Round 2 - ill nik-A vs. Kemizt - {ill nik-A wins}

[Meth]

The Fall Brawl

Line Limits - 10 Min / 20 Max
If not agreed upon in check ins, you must match the first drop.
All other rules apply (biting/feeding/recycling/yadayada)

Any and all swaying will be promptly deleted, and you will lose 3 votes for every offence. You have ONE second chance to stop being a bitch, then you're banned from every tourney I run from here on out. You'll also lose your spot in this one.

DUE DATE IS 10/28/15 @ 11:59 PCT / 2:59 EST

Need anything, let me know.

ill nik-A Kemizt

[ill nik-A]

12
Welcome!

[Chemist]

12 indeed goodluck

[ill nik-A]

12 sent to Meth
Kemizt

[Chemist]

If he blames it on age for the terrible aim, I'll ground n pound this geek.
nik's never been a stand up guy... fgt has always sat down to pee.
I target all audiences. 1 punch will get caught up right in the feels of you faggots.
Even NBA fans got a bit emotional when they saw ill flip to the casket
Put me on diss track, and I'll hand nik an L with ease. Take a seat.
I'm not a drum circle Hackey sacker...but he will still get kicked around the beat
he'll call cuba for back up but that wont stop me of course,
unless he's a sandinista, we wouldn't ever say nik, a raw one with force
I'm an Ol' dirty Bastid, a Masta Killa with foreign ladies that treat me like U God.
but I seen your method, man and none of it come close to ever wu abroad
This bar ends your fall brawl run. That's the end of the story for you.
When I say It's my fault you're dead... you can say I'm using a sorry excuse



Meth ill nik-A

[Meth]

Nik's verse

Ur name shows ya creativity; u don't need a flask for the facts
Kemizt's in the lab... Cuz I have a well trained pure breed who i asked to attack
^That'll top ya verse but I'll continue to kill u cuz I do it for the sport
Beating me's ur fantasy... But I bet ya life This is a fan duel u can't afford
Nigga this is training day so rookie get ya feet wet & respect
Acting like u don't care if u lose but feelin burned inside like u suffered from Acid reflex
I fucked ya girl once so forever beware, cuz yes she cares
stole ur weed to smoke with me... got high & thought there was actually 'chemistry' there
U making all these lines for nothing so fuck ur silly pride
This isn't fair... the height of ur career wont even get u on the kiddie rides
Everyone knows u have no chance I got the same ole arm equipped for dominance
U write ya verses to the Nation Wide is on ur side jingle to give u confidence

[Alistan aka faggot zelph aka lip bayless]

Other than Nik's closer . i pretty much felt the rest. like woah type.
Kemizt- opening, method man were nice.

Just felt nik took this with 2 or more quotes.
v- nik

[Schadenfreude]

Hackey sack and Wu abroad
I grudgingly quoted those, tbh. Fresher concepts, too much played material.

Nik's verse
Opener, Fan Duel, chemistry, Nationwide jingle
Decent verse, kind of lazy, but u def did more damage to your opponent, than he did to u. I had a Fan Duel idea, but now I won't use it..lol.

Overall this was an OK battle, Kem u have to work on newer concepts, anyway iLL Nik-a took it.

[puravida]

If he blames it on age for the terrible aim, I'll ground n pound this geek.
nik's never been a stand up guy... fgt has always sat down to pee.
relevant set up. not as hard hitting but cool

I target all audiences. 1 punch will get caught up right in the feels of you faggots.
Even NBA fans got a bit emotional when they saw ill flip to the casket
1st flip saunders concept I see other than Useless's. I like it.
Put me on diss track, and I'll hand nik an L with ease. Take a seat.
I'm not a drum circle Hackey sacker...but he will still get kicked around the beat
ehhhh wording killed u. not sure if im feeling it. ok concept
he'll call cuba for back up but that wont stop me of course,
unless he's a sandinista, we wouldn't ever say nik, a raw one with force
1st sandinista/nicaraguan concept I see LOL. I can relate to this cause I know about it. so cool. I like
I'm an Ol' dirty Bastid, a Masta Killa with foreign ladies that treat me like U God.
but I seen your method, man and none of it come close to ever wu abroad
ehhhh, wording hurt u but cool concept

This bar ends your fall brawl run. That's the end of the story for you.
When I say It's my fault you're dead... you can say I'm using a sorry excuse
nah


[QUOTE=Meth;545108]Nik's verse

Ur name shows ya creativity; u don't need a flask for the facts
Kemizt's in the lab... Cuz I have a well trained pure breed who i asked to attack
I like this but the wording took the sting away, honesty
^That'll top ya verse but I'll continue to kill u cuz I do it for the sport
Beating me's ur fantasy... But I bet ya life This is a fan duel u can't afford
I like this. cool concept
Nigga this is training day so rookie get ya feet wet & respect
Acting like u don't care if u lose but feelin burned inside like u suffered from Acid reflex
ok concept, a bit stretched though
I fucked ya girl once so forever beware, cuz yes she cares
stole ur weed to smoke with me... got high & thought there was actually 'chemistry' there
nah, dont like this
U making all these lines for nothing so fuck ur silly pride
This isn't fair... the height of ur career wont even get u on the kiddie rides
eh I seen this before. not so fresh
Everyone knows u have no chance I got the same ole arm equipped for dominance
U write ya verses to the Nation Wide is on ur side jingle to give u confidence
I like this. This is cool

Kem: Flip Saunders / Nicaraguan / Wu
nik: Lab / Fan Duel / Nation wide

Both had some lines/set ups that were on point but others that were not so much and they looked rushed. I thought this was gonna be one sided since Nik is one of the faves to win this but kem gave him a good match up. Both had cool openers. Winner to me was the one who didn't seem so rushed in thinking about the concept, had better wordplay and more hits than misses However, the loser only lost by a small margin. he had good punches but fell down in the middle. At some points i had to re-read a line because it jst didn't flow right.

vote / kemist barely

[Junto]

If he blames it on age for the terrible aim, I'll ground n pound this geek.
nik's never been a stand up guy... fgt has always sat down to pee.
seen a similar line a while back so that took away a lot for me here
I target all audiences. 1 punch will get caught up right in the feels of you faggots.
Even NBA fans got a bit emotional when they saw ill flip to the casket
haha idk bout the setup but the punch was good
Put me on diss track, and I'll hand nik an L with ease. Take a seat.
I'm not a drum circle Hackey sacker...but he will still get kicked around the beat
ehhh nah wasn't feelin this reference
he'll call cuba for back up but that wont stop me of course,
unless he's a sandinista, we wouldn't ever say nik, a raw one with force
creative shit but the wording was off to me
I'm an Ol' dirty Bastid, a Masta Killa with foreign ladies that treat me like U God.
but I seen your method, man and none of it come close to ever wu abroad
I like that
This bar ends your fall brawl run. That's the end of the story for you.
When I say It's my fault you're dead... you can say I'm using a sorry excuse
okay

vs.

Ur name shows ya creativity; u don't need a flask for the facts
Kemizt's in the lab... Cuz I have a well trained pure breed who i asked to attack
this is tough
^That'll top ya verse but I'll continue to kill u cuz I do it for the sport
Beating me's ur fantasy... But I bet ya life This is a fan duel u can't afford
nice
Nigga this is training day so rookie get ya feet wet & respect
Acting like u don't care if u lose but feelin burned inside like u suffered from Acid reflex
haha nah its reflux my man. concept was there though
I fucked ya girl once so forever beware, cuz yes she cares
stole ur weed to smoke with me... got high & thought there was actually 'chemistry' there
somethin a lil bit corny bout this one but I still liked it for the creativity
U making all these lines for nothing so fuck ur silly pride
This isn't fair... the height of ur career wont even get u on the kiddie rides
lol cool
Everyone knows u have no chance I got the same ole arm equipped for dominance
U write ya verses to the Nation Wide is on ur side jingle to give u confidence
this was pretty good

this was better than I expected... never really seen kemizt before, he a RMBVA dude?
Flip & Wu Abroad were both quality from him. After that it was a cpl good attempts
But more hit or miss than Nik who came wit some haymakers & stayed consistent
Kemizt in the lab & fan duel were heat, Chemistry was fresh, nationwide & height solid
Nik-a takes it decisively but not a bad showing from Kem either

V/ ill Nik

[Meth]

If he blames it on age for the terrible aim, I'll ground n pound this geek.
nik's never been a stand up guy... fgt has always sat down to pee.
--this is an old concept and its one i never liked anyway tbc
I target all audiences. 1 punch will get caught up right in the feels of you faggots.
Even NBA fans got a bit emotional when they saw ill flip to the casket
--this is nice. set up was weird tho.
Put me on diss track, and I'll hand nik an L with ease. Take a seat.
I'm not a drum circle Hackey sacker...but he will still get kicked around the beat
--this is ok
he'll call cuba for back up but that wont stop me of course,
unless he's a sandinista, we wouldn't ever say nik, a raw one with force
--ok
I'm an Ol' dirty Bastid, a Masta Killa with foreign ladies that treat me like U God.
but I seen your method, man and none of it come close to ever wu abroad
--this is fire.
This bar ends your fall brawl run. That's the end of the story for you.
When I say It's my fault you're dead... you can say I'm using a sorry excuse
--nah. damn. u could have had a dope verse if this hit.



Meth ill nik-A

Nik's verse

Ur name shows ya creativity; u don't need a flask for the facts
Kemizt's in the lab... Cuz I have a well trained pure breed who i asked to attack
--flames
^That'll top ya verse but I'll continue to kill u cuz I do it for the sport
Beating me's ur fantasy... But I bet ya life This is a fan duel u can't afford
--this is good
Nigga this is training day so rookie get ya feet wet & respect
Acting like u don't care if u lose but feelin burned inside like u suffered from Acid reflex
--its reflux, no? ok line tho.
I fucked ya girl once so forever beware, cuz yes she cares
stole ur weed to smoke with me... got high & thought there was actually 'chemistry' there
--ok
U making all these lines for nothing so fuck ur silly pride
This isn't fair... the height of ur career wont even get u on the kiddie rides
--cool
Everyone knows u have no chance I got the same ole arm equipped for dominance
U write ya verses to the Nation Wide is on ur side jingle to give u confidence
--eh, i dont like this at all

this was a surprisingly good battle

kem had flip and wu abroad with 2 misses

nik had kemist in the lab, fan duel, and kiddier rides with one miss

good showing from kem but nik got this

cool read

v/ ill nik-A