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Orc
02-04-2016, 01:28 PM
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Lotto Smirk Pinot Grij

Pinot Grij
02-04-2016, 03:09 PM
Cool with 12?

Lotto Smirk
02-05-2016, 03:38 AM
Yeah I'm cool w/ that g/l

Lotto Smirk
02-09-2016, 03:54 PM
May need ext

Pinot Grij
02-09-2016, 10:15 PM
That's fine. I'll send my verse tonight.

Pinot Grij
02-10-2016, 01:29 PM
Two scoops of raisins, bitch..

You got the worst fuckin mug that I ever seen, kid
If you ever looked in the Mirra, you’d shoot yourself in the face like he did
Them video games got ya believin all that weapon talk you fakin’
After I hit him with the lead, he’ll try to guess his new fuckin spawn location
Lil bitch, I got a cock so big your girl struggles to give me an HJ
She always gotta change hands.. like the league when Orc took over for AK
This virgin LS is like a scratch ticket when it comes to the broads
Cuz you rub dimes the wrong way, then they’re brushin’ you off
With all them rejections - ionno why you think you the man
Cuz the only time we see LS smash is when I hit you with a Lincoln sedan
And fuck your whole squad - I hope all you fags get cancer
Y’all pussies with your fists up look as scary as Beyonce’s backup dancers

TWO SCOOPS!

Lotto Smirk
02-10-2016, 04:07 PM
u write poems n shit quit w/ that fake image that u yield
u a soldier? then why do u suck so much in the battle field
his writing = broke, end his career n no1 would even mourn b
take P out of this text shit..while he'd struggle to in aero's cash tourney
I'm eating u for lunch, no thug u just a nerd kid
only time I'm seeing Pinot popping off is if I order it w/ this dinner service
u far from king, no1 mentioning the shit that pin write
u ain't a battle royale n w/ them verses I doubt that youll even get an invite
Pinot got a chick unlike 10 senses,he's not searching em out
doesn't need plenty of fish cus his bitch already looks & smells enough like a trout
this fake contender fired up? I'll beat that chip off ur shoulder
u full of fury then I'll also strip ya of ya chance being a title holder

I got 10 sign me out mad busy ATM

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Saint
02-11-2016, 01:23 PM
pinot was more polished here and that mirra line was cool, but that scratch ticket was lotb for me, clever.. change hands was straight too..

Lotto, concepts felt rushed. I kindve liked battle field, but felt wording held you back. I just wasnt feeling ur execution of these lines this time..

Vote Pinot

ill nik-A
02-11-2016, 06:26 PM
Pinot was solid that scratch off was dope

Lotto, I expected more man, this isn't ur best

Pinot wins

Orc
02-12-2016, 08:47 AM
Pulse you had the Lotto bar which was nice. The league exchanging hands was smooth but not a hardhitter. Mirra line was an easy use. I decided against it this week but had pretty much the same idea. Actually thought Lotto done okay. The Tyson Fury line was a light jab. Battle royale too. The problem is that Pinot was way more polished. For that reason, he wins.

Thinking about It that spawn location line coulda been a killer. It just fell a little flat.

Tic
02-12-2016, 09:53 AM
Pinot gets it. Lotto ticket was a good flip and a couple other cool ones. Lotto didn't have his usual delivery here.

joog
02-12-2016, 10:17 AM
u got the worst fuckin mug that I ever seen, kid
If you ever looked in the Mirra, you’d shoot yourself in the face like he did
EHH, OK. COULDA DONE MORE

Them video games got ya believin all that weapon talk you fakin’
After I hit him with the lead, he’ll try to guess his new fuckin spawn location
NOT FEELING

Lil bitch, I got a cock so big your girl struggles to give me an HJ
She always gotta change hands.. like the league when Orc took over for AK
I GUESS.. BUT AVERAGE IMO

This virgin LS is like a scratch ticket when it comes to the broads
Cuz you rub dimes the wrong way, then they’re brushin’ you off
THIS WAS NICE

With all them rejections - ionno why you think you the man
Cuz the only time we see LS smash is when I hit you with a Lincoln sedan
PLAYED IDEA ON HIM

And fuck your whole squad - I hope all you fags get cancer
Y’all pussies with your fists up look as scary as Beyonce’s backup dancers
THIS DONT WORK IMO. APPARENTLY BEY'S DANCERS INTIMIDATED A LOOOT OF PPL


VS
U write poems n shit quit w/ that fake image that u yield
u a soldier? then why do u suck so much in the battle field
OK

his writing = broke, end his career n no1 would even mourn b
take P out of this text shit..while he'd struggle to in aero's cash tourney
NOPE

I'm eating u for lunch, no thug u just a nerd kid
only time I'm seeing Pinot popping off is if I order it w/ this dinner service
TOO BASIC. NOT HARSH ENOUGH

u far from king, no1 mentioning the shit that pin write
u ain't a battle royale n w/ them verses I doubt that youll even get an invite
AGAIN, VERY BASIC

Pinot got a chick unlike 10 senses,he's not searching em out
doesn't need plenty of fish cus his bitch already looks & smells enough like a trout
IDK MAN. THIS IS OK I GUESS

this fake contender fired up? I'll beat that chip off ur shoulder
u full of fury then I'll also strip ya of ya chance being a title holder
NO.


vote pinot. Stronger material

Adonis
02-12-2016, 11:06 AM
Pinot had the more relevant disses which is a smart way to keep away from being played. He had multiple disses that connected in my eyes while lotto's disses were just not hitting. They seemed to never fully formulate, the bars I mean, before he'd move on to the next.

V/Pinot