PDA

View Full Version : Round One: Chat and Prediction


Adonis
01-02-2016, 12:32 PM
Here are the seedings and matches


#1GodComplex vs. #32 Slecht

#2 DeadMan vs. #31 puravida

#3 PancakeBrah vs. #30 Tyson

#4 Argh vs. #29 Maximus

#5 Frank vs. #28 Grafx

#6 NYCSPITZ vs. #27 JESODIST

#7 Pinot Grij vs. #26 Brokenhal0

#8 Witty vs. #25 Pharaohs Army

#9 Cimmerian vs. #24 Fraze

#10 Soulstice vs. #23 Neutral

#11 Diode vs. #22 Zen

#12 VividlyVague vs. #21 Flo Real

#13 Mr. J vs. #20 Bags

#14 Razah vs. #19 Innovator

#15 Objective vs. #18 Mike Wrecka

#16 MMLP vs. #17 Timeless

Witty
01-02-2016, 12:38 PM
I would have Zen much higher tbh, good shit tho. Who is Argh?

Looking forward to our battle Pharaohs Army

Witty
01-02-2016, 12:44 PM
#1GodComplex vs. #32 Slecht

#2 DeadMan vs. #31 puravida

#3 PancakeBrah vs. #30 Tyson

#4 Argh vs. #29 Maximus I don't know who Argh is, Maximus can write tho, he is capable of advancing but I need to know more about his opponent to make a prediction, clearly he's good judging by rank, is it an alias?

#5 Frank vs. #28 Grafx

#6 Soulstice vs. #27 Neutral

#7 Pinot Grij vs. #26 Brokenhal0

#8 Witty vs. #25 Pharaohs Army best of luck bro

#9 Cimmerian vs. #24 Fraze - this will be good

#10 NYCSPITZ vs. #23 JESODIST

#11 Diode vs. #22 Zen This will be battle of the first round for me, Zen is one of my favourite writers here, Diode is too and he has much more experience in advancing in tourneys, so I'll go for him but it should be very close

#12 VividlyVague vs. #21 Flo Real

#13 Mr. J vs. #20 Bags - Lol I legit don't know, something in my mind is telling me bags is actually a surprisingly good topical writer? Maybe I saw some shit he did a while ago? idk, but if I'm wrong, Mr. J got the shit to advance in to latter rounds.

#14 Razah vs. #19 Innovator

#15 Objective vs. #18 Mike Wrecka

#16 MMLP vs. #17 Timeless - Possible the most underrated writer on netcees.

Adonis
01-02-2016, 12:48 PM
I would have Zen much higher tbh, good shit tho. Who is Argh?

Looking forward to our battle Pharaohs Army



Due to this site being gay argh was not allowed to sign in under her usual moniker of BE

I'm sure you know her, if you don't you fucking up. I hope she shows, wish I had her email or another way of contact

Diode you know how to reach her?


Also Witty, spot on with that Bags prediction. I didn't know where to put him, I swear he's good though. Figure feed him to a beast opening up and let the chips fall

Witty
01-02-2016, 12:50 PM
Oh word BE is dope.

Edit: I'm also predicting she'll win now I know it's her.

Diode
01-02-2016, 02:56 PM
Due to this site being gay argh was not allowed to sign in under her usual moniker of BE

I'm sure you know her, if you don't you fucking up. I hope she shows, wish I had her email or another way of contact

Diode you know how to reach her?


Also Witty, spot on with that Bags prediction. I didn't know where to put him, I swear he's good though. Figure feed him to a beast opening up and let the chips fall

yeah i have her on fb. you need me to msg?

Useless
01-02-2016, 03:01 PM
Witty should be #1 seed obv

Adonis
01-02-2016, 03:02 PM
yeah i have her on fb. you need me to msg?

Yes please. that would be amazing


Thank you

Diode
01-02-2016, 03:49 PM
Yes please. that would be amazing


Thank you

She's en route to sign in.

Argh
01-02-2016, 03:53 PM
Here.

Adonis
01-02-2016, 04:28 PM
Will someone PM me a topic so I can write and be an alternate


First one I get I use

Pharaohs Army
01-02-2016, 06:11 PM
#8 Witty vs. #25 Pharaohs Army best of luck bro

Thanks man gl. This is all just happening so fast.. Pretty pumped.

Razah
01-02-2016, 06:45 PM
Innovator

Short & sweet. 16-20 sound cool?

Leaning more towards 16, to be honest.

Inno
01-02-2016, 07:03 PM
Innovator

Short & sweet. 16-20 sound cool?

Leaning more towards 16, to be honest.

I'm going 24

Witty
01-02-2016, 07:04 PM
Witty should be #1 seed obv

<3

TYSON
01-02-2016, 07:06 PM
Get witty seeds out your mouth

UnbornBuddha
01-03-2016, 01:01 AM
This tournament looks legendary.

Adonis
01-03-2016, 01:49 AM
Will someone PM me a topic so I can write and be an alternate


First one I get I use

I'm sayin though


I think I already finished the mag on the real. I hit a zone today and powered through. Wish I could add more, but I don't have anything else to say.

Vulgar
01-03-2016, 08:24 AM
Nutritious.

sral
01-03-2016, 08:38 AM
LETS GOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Razah
01-03-2016, 09:59 AM
I'm going 24

Fine. I'll match you. Good luck.

MMLP
01-03-2016, 02:04 PM
#16 MMLP vs. #17 Timeless [B]- Possible the most underrated writer on netcees

Kind words! Salute

Tourney looks dope. Hope everyone brings it.

Adonis
01-03-2016, 06:46 PM
Want a alternate spot Vulgar

Adonis
01-03-2016, 06:46 PM
Also, someone PM me a topic

Vulgar
01-04-2016, 02:41 AM
Want a alternate spot Vulgar

Can't devote the time or effort on it like I used to, but I'll be around.

MMLP
01-04-2016, 07:53 AM
timeless it appears to be a girl crammed in a bird cage wearing a clown-ish mask

that's what I can see anyway. No IDEA what to write about :S

Cimmerian
01-04-2016, 01:18 PM
I don't have sufficient familiarity with y'all's work to prognosticate. But I look forward to reading and wish everyone good luck.

Cimm.

Ghost1
01-04-2016, 02:24 PM
Prognose a boner fagot

Cimmerian
01-04-2016, 02:50 PM
http://cdn.phuntube.com/images/2014/07/that_word_i_dont_think_it_means_what_you_think_it_ means-5572.jpg

Ghost1
01-04-2016, 03:19 PM
Which one.........boner?

Lay down an rot boyo

Cimmerian
01-04-2016, 03:22 PM
http://cdn.meme.am/instances/500x/66279268.jpg

Ghost1
01-04-2016, 03:27 PM
Post count quip :/

This doesn't end well for u

Cimmerian
01-04-2016, 03:30 PM
:P

timeless
01-04-2016, 05:15 PM
MMLP good looks

Wise Wiggles
01-04-2016, 05:43 PM
In if a no show happens

Thought I signed up

PancakeBrah
01-04-2016, 11:01 PM
Wise destroyed Round 1 last year.

Pent uP
01-07-2016, 02:12 PM
Looking for an alrernate spot

Adonis
01-07-2016, 02:35 PM
Here is our list of Alternates to date, in order of priority due to rep of previous AOWL/Topical Tournaments. Rest of the league is on notice, there will be no extensions, by the time due date rolls around you will have had a topic available for at least ten days = no excuses beside procrastination and being lazy


Pent uP
Vulgar
YDK
Wise Wiggles
Rakontur
2tripple0
its faggot zelph
PiE


In that order. You have a topic, Verses are Due Monday, same time as everyone else. PM me your verse in advance and I will post it when the time comes.

Pent uP
01-07-2016, 02:56 PM
Thanks

PiE
01-07-2016, 03:00 PM
Idk. I predict I lose before I even post

its faggot zelph
01-07-2016, 03:22 PM
Ready

timeless
01-07-2016, 04:10 PM
Someone can take my spot Adonis

Sucks but I have no time let alone any motivation these days. Was looking forward to this tourney too.

Adonis
01-07-2016, 04:21 PM
Someone can take my spot Adonis

Sucks but I have no time let alone any motivation these days. Was looking forward to this tourney too.

You've been subbed out. Sad day

ThisisDAM
01-08-2016, 11:27 AM
shit...i missed sign ups

Adonis
01-08-2016, 09:37 PM
shit...i missed sign ups

I'll send you a topic on case there are no shows. At some point tonight. A finishing up at Disneyland

2tripple0
01-10-2016, 08:52 AM
I'm ready

PiE
01-10-2016, 09:10 AM
I guess I'm not famous enough.

PiE
01-10-2016, 09:19 AM
If anyone no shows, I can get there spit spot Adonis?

Adonis
01-10-2016, 12:27 PM
Vulgar
YDK
Wise Wiggles
Pie
Rakontur
2trip
Zelph

Adonis
01-10-2016, 12:29 PM
If anyone no shows, I can get there spit spot Adonis?

Yeah. Just write a verse to that topic I sent you. Due Monday night or Tuesday morning when I wake up.

If there is a no-show you will be plugged in

Pm me your verse though

2tripple0
01-10-2016, 05:34 PM
Werd

grafx
01-11-2016, 09:54 AM
Will post here in a few hours wen I get back home

MMLP
01-11-2016, 10:25 AM
Heads up! Think ill be exceeding 40 lines Pent uP

Pent uP
01-11-2016, 03:47 PM
Lol i went like 20/24...great

MMLP
01-11-2016, 04:01 PM
Used 48 lines! Pent uP

'Manoeuvred' and 'honoured' are the correct spellings on our British isles
sraL my boy can vouch lol

Adonis
01-11-2016, 04:53 PM
Used 48 lines! Pent uP

'Manoeuvred' and 'honoured' are the correct spellings on our British isles
sraL my boy can vouch lol

MMLP is the correct spelling for Pussy in my neck of the words as well

;)

Inno
01-11-2016, 05:02 PM
so whats up second round?

sral
01-11-2016, 05:28 PM
MMLP is the correct spelling for Pussy in my neck of the words as well

;)

OH SHIT

MMLP
01-11-2016, 05:39 PM
LMAO shots fired!

Razah
01-11-2016, 06:21 PM
get the feeling a lot of ppl are gonna no show

:/

Pinot Grij
01-11-2016, 06:44 PM
Adonis Pinot vs brokenhal0 also open for votes now, homey!

Ghost1
01-11-2016, 07:54 PM
Mr. J

e11even
01-11-2016, 11:24 PM
@floreal Flo Real I posted. Please post when you can. If I get chopped, then so be it. I barely finished.

Diode
01-11-2016, 11:31 PM
@floreal Flo Real I posted. Please post when you can. If I get chopped, then so be it. I barely finished.

who negged u into oblivion?? i will avenge u.

Split Eight
01-11-2016, 11:43 PM
Soulstice/ Neutral BOTW

Adonis
01-12-2016, 12:22 AM
I'm passing out right now. Going to close battles early morning and I currently have 3 verses in my in box for no show matches.



dead man puravida Flo Real neutral grafx fraze Maximus PancakeBrah Mike Wrecka Objective Pharaohs Army Mr. J Godcomplex JESODIST Zen

Mr. J
01-12-2016, 12:24 AM
dont know if I should let Bags get the W for making me laugh


















or if I should let 2tripple0 take the reins on this one...














































tune in soon to find out this and more

Argh
01-12-2016, 12:26 AM
I've never seen so many no-show in the first round of a tourney, ever. Do we get re-matched? That defeats the purpose and challenge of writing against a shared topic, but I guess it's better than nothing.

Adonis
01-12-2016, 12:29 AM
I've never seen so many no-show in the first round of a tourney, ever. Do we get re-matched? That defeats the purpose and challenge of writing against a shared topic, but I guess it's better than nothing.

No battles will be recombined. People will have another 7 hours or so, so hopefully we get some more battles opened up.

grafx
01-12-2016, 12:31 AM
my bad lost track of time with company earlier. hope its not to late as I just posted which is 22 minutes after the deadline I believe

Diode
01-12-2016, 12:32 AM
I'm passing out right now. Going to close battles early morning and I currently have 3 verses in my in box for no show matches.



dead man puravida Flo Real neutral grafx fraze Maximus PancakeBrah Mike Wrecka Objective Pharaohs Army Mr. J Godcomplex JESODIST Zen

so much for no extensions. this is bullshit, dude. i stayed sober for the fucking national champ game so i could write and meet the deadline.

super awesome rule enforcement, bro.

Argh
01-12-2016, 12:32 AM
So no-showed verses automatically get the W and advance? I'm willing to give my opponent an extension until whenever.

Mr. J
01-12-2016, 12:34 AM
you guys are cute...






















Adonis Im going to interview you through ESP

Adonis
01-12-2016, 12:35 AM
so much for no extensions. this is bullshit, dude. i stayed sober for the fucking national champ game so i could write and meet the deadline.

super awesome rule enforcement, bro.

You're more then welcome to enforce any rule you wish, that's number 1

Number 2, stop free posting.

Finally, by you enforcing the rule of not allowing Zen to post late will not gurantee you a win because it's a chance you still get re-matched with an alternate.


Lastly, you didn't stay sober for the game, you stayed lazy nearly two weeks in not writing until the game

Diode
01-12-2016, 12:40 AM
You're more then welcome to enforce any rule you wish, that's number 1

Number 2, stop free posting.

Finally, by you enforcing the rule of not allowing Zen to post late will not gurantee you a win because it's a chance you still get re-matched with an alternate.


Lastly, you didn't stay sober for the game, you stayed lazy nearly two weeks in not writing until the game

how or when i write doesn't matter as long as it gets in on time.

i don't give a fuck about who i face (nice "threat" by the way), but i've been rule-stomped more than enough times to get mad when the goalposts appear to be moved when i went out of my way to meet them. that's all i'm saying because anything else will fall on deaf little ears.

Mr. J
01-12-2016, 01:13 AM
Im bored now....Ill be back in a few days

sral
01-12-2016, 04:33 AM
PINOT'S VERSE WAS HILARIOUSSSSSSSSS!

TYSON
01-12-2016, 09:18 AM
How I show and niggas don't show? I thought I was the king of no shows. I gotta try harder

Pharaohs Army
01-12-2016, 09:20 AM
I am sorry. U got two different due dates... Rules&Regs?
I will post about 20 minutes after I get home from work if you and Witty allow (see edit)

Adonis
01-12-2016, 11:52 AM
I am sorry. U got two different due dates... Rules&Regs?
I will post about 20 minutes after I get home from work if you and Witty allow (see edit)

That's fine with me if it is with Witty

Will reopen pending

dead man
01-12-2016, 12:02 PM
Why wasn't my match opened for votes?

UnbornBuddha
01-12-2016, 12:12 PM
Adonis

Hey why was my match closed, check again I posted.

Adonis
01-12-2016, 12:17 PM
Adonis

Hey why was my match closed, check again I posted.

Because you advanced by no show

dead man really? Because his verse is ten numbers

Witty
01-12-2016, 01:01 PM
I'm cool with it.

Inno
01-12-2016, 01:01 PM
Razah sorry for the no show verse

NYCSPITZ
01-12-2016, 01:08 PM
i wanna see how rd 3 is gonna look like

Adonis
01-12-2016, 02:18 PM
i wanna see how rd 3 is gonna look like

Rd 2?

We'll make it work though. Some how some way.

Mr. J
01-12-2016, 02:30 PM
I look forward to my next opponent hopefully its worth my time

NYCSPITZ
01-12-2016, 02:41 PM
Rd 2?

We'll make it work though. Some how some way.

oh yeah round 2...

lol @ diode's emotional frustration bc your post...even tho it's obv from ur history that we still had like 12 hrs to post?? ...smh

Diode
01-12-2016, 02:51 PM
oh yeah round 2...

lol @ diode's emotional frustration bc your post...even tho it's obv from ur history that we still had like 12 hrs to post?? ...smh

hello you tiny little faggot

deadline was 12a ET / 9p PT

learn 2 read

hope u die

thx

Pinot Grij
01-12-2016, 05:19 PM
PINOT'S VERSE WAS HILARIOUSSSSSSSSS!

thanks, I like to goof around.

Why is every text verse about the darkness of the universe mirroring the darkness of man's soul? This shit is supposed to be FUN. Like, that shit is cool sometimes - but why all the time?

Ghost1
01-12-2016, 05:31 PM
Sorry for my deep brooding topical verse bruh

Thanks for taking time to feed

I'll get sum votes in sooooon

NYCSPITZ
01-12-2016, 06:32 PM
hello you tiny little faggot

deadline was 12a ET / 9p PT

learn 2 read

hope u die

thx

Ok, sure thing master writer, master chef, judo guru, master hunstman, master of boards master of money and master of getting bitch ed out by adonis, nobody real likes u, even on here lmao...y don't u fly Seth n bags over to ur crib so u all can have a retard orgy

Ghost1
01-12-2016, 06:46 PM
Down

Pharaohs Army
01-12-2016, 07:13 PM
Adonis I appreciate the pending status, and Witty I appreciate you saying you personally are Ok with it. got home lil' while ago. Posted a few minutes ago.
--
I'm not making this up (cuz I know our matchup page has in huge bold print the due date)-- but I had not been to that page since I checked in.. Sunday night I went to rules and regs and I was like "sweet we got an extra day"..

so i do hope its approved.

now, i will check out some round1s.

Pharaohs Army
01-12-2016, 07:28 PM
I struggled with this ranking more then any other. I swear I have read topicals from you before under an alias, but I can't recall the name. Considering your resume, there is no doubt that you know what's what. Topical though, question marks.

Sorry for my deep brooding topical verse bruh

Haven't read the verses yet, but based on this "apology", I think Bags'll fit right in. lmao.

Pharaohs Army
01-12-2016, 07:33 PM
ah. good old sarcasm eh. you duped me Bags.

Ghost1
01-12-2016, 08:12 PM
Do I still fit in?

Pent uP
01-12-2016, 09:06 PM
Down

Instantly slayee

Pent uP
01-12-2016, 09:26 PM
Adonis sraL

Next round can the topics be of better resolution

e11even
01-12-2016, 10:51 PM
I'm passing out right now. Going to close battles early morning and I currently have 3 verses in my in box for no show matches.



dead man puravida Flo Real neutral grafx fraze Maximus PancakeBrah Mike Wrecka Objective Pharaohs Army Mr. J Godcomplex JESODIST Zen

So the decision was to close it? My battle with flo is still open in the archive. Is it still being considered?

Certain
01-12-2016, 11:44 PM
I want to thank Adonis for putting Pinot Grij and brokenhal0 against each other because Pinot definitely is sitting there wondering what the fuck is wrong with voters who think it's close.

(Note: I haven't read either verse. This is about stylistic preferences.)

UnbornBuddha
01-13-2016, 12:57 AM
Argh

You ask if I wrote under another moniker? Yes, UnbornBuddha. We competed in the RHYME; I will get my old name back soon. That's why I asked when you first posted here to bring Sacrifice out of hiding.

Argh
01-13-2016, 01:30 AM
Argh

You ask if I wrote under another moniker? Yes, UnbornBuddha. We competed in the RHYME; I will get my old name back soon. That's why I asked when you first posted here to bring Sacrifice out of hiding.

Ah. I see you've tightened up your writing quite a bit (a compliment). Looking forward to facing you again at some point. I miss the RHYME, which had/has an uncomparable level of talent.

Mr. J
01-13-2016, 01:30 AM
Boredom is a fiendish troll that dwells in my sole
with that being said, in the snakes eyes...let the good times roll

UnbornBuddha
01-13-2016, 01:42 AM
Ah. I see you've tightened up your writing quite a bit (a compliment). Looking forward to facing you again at some point. I miss the RHYME, which had/has an uncomparable level of talent.

Yes, looking forward to it. I quite like the RHYME too; unfortunately, it appears the site is inactive, a barren wasteland it seems, in terms of topical writing. Plus, the last tournament wasn't even completed, a shame. Glad to see you competing though.

Adonis
01-13-2016, 10:52 AM
So the decision was to close it? My battle with flo is still open in the archive. Is it still being considered?

No, sorry, there should be no posting allowed in there, not sure what happened. If he did post you can approve, otherwise you advance

Pinot Grij
01-13-2016, 12:21 PM
I want to thank Adonis for putting Pinot Grij and brokenhal0 against each other because Pinot definitely is sitting there wondering what the fuck is wrong with voters who think it's close.

(Note: I haven't read either verse. This is about stylistic preferences.)

I don't get it...

If anything, I've loved the feedback so far. I ended my verse the way I did to try to appease a certain voter base that would've thought my verse was too weird or too off topic. Everybody is telling me they don't want that kind of predictability - which only makes me more excited for next week - if I move on.

NYCSPITZ
01-13-2016, 12:24 PM
my functioning sclera is coming for pinot...switch it up on him with some disneyland shit

Pinot Grij
01-13-2016, 01:26 PM
I wish my sclera was not functioning when I read that line.

Certain
01-13-2016, 01:29 PM
I don't get it...

If anything, I've loved the feedback so far. I ended my verse the way I did to try to appease a certain voter base that would've thought my verse was too weird or too off topic. Everybody is telling me they don't want that kind of predictability - which only makes me more excited for next week - if I move on.

I mean that your reading/voting taste is directly contradictory to brokenhal0's writing style.

Pinot Grij
01-13-2016, 02:50 PM
I mean that your reading/voting taste is directly contradictory to brokenhal0's writing style.
Yea, like, what was that motherfucker even talking about?

Pinot Grij
01-13-2016, 03:11 PM
Yo next time I go to Tim Hortons I'm not gonna be like, "Can I have a large coffee?" - I'm gonna be like:

Liquid dreams mixed with cream distancing my consciousness
I relapse when caffeine snaps moments elapse ominous
Mask my ego with cappuccino - steam rises, bubbles frothing
Vanilla beans are millipedes still I scheme for cups of coffee

And the chick gon be like :O "He a text god"

Diode
01-13-2016, 03:21 PM
Yo next time I go to Tim Hortons I'm not gonna be like, "Can I have a large coffee?" - I'm gonna be like:

Liquid dreams mixed with cream distancing my consciousness
I relapse when caffeine snaps moments elapse ominous
Mask my ego with cappuccino - steam rises, bubbles frothing
Vanilla beans are millipedes still I scheme for cups of coffee

And the chick gon be like :O "He a text god"

in which pinot outs himself as a syrup guzzler, eh?

Certain
01-13-2016, 03:42 PM
Yo next time I go to Tim Hortons I'm not gonna be like, "Can I have a large coffee?" - I'm gonna be like:

Liquid dreams mixed with cream distancing my consciousness
I relapse when caffeine snaps moments elapse ominous
Mask my ego with cappuccino - steam rises, bubbles frothing
Vanilla beans are millipedes still I scheme for cups of coffee

And the chick gon be like :O "He a text god"

way too much punctuation and capitalization to be brokenhal0 man

Witty
01-13-2016, 04:00 PM
That Cimmerian verse tho.

e11even
01-13-2016, 06:00 PM
Yo next time I go to Tim Hortons I'm not gonna be like, "Can I have a large coffee?" - I'm gonna be like:

Liquid dreams mixed with cream distancing my consciousness
I relapse when caffeine snaps moments elapse ominous
Mask my ego with cappuccino - steam rises, bubbles frothing
Vanilla beans are millipedes still I scheme for cups of coffee

And the chick gon be like :O "He a text god"

Fucking flames. I lol'd.

Mr. J
01-13-2016, 07:02 PM
Adonis you want this work buddy

Adonis
01-13-2016, 07:09 PM
Adonis you want this work buddy

Mr J don't know what real work is, nor could he handle the consequences of Adonis verbal ejaculate

facts

Witty
01-13-2016, 07:20 PM
I'm the grim reaper, a thrill seeker with some ill sneakers, my will's eager to kill leaders, you need to chill 'fore heaters meet your grill, deplete your will, defeat your skill, show you you're still weaker.

Adonis
01-13-2016, 07:26 PM
Rules state: Each vote below the minimum of 3 means you start off round two negative votes

Example... If all battles closed right now and Tyson has cast zero votes, in Round Two he will be already losing by three votes. If he were facing say Witty, who has two votes, Tyson would be down two votes at the begining of battle due to One of Witty's lack of votes negates one of Tyson's



Voting Tally's

Thank you

GodComplex -3
Argh -3
Pinot - 5 Votes you beautiful soul
Mr. J - 4 votes you kind asshole
MMLP -3
Pent uP -3
Cimmerian -3


Needs One More Vote

Witty
NYCSPITZ
PiE

Needs Two More Votes

Diode
Vividlyvague


Needs three more votes

Bags
Frank
Soulstice dead man
TYSON



If I missed something let me know. I preemptively apologize and will correct asap. Working on mag so I'll be on for a bit

Cimmerian
01-13-2016, 07:30 PM
Adonis , I voted for Pent UP, Pinot Grij, and Razah.

Cimm.

Adonis
01-13-2016, 07:31 PM
I ball, you watch from steal bleachers. Witty David, I'm Goliath, but you will never copper feel neither. Like me people did Jesus, you to can get either'd. Be it by meat cleaver or choke hold a la Dennis Siver. I'm the real Notorious, fuck you and your Nations Bitch Leader


That was for Witty

Adonis
01-13-2016, 07:31 PM
Adonis , I voted for Pent UP, Pinot Grij, and Razah.

Cimm.

Word, I knew you dropped three, I'm re-checking now but I got you. Much appreciated

Cimmerian
01-13-2016, 07:48 PM
Word, I knew you dropped three, I'm re-checking now but I got you. Much appreciated


No worries. Thanks for herding cats.

TYSON
01-13-2016, 07:52 PM
Will vote tonight.

Mr. J
01-13-2016, 08:09 PM
Adonis don't stray from the challenge >_0

Adonis
01-13-2016, 08:13 PM
Adonis don't stray from the challenge >_0

I'm always game broseph

Always writing too whether I post it or not, I am literally a writing junkie

Unfortunately I have to write a mag, this will take up today and tomorrow


But if you write up 10-20 I can match before bed. And I by match I mean like gasoline that ass

Mr. J
01-13-2016, 08:34 PM
You have a middle man to choose the topic...

UnbornBuddha
01-13-2016, 08:38 PM
I did 4 votes!

And will battles be up by Friday?

Pharaohs Army
01-13-2016, 09:29 PM
Bringing this up as a chat item, a perspective from a relatively green topical voter/writer

I've read the MMLP vs. @PentUp verses a couple times each.

Was about to vote, but I truly don't feel like I can contribute a vote. I am leaning slightly towards one, but...I'm not bein a dick here; it's just not my "thing", but I will keep dipping my foot in the water.

As a man of words I'm having trouble expressing what I wanna express here, let alone attempting to express a "vote explanation", lol.

Obviously some good metaphors in both.. And good rhyming.. Just... too thick. Too heavy..

I guess it's personal stylistic preference.
You guys are too good and rhymie for your own good... i.e. I enjoy super-rhymie stuff, but (TO ME) it seems to work better if it's bragging or violence or humor or battlez... as opposed to a serious topic or story, where one should strive to be concise despite one's instinct to rhymerhymerhyme.
for example MMLP is a dope writer(his verse in AOWL impressed me big-time), but tbh I view his first-round story here as over-rhymed and kinda shitty. Meaning it's superfluous.
and PentUp... too thick bro. Redundant a few times. BUT I MEAN ITS GOOD WRITING, BOTH OF THEM

So yeah I'm 0-6 and don't have too much credibility, but I Hope ya'll in this terny understand what I'm trying to convey here.
Like I said. Dip feets in water. *Back to keying jarbled mania, I guess*. lol.

&thanks to voters-- in my first round vs. Witty-- for the constructive tips and breakdowns. I realize technicality is usually my downfall in anything I do... Few days ago I was taking my verse apart and trying like 5 different ways to display it. Frustrating tbh. Ended up just going with my original format. Basically I'll take L as long as people understand that limitless kinda rhymes with fingertips.
Ironically, in most things I write I put technicality above all else. Which I guess we could say is a big problem, since I often fail@'showing' others. It's been years of a struggle lemme tellya.

I coulda just said I didn't vote so I could "save votes" for ppl who need them.
P.S. Adonis^ I haven't crunched the numbers but I have a feeling that mathematically voters who are "late to the party" might be left in the cold and could be killed by the voting rule, particuarly if there are a bunch of sweeps. So plz take that into account before you actually punish anyone by the letter of the law.. I understand it's a fine line though-- not voting(lazy) VS. not voting early(and being screwed).

GL all in next rds

Ghost1
01-13-2016, 09:54 PM
Lol but u a fagit 5ho

Pharaohs Army
01-13-2016, 10:00 PM
everything's about me, bags... so i'll just assume you were addressing me.
what is "5ho?"
F OFF!

grafx
01-13-2016, 10:23 PM
voting here soon

Mr. J
01-13-2016, 10:25 PM
Adonis where is that topiiiiiiiiiiccccccccc

Adonis
01-13-2016, 10:26 PM
Adonis where is that topiiiiiiiiiiccccccccc

Pick one bro. Actually pick a bunch and send them to me for round two topics.


Everyone do this please

@league

Mr. J
01-13-2016, 10:29 PM
But.........I don't like doing things I dont need to do...













Fuck

Pharaohs Army
01-13-2016, 11:00 PM
Looking forward to our battle Pharaohs Army

nice job man. silky

Adonis
01-13-2016, 11:21 PM
But.........I don't like doing things I dont need to do...










Fuck





Free write me twenty and I'll collab tonight

Diode
01-13-2016, 11:39 PM
umm i voted on two already. i only have one left.

Diode
01-13-2016, 11:40 PM
razah v inno and bags v mr. j i voted on yesterday

Mr. J
01-14-2016, 12:34 AM
Frank I see you lurking my sweet sweet minx you want this work...





I'll even use your style against you...

Mr. J
01-14-2016, 12:43 AM
Actually.... Frank you have to earn my presence again I called you out numerous times and you hid in.a poets league....carry on

Cimmerian
01-14-2016, 08:37 AM
Bringing this up as a chat item, a perspective from a relatively green topical voter/writer

I've read the MMLP vs. @PentUp verses a couple times each.

Was about to vote, but I truly don't feel like I can contribute a vote. I am leaning slightly towards one, but...I'm not bein a dick here; it's just not my "thing", but I will keep dipping my foot in the water.

As a man of words I'm having trouble expressing what I wanna express here, let alone attempting to express a "vote explanation", lol.

Obviously some good metaphors in both.. And good rhyming.. Just... too thick. Too heavy..

I guess it's personal stylistic preference.
You guys are too good and rhymie for your own good... i.e. I enjoy super-rhymie stuff, but (TO ME) it seems to work better if it's bragging or violence or humor or battlez... as opposed to a serious topic or story, where one should strive to be concise despite one's instinct to rhymerhymerhyme.
for example MMLP is a dope writer(his verse in AOWL impressed me big-time), but tbh I view his first-round story here as over-rhymed and kinda shitty. Meaning it's superfluous.
and PentUp... too thick bro. Redundant a few times. BUT I MEAN ITS GOOD WRITING, BOTH OF THEM

So yeah I'm 0-6 and don't have too much credibility, but I Hope ya'll in this terny understand what I'm trying to convey here.
Like I said. Dip feets in water. *Back to keying jarbled mania, I guess*. lol.

&thanks to voters-- in my first round vs. Witty-- for the constructive tips and breakdowns. I realize technicality is usually my downfall in anything I do... Few days ago I was taking my verse apart and trying like 5 different ways to display it. Frustrating tbh. Ended up just going with my original format. Basically I'll take L as long as people understand that limitless kinda rhymes with fingertips.
Ironically, in most things I write I put technicality above all else. Which I guess we could say is a big problem, since I often fail@'showing' others. It's been years of a struggle lemme tellya.

I coulda just said I didn't vote so I could "save votes" for ppl who need them.
P.S. Adonis^ I haven't crunched the numbers but I have a feeling that mathematically voters who are "late to the party" might be left in the cold and could be killed by the voting rule, particuarly if there are a bunch of sweeps. So plz take that into account before you actually punish anyone by the letter of the law.. I understand it's a fine line though-- not voting(lazy) VS. not voting early(and being screwed).

GL all in next rds
Pharaohs Army

You definitely should vote and share your thoughts. If people get annoyed by them, it's their problem.

I voted on the first three battles that were open. I didn't have a chance to read yours. I did this morning. My suggestions are:

1. Try to strive to rhyme more. I understand that you are of the mind that "rhyming" is best suited for violence and battling. But that's a minority view. You are essentially ignoring the library of rap music that doesn't deal with those topics.

2. Try to work on phrasing. For example, you wrote:

"but i think i'll be Sedentary- until i reach the cemetery."

The idea is great for the topic. Could it be improved by revising it to "sedentary until the cemetery?" I think so.

Anyway, I hope this helps.

Keep writing.

Cimm.

2tripple0
01-14-2016, 09:59 AM
I'm sorry I haven't been online recently I'm looking for the best way to stay online but it's difficult I wish I could participate more and understand people not enjoying my work because it has suffered as a result....

TYSON
01-14-2016, 10:13 AM
Just deduct my votes for next round. 14hr shift today and no shows give me no motivation to vote on others. My bad..

Ghost1
01-14-2016, 11:24 AM
I'm sorry I haven't been online recently I'm looking for the best way to stay online but it's difficult I wish I could participate more and understand people not enjoying my work because it has suffered as a result....

Your work suffers cuz ur handicapped tho....not cuz u not online enuff. Dont be so hard on urself bruh.

Witty
01-14-2016, 12:06 PM
Voted on 3.

Diode
01-14-2016, 12:25 PM
i'm all voted up cuh

2tripple0
01-14-2016, 12:27 PM
I feel you but inprovement takes time to choose how I am doing it dont cre if its right or wrong so getting here is hard enough these days shrugg

2tripple0
01-14-2016, 12:28 PM
I should vote but I'm just getting online for first time in ages fuck I need to bro up

Pharaohs Army
01-14-2016, 03:56 PM
Pharaohs Army

You definitely should vote and share your thoughts. If people get annoyed by them, it's their problem.

I voted on the first three battles that were open. I didn't have a chance to read yours. I did this morning. My suggestions are:

1. Try to strive to rhyme more. I understand that you are of the mind that "rhyming" is best suited for violence and battling. But that's a minority view. You are essentially ignoring the library of rap music that doesn't deal with those topics.

2. Try to work on phrasing. For example, you wrote:

"but i think i'll be Sedentary- until i reach the cemetery."

The idea is great for the topic. Could it be improved by revising it to "sedentary until the cemetery?" I think so.

Anyway, I hope this helps.

Keep writing.

Cimm.

Appreciate the comment, and also the phraseology suggestions.

I'll try to clarify-- I didn't Not Vote on the battle because I was worried about other people being annoyed by my thoughts... I didn't vote because I felt so out of my element to the point where I could not even judge, much less be fair or explanatory.
Basically, I can see that it's "good writing", but to my brain it's just too much.
I'd like to think I can Be abstract, Write abstract, Appreciate abstract, write metaphorically, write story-telling, etc etc

But when I read both verses I just think "what?..why?"
I am not knocking rhymes.. rhymez are our thing here..
I am just saying that, in my opinion, over-phrasing something, or wording a sentence in a convoluted matter for the sake of rhyme, turns me off in topical environment, whereas in cyphers/battlez/humor/violence/brags... I consider it par for the course, and like to do it myself.

Maybe I just can't admit to myself that I'm out of my element or In over my head; lol.
--

"but i think i'll be Sedentary- until i reach the cemetery."

Could it be improved by revising it to "sedentary until the cemetery?" I think so.

(already being hypocritical) I usually think in terms of multi-syllables... so I guess I flowered that phrase up, for rhyme. lol

I'm not "stressing" these aspects, but if you'll notice "be" and "reach"... hell, I could go back even further and point out "think" and "til".

Perhaps I just see/hear things differently.
For example, in Buddha's verse:

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=122388

pinot grij said:
GC - I felt like rhyming nuclear/nucleus is taking the easy road too much.

Razah said:
Although, I disagree with Pinot about the nuclear/nucleus rhyme. While reading, crucifix/nucleus & nuclear/ruined her are what rhymed to me.

Argh said:
The "sewer, dirt" and "nuclear/nucleus" rhymes were my only pain points.

I disagree with all...
from GC's verse I see:

code of Lucifer
sown to the crucifix.
(ex)plosions became nuclear
showed us their nucleus.

Now, I'm not disagreeing that we've all seen "cleaner" excerpts from GC.
But frankly I'm a little perplexed at how dope writers such as yourselves can not see these obvious multi's.
When rhyming phrases rather than words, things become much more palatable, easier to bend, and sometimes even 'cool-sounding'...
--

My own verse in this terny was nowhere near what I wanted.
Learned that unless a topic "inspires" me it is not "easy"... Something to work on / practice.

Thanks for bearing with me, with my lengthy explanations and curiosities.

Frank
01-14-2016, 04:17 PM
^Pharaoh Army, one of the illest feedbackers in Netcees history

Mr. J
01-14-2016, 04:28 PM
Frank remember when I sat you out with that Cypher verse...good times...


what did you write about...oh your love story <3

Ghost1
01-14-2016, 06:55 PM
U r a poor sport. Where is ur integrity?

I'm disgusted.

Adonis
01-14-2016, 08:20 PM
Rd two going up tonight. But I need a couple hours kiddos.

Anyone feeling particular? Quotes, picture or traditional words as topic?

Also if anyone has any they'd like to add to the mix that would be super dope and save me time

Pent uP
01-14-2016, 09:29 PM
Rd two going up tonight. But I need a couple hours kiddos.

Anyone feeling particular? Quotes, picture or traditional words as topic?

Also if anyone has any they'd like to add to the mix that would be super dope and save me time

This is not a threat.

This is me sincerely stating if there are "story plots" or anything of the sort, then i will no show

Adonis
01-14-2016, 09:34 PM
This is not a threat.

This is me sincerely stating if there are "story plots" or anything of the sort, then i will no show

Well considering that wasn't even listed thanks for the heads up.

I don't like them either but apparently we differ on a few things. Though I don't like them I do enjoy a challenge. But I would never choose to pick this out side of mid season for a change of pace. Also hate quotes and wouldn't do that unless mid season as well

Pent uP
01-14-2016, 09:48 PM
I can do quotes. Being forced story parameters is boring

Adonis
01-14-2016, 10:10 PM
Agreed, but I like the fun in being forced out of my element considering I seldom write stories