Bash 0-1 Vs Plot 0-1 -BASH WINS BY NS

[Allen Knight]

NBL Season 8
Week 2

Due FRIDAYFriday

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You must check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

Bash
Plot docked -2 votes for not voting last week

[Bash]

10-12

[Plot]

lolz, go 10 man

[Bash]

10 sent to AK Plot

[Plot]

ext

[Bash]

I give chicks the harsh dick, u hittin anything is rare, b
Im an animal in bed..ur sex life vividly describes DiCaprio's bear scene
Them verses r horrid..its a workout tryna read them bars, slime
Voters skip over ya lines so much... u'd think they were half assing some suicides
I've beaten some dope heads..while u reside as a bottomless boarder
Greatness requires sacrifice... n w/ ur resume u could spin off a series of hoarders
My crib is full of bitches..drugs..im livin the life, no doubt
Ur not built for this action... ur bachelor pad could rival a barbie dream house
Ya chick mouth game is crazy, n she aint slobbin for wealth
That broads known to suck off a dozen dicks for a price wayyyyy cheaper than Zelph

[Allen Knight]

I give chicks the harsh dick, u hittin anything is rare, b
Im an animal in bed..ur sex life vividly describes DiCaprio's bear scene
^^^good concept but not really hard hittin wording tbh
Them verses r horrid..its a workout tryna read them bars, slime
Voters skip over ya lines so much... u'd think they were half assing some suicides
^^^nah wack
I've beaten some dope heads..while u reside as a bottomless boarder
Greatness requires sacrifice... n w/ ur resume u could spin off a series of hoarders
^^^dcent
My crib is full of bitches..drugs..im livin the life, no doubt
Ur not built for this action... ur bachelor pad could rival a barbie dream house
^^^nice like this
Ya chick mouth game is crazy, n she aint slobbin for wealth
That broads known to suck off a dozen dicks for a price wayyyyy cheaper than Zelph
^^^ok

solid verse overall. some highs & lows def enough to beat plot.

[slech]

I give chicks the harsh dick, u hittin anything is rare, b
Im an animal in bed..ur sex life vividly describes DiCaprio's bear scene
-havent seen it but i heard it. cool conept-
Them verses r horrid..its a workout tryna read them bars, slime
Voters skip over ya lines so much... u'd think they were half assing some suicides
-LOL i never seen this, i like--
I've beaten some dope heads..while u reside as a bottomless boarder
Greatness requires sacrifice... n w/ ur resume u could spin off a series of hoarders
---mmm dont like this-
My crib is full of bitches..drugs..im livin the life, no doubt
Ur not built for this action... ur bachelor pad could rival a barbie dream house
-eh, nah-
Ya chick mouth game is crazy, n she aint slobbin for wealth
That broads known to suck off a dozen dicks for a price wayyyyy cheaper than Zelph
-nah didnt like this-

[Unfukwitable]

I give chicks the harsh dick, u hittin anything is rare, b
Im an animal in bed..ur sex life vividly describes DiCaprio's bear scene
concept was dope couldve been stronger tho
Them verses r horrid..its a workout tryna read them bars, slime
Voters skip over ya lines so much... u'd think they were half assing some suicides
not really feeling this
I've beaten some dope heads..while u reside as a bottomless boarder
Greatness requires sacrifice... n w/ ur resume u could spin off a series of hoarders
this was solid, 100.
My crib is full of bitches..drugs..im livin the life, no doubt
Ur not built for this action... ur bachelor pad could rival a barbie dream house
lol this was cool
Ya chick mouth game is crazy, n she aint slobbin for wealth
That broads known to suck off a dozen dicks for a price wayyyyy cheaper than Zelph
wasnt a hit for me


wished ya opp woulda showed!, good drop tho.

[Utmost]

I give chicks the harsh dick, u hittin anything is rare, b
Im an animal in bed..ur sex life vividly describes DiCaprio's bear scene
not really hard hitting as in loosely directed at your opponent. not a bad concept tho
Them verses r horrid..its a workout tryna read them bars, slime
Voters skip over ya lines so much... u'd think they were half assing some suicides
not feeling it
I've beaten some dope heads..while u reside as a bottomless boarder
Greatness requires sacrifice... n w/ ur resume u could spin off a series of hoarders
lol, liked this. slick
My crib is full of bitches..drugs..im livin the life, no doubt
Ur not built for this action... ur bachelor pad could rival a barbie dream house
nah, i felt like the concept coulda been nice if you went a dif direction
Ya chick mouth game is crazy, n she aint slobbin for wealth
That broads known to suck off a dozen dicks for a price wayyyyy cheaper than Zelph
dont get the reference, probably something the disc. section right?

overall not a bad verse, gotta be a bit more directed/harsher at your opponent tho