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Lotto Smirk
10-23-2015, 04:01 PM
Battle Arena League



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Orc
Letterman

Orc
10-25-2015, 10:07 AM
yea, 12

Letterman
10-25-2015, 05:39 PM
Cool.

Orc
10-28-2015, 12:40 PM
sent 10

Letterman
10-28-2015, 11:57 PM
Aka Burden

I came to kill you legends, so braggin wont be the best route
Cuz it won't compliment your pride, when I take my blade & poke your chest out
U actually showed up? Good, my boy got the rifle 2 do this herb
So this won't be a duck hunt.. just me & my dog having fun shooting Burd
U bustin triggers? I'll say something 2 get him more than hype
"Since you talk big, pop a pump".. He wont, this bitch only shows the guns b4 the fight
Think u the ruler of text? I got the piece 4 this biting nigga tho
'Cause the way this King cheat, made everyone forget that Martin was a giggalo
We can fight, but you'd need help when I rock your snout
Ill let you pick ya backup.. cuz that's what you'll need em 2 do after I knock you out

Orc
10-29-2015, 03:42 AM
larceny tactics, this knife'll leave u n' ya bars ina casket
&&&get Letter stitched up the front. we call that a Varsity Jacket
you lose evrytime u battle here. boyyy is it cold
000000000010000100000: now ya average vote count look like binary code
dude'll neva be known, Orc's ahead of the clones.
just anotherrr Alias bitch acting the hero. that's Jessica Jones
i'm in the Buick w. Raybans, the view is insane man
been thinkn bout a Hot line. Meanwhile, u in the club doin the Drake dance..
the new names a clever fad but those verses r forever bad
meet Letterman, aka 'me and Alphabet joined every newb tourny NC ever had'

Meth
10-29-2015, 04:15 AM
Aka Burden

I came to kill you legends, so braggin wont be the best route
Cuz it won't compliment your pride, when I take my blade & poke your chest out
--Eh not really feeling this
U actually showed up? Good, my boy got the rifle 2 do this herb
So this won't be a duck hunt.. just me & my dog having fun shooting Burd
--if ur gonna do a bird/burd np on him it has to be supppppper fresh and dope otherwise i just write it off tbh.
U bustin triggers? I'll say something 2 get him more than hype
"Since you talk big, pop a pump".. He wont, this bitch only shows the guns b4 the fight
--this was ight
Think u the ruler of text? I got the piece 4 this biting nigga tho
'Cause the way this King cheat, made everyone forget that Martin was a giggalo
--solid
We can fight, but you'd need help when I rock your snout
Ill let you pick ya backup.. cuz that's what you'll need em 2 do after I knock you out
--could have/should have tied this in better. only ok

larceny tactics, this knife'll leave u n' ya bars ina casket
&&&get Letter stitched up the front. we call that a Varsity Jacket
--this is cool. i think i seen something similar on him tho. maybe. im not 100 percent sure
you lose evrytime u battle here. boyyy is it cold
000000000010000100000: now ya average vote count look like binary code
--lmfao
dude'll neva be known, Orc's ahead of the clones.
just anotherrr Alias bitch acting the hero. that's Jessica Jones
--ok
i'm in the Buick w. Raybans, the view is insane man
been thinkn bout a Hot line. Meanwhile, u in the club doin the Drake dance..
--ok
the new names a clever fad but those verses r forever bad
meet Letterman, aka 'me and Alphabet joined every newb tourny NC ever had'
--ha



if letter replaced the first half of his verse this could have been closed

as is tho orc didnt miss and letter did

and orc had lotb

decent battle but a clear winner

v/orc

JShazo
10-29-2015, 06:07 AM
Vote - Orc, had a few more lines that hit more for me, letter was ok in this, seen better from em, but orc was consistent enough to pull the victory

sn: as i'm sure its coincidence, i had a similar/not similar stiches-varsity-jacket bar against em in the rb/rmbva tag battle tourney.

regardless - vote - orc

Cred
10-29-2015, 08:37 AM
Poke ur chest out, big pop a pump was fuckin crazy

vs

Last 6 lines

Alias was nice, hot line was lotb shit was crazyyy, closer hit.


Honestly a dope battle. Both y'all wit the shits. That hot line shit was nuts n that big poppa pump was mean. Yall did yall thing but Orc edges this one.

Vote - orc

puravida
10-29-2015, 07:35 PM
A good battle here, but one was more in attack mode here.

Letter: opener
orc: varsity and jessica jones

vote orc

Allen Knight
10-29-2015, 11:17 PM
I came to kill you legends, so braggin wont be the best route
Cuz it won't compliment your pride, when I take my blade & poke your chest out
U bustin triggers? I'll say something 2 get him more than hype
"Since you talk big, pop a pump".. He wont, this bitch only shows the guns b4 the fight

Vs

you lose evrytime u battle here. boyyy is it cold
000000000010000100000: now ya average vote count look like binary code
dude'll neva be known, Orc's ahead of the clones.
just anotherrr Alias bitch acting the hero. that's Jessica Jones
i'm in the Buick w. Raybans, the view is insane man
been thinkn bout a Hot line. Meanwhile, u in the club doin the Drake dance..


V/orc, cool battle... i think let had a solid verse couple of played lines
but the ones i quoted were nice, that poke yah chest out line was fire.
Orc had a nice verse hot line & alias bars were flames,
i got orc takin this one but nice battle props to both.

Useless
10-30-2015, 12:25 PM
I came to kill you legends, so braggin wont be the best route
Cuz it won't compliment your pride, when I take my blade & poke your chest out
--- fire.............
U actually showed up? Good, my boy got the rifle 2 do this herb
So this won't be a duck hunt.. just me & my dog having fun shooting Burd
--- burd flips are played bro, seen an nes flip like this before...wording was good but I just can't give u this one..............
U bustin triggers? I'll say something 2 get him more than hype
"Since you talk big, pop a pump".. He wont, this bitch only shows the guns b4 the fight
--- lol nice.................
Think u the ruler of text? I got the piece 4 this biting nigga tho
'Cause the way this King cheat, made everyone forget that Martin was a giggalo
--- ehh shoulda made the reference cleaner imo...good line tho................
We can fight, but you'd need help when I rock your snout
Ill let you pick ya backup.. cuz that's what you'll need em 2 do after I knock you out
--- lol this a throw back to '08....decent tho...............


Vs


larceny tactics, this knife'll leave u n' ya bars ina casket
&&&get Letter stitched up the front. we call that a Varsity Jacket
--- this would be fire but I seen wayyyy too many letterman/jacket flips.............
you lose evrytime u battle here. boyyy is it cold
000000000010000100000: now ya average vote count look like binary code
--- lol aite.............
dude'll neva be known, Orc's ahead of the clones.
just anotherrr Alias bitch acting the hero. that's Jessica Jones
--- aite...............
i'm in the Buick w. Raybans, the view is insane man
been thinkn bout a Hot line. Meanwhile, u in the club doin the Drake dance..
--- lol aite............
the new names a clever fad but those verses r forever bad
meet Letterman, aka 'me and Alphabet joined every newb tourny NC ever had'
--- lol........


Overall: this is closer than the votes indicate imo. Both had good verses, both only had one miss and they were both played name flips lol...I thought orc got em with those 4 inna row tho, Lett had two nice lines but his other two were just aite.

Dope battle


V. Orc cider