Contendership Match: Infiltration vs Tic - (Tic wins)

[Orc]

NBL Season 9


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[Saint]

how many.. 12-16?

[Tic]

16.

[Saint]

I'll be dropping 16 wed

[Tic]

I'll most likely need the ext. Been busy at work.

[Saint]

Alright. But that's it.

[Tic]

I'm gonna try to post in the early afternoon. Just been busy at work.

[Tic]

14 Infiltration

How you got here is beyond me. All ya verses are obscure and odd
Took poor wording & concepts, Bandit together..now the competition is yours to Rob
I could off you w/ ease, no sweat to end this lonely sinner
My Dogs’ll have ya insides oozin out after the Bite like Ravioli dinner
Ratchet leave ya midsection popped like an open lid, you can quote me, kid
w/ a hole big enough to “Put my Right foot in & shake it all about…”Hokey Pokey bitch
I’m smashing all ya limbs! But wait, I got 1 last thing for ya, Inf
Gamble w/ ya life & get hit w/ more 100 K Rounds than Draft King Tournaments
You’re a horrible writer. In any & every text battle you’ll plummet
Shiiit, we can all Egregious by reading your verse <<< that describes the caliber of it
Broke fgt. My paper trail long no matter what I’m spendin it on
Your paper trail depends on tire pressure, good balance & the strength of your arm
Ya girl? Either Ship her out or keep her at home, she a big time slut
Her Box been all over the world. Shit, she even got the stamp “This Side Up”

[Saint]

Tic aka Tic Tac/Galactic

back in the tag tourney..
I let u word all my killer concepts; couldn't trust gal to shoot..
should've been a 50/50 contest.. moree like u assisted my dunks to alley oop
U act like women are from a different planet. be easyy rookie
You're a virgin galactic - n they'll colonize private space b4 yours sees the pussy
Champ? u wont have pulse in a body - I'm stompin til u flat vitals
I'm good w/ the hands-on approach.. when i floor this square it'll be sooo tactile
You're a gamer geek who loses to midtiers; its slowin ya progress
But u'll pick up steam if 'how not to be a wack faggot' was downloadable content
U ride old dicks; PM'ing vets in hopes they pay u some mind & tips
This is child's play.. beating u is so easy mode i'll let my kid do it w/ an iPhone 6
Yo I gotta gun so big them munitions make ya soul leave in a breath
Nicknamed it my Vaporizer. cuz ur head smokin from a cartridge like e-cigarettes
& u aint smashin chicks. i hold my bitches hair back if she gaggin dick
My looks get me blown by fangirls, urs couldnt get one to reenact that brad pitt gif

[Larold]

How you got here is beyond me. All ya verses are obscure and odd
Took poor wording & concepts, Bandit together..now the competition is yours to Rob
alright cool
I could off you w/ ease, no sweat to end this lonely sinner
My Dogs’ll have ya insides oozin out after the Bite like Ravioli dinner
this almost made me spit out my food, ravioli dinner? Lol come on son
Ratchet leave ya midsection popped like an open lid, you can quote me, kid
w/ a hole big enough to “Put my Right foot in & shake it all about…”Hokey Pokey bitch
lol nah didn't like this either
I’m smashing all ya limbs! But wait, I got 1 last thing for ya, Inf
Gamble w/ ya life & get hit w/ more 100 K Rounds than Draft King Tournaments
alright I can dig it
You’re a horrible writer. In any & every text battle you’ll plummet
Shiiit, we can all Egregious by reading your verse <<< that describes the caliber of it
misuse of the word hurt this
Broke fgt. My paper trail long no matter what I’m spendin it on
Your paper trail depends on tire pressure, good balance & the strength of your arm
ok
Ya girl? Either Ship her out or keep her at home, she a big time slut
Her Box been all over the world. Shit, she even got the stamp “This Side Up”
ok decent maybe could have worded it a lil better but nonetheless

im usually a fan of ya shit, ur truly a man of good wit
This verse was ur usual dopeness.. broken in half & then split


Vs



Tic aka Tic Tac/Galactic

back in the tag tourney..
I let u word all my killer concepts; couldn't trust gal to shoot..
should've been a 50/50 contest.. moree like u assisted my dunks to alley oop
ehhh
U act like women are from a different planet. be easyy rookie
You're a virgin galactic - n they'll colonize private space b4 yours sees the pussy
this was tight
Champ? u wont have pulse in a body - I'm stompin til u flat vitals
I'm good w/ the hands-on approach.. when i floor this square it'll be sooo tactile
alright cool
You're a gamer geek who loses to midtiers; its slowin ya progress
But u'll pick up steam if 'how not to be a wack faggot' was downloadable content
nah, maybe could of had potential if worded dif but as it is I wasn't feelin
U ride old dicks; PM'ing vets in hopes they pay u some mind & tips
This is child's play.. beating u is so easy mode i'll let my kid do it w/ an iPhone 6
nah
Yo I gotta gun so big them munitions make ya soul leave in a breath
Nicknamed it my Vaporizer. cuz ur head smokin from a cartridge like e-cigarettes
bar on fleek, nice
& u aint smashin chicks. i hold my bitches hair back if she gaggin dick
My looks get me blown by fangirls, urs couldnt get one to reenact that brad pitt gif
meh


This was a close one tbh, but I think the vaporizer line gave inf that edge that was needed to seal this.

Vot3: inf

[Schadenfreude]

Opener, Draft Kings & closer

Virgin, tactile, easy mode, vaporizer & closer

Overall INFILITRATION had more to offer, Tic had a really forced execution.

[ill nik-A]

Tic, opened was ok, draft King hit, paper trail was eh ok

Inf, virgin galactic, tactile was ok but des kinda did the tile thing vs u, Childs play was eh ok and the e cig was good

Close, I got inf by a halfer

[Wanderer]

14 Infiltration

How you got here is beyond me. All ya verses are obscure and odd
Took poor wording & concepts, Bandit together..now the competition is yours to Rob
Ok opener
I could off you w/ ease, no sweat to end this lonely sinner
My Dogs’ll have ya insides oozin out after the Bite like Ravioli dinner
Cool
Ratchet leave ya midsection popped like an open lid, you can quote me, kid
w/ a hole big enough to “Put my Right foot in & shake it all about…”Hokey Pokey bitch
No
I’m smashing all ya limbs! But wait, I got 1 last thing for ya, Inf
Gamble w/ ya life & get hit w/ more 100 K Rounds than Draft King Tournaments
Ok
You’re a horrible writer. In any & every text battle you’ll plummet
Shiiit, we can all Egregious by reading your verse <<< that describes the caliber of it
Nice
Broke fgt. My paper trail long no matter what I’m spendin it on
Your paper trail depends on tire pressure, good balance & the strength of your arm
ok
Ya girl? Either Ship her out or keep her at home, she a big time slut
Her Box been all over the world. Shit, she even got the stamp “This Side Up”
lol Feeling it


Vs

Tic aka Tic Tac/Galactic

back in the tag tourney..
I let u word all my killer concepts; couldn't trust gal to shoot..
should've been a 50/50 contest.. moree like u assisted my dunks to alley oop
Nah
U act like women are from a different planet. be easyy rookie
You're a virgin galactic - n they'll colonize private space b4 yours sees the pussy
Ok
Champ? u wont have pulse in a body - I'm stompin til u flat vitals
I'm good w/ the hands-on approach.. when i floor this square it'll be sooo tactile
Done before
You're a gamer geek who loses to midtiers; its slowin ya progress
But u'll pick up steam if 'how not to be a wack faggot' was downloadable content
Nice
U ride old dicks; PM'ing vets in hopes they pay u some mind & tips
This is child's play.. beating u is so easy mode i'll let my kid do it w/ an iPhone 6
"Mind & tips" what? Not feeling punch either
Yo I gotta gun so big them munitions make ya soul leave in a breath
Nicknamed it my Vaporizer. cuz ur head smokin from a cartridge like e-cigarettes
Cool
& u aint smashin chicks. i hold my bitches hair back if she gaggin dick
My looks get me blown by fangirls, urs couldnt get one to reenact that brad pitt gif
Nah


This goes to Tic with more bangers.

V/Tic

[Hush]

14 Infiltration

How you got here is beyond me. All ya verses are obscure and odd
Took poor wording & concepts, Bandit together..now the competition is yours to Rob
---it don't work both ways but worded well enough to still be ok
I could off you w/ ease, no sweat to end this lonely sinner
My Dogs’ll have ya insides oozin out after the Bite like Ravioli dinner
---pretty slick
Ratchet leave ya midsection popped like an open lid, you can quote me, kid
w/ a hole big enough to “Put my Right foot in & shake it all about…”Hokey Pokey bitch
---nah lol
I’m smashing all ya limbs! But wait, I got 1 last thing for ya, Inf
Gamble w/ ya life & get hit w/ more 100 K Rounds than Draft King Tournaments
---it don't make sense . More 100 k rounds ? That's a reach . Wording wasn't right. I get what u mean but it ain't really dope
You’re a horrible writer. In any & every text battle you’ll plummet
Shiiit, we can all Egregious by reading your verse <<< that describes the caliber of it
---wp fire but execution was type lazy
Broke fgt. My paper trail long no matter what I’m spendin it on
Your paper trail depends on tire pressure, good balance & the strength of your arm
---nah
Ya girl? Either Ship her out or keep her at home, she a big time slut
Her Box been all over the world. Shit, she even got the stamp “This Side Up”
---good closer


Tic aka Tic Tac/Galactic

back in the tag tourney..
I let u word all my killer concepts; couldn't trust gal to shoot..
should've been a 50/50 contest.. moree like u assisted my dunks to alley oop
--nah
U act like women are from a different planet. be easyy rookie
You're a virgin galactic - n they'll colonize private space b4 yours sees the pussy
--- eh decent but feels weak to me
Champ? u wont have pulse in a body - I'm stompin til u flat vitals
I'm good w/ the hands-on approach.. when i floor this square it'll be sooo tactile
---nah
You're a gamer geek who loses to midtiers; its slowin ya progress
But u'll pick up steam if 'how not to be a wack faggot' was downloadable content
--- lol ok . Funny but not really impactful
U ride old dicks; PM'ing vets in hopes they pay u some mind & tips
This is child's play.. beating u is so easy mode i'll let my kid do it w/ an iPhone 6
---eh
Yo I gotta gun so big them munitions make ya soul leave in a breath
Nicknamed it my Vaporizer. cuz ur head smokin from a cartridge like e-cigarettes
---ok
& u aint smashin chicks. i hold my bitches hair back if she gaggin dick
My looks get me blown by fangirls, urs couldnt get one to reenact that brad pitt gif
---nah




Man U both usually have way more fire quotes than I saw in this match
It was really close cuZ I feel u both under achieved here


I got tic for the better concepts both left me wanting more with the way the punches were followed thru on


V tic

[Useless]

How you got here is beyond me. All ya verses are obscure and odd
Took poor wording & concepts, Bandit together..now the competition is yours to Rob
--- too simple but decent..........
I could off you w/ ease, no sweat to end this lonely sinner
My Dogs’ll have ya insides oozin out after the Bite like Ravioli dinner
--- ehhh........
Ratchet leave ya midsection popped like an open lid, you can quote me, kid
w/ a hole big enough to “Put my Right foot in & shake it all about…”Hokey Pokey bitch
--- this would be funny in a live battle imo.................
I’m smashing all ya limbs! But wait, I got 1 last thing for ya, Inf
Gamble w/ ya life & get hit w/ more 100 K Rounds than Draft King Tournaments
--- 100 k rounds? It sounds weird but not that bad so it gets a pass............
You’re a horrible writer. In any & every text battle you’ll plummet
Shiiit, we can all Egregious by reading your verse <<< that describes the caliber of it
--- wp fire, execution not so much. This coulda been a top bar of the season............
Broke fgt. My paper trail long no matter what I’m spendin it on
Your paper trail depends on tire pressure, good balance & the strength of your arm
--- paper trail/route....aite...........
Ya girl? Either Ship her out or keep her at home, she a big time slut
Her Box been all over the world. Shit, she even got the stamp “This Side Up”
--- lulz..............


Vs.



back in the tag tourney..
I let u word all my killer concepts; couldn't trust gal to shoot..
should've been a 50/50 contest.. moree like u assisted my dunks to alley oop
--- nah strange just did this last week.............
U act like women are from a different planet. be easyy rookie
You're a virgin galactic - n they'll colonize private space b4 yours sees the pussy
--- cool...........
Champ? u wont have pulse in a body - I'm stompin til u flat vitals
I'm good w/ the hands-on approach.. when i floor this square it'll be sooo tactile
--- didn't someone just do this too?............
You're a gamer geek who loses to midtiers; its slowin ya progress
But u'll pick up steam if 'how not to be a wack faggot' was downloadable content
--- OK personal............
U ride old dicks; PM'ing vets in hopes they pay u some mind & tips
This is child's play.. beating u is so easy mode i'll let my kid do it w/ an iPhone 6
--- easy mode comes off a lil awkward, I don't like the wording on this...its not a complete miss tho................
Yo I gotta gun so big them munitions make ya soul leave in a breath
Nicknamed it my Vaporizer. cuz ur head smokin from a cartridge like e-cigarettes
--- nice, for a gun bar.................
& u aint smashin chicks. i hold my bitches hair back if she gaggin dick
My looks get me blown by fangirls, urs couldnt get one to reenact that brad pitt gif
--- ehh.............




Overall: kinda disappointed here, was expecting this to be a dope battle. It wasn't a bad battle, just didn't meet my expectations I guess. Inf been dropping subpar lately tho tbh, it might just be me tho. Both were somewhat consistent and had aite verses but tic had a cpl better lines and that egregious wp was dope.




V. Tic

[e11even]

14 Infiltration

How you got here is beyond me. All ya verses are obscure and odd
Took poor wording & concepts, Bandit together..now the competition is yours to Rob
Cool opener
I could off you w/ ease, no sweat to end this lonely sinner
My Dogs’ll have ya insides oozin out after the Bite like Ravioli dinner
ok punch, but simple
Ratchet leave ya midsection popped like an open lid, you can quote me, kid
w/ a hole big enough to “Put my Right foot in & shake it all about…”Hokey Pokey bitch
Stupid, but LOL
I’m smashing all ya limbs! But wait, I got 1 last thing for ya, Inf
Gamble w/ ya life & get hit w/ more 100 K Rounds than Draft King Tournaments
Wording a little off, ok punch
You’re a horrible writer. In any & every text battle you’ll plummet
Shiiit, we can all Egregious by reading your verse <<< that describes the caliber of it
Kinda cool
Broke fgt. My paper trail long no matter what I’m spendin it on
Your paper trail depends on tire pressure, good balance & the strength of your arm
lol
Ya girl? Either Ship her out or keep her at home, she a big time slut
Her Box been all over the world. Shit, she even got the stamp “This Side Up”
Best line in the verse

Tic aka Tic Tac/Galactic

back in the tag tourney..
I let u word all my killer concepts; couldn't trust gal to shoot..
should've been a 50/50 contest.. moree like u assisted my dunks to alley oop
Jab, I think the wording is off
U act like women are from a different planet. be easyy rookie
You're a virgin galactic - n they'll colonize private space b4 yours sees the pussy
Could've been better
Champ? u wont have pulse in a body - I'm stompin til u flat vitals
I'm good w/ the hands-on approach.. when i floor this square it'll be sooo tactile
Lol, but 'sooo tactile' makes it awkward
You're a gamer geek who loses to midtiers; its slowin ya progress
But u'll pick up steam if 'how not to be a wack faggot' was downloadable content
Kinda clever
U ride old dicks; PM'ing vets in hopes they pay u some mind & tips
This is child's play.. beating u is so easy mode i'll let my kid do it w/ an iPhone 6
Eh
Yo I gotta gun so big them munitions make ya soul leave in a breath
Nicknamed it my Vaporizer. cuz ur head smokin from a cartridge like e-cigarettes
Probably played but I still liked it
& u aint smashin chicks. i hold my bitches hair back if she gaggin dick
My looks get me blown by fangirls, urs couldnt get one to reenact that brad pitt gif
Eh for a finisher, but ok

I thought this was kinda close, but Tic had a little more zing in his punches
MVGT Tic

[Blam Newton]

How you got here is beyond me. All ya verses are obscure and odd
Took poor wording & concepts, Bandit together..now the competition is yours to Rob
this was ok. somewhat cheesy
I could off you w/ ease, no sweat to end this lonely sinner
My Dogs’ll have ya insides oozin out after the Bite like Ravioli dinner
I liked this for the most part.
Ratchet leave ya midsection popped like an open lid, you can quote me, kid
w/ a hole big enough to “Put my Right foot in & shake it all about…”Hokey Pokey bitch
This read smoothly.
I’m smashing all ya limbs! But wait, I got 1 last thing for ya, Inf
Gamble w/ ya life & get hit w/ more 100 K Rounds than Draft King Tournaments
This was cool. Wording was a bit off but still good.
You’re a horrible writer. In any & every text battle you’ll plummet
Shiiit, we can all Egregious by reading your verse <<< that describes the caliber of it
this was cool
Broke fgt. My paper trail long no matter what I’m spendin it on
Your paper trail depends on tire pressure, good balance & the strength of your arm
I dont get this. maybe it'll come to me later.
Ya girl? Either Ship her out or keep her at home, she a big time slut
Her Box been all over the world. Shit, she even got the stamp “This Side Up”
Dope.

back in the tag tourney..
I let u word all my killer concepts; couldn't trust gal to shoot..
should've been a 50/50 contest.. moree like u assisted my dunks to alley oop
this was ok. Not much of a haymaker.
U act like women are from a different planet. be easyy rookie
You're a virgin galactic - n they'll colonize private space b4 yours sees the pussy
I like this.
Champ? u wont have pulse in a body - I'm stompin til u flat vitals
I'm good w/ the hands-on approach.. when i floor this square it'll be sooo tactile
wording hurt this line.
You're a gamer geek who loses to midtiers; its slowin ya progress
But u'll pick up steam if 'how not to be a wack faggot' was downloadable content
Nice.
U ride old dicks; PM'ing vets in hopes they pay u some mind & tips
This is child's play.. beating u is so easy mode i'll let my kid do it w/ an iPhone 6
Nah.
Yo I gotta gun so big them munitions make ya soul leave in a breath
Nicknamed it my Vaporizer. cuz ur head smokin from a cartridge like e-cigarettes
Concept was there but wording took the sting out of it.
& u aint smashin chicks. i hold my bitches hair back if she gaggin dick
My looks get me blown by fangirls, urs couldnt get one to reenact that brad pitt gif
Nah.


This was close. Ive seen both come way better. Tic usually as more creativity. Tragic usually has harder punches. Idk. This was tough to call.
I think Tic was more consistent. Vote-Tic.
__________________

[Og smokinstein]

How you got here is beyond me. All ya verses are obscure and odd
Took poor wording & concepts, Bandit together..now the competition is yours to Rob
ok
I could off you w/ ease, no sweat to end this lonely sinner
My Dogs’ll have ya insides oozin out after the Bite like Ravioli dinner
wack
Ratchet leave ya midsection popped like an open lid, you can quote me, kid
w/ a hole big enough to “Put my Right foot in & shake it all about…”Hokey Pokey bitch
I could've sworn I saw a hokey pokey bar from someone else. And this one is equally wack.
I’m smashing all ya limbs! But wait, I got 1 last thing for ya, Inf
Gamble w/ ya life & get hit w/ more 100 K Rounds than Draft King Tournaments
lite but not wack
You’re a horrible writer. In any & every text battle you’ll plummet
Shiiit, we can all Egregious by reading your verse <<< that describes the caliber of it
Guess im too slow to get this one
Broke fgt. My paper trail long no matter what I’m spendin it on
Your paper trail depends on tire pressure, good balance & the strength of your arm
ok
Ya girl? Either Ship her out or keep her at home, she a big time slut
Her Box been all over the world. Shit, she even got the stamp “This Side Up”
a lil funny, slight chuckle

Tic aka Tic Tac/Galactic

back in the tag tourney..
I let u word all my killer concepts; couldn't trust gal to shoot..
should've been a 50/50 contest.. moree like u assisted my dunks to alley oop
hmm. head node
U act like women are from a different planet. be easyy rookie
You're a virgin galactic - n they'll colonize private space b4 yours sees the pussy
funny nerd shit
Champ? u wont have pulse in a body - I'm stompin til u flat vitals
I'm good w/ the hands-on approach.. when i floor this square it'll be sooo tactile
ok. not sure if I like it
You're a gamer geek who loses to midtiers; its slowin ya progress
But u'll pick up steam if 'how not to be a wack faggot' was downloadable content
lol
U ride old dicks; PM'ing vets in hopes they pay u some mind & tips
This is child's play.. beating u is so easy mode i'll let my kid do it w/ an iPhone 6
lol
Yo I gotta gun so big them munitions make ya soul leave in a breath
Nicknamed it my Vaporizer. cuz ur head smokin from a cartridge like e-cigarettes
gun so big bars..really nigga? that ur hurt verse a lil..im taking points for that.lol
& u aint smashin chicks. i hold my bitches hair back if she gaggin dick
My looks get me blown by fangirls, urs couldnt get one to reenact that brad pitt gif
cool closer.

this was kinda close, it jus came down to who verse I enjoyed the most imo.
And that happens to be...Infiltration

[Cred]

Ravioli was light, hokey pokey was koo, 100 K i liked, & i was fuckin wit the closer

vs

50/50 was koo, tactile was ok, ecigarettes was good, cool closer


This was close. I read this over and I'm going Tic. I enjoyed both verse but i dug tics jus a tad bit more here. Good battle tho

Vote - Tic