Cimmerian vs. Mr J

[Adonis]

Winter Topical II: Semi Finals


SUMMARY OF RULES:

Verses are due FEB. 13th
SATURDAY at 11:59 P.M. Pacific/West Coast or SUNDAY Feb. 14th 3:00 AM Eastern / 6:00 AM SATURDAY Feb. 14th Central European/London


Verses MUST be a [b]minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

[color=red]Voting closes when a clear winner is voted for. Competitors must vote immediately on the other match. Failure to vote will result in NEGATIVE VOTES if you advance to the next round.

WHAT DOES THIS MEAN? You can technically start a match down three votes by failing to log a single vote the previous week.

so....

All competitors must vote on THREE battles

Read the full rules here! (http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=122320)

Topic:

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G/Luck Mr. J Cimmerian

sorry about the wait, hopefully we can muster votes quicker this time around

[Mr. J]

This shall be interesting.........how many lines you gonna go....

[Cimmerian]

More likely than not, 160 words or less. Write as much as you'd like, Mr. Jefferson.

Cimm.

[Mr. J]

As the darkness covered my hands I knew as I started...
this is my job, I have chosen this road...my mind departed.
memories are locked in each bullet that left my hand...
Stopping would be foolish there is a war that threatens man...
woman, child...I accept the chance to protect each one.
a breath of relief comes...woman & child, bless each one.
my heart leaps from my chest as the alarms blare...
I look around for my fellow man but they aren't there.
We have taken hits to our company, carried more than our share
equipped with the same hardware, served longer hours...
Yea...we put our souls on the line only to be disposed of.
only to return home beaten, while others have just blown up
I've known enough about this reality as I was growing up
We didn't choose to live this lifestyle...it chose us.
Our communication broke up several days prior...
there is more to lose, than there is to gain. the price of an empire
the emotion drains from my face & my pride lays in the fire
my source of closure arrives in the faces of hundreds of survivors
the war is over...with the factory shut down, none of us are getting hired


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[Mr. J]

Cimmerian

[Adonis]

I didn't realize it was holiday today. My bad on due date. You ok with extension Jay?

[Mr. J]

Gopher it













as long as I don't have to write another verse to match

[Adonis]

Cimmerian when can you get a verse up?

[Cimmerian]

Crap. I had thought verses were due on Tuesday. I'll have a verse together by then.

[Mr. J]

Its called Tuesday cause its 2 days from now....
















Adonis :D

[Adonis]

Word play genius over here.

[Adonis]

Cimmerian

We're moving on tonight. Post or no show

[Cimmerian]

I'll concede. I had a couple new cases come in the door that I've been putting heavy hours for. No time to write. Sorry for the anti-climatic result. I signed up for this thing so I'd be inspired to write. It's definitely done that. Thanks, Adonis.

[Adonis]

I hate your life