye' gimmick left you ablaze
Every verse is such a Porky, "that's all folks" should be your exiting phrase
I see it. not bad

this was real close... prolly BOTR based on the 4 or 5 I read so far...
Chyeahhh gotten way better in the past 6 months. He was BAD from my recollections
I liked this verse. Affairs was funny, Final Tic was top shelf, & Uday/Qusay was real fresh
Flow was on point on that one that made it for me. Fuck larold.
The only issue still consistency... are B/RB was wack and played in 1999
Opener & closer didn't do much for me. Overall still a nice verse though
Tic came wit shelter rearrange & doomsday pussy...
well done as far as the personal aspect + clever shit, those were both dope
Outsider was simple but effective. Inundated solid. A couple misses too though...
I really hated the way Planet / Terraforming was worded...
Restraint felt flat to me. But other than that pretty consistent from Gal
Good read here props to both.... could see this gettin split in votes for sure...
but I got Galactic

V/ Tic

[Schadenfreude]

world affairs, mars
Mostly yours concepts were either weren't damaging enough or outdated.

Extremophile, doomsday box, terraforming, outsider
Nice verse, punches could've been harsher, but consistent enough to handle your opponent.

Overall this was an one sided battle, TIC just brought more to this conflict, than Chyeah.

[Unfukwitable]

dissing me for speaking the truth? no harm done, you weren’t thinkin it through
I’m an expert on world affairs…and no chick on this Earth would get caught cheatin with you
Last I heard, you was on the come up, that verse for Unfuk had me thinkin this guy’s sick
You were set to blow, then you went down for the count, and failed to reach that final, Tic
at you from all angles, but I get bent outta shape a round squares
the flow’s outta this world, U just make threads bout Mars and the water they found there


vs.


Forget ya predictions, weirdo. I’ll kill you before you get Raptured or fried, pal
Ya soul takes 1 Shelter Rearrange. & what this freak does immediately after he signs out
Ya girl loves to be recorded AND she’s flexible, we did all types of positions
Just wait til ya Extremophile, you’ll be stunned how any life survived the conditions
She has no respect for you, so those legs will never let you through…
Nicknamed the box Doomsday…cuz that shit never comes no matter how much prep you do
Think you’re moving on? As if you’ll outperform me this week...
That’s such a Dead Planet renders useless the most advanced Terraforming techniques


Alot of dope concepts & a couple of Tsu Surf REEEACHH GOD Attempts but I enjoyed the read I fucked with both styles But One had more Impact and creativity w/ his wording and Ideas here. So for that I'm going to vote: Tic Tac Tiddy

[Lotto Smirk]

dissing me for speaking the truth? no harm done, you weren’t thinkin it through
I’m an expert on world affairs…and no chick on this Earth would get caught cheatin with you
Last I heard, you was on the come up, that verse for Unfuk had me thinkin this guy’s sick
You were set to blow, then you went down for the count, and failed to reach that final, tic
vs.
Forget ya predictions, weirdo. I’ll kill you before you get Raptured or fried, pal
Ya soul takes 1 Shelter Rearrange. & what this freak does immediately after he signs out
Ya girl loves to be recorded AND she’s flexible, we did all types of positions
Just wait til ya Extremophile, you’ll be stunned how any life survived the conditions
She has no respect for you, so those legs will never let you through…
Nicknamed the box Doomsday…cuz that shit never comes no matter how much prep you do
Think you’re moving on? As if you’ll outperform me this week...
That’s such a Dead Planet renders useless the most advanced Terraforming techniques


Props on this battle chyeaah come better than I've seen him post before I had it pretty even but the doomsday line just edged it for me vote tic

[Destroyer]

down for the count

vs

opener, doomsday (lotb), outsider

Tic got this easily

[Saint]

Thought tic took this with better developed approach.

I did like world affairs, final tic from chyeahh, also had some s&f in his verses which ppl dont do anymore...

I liked doomsday, extremiphile, shelter rearrange was coo...
More personal approach..

Vote tic

[Resin M-I-C]

chyeah's first four i was diggin.. then it got wordy.. tic was jabbin here n there n the box line was a heater.. lotb and sealed the dubya

v - tic