Seyance vs. Destroyer - Destroyer wins

[Meth]

BA Swag & Flow Tournament II


Verses are due Tuesday 11/3/15 @ 11:59 PM PST

10-16 lines

No swaying, biting, flipping, recycling, or tom foolery

No extensions.

You are allowed a 12 hour grace period once in the entire tournament. So if you use it in the first round, you will go the rest of the tourney without being allowed a grace period.


Good luck.

Destroyer Seyance

[Destroyer]

named seyance cuz u talk small, it should be Rocky, cuz u do not ball
call it the last castle when I hit u with a red ford & bury u under a rock wall
I'm Daryl Dixon with a dereliction for impaling Christians
I'll send an arrow whistling through the air with friction if u fail to listen
I sling flames that singe lames, take quick aim with thick blades
that leave u bandaging up the back of ur neck like ving rhames
American psycho with a Harrington Rifle... it's not fair, but I'm liable
to put a pair of hollows through ur eyeballs just for starin at my girl
ur Bruce Wayne facing a juiced Bane when I let loose, mayne...its profound
cuz I was born into the dark... while you merely adopted it... no Sound

[Seyance]

i've got the great vishnu spliced tissue, four arms hit you twice
that's eight fists threw obliterate this dude, turn him into straight fish food
weak cunt it couldn't be fun eliminating you. vindicate this move,
old man you need to start working out like diode's prison made bitch do..
cause i'll make your center fold, call it the winter break issue,
the deadface sensei with a twisted blade ginsu, leave ya body displayed in two
and put your family in the grave with you. he's fresh tho like lemonade with juice..
supreme dresscode none of you rejects know, asking "how did he get cold?"
thee best flow.. the world in my eyes is greater, violator like depeche mode
your not pain in the neck, it'll be strep throat cause too much weed gets smoked
fuck the haters respect, i'm aimed at ya chests a few inches above where d's head goes.

[Meth]

^

[Saint]

I'm voting on this 1.
brb

[Useless]

I'm Daryl Dixon with a dereliction for impaling Christians
I'll send an arrow whistling through the air with friction if u fail to listen
I sling flames that singe lames, take quick aim with thick blades
that leave u bandaging up the back of ur neck like ving rhames
American psycho with a Harrington Rifle... it's not fair, but I'm liable
to put a pair of hollows through ur eyeballs just for starin at my girl

--- these were cool. For some reason ur verse just felt really choppy to me. I think its cuz uncouldnt decide between flow or punches.


Vs.


i've got the great vishnu spliced tissue, four arms hit you twice
that's eight fists threw obliterate this dude, turn him into straight fish food
weak cunt it couldn't be fun eliminating you. vindicate this move,
old man you need to start working out like diode's prison made bitch do..
cause i'll make your center fold, call it the winter break issue,
the deadface sensei with a twisted blade ginsu, leave ya body displayed in two

--- this was aite. U had a good flow but the syllables were off in some places and on ur opener the end rhyme didn't rhyme. Maybe its me tho idk, but ur verse got 11 lines lol. That might be what's throwing me off.

After the first read I was gonna vote for Sey but after breaking the verses down and really reading em I gotta go with des. Sey had a really good flow in some parts but in others it was equally bad, and his verse lacked in other ways that des's didn't. I could see Sey winning this tho.



V. des

[Super faggot]

Punches - sey
Swag - sey
Flow - des
Multis - sey
Metaphors - sey
Similes - sey
Redundancy - des
Yawns - des
Enjoyment - sey
Vocab - des
Elderly - des
Creativity - sey
Wordplay - sey
Structure sey


Sey edges this 9 to 5 in cats


Vote seyance

[Knux]

Punches - sey
Swag - sey
Flow - des
Multis - sey
Metaphors - sey
Similes - sey
Redundancy - des
Yawns - des
Enjoyment - sey
Vocab - des
Elderly - des
Creativity - sey
Wordplay - sey
Structure sey


Sey edges this 9 to 5 in cats


Vote seyance

dead. i remember wen votes lookd like this

[Seyance]

thanks so much guys.

[~RustyGunZ~]

I'm Daryl Dixon with a dereliction for impaling Christians
I'll send an arrow whistling through the air with friction if u fail to listen

dope, that first line was fresh af


American psycho with a Harrington Rifle... it's not fair, but I'm liable
to put a pair of hollows through ur eyeballs just for starin at my girl

cool

vs

i've got the great vishnu spliced tissue, ...

thought it'd be nice with this start, flow fell off tbh..


cause i'll make your center fold, call it the winter break issue,
the deadface sensei with a twisted blade ginsu, leave ya body displayed in two

wooo

rest was on and off, the depeche mode scheme was cool then it ended eh

v/des in a close one

[Meth]

Des

1st 2 lines i had to force the flow

impaling christains shit was cool

5/6 lines 1st line was dope, and then the ving ending left me wanting more tbh

next bar was nice to me

no sound shit was lulz

cool verse

sey

fish food was a decent start

weak cunt/and old man hurt this bar to me

next was niceeeeeeeeee

last 5 were all solid (11 lines tho?)

solid verse from sey verse too

cool battle

enjoyed des a bit more

close battle

no sound was awesome

v/ des

[Cred]

Ok this was a cool battle herr. Des had the better flow tho. His rhymes wrre a bit more slick too while seys shit aint really hit. I liked des ving rhames shit, fire.

Vote - destroyer