Championship Match: ill nik-A vs Infiltration - (ill nik-A wins)

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ill nik-A Infiltration

[ill nik-A]

Welcome!
14-16

[Saint]

In...I can do 20 - since you had a no show last week;
Otherwise, 18..

[ill nik-A]

16 sent to Orc Infiltration

[Saint]

Oh stop that shit, he brings a fresh perspective and speaks a lot more volumes than a lot of these niggaz. I respect it

Frac was on top for a long time, he knows his shit, I respect that school period

To respect text's past is fine..

But u traded livin legends to chase ghosts when Frac arrived
I'll cast u in a brand new light.. & leave a body so u join his ^dad in the Afterlife
Ya overrated ho.. that Fall Brawl verse had 2 okayish quotes
misdirect style's down pat..
...HOW u slipped the belt away from Junto had pickpockets takin notes
Buncha played mexican jokes & you got respect for the gold?
It was such an 'over the top rig in the finals' bull should've armwrestled stallone
Fuck swayin votes; u been a large salty body since ur inception..
Irony is: carried to U.S shores on a spare tire & now carrying 1 in ur midsection
Cuz eatin meatball footlongs 3x a day for years is just extreme..
U dont count calories... NO program can crunch the numbers for that subroutine
U say old vets r always > young. that outdated thinkin is worn
Niks mobility chair went haywire - just simple logic gets em from A to B anymore
Moms a Cuban maid. I hit it at all angles w dick down her maw..
Only English her tongue DID know were techniques to put new spins on my balls
Song for ya funeral is near.. cuttin' ya throat be beautiful to hear
Knife'll do 'harmonics on a major scale' til blood gurgling is like music to my ears

[ill nik-A]

I’m old, right?
No action behind all the talk that make u young dudes look meaner
u call it swag, I call it cool… so I’ll lose mine & kill u to prove who’s realer
this is Russian roulette with a loaded gun; friends actin like strangers
got mom to take a bullet for u… but ya dad, brother, sister, grandma & dog are still in the chamber
Fuck ya skill set! I got better wording, flows, punches & more
I’ll add shooting guns to my resume… u can add outta body experience to urs
no heater remorse, take everything from these wack rhymas
rumors have u bein’ next to Rob… I call this pistol whipping the Blac Chyna
loooove serving ya girl yay while that skeezer hurts ya pride
got a lot of miles BUT she rides good… that bitch is dealer certified
see, all these RB niggaz suck; from votin to rhymin things
Their Infiltration is Tragic… & the league’s devastated Allen didn’t stop u from signing in
I’m patient; but yall throw punches with no fuckin heart
concepts scared of the dark… that’s when mine pop out from under the bed with somethin’ sharp
u an Asian joke; that angle’ll have everyone jump like it’s great
coulda killed u with Resin leftovers… instead I poisoned em & used it to feed the dog that u ate

[Schadenfreude]

Cuz eatin meatball footlongs 3x a day for years is just extreme..
U dont count calories... NO program can crunch the numbers for that subroutine
U say old vets r always > young. that outdated thinkin is worn
Niks mobility chair went haywire - just simple logic gets em from A to B anymore
Moms a Cuban maid. I hit it at all angles w dick down her maw..
Only English her tongue DID know were techniques to put new spins on my balls


Those were were heat, but the rest were either concepts I've seen used against Nik or just soft hits..IMO.


this is Russian roulette with a loaded gun; friends actin like strangers
got mom to take a bullet for u… but ya dad, brother, sister, grandma & dog are still in the chamber
Fuck ya skill set! I got better wording, flows, punches & more
I’ll add shooting guns to my resume… u can add outta body experience to urs
no heater remorse, take everything from these wack rhymas
rumors have u bein’ next to Rob… I call this pistol whipping the Blac Chyna
loooove serving ya girl yay while that skeezer hurts ya pride
got a lot of miles BUT she rides good… that bitch is dealer certified
see, all these RB niggaz suck; from votin to rhymin things
Their Infiltration is Tragic… & the league’s devastated Allen didn’t stop u from signing in
u an Asian joke; that angle’ll have everyone jump like it’s great
coulda killed u with Resin leftovers… instead I poisoned em & used it to feed the dog that u ate


Read like a key, but a dope key, cuz those bar were nasty. Also, u got very longwinded at times.

Overall the Ole Man iLL NIK-A did work, Inf I always enjoy your writing, it's just the angles/concepts u used this verse, have been done to death against the Cuban. Propers to both.

[Fracture]

I vote on these live. I'm just going to start by saying holy fuck at Infs verse

From the Stallone line to the music to my ears.... Straight power punches. Clever set ups, new concepts. Nice

Nika- brutal angle. Still in the chamber, blac
Chyna and closer are haymakers


I don't know. I think Nika can write his ass off, but something about that inf verse had rawness in the wording and exciting concepts


V/inf.... Sorry Nika. Not against you

[Hush]

To respect text's past is fine..

But u traded livin legends to chase ghosts when Frac arrived
I'll cast u in a brand new light.. & leave a body so u join his ^dad in the Afterlife
Ok someone's dad is dead by why is this clever? Shock value don't sell for me
Ya overrated ho.. that Fall Brawl verse had 2 okayish quotes
misdirect style's down pat..
...HOW u slipped the belt away from Junto had pickpockets takin notes
Ok so pickpockets don't steal belts. I get the angle. But the connection was stretch and punch was a reach. With that said its still aight
Buncha played mexican jokes & you got respect for the gold?
It was such an 'over the top rig in the finals' bull should've armwrestled Stallone
No
Fuck swayin votes; u been a large salty body since ur inception..
Irony is: carried to U.S shores on a spare tire & now carrying 1 in ur midsection
Nice
Cuz eatin meatball footlongs 3x a day for years is just extreme..
U dont count calories... NO program can crunch the numbers for that subroutine
Not feeling this
U say old vets r always > young. that outdated thinkin is worn
Niks mobility chair went haywire - just simple logic gets em from A to B anymore
U fucked the wording up on this punch. I think u left a word out. Angle is cool tho
Moms a Cuban maid. I hit it at all angles w dick down her maw..
Only English her tongue DID know were techniques to put new spins on my balls
This is fire
Song for ya funeral is near.. cuttin' ya throat be beautiful to hear
Knife'll do 'harmonics on a major scale' til blood gurgling is like music to my ears
Cool wp nice setup just a tightly spun line



I’m old, right?
No action behind all the talk that make u young dudes look meaner
u call it swag, I call it cool… so I’ll lose mine & kill u to prove who’s realer
Too simple and bland to me. Real straight forward not creative imo
this is Russian roulette with a loaded gun; friends actin like strangers
got mom to take a bullet for u… but ya dad, brother, sister, grandma & dog are still in the chamber
Umm ok I guess. Nothing wrong with it but not "dope" to me
Fuck ya skill set! I got better wording, flows, punches & more
I’ll add shooting guns to my resume… u can add outta body experience to urs
Nah
no heater remorse, take everything from these wack rhymas
rumors have u bein’ next to Rob… I call this pistol whipping the Blac China
This is tight
loooove serving ya girl yay while that skeezer hurts ya pride
got a lot of miles BUT she rides good… that bitch is dealer certified
Fire
see, all these RB niggaz suck; from votin to rhymin things
Their Infiltration is Tragic… & the league’s devastated Allen didn’t stop u from signing in
Dope
I’m patient; but yall throw punches with no fuckin heart
concepts scared of the dark… that’s when mine pop out from under the bed with somethin’ sharp
Wack
u an Asian joke; that angle’ll have everyone jump like it’s great
coulda killed u with Resin leftovers… instead I poisoned em & used it to feed the dog that u ate
Nah played azn joke flipped badly




This is a close fucking battle


Nik had some stuff that stunk but he had 6 in a row that were almost flawless
Inf closed it out with 4 hard ones but had a lot of downs in his first half


Had to read this like 3 times

Best lines win because I just took all the stuff I didn't like out the equation

Nik barely

[Cred]

Pickpockets was cool, i liked the stallone joint, english balls was heatt, cool closer bro

Solid verse fam

vs

I liked that opener, outta body was cool, blac china was nicee, dealer vertified was heat

I got this one down to the wire bros. nice battle here, both yall did ur thing. Re-read both verses n this ones jus gnna come down to preference. Im goin nika here. Good shit yall

Vote ill nika

[slech]

But u traded livin legends to chase ghosts when Frac arrived
I'll cast u in a brand new light.. & leave a body so u join his ^dad in the Afterlife
---eh eh -- $2.5
Ya overrated ho.. that Fall Brawl verse had 2 okayish quotes
misdirect style's down pat..
...HOW u slipped the belt away from Junto had pickpockets takin notes
-meh once again -- $2.5
Buncha played mexican jokes & you got respect for the gold?
It was such an 'over the top rig in the finals' bull should've armwrestled stallone
-okay not bad here -- $3.5
Fuck swayin votes; u been a large salty body since ur inception..
Irony is: carried to U.S shores on a spare tire & now carrying 1 in ur midsection
lol all right yeah $4.5
Cuz eatin meatball footlongs 3x a day for years is just extreme..
U dont count calories... NO program can crunch the numbers for that subroutine
-ight -- $3
U say old vets r always > young. that outdated thinkin is worn
Niks mobility chair went haywire - just simple logic gets em from A to B anymore
--meh $2.5
Moms a Cuban maid. I hit it at all angles w dick down her maw..
Only English her tongue DID know were techniques to put new spins on my balls
yes --- $5
Song for ya funeral is near.. cuttin' ya throat be beautiful to hear
Knife'll do 'harmonics on a major scale' til blood gurgling is like music to my ears
$cool here $4
$27.5


I’m old, right?
No action behind all the talk that make u young dudes look meaner
u call it swag, I call it cool… so I’ll lose mine & kill u to prove who’s realer
- I likethis. swaggy -- $4.5
this is Russian roulette with a loaded gun; friends actin like strangers
got mom to take a bullet for u… but ya dad, brother, sister, grandma & dog are still in the chamber
---wordingggggggggggggggg but nice --- $4.5
Fuck ya skill set! I got better wording, flows, punches & more
I’ll add shooting guns to my resume… u can add outta body experience to urs
---cool here -- $3.5
no heater remorse, take everything from these wack rhymas
rumors have u bein’ next to Rob… I call this pistol whipping the Blac Chyna
-LOL i fuck with this -- $5
loooove serving ya girl yay while that skeezer hurts ya pride
got a lot of miles BUT she rides good… that bitch is dealer certified
-alright -- 3.5
see, all these RB niggaz suck; from votin to rhymin things
Their Infiltration is Tragic… & the league’s devastated Allen didn’t stop u from signing in
--meh $2.5
I’m patient; but yall throw punches with no fuckin heart
concepts scared of the dark… that’s when mine pop out from under the bed with somethin’ sharp
---nah $1.5
u an Asian joke; that angle’ll have everyone jump like it’s great
coulda killed u with Resin leftovers… instead I poisoned em & used it to feed the dog that u ate
$cool $3
__________________
total $28


maaaaaaaaaan close as battle here. inf came with it. tire line and maid line was nice but then ill came savage with the blac , chamberline, lose cool. barely edging this for the win. i think if inf would have gotten a better opener, he would have taken this. NO DOUBT

[Pinot Grij]

Inf
Dead dad jokes are a little harsh for my tastes.
I like the "okayish quotes" as a setup rhyme, but the "robbery" angle for a punch is well-worn
Over the Top punch is pretty dated, but I like the rhyme scheme throughout
Spare tire line is fire.
Footlongs - setup was hilarious. Punch was good.
A to B is weirdly worded, sounds like you're sayin' the opposite of what you're tryna say.
English is a good concept, but a weird image - do chicks really be spinnin' balls around in their mouths??
Closer is good.

ill nik-A
Opener fire.
Roulette bar is ruthless in its execution, wordplay is just aight.
Resume line - again, ruthless aggressiveness is the trademark here. This hits hard.
Ionno who blac chyna is.
I like dealer certified, but "hurts your pride" is a soft setup.
I don't get the RB line.
Concepts line is decent.
Asian line is played.

nik-A had all the aggressiveness in the world for this matchup and that's why I'm siding with him. It's like he hit the next level in a champ match, which is why it's good to have experience in your corner. Inf was alright, but not on a championship level in this one.

Vote -- ill nik-A

[Tic]

To respect text's past is fine..

But u traded livin legends to chase ghosts when Frac arrived
I'll cast u in a brand new light.. & leave a body so u join his ^dad in the Afterlife
Cool.
Ya overrated ho.. that Fall Brawl verse had 2 okayish quotes
misdirect style's down pat..
...HOW u slipped the belt away from Junto had pickpockets takin notes
Pretty nice.
Buncha played mexican jokes & you got respect for the gold?
It was such an 'over the top rig in the finals' bull should've armwrestled stallone
I like the wording, but the concept is played.
Fuck swayin votes; u been a large salty body since ur inception..
Irony is: carried to U.S shores on a spare tire & now carrying 1 in ur midsection
Lol.
Cuz eatin meatball footlongs 3x a day for years is just extreme..
U dont count calories... NO program can crunch the numbers for that subroutine
Nice.
U say old vets r always > young. that outdated thinkin is worn
Niks mobility chair went haywire - just simple logic gets em from A to B anymore
Ehh.
Moms a Cuban maid. I hit it at all angles w dick down her maw..
Only English her tongue DID know were techniques to put new spins on my balls
Not a fan.
Song for ya funeral is near.. cuttin' ya throat be beautiful to hear
Knife'll do 'harmonics on a major scale' til blood gurgling is like music to my ears
Ok.

I’m old, right?
No action behind all the talk that make u young dudes look meaner
u call it swag, I call it cool… so I’ll lose mine & kill u to prove who’s realer
Not bad.
this is Russian roulette with a loaded gun; friends actin like strangers
got mom to take a bullet for u… but ya dad, brother, sister, grandma & dog are still in the chamber
This is ok.
Fuck ya skill set! I got better wording, flows, punches & more
I’ll add shooting guns to my resume… u can add outta body experience to urs
Nice.
no heater remorse, take everything from these wack rhymas
rumors have u bein’ next to Rob… I call this pistol whipping the Blac Chyna
Nice.
loooove serving ya girl yay while that skeezer hurts ya pride
got a lot of miles BUT she rides good… that bitch is dealer certified
Lol.
see, all these RB niggaz suck; from votin to rhymin things
Their Infiltration is Tragic… & the league’s devastated Allen didn’t stop u from signing in
Ehh.
I’m patient; but yall throw punches with no fuckin heart
concepts scared of the dark… that’s when mine pop out from under the bed with somethin’ sharp
Not bad.
u an Asian joke; that angle’ll have everyone jump like it’s great
coulda killed u with Resin leftovers… instead I poisoned em & used it to feed the dog that u ate
Not a huge fan of this one.
Damn this was a nice battle. Close as hell too. Both dudes had some nice lines and some ehh lines. This is a tough vote cuz it could go either way. Honestly, I think I have to edge it to Nik overall. I just feel he was a bit more creative. Dope battle fellas.

[joog]

But u traded livin legends to chase ghosts when Frac arrived
I'll cast u in a brand new light.. & leave a body so u join his ^dad in the Afterlife
OK

Ya overrated ho.. that Fall Brawl verse had 2 okayish quotes
misdirect style's down pat..
...HOW u slipped the belt away from Junto had pickpockets takin notes
NICE

Buncha played mexican jokes & you got respect for the gold?
It was such an 'over the top rig in the finals' bull should've armwrestled stallone
OK

Fuck swayin votes; u been a large salty body since ur inception..
Irony is: carried to U.S shores on a spare tire & now carrying 1 in ur midsection
NICE

Cuz eatin meatball footlongs 3x a day for years is just extreme..
U dont count calories... NO program can crunch the numbers for that subroutine
DOPE

U say old vets r always > young. that outdated thinkin is worn
Niks mobility chair went haywire - just simple logic gets em from A to B anymore
OK

Moms a Cuban maid. I hit it at all angles w dick down her maw..
Only English her tongue DID know were techniques to put new spins on my balls
NOT FEELING

Song for ya funeral is near.. cuttin' ya throat be beautiful to hear
Knife'll do 'harmonics on a major scale' til blood gurgling is like music to my ears
DOPE NAME PLAY


VS

No action behind all the talk that make u young dudes look meaner
u call it swag, I call it cool… so I’ll lose mine & kill u to prove who’s realer
NICE

this is Russian roulette with a loaded gun; friends actin like strangers
got mom to take a bullet for u… but ya dad, brother, sister, grandma & dog are still in the chamber
SHEEWEAK
Fuck ya skill set! I got better wording, flows, punches & more
I’ll add shooting guns to my resume… u can add outta body experience to urs
DOPE

no heater remorse, take everything from these wack rhymas
rumors have u bein’ next to Rob… I call this pistol whipping the Blac Chyna
WEAK

loooove serving ya girl yay while that skeezer hurts ya pride
got a lot of miles BUT she rides good… that bitch is dealer certified
NOT FEELING THIS

see, all these RB niggaz suck; from votin to rhymin things
Their Infiltration is Tragic… & the league’s devastated Allen didn’t stop u from signing in
NICE

I’m patient; but yall throw punches with no fuckin heart
concepts scared of the dark… that’s when mine pop out from under the bed with somethin’ sharp
NICE CONCEPT

u an Asian joke; that angle’ll have everyone jump like it’s great
coulda killed u with Resin leftovers… instead I poisoned em & used it to feed the dog that u ate
NAH


Vote- nik
I enjoyed his material more