ill nik-A 1-0 Vs Lotto Smirk 1-0 - NIKA WINS

[Allen Knight]

NBL Season 8
Week 2

Due FRIDAYFriday

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ill nik-A

Lotto Smirk docked -2 votes for not voting last week.

[ill nik-A]

Welcome!
10

[ill nik-A]

10 sent Allen Knight Lotto Smirk

[Lotto Smirk]

u a king that's past his prime, take ya place & destroy ya fortress
this'll be a heir removal but one that won't sort out your sad receding baldness
u fat & ugly while trust me my body's sportsman slick
for you to get one it'll take more trainers than your weird fetish for Jordan kicks
ya girl so ugly, it must be why u don't fuck her lately
bitch got bulldog features that could star her alongside phill on the pet show w/ dr Katy
got thugs that'll shoot for me so TRUST u don't want that heat bro
cus if nika start I'll lift my arm n the iron'll raise quicker than if I we're magneto
thugs laugh at Nika n after last week to us ya just a big joke
cus u handled bash n ironically u do when dealers mug u off w/ the shit coke

Meh I tried g/l bro

[ill nik-A]

Guess u didn’t learn from PM’ing me ya rhymes for some tips
I’m a Bad teacher… but Cameron Diaz musta taught u how to word ur lines like a bitch
I love to fight like I write so why would u wanna test, soldier
been in many scraps… but fuck good punches I’ll beat this wack loser with leftovers
I got 5 hoes in my bed using they mouth to see me freed
The life of a player… u askin Paul Reubens for a hand to compete in the Peewee league
u’re just a delay in the game so why would I bother clown
u got ur head in the clouds & too dumb to notice ya concepts are water down
u think u have a chance at the impossible in text all is right
I’ll wipe the lotto smirk…. & have u share the second prize with the rest of the site

[Pinot Grij]

Lotto - decent concepts, but I think you got tripped up by wordiness.

ya girl so ugly, it must be why u don't fuck her lately
bitch got bulldog features that could star her alongside phill on the pet show w/ dr Katy
got thugs that'll shoot for me so TRUST u don't want that heat bro
cus if nika start I'll lift my arm n the iron'll raise quicker than if I we're magneto
you could probably carve decent punches out of these, but as they are, they don't hit that hard cuz the wording waters down the heft of the punch.

nik-A - thought the opener coulda been more direct. Scraps/leftovers is cool. Setup on the Pee Wee Herman line was weird - "they mouth to see me freed". Clouds/water down was cool too.

Vote -- nik-A with better execution, more polish.

[Unfukwitable]

Nothing

vs.

Guess u didn’t learn from PM’ing me ya rhymes for some tips
I’m a Bad teacher… but Cameron Diaz musta taught u how to word ur lines like a bitch
I got 5 hoes in my bed using they mouth to see me freed
The life of a player… u askin Paul Reubens for a hand to compete in the Peewee league

this was kinda light ones wording just threw his verse for a loop and his opener was bad use of wp, Nik came with some quick fix material but was enough to get the W to me. v/nik-A

[Bash]

Magneto

Vs

Opener
Leftovers

V--Ill Nik. Concepts were executed better. Lotto rushed his drop n it showed

[Cred]

Magneto was cool

vs

First two punches

Not the best battle, nika did enough jus to slughtly edge this one. Tbh nothing really caught my eye, but i guess niks opener was lotb

Vote ill nika

[Saint]

Have nika on this one, lotto's wording let what lines he could've made decent fall flat.. magneto was aiight.. but that reminded me of some Charlie clips shit lol..

nika opener and peewee were good enough to take it..

vote nika

[Schadenfreude]

Jordan fetish, magneto
A lot of misses, I almost didn't even quote magneto, cuz I've used the concept before.

Opener, Paul Reubens, closer
Lazy verse, but still more effective than your opponent's.

Overall ILL NIK-A outclassed the kid.

[murda sho]

Nik

Guess u didn’t learn from PM’ing me ya rhymes for some tips
I’m a Bad teacher… but Cameron Diaz musta taught u how to word ur lines like a bitch
I love to fight like I write so why would u wanna test, soldier
been in many scraps… but fuck good punches I’ll beat this wack loser with leftovers

u think u have a chance at the impossible in text all is right
I’ll wipe the lotto smirk…. & have u share the second prize with the rest of the site


Lotto Smirk

ya girl so ugly, it must be why u don't fuck her lately
bitch got bulldog features that could star her alongside phill on the pet show w/ dr Katy

thugs laugh at Nika n after last week to us ya just a big joke
cus u handled bash n ironically u do when dealers mug u off w/ the shit coke


v/ Nik.. man Lotto you completely butchered that Magneto line to the point it was hilarious to read... chill with all those extra words dude you're fuckin up the sting of your punches... Nik started off on fire then kinda cooled down but he had enough for get the win here and his verse was overall better to me also

[slech]

u a king that's past his prime, take ya place & destroy ya fortress
this'll be a heir removal but one that won't sort out your sad receding baldness
-cool-
u fat & ugly while trust me my body's sportsman slick
for you to get one it'll take more trainers than your weird fetish for Jordan kicks
-eh ok-
ya girl so ugly, it must be why u don't fuck her lately
bitch got bulldog features that could star her alongside phill on the pet show w/ dr Katy
-haha allright, cool-
got thugs that'll shoot for me so TRUST u don't want that heat bro
cus if nika start I'll lift my arm n the iron'll raise quicker than if I we're magneto
-nah-
thugs laugh at Nika n after last week to us ya just a big joke
cus u handled bash n ironically u do when dealers mug u off w/ the shit coke
-eh--


Guess u didn’t learn from PM’ing me ya rhymes for some tips
I’m a Bad teacher… but Cameron Diaz musta taught u how to word ur lines like a bitch
---lol ok-
I love to fight like I write so why would u wanna test, soldier
been in many scraps… but fuck good punches I’ll beat this wack loser with leftovers
---nah dont like how was this worded-
I got 5 hoes in my bed using they mouth to see me freed
The life of a player… u askin Paul Reubens for a hand to compete in the Peewee league
-decent-
u’re just a delay in the game so why would I bother clown
u got ur head in the clouds & too dumb to notice ya concepts are water down
-dont like this-
u think u have a chance at the impossible in text all is right
I’ll wipe the lotto smirk…. & have u share the second prize with the rest of the site
-lmfao cool-

3-2 on quotes. ill nika taking this with over all more hits than misses.