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Meth
10-22-2015, 09:22 PM
The Fall Brawl

Line Limits - 10 Min / 20 Max
If not agreed upon in check ins, you must match the first drop.
All other rules apply (biting/feeding/recycling/yadayada)

Any and all swaying will be promptly deleted, and you will lose 3 votes for every offence. You have ONE second chance to stop being a bitch, then you're banned from every tourney I run from here on out. You'll also lose your spot in this one.

DUE DATE IS 10/28/15 @ 11:59 PCT / 2:59 EST

Need anything, let me know.

Unfukwitable Schadenfreude

Schadenfreude
10-22-2015, 09:25 PM
Dropping 12.

Unfukwitable
10-22-2015, 11:01 PM
12's cool.

Schadenfreude
10-28-2015, 09:03 PM
Fuuuuuck it..,

Swear ya name fits, considering all the chicks u never land, fag
s’like it’s impossible for u to persuade a bitch ..not even w/ expensive hand bags.
u’re Hush & Murda’s fanboy, watching your Heroes, all pitiful tho
rather watch u rot away slow, instead of spoiling our memory of the original Sho.
plus your biggest achievement is having a Stinkmeaner swag..
meaning u embarrassed Nik, just so the old man could come back & beat your ass.
forgettable fag wouldn’t be shit w/o Squad, u too fucking horrible
those fools stay supporting u, Suicide’s your crutch ..killing yourself to be notable.
but have ‘em all ghostwriting w/ every bar in your stable copied,
no lames can top me, even against a 4 on 1 handicap, I’ll still leave ‘Able bodied.
finished, how yo extra-average shit gon’ land against a menace?
..Un orthodox punches - an ironic way of saying u have bland, low hit percentage.

..FukOuttaHere!!

Unfukwitable
10-28-2015, 11:44 PM
I caught the tail-end of '07 on BBoys & the RBL, learned a

lot from Sept Jr, Richard Corey & KungFuGrip. Battling used to be fun af.

Ur Obsession w/ ya F'n peers, Got me wieldin weapons here;
Fuck Hardwork, It's only right I add some Blood, since Ur use to Sweatin teirs.
His inconsistency upsets fans, he's below par by far. A large zero;
that's pressin buttons w/ a verse fulla ↑'s & ↓'s ....U should be a Guitar Hero.
Come here w/ Ratchets lines bout Packin Automatic 9's;
& I'll leave U with a 'Bullet for an Eye' like Pac's Thug Life tat design.
I got a Pump in case the votes Is leanin In his favor ;
I'll show Schad Mossbergs like Bow Wow was meetin the HitMaka.
He got a SNITCH aura & I'm weiry of claims from this period stain;
I bet when He gets Pinched, He starts saying way More than 5 Cereal names.
Wack rhymes can't hide behind an Alias, I'm leavin dawg dead;
Since his Punches is crappy enough for Plot to quote'em in His "3 fav text bars" thread.

Meth
10-29-2015, 03:46 AM
Fuuuuuck it..,

Swear ya name fits, considering all the chicks u never land, fag
s’like it’s impossible for u to persuade a bitch ..not even w/ expensive hand bags.
--this was cool. not a lot of people do wps like this but i liked it, was different.
u’re Hush & Murda’s fanboy, watching your Heroes, all pitiful tho
rather watch u rot away slow, instead of spoiling our memory of the original Sho.
--the connection was kind of loose for a punch that wasnt meant super hard hitting in the first place. not a miss but barely ok
plus your biggest achievement is having a Stinkmeaner swag..
meaning u embarrassed Nik, just so the old man could come back & beat your ass.
--ok
forgettable fag wouldn’t be shit w/o Squad, u too fucking horrible
those fools stay supporting u, Suicide’s your crutch ..killing yourself to be notable.
--thought this was cool
but have ‘em all ghostwriting w/ every bar in your stable copied,
no lames can top me, even against a 4 on 1 handicap, I’ll still leave ‘Able bodied.
--this is cool too.
finished, how yo extra-average shit gon’ land against a menace?
..Un orthodox punches - an ironic way of saying u have bland, low hit percentage.
--i think im missing something tbh. miss as is
..FukOuttaHere!!

Ur Obsession w/ ya F'n peers, Got me wieldin weapons here;
Fuck Hardwork, It's only right I add some Blood, since Ur use to Sweatin teirs.
--idk bro. this was a good idea but it seems u were reaching to add in the "hardwork" aspect of it..
His inconsistency upsets fans, he's below par by far. A large zero;
that's pressin buttons w/ a verse fulla ↑'s & ↓'s ....U should be a Guitar Hero.
--'nother good idea. dont love the angle u took but this is ok
Come here w/ Ratchets lines bout Packin Automatic 9's;
& I'll leave U with a 'Bullet for an Eye' like Pac's Thug Life tat design.
--solid
I got a Pump in case the votes Is leanin In his favor ;
I'll show Schad Mossbergs like Bow Wow was meetin the HitMaka.
--i dont get the reference bro. ill look it up if this is close.
He got a SNITCH aura & I'm weiry of claims from this period stain;
I bet when He gets Pinched, He starts saying way More than 5 Cereal names.
--haha i lkiked this tbh
Wack rhymes can't hide behind an Alias, I'm leavin dawg dead;
Since his Punches is crappy enough for Plot to quote'em in His "3 fav text bars" thread.
--nah i didnt like this at all tbh


had this 3-2 in schade's favor.

kind of surprised. even if the unfuk bar i didnt get was a hit schade had better misses too.
plus i didnt understrand one of schades punches anyway

this is somewhat close depending on preference i think.

but i had schade

hes a dark horse in this thing i think

good verse

v/ schadenfreude

Useless
10-29-2015, 04:53 PM
Swear ya name fits, considering all the chicks u never land, fag
s’like it’s impossible for u to persuade a bitch ..not even w/ expensive hand bags.
--- aite...this is kinda unique...never really seen a wp done like that tbh...still forced tho..............
u’re Hush & Murda’s fanboy, watching your Heroes, all pitiful tho
rather watch u rot away slow, instead of spoiling our memory of the original Sho.
--- not feelin...........
plus your biggest achievement is having a Stinkmeaner swag..
meaning u embarrassed Nik, just so the old man could come back & beat your ass.
--- aite personal...............
forgettable fag wouldn’t be shit w/o Squad, u too fucking horrible
those fools stay supporting u, Suicide’s your crutch ..killing yourself to be notable.
--- nah I seen this flipped every which way...............
but have ‘em all ghostwriting w/ every bar in your stable copied,
no lames can top me, even against a 4 on 1 handicap, I’ll still leave ‘Able bodied.
--- decent np...............
finished, how yo extra-average shit gon’ land against a menace?
..Un orthodox punches - an ironic way of saying u have bland, low hit percentage.
--- nah, the 'un' np's don't work for me, they're too easy............



Vs.


Ur Obsession w/ ya F'n peers, Got me wieldin weapons here;
Fuck Hardwork, It's only right I add some Blood, since Ur use to Sweatin teirs.
--- I like this...cool flip...........
His inconsistency upsets fans, he's below par by far. A large zero;
that's pressin buttons w/ a verse fulla ↑'s & ↓'s ....U should be a Guitar Hero.
--- aite another cool flip.............
Come here w/ Ratchets lines bout Packin Automatic 9's;
& I'll leave U with a 'Bullet for an Eye' like Pac's Thug Life tat design.
--- aite...........
I got a Pump in case the votes Is leanin In his favor ;
I'll show Schad Mossbergs like Bow Wow was meetin the HitMaka.
--- I don't get the reference tbh...sorry...........
He got a SNITCH aura & I'm weiry of claims from this period stain;
I bet when He gets Pinched, He starts saying way More than 5 Cereal names.
--- lol aite.............
Wack rhymes can't hide behind an Alias, I'm leavin dawg dead;
Since his Punches is crappy enough for Plot to quote'em in His "3 fav text bars" thread.
--- lol aite discussion reference............


Overall: this is a good battle right here, I didn't know what to expect from schaden but he had a decent verse with some cool lines. But he had a couple played concepts and the flip wasn't good enuff for em to hit imo. Not his fault really as he just came here or just came back but still...unfuk had a good consistent verse with only one miss and that's just cuz I didn't get the reference lol. He got this on consistency and his hits were just a bit better. He had an overall better read to me.


V. Unfukwitable

puravida
10-29-2015, 06:07 PM
definitely a close battle. two complete different styles. one brought a wide variety of vocab with some nice concepts.. other one kept it simple yet effective but both came with it. oooh i feel one had a few more fresher concepts that made his verse a little more effective.

schaden: handbag, low percentage,suicide
unfuk: tiers, tupac, guitar hero

vote: unfuk

Junto
10-30-2015, 06:34 AM
Swear ya name fits, considering all the chicks u never land, fag
s’like it’s impossible for u to persuade a bitch ..not even w/ expensive hand bags.
creative idea but didn't hit real hard
u’re Hush & Murda’s fanboy, watching your Heroes, all pitiful tho
rather watch u rot away slow, instead of spoiling our memory of the original Sho.
the Wannabe Murda plays gettin kinda tired... this one was okay
plus your biggest achievement is having a Stinkmeaner swag..
meaning u embarrassed Nik, just so the old man could come back & beat your ass.
haha I like that
forgettable fag wouldn’t be shit w/o Squad, u too fucking horrible
those fools stay supporting u, Suicide’s your crutch ..killing yourself to be notable.
suicide angle been done. didn't really have enough twist to it
but have ‘em all ghostwriting w/ every bar in your stable copied,
no lames can top me, even against a 4 on 1 handicap, I’ll still leave ‘Able bodied.
delivery was nice but the partial np threw it off... unfuckwituhbull / Able
finished, how yo extra-average shit gon’ land against a menace?
..Un orthodox punches - an ironic way of saying u have bland, low hit percentage.
aight

vs.

Ur Obsession w/ ya F'n peers, Got me wieldin weapons here;
Fuck Hardwork, It's only right I add some Blood, since Ur use to Sweatin teirs.
nice
His inconsistency upsets fans, he's below par by far. A large zero;
that's pressin buttons w/ a verse fulla ↑'s & ↓'s ....U should be a Guitar Hero.
pressin buttons seem a little bit forced there but I like the concept
Come here w/ Ratchets lines bout Packin Automatic 9's;
& I'll leave U with a 'Bullet for an Eye' like Pac's Thug Life tat design.
this is heat
I got a Pump in case the votes Is leanin In his favor ;
I'll show Schad Mossbergs like Bow Wow was meetin the HitMaka.
yo thats some creative shit. sometimes when u swing like that it whiff to me but I like this
He got a SNITCH aura & I'm weiry of claims from this period stain;
I bet when He gets Pinched, He starts saying way More than 5 Cereal names.
flow nice... didn't catch the reference though
Wack rhymes can't hide behind an Alias, I'm leavin dawg dead;
Since his Punches is crappy enough for Plot to quote'em in His "3 fav text bars" thread.
never saw this one either so it came off pretty weak

Schad stinkmeaner swag was funny. Persuade was a fresh idea.
Some other good attempts but a cpl played ones too I wasn't feelin
Un last 2 bars I didn't get... the Cereal line coulda been good idk
but the closer was too specific. You talkin bout 1 post he made? lol
stronger wit the hits though... Thug life tat was dope & sweatin tiers good too
I see why people ain't gettin Schad mossberg but that was wild. Guitar hero fresh.
Not a bad verse from Schadenfreude but Un outgunned him here

V/ Unfukwitable

Tic
10-30-2015, 11:30 AM
u’re Hush & Murda’s fanboy, watching your Heroes, all pitiful tho
rather watch u rot away slow, instead of spoiling our memory of the original Sho.

Ur Obsession w/ ya F'n peers, Got me wieldin weapons here;
Fuck Hardwork, It's only right I add some Blood, since Ur use to Sweatin teirs.
His inconsistency upsets fans, he's below par by far. A large zero;
that's pressin buttons w/ a verse fulla ↑'s & ↓'s ....U should be a Guitar Hero.
Come here w/ Ratchets lines bout Packin Automatic 9's;
& I'll leave U with a 'Bullet for an Eye' like Pac's Thug Life tat design.
I got Un pretty convincingly here. Wasn't really feeling much of Shaud's bars. Definitely has potential, but I think some of the wording was off. Although the Sho personal was nicely put together. Un came pretty clean with a couple nice bars thrown in. Un gets it.

Wavy Crockett
11-01-2015, 11:27 PM
Fuuuuuck it..,

Swear ya name fits, considering all the chicks u never land, fag
s’like it’s impossible for u to persuade a bitch ..not even w/ expensive hand bags.
u’re Hush & Murda’s fanboy, watching your Heroes, all pitiful tho
rather watch u rot away slow, instead of spoiling our memory of the original Sho.
forgettable fag wouldn’t be shit w/o Squad, u too fucking horrible
those fools stay supporting u, Suicide’s your crutch ..killing yourself to be notable.
but have ‘em all ghostwriting w/ every bar in your stable copied,
no lames can top me, even against a 4 on 1 handicap, I’ll still leave ‘Able bodied.

Ur Obsession w/ ya F'n peers, Got me wieldin weapons here;
Fuck Hardwork, It's only right I add some Blood, since Ur use to Sweatin teirs.
I got a Pump in case the votes Is leanin In his favor ;
I'll show Schad Mossbergs like Bow Wow was meetin the HitMaka.
He got a SNITCH aura & I'm weiry of claims from this period stain;
I bet when He gets Pinched, He starts saying way More than 5 Cereal names.


Close battle, I was pretty generous w/ the quotes.. I think Schade had safer punches, but few misses.. while Unfuk had some haymakers, but the ones that didn't land really fell flat for me.. I have to give it to Schade for consistency & relevancy. Very close & could see it going either way

v - Schadenfreude