Schadenfreude vs Killing Spree - (Schad wins)

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[Kill Spree]

check

[Schadenfreude]

..yea

[Schadenfreude]

Let's get this out the way...

A waste of bars on a loser not even worth a good sentence
..dude u’ve done shit worthy of mention, except maybe perfect attendance.
Whether hands or jokes, I throw punches u can’t approach,
see I know Spreewell.. enough to choke him out like Latrell did that coach.
even carjacked his Uber & stuffed my whole crew in the cab
shoved my new Ruge in his abs, barrel flash had him like Cam doing the dab.
yo hoe gave courtesy humps, til u Captain Saved her, chump
swear to God the bitch should be a crisis counselor - she got u from the jump.
Even in the 1-2 he’s straight ass, so fam stands no chance,
fool’s been dropping one bar at a time, mfer would even lose a limbo dance.
an easy match, didn’t even wanna brawl w/ dude, he wack..
a due date’s all that he’ll beat, wouldn’t see Kill streak on a Call of Duty map.

..BODY.

[Kill Spree]

i'll need till 1 AM mad busy

[Kill Spree]

Listen...
Spree reel In wins W/Hooks, no way this Lame hittin me
ya body'll be found in the River, Shad..By ya local members of Game & Fisheries
Fuck W/Me? shiiit... I'll put the snub to ya cheek, kid
Really give you a sensodyne as soon as I'm done punchin ya teeth In
A Flash of light from you is wack shit..damn faggot
we saw kid Destroyer Pic's...now we wont See you in champ matches
Wack bitch, U Wood box W/god, but I'll smack ya backwids
we'll remember U as down to earth.. as I bury you more FT than ya average casket
I punch Hoe fakes. no contenders, but U'll Fail again
but KNOW I'll fuck you up more than Bags swingin @ fags or sum Aliens
this hoe man be gettin snot box hits, this dope no man can see
My lines go Pow Durin sets.. so its nothing to bring your nose candy

[Larold]

Let's get this out the way...

A waste of bars on a loser not even worth a good sentence
..dude u’ve done shit worthy of mention, except maybe perfect attendance.
nah
Whether hands or jokes, I throw punches u can’t approach,
see I know Spreewell.. enough to choke him out like Latrell did that coach.
havent seen this one before, alright not bad
even carjacked his Uber & stuffed my whole crew in the cab
shoved my new Ruge in his abs, barrel flash had him like Cam doing the dab.
cringed
yo hoe gave courtesy humps, til u Captain Saved her, chump
swear to God the bitch should be a crisis counselor - she got u from the jump.
wording, but decent
Even in the 1-2 he’s straight ass, so fam stands no chance,
fool’s been dropping one bar at a time, mfer would even lose a limbo dance.
lol ur dissing him being in the 1-2? I get the bar/limbo ref but this was kinda wack imo
an easy match, didn’t even wanna brawl w/ dude, he wack..
a due date’s all that he’ll beat, wouldn’t see Kill streak on a Call of Duty map.
ehh think I've seen cod ref's on him before

Not really sure who you are but I think I've read better verses from you while browsing. I liked the spreewell line but aside from that I wasn't feeling much.


Vs



Listen...
Spree reel In wins W/Hooks, no way this Lame hittin me
ya body'll be found in the River, Shad..By ya local members of Game & Fisheries
decent
Fuck W/Me? shiiit... I'll put the snub to ya cheek, kid
Really give you a sensodyne as soon as I'm done punchin ya teeth In
this was nice
A Flash of light from you is wack shit..damn faggot
we saw kid Destroyer Pic's...now we wont See you in champ matches
meh bc of the played wp
Wack bitch, U Wood box W/god, but I'll smack ya backwids
we'll remember U as down to earth.. as I bury you more FT than ya average casket
nah played
I punch Hoe fakes. no contenders, but U'll Fail again
but KNOW I'll fuck you up more than Bags swingin @ fags or sum Aliens
edging decent here
this hoe man be gettin snot box hits, this dope no man can see
My lines go Pow Durin sets.. so its nothing to bring your nose candy
forced but decent again

ngl I hate voting for you but your verse was decent, you had the sensodyne line that was lotb and the rest of your stuff was pretty much decent, nothing horrible.

Vote: KS

[Pinot Grij]

Schad
Attendance is just a jab.
Spreewell line had fresh wording.
Dab line ok - I just did one last week so its hard for me to judge it.
Crisis Counselor is dope af.
1-2 - setup is doper than the punch. Wish you coulda found somethin similar but better than limbo.
Closer is dope. Rhyme scheme dope.

Swagger was the predominant tone of the verse.

vs

Spree

I had to google what a shad was, so this one lost on me, sorry.
Sensodyne is ok as a flip, but needed a better concept around it.
Destroyer line is a nice personal.
Casket line has too much goin on.
I never read that Bags thread.
Wording in the closer is all over the place.

Vote -- Schadenfreude. Spree was too wordy, I felt like you need to bring your concepts back down to earth - way too much going on in there. Schad had good feel to the verse, crisis counselor was LOTB - nice execution. I really liked the closer and was almost all in on the 1-2 punch line.

[Schadenfreude]

..nvmd..lol.

[ill nik-A]

Schaden, that opener was dope and the second bar was cool

KS, the sensodyne was cool

I got scahden

[Saint]

KS had a couple cool concepts, sensodyne could've been fire with better wording..
Wording held you back on ok concepts...

Schade - I've seen the spreewell too much on KS, that said your crisis counselor was good and closer was a solid flip.

So I have schade by one solid hit w/ that crisis line..

Vote Schade

[e11even]

Let's get this out the way...

A waste of bars on a loser not even worth a good sentence
..dude u’ve done shit worthy of mention, except maybe perfect attendance.
So-so
Whether hands or jokes, I throw punches u can’t approach,
see I know Spreewell.. enough to choke him out like Latrell did that coach.
Probably played, not a great punch imo
even carjacked his Uber & stuffed my whole crew in the cab
shoved my new Ruge in his abs, barrel flash had him like Cam doing the dab.
Lol, kinda funny
yo hoe gave courtesy humps, til u Captain Saved her, chump
swear to God the bitch should be a crisis counselor - she got u from the jump.
Ok punch
Even in the 1-2 he’s straight ass, so fam stands no chance,
fool’s been dropping one bar at a time, mfer would even lose a limbo dance.
I like this one
an easy match, didn’t even wanna brawl w/ dude, he wack..
a due date’s all that he’ll beat, wouldn’t see Kill streak on a Call of Duty map.
Nice wp
..BODY.

Listen...
Spree reel In wins W/Hooks, no way this Lame hittin me
ya body'll be found in the River, Shad..By ya local members of Game & Fisheries
Over my head sorry
Fuck W/Me? shiiit... I'll put the snub to ya cheek, kid
Really give you a sensodyne as soon as I'm done punchin ya teeth In
Dope
A Flash of light from you is wack shit..damn faggot
we saw kid Destroyer Pic's...now we wont See you in champ matches
Nice
Wack bitch, U Wood box W/god, but I'll smack ya backwids
we'll remember U as down to earth.. as I bury you more FT than ya average casket
Forced setup, flimsy punch imo
I punch Hoe fakes. no contenders, but U'll Fail again
but KNOW I'll fuck you up more than Bags swingin @ fags or sum Aliens
Eh
this hoe man be gettin snot box hits, this dope no man can see
My lines go Pow Durin sets.. so its nothing to bring your nose candy
I didn't like this one


close match up with misses on both sides. KS had the best punch, but his misses were terrible. MVGT Shad for the overall better verse

[Wanderer]

Let's get this out the way...

A waste of bars on a loser not even worth a good sentence
..dude u’ve done shit worthy of mention, except maybe perfect attendance.
Nah
Whether hands or jokes, I throw punches u can’t approach,
see I know Spreewell.. enough to choke him out like Latrell did that coach.
Don't get
even carjacked his Uber & stuffed my whole crew in the cab
shoved my new Ruge in his abs, barrel flash had him like Cam doing the dab.
Not feeling
yo hoe gave courtesy humps, til u Captain Saved her, chump
swear to God the bitch should be a crisis counselor - she got u from the jump.
Na
Even in the 1-2 he’s straight ass, so fam stands no chance,
fool’s been dropping one bar at a time, mfer would even lose a limbo dance.
Poorly worded and bar concepts played
an easy match, didn’t even wanna brawl w/ dude, he wack..
a due date’s all that he’ll beat, wouldn’t see Kill streak on a Call of Duty map.
Coulda been worded better but I dug it

..BODY.

Vs

Listen...
Spree reel In wins W/Hooks, no way this Lame hittin me
ya body'll be found in the River, Shad..By ya local members of Game & Fisheries
I guess
Fuck W/Me? shiiit... I'll put the snub to ya cheek, kid
Really give you a sensodyne as soon as I'm done punchin ya teeth In
Not feeling
A Flash of light from you is wack shit..damn faggot
we saw kid Destroyer Pic's...now we wont See you in champ matches
Forced and nah
Wack bitch, U Wood box W/god, but I'll smack ya backwids
we'll remember U as down to earth.. as I bury you more FT than ya average casket
Nah
I punch Hoe fakes. no contenders, but U'll Fail again
but KNOW I'll fuck you up more than Bags swingin @ fags or sum Aliens
wording just.. nah
this hoe man be gettin snot box hits, this dope no man can see
My lines go Pow Durin sets.. so its nothing to bring your nose candy
Not feeling


I'm gonna have to go with Schad. Neither had great verses. 1 each that was barely ok for me and then the stand out went to Schad with the kill streak line. Wasn't dope but.. LOTB.

V/Schad

[Og smokinstein]

A waste of bars on a loser not even worth a good sentence
..dude u’ve done shit worthy of mention, except maybe perfect attendance.
Cool opener
Whether hands or jokes, I throw punches u can’t approach,
see I know Spreewell.. enough to choke him out like Latrell did that coach.
Descent, nice nameflip
even carjacked his Uber & stuffed my whole crew in the cab
shoved my new Ruge in his abs, barrel flash had him like Cam doing the dab.
eh..borderline..wack
yo hoe gave courtesy humps, til u Captain Saved her, chump
swear to God the bitch should be a crisis counselor - she got u from the jump.
That was crack best bar of the battle
Even in the 1-2 he’s straight ass, so fam stands no chance,
fool’s been dropping one bar at a time, mfer would even lose a limbo dance.
Now you cookin, dope
an easy match, didn’t even wanna brawl w/ dude, he wack..
a due date’s all that he’ll beat, wouldn’t see Kill streak on a Call of Duty map.
Was okay closer, could've been stronger.


Listen...
Spree reel In wins W/Hooks, no way this Lame hittin me
ya body'll be found in the River, Shad..By ya local members of Game & Fisheries
Weak opener
Fuck W/Me? shiiit... I'll put the snub to ya cheek, kid
Really give you a sensodyne as soon as I'm done punchin ya teeth In
Reach like a muthafucca, rhyming was off.
A Flash of light from you is wack shit..damn faggot
we saw kid Destroyer Pic's...now we wont See you in champ matches
Didn't get it, maybe cuz I'm new.
Wack bitch, U Wood box W/god, but I'll smack ya backwids
we'll remember U as down to earth.. as I bury you more FT than ya average casket
Filler, rhyming off
I punch Hoe fakes. no contenders, but U'll Fail again
but KNOW I'll fuck you up more than Bags swingin @ fags or sum Aliens
this hoe man be gettin snot box hits, this dope no man can see
My lines go Pow Durin sets.. so its nothing to bring your nose candy
wack

Schadenfreude got the w easy..with an okay verse.
spree needs a lil more work.

__________________

[Hush]

Let's get this out the way...

A waste of bars on a loser not even worth a good sentence
..dude u’ve done shit worthy of mention, except maybe perfect attendance.
---that's cool
Whether hands or jokes, I throw punches u can’t approach,
see I know Spreewell.. enough to choke him out like Latrell did that coach.
--- so old and non relevant I can't feel this
even carjacked his Uber & stuffed my whole crew in the cab
shoved my new Ruge in his abs, barrel flash had him like Cam doing the dab.
--- this is light but it's ok
yo hoe gave courtesy humps, til u Captain Saved her, chump
swear to God the bitch should be a crisis counselor - she got u from the jump.
--- eh this isn't dope to me
Even in the 1-2 he’s straight ass, so fam stands no chance,
fool’s been dropping one bar at a time, mfer would even lose a limbo dance.
--- ok it's dece
an easy match, didn’t even wanna brawl w/ dude, he wack..
a due date’s all that he’ll beat, wouldn’t see Kill streak on a Call of Duty map.
--- played on him I seen it done alot on him

..BODY.

Listen...
Spree reel In wins W/Hooks, no way this Lame hittin me
ya body'll be found in the River, Shad..By ya local members of Game & Fisheries
---truly don't get it
Fuck W/Me? shiiit... I'll put the snub to ya cheek, kid
Really give you a sensodyne as soon as I'm done punchin ya teeth In
--- ok wp but the execution is soso
A Flash of light from you is wack shit..damn faggot
we saw kid Destroyer Pic's...now we wont See you in champ matches
---nah
Wack bitch, U Wood box W/god, but I'll smack ya backwids
we'll remember U as down to earth.. as I bury you more FT than ya average casket
---light
I punch Hoe fakes. no contenders, but U'll Fail again
but KNOW I'll fuck you up more than Bags swingin @ fags or sum Aliens
--nah
this hoe man be gettin snot box hits, this dope no man can see
My lines go Pow Durin sets.. so its nothing to bring your nose candy
---nah



Damn killing spree was wack in This to which is weird cuz I usually feel his bars


I got shad by a fair margin

[Blam Newton]

A waste of bars on a loser not even worth a good sentence
..dude u’ve done shit worthy of mention, except maybe perfect attendance.
Cool.
Whether hands or jokes, I throw punches u can’t approach,
see I know Spreewell.. enough to choke him out like Latrell did that coach.
Probably been done but I like it.
even carjacked his Uber & stuffed my whole crew in the cab
shoved my new Ruge in his abs, barrel flash had him like Cam doing the dab.
Ok.
yo hoe gave courtesy humps, til u Captain Saved her, chump
swear to God the bitch should be a crisis counselor - she got u from the jump.
Dope.
Even in the 1-2 he’s straight ass, so fam stands no chance,
fool’s been dropping one bar at a time, mfer would even lose a limbo dance.
Cool.
an easy match, didn’t even wanna brawl w/ dude, he wack..
a due date’s all that he’ll beat, wouldn’t see Kill streak on a Call of Duty map.
Nothing special. Probably has been done before.

Spree reel In wins W/Hooks, no way this Lame hittin me
ya body'll be found in the River, Shad..By ya local members of Game & Fisheries
I dont get it.
Fuck W/Me? shiiit... I'll put the snub to ya cheek, kid
Really give you a sensodyne as soon as I'm done punchin ya teeth In
Cool.
A Flash of light from you is wack shit..damn faggot
we saw kid Destroyer Pic's...now we wont See you in champ matches
ok.
Wack bitch, U Wood box W/god, but I'll smack ya backwids
we'll remember U as down to earth.. as I bury you more FT than ya average casket
nah.
I punch Hoe fakes. no contenders, but U'll Fail again
but KNOW I'll fuck you up more than Bags swingin @ fags or sum Aliens
nah.
this hoe man be gettin snot box hits, this dope no man can see
My lines go Pow Durin sets.. so its nothing to bring your nose candy
Nah.

Schad was more consistent here. KS tried doing too much. It killed his concepts. Vote- Schadenfreude.

[Tic]

Idk I see it different I think Spree took it with Sensodyne. Lotb for me. Shad had the opener and that was kinda it. I've seen spreewell done on him before. I wasn't feeling either verse tbh, but I think Spree edged it here.