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02-13-2016, 07:01 AM
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Cred
02-13-2016, 07:46 PM
Cash.

Wanderer
02-13-2016, 08:45 PM
How many ?

Wanderer
02-16-2016, 07:25 AM
12.

Computer geeks get cut up for frontin'. you ain't get a chance to drop well
so many slashes before you start a word.. bitch shoulda just stuck to HTML
& I ain't wanna be near you duke, no lie. It's no secret you're a fruity guy
you're uncreative & you've hit a Wall.. but we can keep that between you and I
Srs your recent verses been stale & I don't wanna seem over-zealous
but you're going through such a bad patch even the one on your chin's gettin jealous
I never dug your writtens, you should just quit, dude needs his hands tied
been recycling the same shit for years, you're basically EA Sports with the FIFA franchise
Valentine's approaching but you choke with the broads like text when push come to shove
so when you have symptoms of dizziness & shortness of breath it won't be from falling in love
& You favouritin' the mag? admin are at best mistaken
get a bullet when I raise arms to express myself, you're only capable of gesticulation

Cred
02-17-2016, 10:19 PM
dnt get shady, put the chopper to ur infant cus u know i'm crazy
i'll have his head hanging from this arm like idk how to hold a baby
chrome 380, stop askin Cred wen will dem gun bars stop
double barrel ring 2 times over ur head like an old school alarm clock
treat'em like a Mexican, dis cartel murder leave mre den alotta bumps
cus i'm bout to fuck Wan's life up as if our nxt president was Donald Trump
u outta luck, i'll send u up to heavens gates i'm ruthless
u'll get the box with the soft tunes but it ain't a elevator stupid
n ur girl got crabs, jus thinkin bout it shud make ya head explode
dat nasty bitch is more itchy & scratchy then a Simpsons episode
i'm dumpin fours, a couple shells leave dis sucka floored
jus kno wen these 2 rounds lift u off da ground it ain't a hoverboard

drill season.

Saint
02-18-2016, 12:47 AM
Damn. I had a whole breakdown but phone died, lol.

Basically.. I gave it to cred, he had a couple cool hits and his wording was more fluid.. thought he cooled down abd that simpson line was pkayed lol, but he did enough...Wanderer was way too wordy and long winded - it took away from the punch. But even just looking at the punches behind it all - thought ur closer was the best. Things like falling in love and wall between were super light to me.. even though u coulve worked them into better hits..

I got v- cred

10 Senses
02-18-2016, 04:03 PM
Not feel'n Wanderer.
I like the 380 chrome.
Cred for the win...

Hush
02-18-2016, 08:53 PM
12.

Computer geeks get cut up for frontin'. you ain't get a chance to drop well
so many slashes before you start a word.. bitch shoulda just stuck to HTML
Nice
& I ain't wanna be near you duke, no lie. It's no secret you're a fruity guy
you're uncreative & you've hit a Wall.. but we can keep that between you and I
Ehhh
Srs your recent verses been stale & I don't wanna seem over-zealous
but you're going through such a bad patch even the one on your chin's gettin jealous
Nice
I never dug your writtens, you should just quit, dude needs his hands tied
been recycling the same shit for years, you're basically EA Sports with the FIFA franchise
Nah
Valentine's approaching but you choke with the broads like text when push come to shove
so when you have symptoms of dizziness & shortness of breath it won't be from falling in love
So so it's aight but not hard hitting good concept
& You favouritin' the mag? admin are at best mistaken
get a bullet when I raise arms to express myself, you're only capable of gesticulation
First half of the punch was fire but what the fuck is grstulation lol


dnt get shady, put the chopper to ur infant cus u know i'm crazy
i'll have his head hanging from this arm like idk how to hold a baby
Fire
chrome 380, stop askin Cred wen will dem gun bars stop
double barrel ring 2 times over ur head like an old school alarm clock
Eh this light
treat'em like a Mexican, dis cartel murder leave mre den alotta bumps
cus i'm bout to fuck Wan's life up as if our nxt president was Donald Trump
Naw
u outta luck, i'll send u up to heavens gates i'm ruthless
u'll get the box with the soft tunes but it ain't a elevator stupid
Fire
n ur girl got crabs, jus thinkin bout it shud make ya head explode
dat nasty bitch is more itchy & scratchy then a Simpsons episode
Nice could of been fire with diff wording
i'm dumpin fours, a couple shells leave dis sucka floored
jus kno wen these 2 rounds lift u off da ground it ain't a hover board
Dope
drill season.

Wand had some ok shit but corny stuff and some wording issues
Cried was more consistent and had 2 real heavy bangers


V cred

Fracture
02-18-2016, 11:55 PM
Cred wins


Better wording....

e11even
02-19-2016, 05:27 AM
12.

Computer geeks get cut up for frontin'. you ain't get a chance to drop well
so many slashes before you start a word.. bitch shoulda just stuck to HTML
nice
& I ain't wanna be near you duke, no lie. It's no secret you're a fruity guy
you're uncreative & you've hit a Wall.. but we can keep that between you and I
so-so
Srs your recent verses been stale & I don't wanna seem over-zealous
but you're going through such a bad patch even the one on your chin's gettin jealous
lol
I never dug your writtens, you should just quit, dude needs his hands tied
been recycling the same shit for years, you're basically EA Sports with the FIFA franchise
eh
Valentine's approaching but you choke with the broads like text when push come to shove
so when you have symptoms of dizziness & shortness of breath it won't be from falling in love
coulda been better
& You favouritin' the mag? admin are at best mistaken
get a bullet when I raise arms to express myself, you're only capable of gesticulation
decent, not a great finisher

dnt get shady, put the chopper to ur infant cus u know i'm crazy
i'll have his head hanging from this arm like idk how to hold a baby
lol
chrome 380, stop askin Cred wen will dem gun bars stop
double barrel ring 2 times over ur head like an old school alarm clock
so-so
treat'em like a Mexican, dis cartel murder leave mre den alotta bumps
cus i'm bout to fuck Wan's life up as if our nxt president was Donald Trump
lol
u outta luck, i'll send u up to heavens gates i'm ruthless
u'll get the box with the soft tunes but it ain't a elevator stupid
dope
n ur girl got crabs, jus thinkin bout it shud make ya head explode
dat nasty bitch is more itchy & scratchy then a Simpsons episode
lol
i'm dumpin fours, a couple shells leave dis sucka floored
jus kno wen these 2 rounds lift u off da ground it ain't a hoverboard
nice, used 2 twice though.
drill season.


kinda close battle here, but more punches fell in cred's favor. MVGT cred

King
02-19-2016, 10:58 AM
Srs your recent verses been stale & I don't wanna seem over-zealous
but you're going through such a bad patch even the one on your chin's gettin jealous


vs


dnt get shady, put the chopper to ur infant cus u know i'm crazy
i'll have his head hanging from this arm like idk how to hold a baby
treat'em like a Mexican, dis cartel murder leave mre den alotta bumps
cus i'm bout to fuck Wan's life up as if our nxt president was Donald Trump
u outta luck, i'll send u up to heavens gates i'm ruthless
u'll get the box with the soft tunes but it ain't a elevator stupid


Not really as lopsided as the quotes would make it seem. Wan, u had some real good ideas but ur wording is just too choppy. Like ur trying to cram too much into one bar. Cred had a pretty consistent verse. Donald Trump = LOTB. Shit killed me haha

vote-Cred

Allen Knight
02-19-2016, 04:55 PM
Computer geeks get cut up for frontin'. you ain't get a chance to drop well
so many slashes before you start a word.. bitch shoulda just stuck to HTML
^^^nah seen to many html lines & this wasnt flipped in a fresh way
& I ain't wanna be near you duke, no lie. It's no secret you're a fruity guy
you're uncreative & you've hit a Wall.. but we can keep that between you and I
^^^nah corny
Srs your recent verses been stale & I don't wanna seem over-zealous
but you're going through such a bad patch even the one on your chin's gettin jealous
^^^Nice
I never dug your writtens, you should just quit, dude needs his hands tied
been recycling the same shit for years, you're basically EA Sports with the FIFA franchise
^^^nah worded weak no impact
Valentine's approaching but you choke with the broads like text when push come to shove
so when you have symptoms of dizziness & shortness of breath it won't be from falling in love
^^^concept is good coulda been worded better but overall a cool bar
& You favouritin' the mag? admin are at best mistaken
get a bullet when I raise arms to express myself, you're only capable of gesticulation
^^^no way lol


Vs


dnt get shady, put the chopper to ur infant cus u know i'm crazy
i'll have his head hanging from this arm like idk how to hold a baby
^^^Cool opener
chrome 380, stop askin Cred wen will dem gun bars stop
double barrel ring 2 times over ur head like an old school alarm clock
^^^nah
treat'em like a Mexican, dis cartel murder leave mre den alotta bumps
cus i'm bout to fuck Wan's life up as if our nxt president was Donald Trump
^^^dopee
u outta luck, i'll send u up to heavens gates i'm ruthless
u'll get the box with the soft tunes but it ain't a elevator stupid
^^^fire
n ur girl got crabs, jus thinkin bout it shud make ya head explode
dat nasty bitch is more itchy & scratchy then a Simpsons episode
^^^nah played seen this alot & it wasnt flipped fresh
i'm dumpin fours, a couple shells leave dis sucka floored
jus kno wen these 2 rounds lift u off da ground it ain't a hoverboard
^^^good closer


V/cred, not a bad battle here ,wan has concepts but his
wording is not there yet its to choppy, work on that read ol battles but that bad patch bar was nice.
Creds elevator bar was lotb an fire. props to both.