BAL: Plot (2-1) vs. Schadenfreude (1-0) - Schadenfreude wins

[Meth]

Battle Arena League



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Due Dates:

Verses are due Wednesday,
November 18th 2015 11:59 PM PST.
Extensions are 24 hours


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Min. = 10
Max. = 12
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Plot Schadenfreude

[Schadenfreude]

12.

[Plot]

ok

[Plot]

ext

[Meth]

SCHADENFREDUE sent me 12

[Plot]

Faceless assassin hacking your frame with an ominous sword,
leavin your corpse leaking sensitive material, then blame it on Anonymous.org
Dropping this fraudulent Rousey, come to the crib with both chromes blazing,
Then kick the soul outta this mouthy bitch, that’s a holm invasion.
Dude, find a shrink, coz your childish rhyme schemes are just mild and weak,
S’freud, you couldn’t craft a gun-bar from Neighbours wildest dreams.
Mods please! Time to send that fag Chamber in, for the kiss of death,
The way Shards getting smoked in this battle, it’s clear as crystal, Meth.
Coz this is the jungle, and there's a predator stalking with murderous insanity,
When you hear those toucans squawking bro, don't expect to see birds in the canopy!!!!
Yeah, he's obsessed with artillery, so ratatatat… and I’m dumping this queer,
I guess that makes it ironic, howitzer gun-bar that’s finally slumping him here.

[Meth]

SCHADENFREDUE's VERSE

Fuck what Orc & Neigh on, couldn’t pay Me to pay u a compliment
besides u don’t have enough to bother with, ain’t done shit worth acknowledging.
Save ya pregnant wife’s life or watch as your miss plummets..
DGAF, aim for her gut. Mean pull-out game, how I bust on yo bitch stomach.
Keep a 100 rounds in the S.A.W, that’ll chop ya limbs..
Alias “moviemaker”, when I shoot Plot, point blank ..like I forgot the film.
Easy play, but there’s no intriguing story in dispelling this gay
shit, the only reason the Plot would even thicken s’cause corpses swell w/ decay
Over .500 vs respectable comp, congrats u Scandinavian queer
should change yo name to Bridgewater, it’s the most Vikings have won in years.
King of No Show victories, who’ve u ACTUALLY beat faggot?
ppl legitimately voting for u would set precedence ..due to just absentee ballots.

..FukkouttaHere.

[Meth]

Faceless assassin hacking your frame with an ominous sword,
leavin your corpse leaking sensitive material, then blame it on Anonymous.org
--ok start
Dropping this fraudulent Rousey, come to the crib with both chromes blazing,
Then kick the soul outta this mouthy bitch, that’s a holm invasion.
--the Rousey shit been done a lot since the fight. I think the Rousey in the set up was kind of a reach but the added holm/home connection at the end saves it. Overall a solid line.
Dude, find a shrink, coz your childish rhyme schemes are just mild and weak,
S’freud, you couldn’t craft a gun-bar from Neighbours wildest dreams.
--don't like this
Mods please! Time to send that fag Chamber in, for the kiss of death,
The way Shards getting smoked in this battle, it’s clear as crystal, Meth.
--hmmm. Trying to figure out if it like this... It's eh.
Coz this is the jungle, and there's a predator stalking with murderous insanity,
When you hear those toucans squawking bro, don't expect to see birds in the canopy!!!!
--this wordplay is pretty played out. Execution is ok.
Yeah, he's obsessed with artillery, so ratatatat… and I’m dumping this queer,
I guess that makes it ironic, howitzer gun-bar that’s finally slumping him here.
--howitzer pretty played too.

SCHADENFREDUE's VERSE

Fuck what Orc & Neigh on, couldn’t pay Me to pay u a compliment
besides u don’t have enough to bother with, ain’t done shit worth acknowledging.
--nah
Save ya pregnant wife’s life or watch as your miss plummets..
DGAF, aim for her gut. Mean pull-out game, how I bust on yo bitch stomach.
--ight.
Keep a 100 rounds in the S.A.W, that’ll chop ya limbs..
Alias “moviemaker”, when I shoot Plot, point blank ..like I forgot the film.
--Haha. Like this.
Easy play, but there’s no intriguing story in dispelling this gay
shit, the only reason the Plot would even thicken s’cause corpses swell w/ decay
--nice (sorry plot i haven't read a huge amount of ur battles so idk what's played on u)
Over .500 vs respectable comp, congrats u Scandinavian queer
should change yo name to Bridgewater, it’s the most Vikings have won in years.
--eh.
King of No Show victories, who’ve u ACTUALLY beat faggot?
ppl legitimately voting for u would set precedence ..due to just absentee ballots
--ok.

..FukkouttaHere.

Cool read

2-1 quotes in Schafer favor. Could go either way based on preference

Props to both

V/ freude

[Utmost]

Dude, find a shrink, coz your childish rhyme schemes are just mild and weak,
S’freud, you couldn’t craft a gun-bar from Neighbours wildest dreams.
Mods please! Time to send that fag Chamber in, for the kiss of death,
The way Shards getting smoked in this battle, it’s clear as crystal, Meth.

vs

Keep a 100 rounds in the S.A.W, that’ll chop ya limbs..
Alias “moviemaker”, when I shoot Plot, point blank ..like I forgot the film.
Easy play, but there’s no intriguing story in dispelling this gay
shit, the only reason the Plot would even thicken s’cause corpses swell w/ decay


aight battle here, liked Plots opener..not as direct as i would like in a battle. also some of the lines coulda been worded a bit better. Schade kinda suffered from the same thing early with not being direct with punches, but i thought point blank was pretty dope and the swell line was kinda nice as well.

v/Schade a bit better wording, stronger quotes

[Lotto Smirk]

Dude, find a shrink, coz your childish rhyme schemes are just mild and weak,
S’freud, you couldn’t craft a gun-bar from Neighbours wildest dreams.
Mods please! Time to send that fag Chamber in, for the kiss of death,
The way Shards getting smoked in this battle, it’s clear as crystal, Meth.

vs

Keep a 100 rounds in the S.A.W, that’ll chop ya limbs..
Alias “moviemaker”, when I shoot Plot, point blank ..like I forgot the film.
Easy play, but there’s no intriguing story in dispelling this gay
shit, the only reason the Plot would even thicken s’cause corpses swell w/ decay

I had it pretty even in quotes but had schade w/ better misses and his hits better thought plot had an alright verse first one I've seen of him that's made me notice shame schade was better here

V/ schade

[Fracture]

1st guys verse-- looked real polished, coco crisp wording. Sensitive material was sick. Crystal meth was line of the battle. Closer is either a banger or nothing. Frankly it was nothing to me because I don't say howitzer in the way you frames the line


Second guy--plot thicken was illy. The rest was just too sloppy and non hitting. It looked bad in comparison to how tight the rhyme scheme was on the other guys verse

Vote-- first guy by more quotables and less lows

[Allen Knight]

Orc Wavy Crockett Muff Lotto Smirk Flo Real Chyeahhh!!! Knux Plot Schadenfreude Bash Nameflip Kemizt 2tripple0 POET MiNDER


VOTE I KNOW SOME U PUSSIES DIDNT

[Schadenfreude]

VOTE
Just did.

[Its BRUH]

Plot had holm invasion. The rest didnt hit well. The last few wps needed a better twist to hit.

---

Schad first 3 bars hit hard to me. The rest imo were meh. Overall he was nore polished in all aspects.

V-Schad

[sral]

Faceless assassin hacking your frame with an ominous sword,
leavin your corpse leaking sensitive material, then blame it on Anonymous.org
Dropping this fraudulent Rousey, come to the crib with both chromes blazing,
Then kick the soul outta this mouthy bitch, that’s a holm invasion.
Mods please! Time to send that fag Chamber in, for the kiss of death,
The way Shards getting smoked in this battle, it’s clear as crystal, Meth.
Yeah, he's obsessed with artillery, so ratatatat… and I’m dumping this queer,
I guess that makes it ironic, howitzer gun-bar that’s finally slumping him here.

vs


Save ya pregnant wife’s life or watch as your miss plummets..
DGAF, aim for her gut. Mean pull-out game, how I bust on yo bitch stomach.
Keep a 100 rounds in the S.A.W, that’ll chop ya limbs..
Alias “moviemaker”, when I shoot Plot, point blank ..like I forgot the film.
Easy play, but there’s no intriguing story in dispelling this gay
shit, the only reason the Plot would even thicken s’cause corpses swell w/ decay
Over .500 vs respectable comp, congrats u Scandinavian queer
should change yo name to Bridgewater, it’s the most Vikings have won in years.


I've got this one pretty tied actually, close as fuck in what I had quoted, that Plot Thickens shit was extra nice from Schad though and ultimately what swayed my decision - he had LOTB. People are either being super stingy on quoteables or just missing some of Plot's ish though, he came correct here!

Vote - Schad