Allen Knight Vs Fracture - (AK wins)

[Allen Knight]

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Allen Knight Fracture

[Fracture]

Let do 12 then man

[Allen Knight]

ight 12, will clean up this thread.

[Fracture]

Another apprentice getting testy questioning me
Ur a big easy target. This is Isis at Mardi Gras, with no interest in beads
Allen knight? Night Allen. This faggots backwards
Ur all bark. So u know I'm making paper when I chop u up to have u manufactured
Dudes shooook. Nervous. Unable to express his talent
The piru sent to kill Biggie had less blood pressure than Allen
How can u beat me? Ur sloppy.. Concepts just falter
Even when u put a thot into a bar.. she just leaves with someone not as awkward
Frac is the nicest at this, ur just aiight & that's it
Plus ur a choke artist. Allen could only make a name illustrating heimlich pamphlets
Im a starter, Allens a bench story that made Forrest Gump thrilling
And he knows he'll go out like a losing samurai, it's his gut feeling.

[Allen Knight]

stop calling out bags w/ ur weird ass obsession w/ him cuz

he would scorch u ina battle, that plan is tired
fag u try to Marc Anthony he'd light u up & leave this 'Man on fire'
9milly aimed at ya organs pussy, shells hittin ur core now
that Canister ur insides up till everything stored in ur body pours out
ur slut fucks black guys 24/7, at random parks railin it
only reason that ass Gothic is cuz she been filled w/ dark elements
im boding u into retirement, u'll get wrecked w/ ratchets
Yule Log off forever cuz i burnt u alive till ya fuckin careers left in ashes
ur moms sucks me off before i smash, im violent diggin her
that slut kisses the head before i slam it like Bray Wyatt's finisher
rob ur crib w/ a uzi, take the safe off ya table quick
snatch all the Lieutenant & leave a hole in u the size of a Naval Ship

[Hush]

Another apprentice getting testy questioning me
Ur a big easy target. This is Isis at Mardi Gras, with no interest in beads
Question me rhymes with beads? Lol wha. The punch itself is just ass
Allen knight? Night Allen. This faggots backwards
Ur all bark. So u know I'm making paper when I chop u up to have u manufactured
Um ok angle is cool setup was funny but punch execution is ehhh what do u mean have him manufactured I never heard someone be manufactured ever
Dudes shooook. Nervous. Unable to express his talent
The piru sent to kill Biggie had less blood pressure than Allen
Fire
How can u beat me? Ur sloppy.. Concepts just falter
Even when u put a thot into a bar.. she just leaves with someone not as awkward
This is horrible
Frac is the nicest at this, ur just aiight & that's it
Plus ur a choke artist. Allen could only make a name illustrating heimlich pamphlets
Kinda cool . Dope ass concept
Im a starter, Allens a bench story that made Forrest Gump thrilling
And he knows he'll go out like a losing samurai, it's his gut feeling.
Fair to decent


stop calling out bags w/ ur weird ass obsession w/ him cuz

he would scorch u ina battle, that plan is tired
fag u try to Marc Anthony he'd light u up & leave this 'Man on fire'
I don't remember the movie too wel so this misses on me
9milly aimed at ya organs pussy, shells hittin ur core now
that Canister ur insides up till everything stored in ur body pours out
Wp not working 2 ways so nah
ur slut fucks black guys 24/7, at random parks railin it
only reason that ass Gothic is cuz she been filled w/ dark elements
Yeah this is wp done right cuz it's fire
im boding u into retirement, u'll get wrecked w/ ratchets
Yule Log off forever cuz i burnt u alive till ya fuckin careers left in ashes
Lol if this was December I might of fucked with this but it just is sloppy wp in February
ur moms sucks me off before i smash, im violent diggin her
that slut kisses the head before i slam it like Bray Wyatt's finisher
Dope af
rob ur crib w/ a uzi, take the safe off ya table quick
snatch all the Lieutenant & leave a hole in u the size of a Naval Ship
Nah




The bray Wyatt line alone won this battle IMO
Allen had a lot of bad wordplay but frac just had a lot of bad wording


The thot/thought shit was just atrocious



V/knight

[Schadenfreude]

Opener is decent
Bark/paper is weak
Blood pressure is aight
Thot is terrible
Choke artist is played & badly worded
Closer is cool




Opener is cool
Canister is weak
Gothis is ok
Yule log is kinda corny, but aight
Bray Wyatt is nasty
Closer is decent


Overall I expected a whole lot more from y'all tbh. Frac u're stuff's just "dated" & AK u're rusty or lazy or whatever, but I still say ALLEN KNIGHT took it.

[Fracture]

That bray Wyatt line was classic

[Pinot Grij]

Fracture.
Opener too complicated.
Paper line is ok, but bark is a stretch to get to a line about paper manufacturing.
I don't get piru line.
Thot line is tight.
Heimlich is decent but the rhyme is awkward.
Closer is fire. Subtle but hard.

AK
I guess Anthony is Bags's name?
Cainster was a weird read, needed a couple looks.
Gothic line is fire.
Yule Log woulda been better around Christmas but still funny.
Sister Abigail line is fire.
Lieutenant line is funny.

In a battle of 2 lines I liked vs 2 lines plus some decent ones, I gotta go with AK. Fracture had a couple misses that I couldn't overlook.

Vote -- Allen Knight

[ill nik-A]

Frac
I liked the illustrator line thought it was dope

Allen
I'm not a fan of some of the wordplay BUT gothic was great and the sister line was too

I got allen

[Certain]

The blood pressure and gothic lines alone made this worth reading. Good job, men.

[Wanderer]

Another apprentice getting testy questioning me
Ur a big easy target. This is Isis at Mardi Gras, with no interest in beads
Nah
Allen knight? Night Allen. This faggots backwards
Ur all bark. So u know I'm making paper when I chop u up to have u manufactured
Really liked where this was going and then "to have you manufactured" ruined it cos to me it ain't makin sense
Dudes shooook. Nervous. Unable to express his talent
The piru sent to kill Biggie had less blood pressure than Allen
nice
How can u beat me? Ur sloppy.. Concepts just falter
Even when u put a thot into a bar.. she just leaves with someone not as awkward
Meh
Frac is the nicest at this, ur just aiight & that's it
Plus ur a choke artist. Allen could only make a name illustrating heimlich pamphlets
Fresh man but something about he wording on the punch didn't sit right with me
Im a starter, Allens a bench story that made Forrest Gump thrilling
And he knows he'll go out like a losing samurai, it's his gut feeling
errr not great
.

Vs


stop calling out bags w/ ur weird ass obsession w/ him cuz

he would scorch u ina battle, that plan is tired
fag u try to Marc Anthony he'd light u up & leave this 'Man on fire'
Cool
9milly aimed at ya organs pussy, shells hittin ur core now
that Canister ur insides up till everything stored in ur body pours out
Wording meant I got lost somewhere in this..
ur slut fucks black guys 24/7, at random parks railin it
only reason that ass Gothic is cuz she been filled w/ dark elements
I dig the concept but elements and railing it really don't rhyme for me
im boding u into retirement, u'll get wrecked w/ ratchets
Yule Log off forever cuz i burnt u alive till ya fuckin careers left in ashes
No way
ur moms sucks me off before i smash, im violent diggin her
that slut kisses the head before i slam it like Bray Wyatt's finisher
Dope
rob ur crib w/ a uzi, take the safe off ya table quick
snatch all the Lieutenant & leave a hole in u the size of a Naval Ship
Not really working for me


Got 2 dope hits from Allen and a half hitter vs 1 dope hit : 2 half hits for Fracture. Bray wyatt's finisher LOTB.

V/Allen

[joog]

Another apprentice getting testy questioning me
Ur a big easy target. This is Isis at Mardi Gras, with no interest in beads
I LIKED THIS

Allen knight? Night Allen. This faggots backwards
Ur all bark. So u know I'm making paper when I chop u up to have u manufactured
NICE CONCEPTUALLY, BUT THE EXECUTION OF THE COULDA BEEN HARSHER


Dudes shooook. Nervous. Unable to express his talent
The piru sent to kill Biggie had less blood pressure than Allen
THIS IS NICE

How can u beat me? Ur sloppy.. Concepts just falter
Even when u put a thot into a bar.. she just leaves with someone not as awkward
THIS WAS DOPE IMO

Frac is the nicest at this, ur just aiight & that's it
Plus ur a choke artist. Allen could only make a name illustrating heimlich pamphlets
IVE SEEN THIS CHOKE ANGLE DONE A BIT TOO MUCH

Im a starter, Allens a bench story that made Forrest Gump thrilling
And he knows he'll go out like a losing samurai, it's his gut feeling.
IVE SEEN THIS SAMURAI/GUT FEELING A BIT TOO MUCH ALSO. HARD TO AWARD PTS HERE

VS


he would scorch u ina battle, that plan is tired
fag u try to Marc Anthony he'd light u up & leave this 'Man on fire'
ALRIGHT

9milly aimed at ya organs pussy, shells hittin ur core now
that Canister ur insides up till everything stored in ur body pours out
OK, COULDA EXECUTED THAT CAN FLIP A LIL BETTER

ur slut fucks black guys 24/7, at random parks railin it
only reason that ass Gothic is cuz she been filled w/ dark elements
THIS WAS LOLS

im boding u into retirement, u'll get wrecked w/ ratchets
Yule Log off forever cuz i burnt u alive till ya fuckin careers left in ashes
THIS WAS GOOD

ur moms sucks me off before i smash, im violent diggin her
that slut kisses the head before i slam it like Bray Wyatt's finisher
YIKES..

rob ur crib w/ a uzi, take the safe off ya table quick
snatch all the Lieutenant & leave a hole in u the size of a Naval Ship
NAH. I DIDN'T LIKE HOW U DID THIS. BOTCHED CONCEPT IMO


verdict-
Good battle.
Frac, I liked ur creativity for the most part. But ur last two concepts, I've seen done a few times. But your wording and execution was much better.
AK, you was consistent. Only bar I didn't like was your closer.


Vote-ak on consistency

[Tic]

Another apprentice getting testy questioning me
Ur a big easy target. This is Isis at Mardi Gras, with no interest in beads
This is ok.
Allen knight? Night Allen. This faggots backwards
Ur all bark. So u know I'm making paper when I chop u up to have u manufactured
Didn't like this.
Dudes shooook. Nervous. Unable to express his talent
The piru sent to kill Biggie had less blood pressure than Allen
Cool.
How can u beat me? Ur sloppy.. Concepts just falter
Even when u put a thot into a bar.. she just leaves with someone not as awkward
Thot/thought no.
Frac is the nicest at this, ur just aiight & that's it
Plus ur a choke artist. Allen could only make a name illustrating heimlich pamphlets
I like this.
Im a starter, Allens a bench story that made Forrest Gump thrilling
And he knows he'll go out like a losing samurai, it's his gut feeling.
Not a fan.

stop calling out bags w/ ur weird ass obsession w/ him cuz

he would scorch u ina battle, that plan is tired
fag u try to Marc Anthony he'd light u up & leave this 'Man on fire'
Eh ok.
9milly aimed at ya organs pussy, shells hittin ur core now
that Canister ur insides up till everything stored in ur body pours out
Not bad. Doesn't work both ways, but ok.
ur slut fucks black guys 24/7, at random parks railin it
only reason that ass Gothic is cuz she been filled w/ dark elements
This is just weird.
im boding u into retirement, u'll get wrecked w/ ratchets
Yule Log off forever cuz i burnt u alive till ya fuckin careers left in ashes
I like this.
ur moms sucks me off before i smash, im violent diggin her
that slut kisses the head before i slam it like Bray Wyatt's finisher
Dope.
rob ur crib w/ a uzi, take the safe off ya table quick
snatch all the Lieutenant & leave a hole in u the size of a Naval Ship
Idk what this is.
Hmm this was kinda close. Frac had a couple decent lines, but Allen's finisher bar was LOTB for me. That edges it for me.

Allen

[Adonis]

Honestly didn't think either ran away with it Due to both lacking that killer dagger. Neither verse was bad, but neither was great either. I liked the thought into a bar line the most, but Allen was more consistent and more polished on a per line basis

V knight