Plot Vs Pinot Grij - PINOT WINS

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Plot Pinot Grij

[Pinot Grij]

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[Plot]

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[Pinot Grij]

You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar
I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire
Oh, you mad? Too bad I don’t give a fuck how you feeling, fam
If you ain’t cool, I’ll spin these blades over your head like a ceiling fan
With triggers, he scared to squeeze like this bitch was huggin a distant cousin
This asshole's quiet on the can, like he’s nervous about taking a shit in public
You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you
When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too
Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers
My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over

[Plot]

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[Plot]

You better find a religion man, up against Plot you'll get totally ruined,
Put the biscuit in ya mouth and bang, be one with god, like the holy communion.
So quit the text fights, think I'll be nice? like we're friends?
Heres a story for ya: Topical faggot tried to battle and got handled, the end.
Destroy you for kicks, don't belong in this league your just annoying with that shit,
Coz if Pinot key okay battle bars, he'll be exposed for the lying toy that he is.
And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic,
If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic.
Your styles that doo doo its drastic, but still this geek wants to spar?
Bury the knife deep in ya guts & bleah doubt like the sheep that you are.

[Bash]

Michael Bay
Shit in public

Vs

Voo doo magic

V-PG. Better concepts and the ties ins were really nice. Execution was better as well. I really was diggin the voo doo line from Plot. He needs more lines like that.

[Schadenfreude]

Opener, Quiet can, box office
Although your concepts were original, they weren't quite harsh enough.

Opener, Story
Same problem yo opponent has, great concept mediocre wording & execution.

Decent battle, both had some pretty good ideas, but both dropped the dagger at the moment to kill. PINOT GRIJ edges, because he just needs to be harsher, while Plot has more awkward wording issues.

[Denton]

You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar
I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire

You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you
When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too
Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers
My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over

bay line is great

vs

You better find a religion man, up against Plot you'll get totally ruined,
Put the biscuit in ya mouth and bang, be one with god, like the holy communion.

And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic,
.If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic.

except the last is a bit wordy but concept is good

PG was just more consistent, his bay line was nice.

vote-pg

[Destroyer]

I got Pinot here
opener and closer were dope
plot opener was good, Pinot key okay could have been something...

v/pinot

[murda sho]

Plot

Destroy you for kicks, don't belong in this league your just annoying with that shit,
Coz if Pinot key okay battle bars, he'll be exposed for the lying toy that he is.
And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic,
If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic.


Pinot

You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar
I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire

With triggers, he scared to squeeze like this bitch was huggin a distant cousin
This asshole's quiet on the can, like he’s nervous about taking a shit in public
You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you
When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too
Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers
My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over

v/ Pinot... Pinot came pretty decent here he did enough to win, Plot isn't wack but just got outbarred here I can see him elevate more with more battles.. good shit Pinot ima see you soon and take your fuckin head off

[Saint]

Pinot got the edge.

A few more solid lines, but plot I thought had lotb w/ that voodoo shit...
Opener mice flip, seen concept tho..
not bad, somewhat close match...
altho some bland lines too

but pinot had more, opener, smash box, closer all ok..
Vote pinot

[Cred]

Michael bay, quiet on the can, strikes 12

Vs

Voodoo

Decent battle here. I fucked wit pinots versse here. I never read ur shit before but i fucks wit it. Clear winner imo here.

Vote - pinot

[El Muffin]

Micheal bay was cool
Next 4 are played. The latter one was flipped OK tho
Force was OK
Closer I liked .


Plot

Open is cool
Pinnochio reach
Topical OK
Voodoo nice
Closer ass

Close battle . I think pino misses were less Agregious Celt that played ceiling fan shit

V/pinoj

[ill nik-A]

Pinot was pretty solid minus ender

Plot voodo was good but need to see more consistency

V PG

[slech]

You better find a religion man, up against Plot you'll get totally ruined,
Put the biscuit in ya mouth and bang, be one with god, like the holy communion.
-cool flip--
So quit the text fights, think I'll be nice? like we're friends?
Heres a story for ya: Topical faggot tried to battle and got handled, the end.
-didnt like this--
Destroy you for kicks, don't belong in this league your just annoying with that shit,
Coz if Pinot key okay battle bars, he'll be exposed for the lying toy that he is.
-meh---
And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic,
If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic.
-ok cool-
Your styles that doo doo its drastic, but still this geek wants to spar?
Bury the knife deep in ya guts & bleah doubt like the sheep that you are.
-nope

vs

You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar
I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire
-cool--
Oh, you mad? Too bad I don’t give a fuck how you feeling, fam
If you ain’t cool, I’ll spin these blades over your head like a ceiling fan
-decent flip--
With triggers, he scared to squeeze like this bitch was huggin a distant cousin
This asshole's quiet on the can, like he’s nervous about taking a shit in public
-lol-
You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you
When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too
-alright-
Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers
My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over
-not bad-

One was a more complex and creative bars. The other wasn't bad but a couple of the concepts are kinda played. mvgt pin