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02-21-2016, 10:41 AM
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Hush
02-21-2016, 08:39 PM
Aight Gluck bro

Hush
02-21-2016, 09:18 PM
Oh ur British right. Well ok mate you can get the metal
Couple shots split your t in half like u invited me over for a kettle
I ain't leaving til u stop breathing. I'm sending over lead
Then skate off ,I roll out when u get put to sleep that's a sofa bed
lift the biscuit over seas. Ain't that a krumpit to u lames and shit
play me And I'll movie peices in other counties like the game of Risk
This is ur nightmare. Took u under my wing but I'm ending ya life here
U the guy I rooted for so when your planted in the dirt I'll be right there
This pyrotechnics once u make ya entrance u get hit with the flame
U been Choking your whole career in the ring that's undertaker and Kane
And fuck whoever said I lost to Jackie 4/chan. I'd bar ur life away
Or Drive up and dump the cans in front of ur house. It's recycle day
this dudes a fsggot , his favorite flavor in the world is Vaseline
U can't hold a candle to me. But I will to u when ur covered in gasoline
An all my hammers got laser lights. I hold the pistol Low
hit ya block with that special beam cannon Like my name was piccolo

Lotto Smirk
02-24-2016, 02:39 PM
Will need ext

Lotto Smirk
02-26-2016, 03:07 AM
Won't be showing sorry hush keep that verse we can do this in BA another time?

Lotto Smirk
02-26-2016, 05:32 AM
u tired & worn out n it's poor now how u write w/ the pen
don't wanna see any hush flips unless it's cus u fell asleep at the wheel again
don't understand ya swag don't rate ya as top old head
just another average American this morons only the pefect example for a diode thread
u known for hitting trees, in a car or smoking that shit man
getting stoned'll be the death of you, rocks chuck'd at ur head like u a criminal of islam
I'm packed w/ 2 weapons so best believe ur falling too g
im squeezing w/ both triggers when I shoot u just do that in call of duty
Orc let u in cus he felt sorry for this spotty teen n his nerdy thing
When he said u had the skills for making the royale he ment ur only fit to work in burger king
u far from the best w/ text after the bal u was done son
hush setting an example w/ the league then it's never to let this faggot try n run one


Literally just key'd this we can get a proper battle soon just got a verse up so u can get votes so up to u if u accept it.

Larold
02-26-2016, 07:05 AM
Oh ur British right. Well ok mate you can get the metal
Couple shots split your t in half like u invited me over for a kettle
lol ok fag
I ain't leaving til u stop breathing. I'm sending over lead
Then skate off ,I roll out when u get put to sleep that's a sofa bed
this is "bro come on" line of the week material right here
lift the biscuit over seas. Ain't that a krumpit to u lames and shit
play me And I'll movie peices in other counties like the game of Risk
i wanted to like this because risk but movie pieces killed it for me
This is ur nightmare. Took u under my wing but I'm ending ya life here
U the guy I rooted for so when your planted in the dirt I'll be right there
flame emoji
This pyrotechnics once u make ya entrance u get hit with the flame
U been Choking your whole career in the ring that's undertaker and Kane
omfg fyeeee
And fuck whoever said I lost to Jackie 4/chan. I'd bar ur life away
Or Drive up and dump the cans in front of ur house. It's recycle day
this nigga said 4chan lmao...light bar but cool
this dudes a fsggot , his favorite flavor in the world is Vaseline
U can't hold a candle to me. But I will to u when ur covered in gasoline
filler
An all my hammers got laser lights. I hold the pistol Low
hit ya block with that special beam cannon Like my name was piccolo
ehhhhhhhhh nah

kettle, planted, choking, recycle day

Vs


u tired & worn out n it's poor now how u write w/ the pen
don't wanna see any hush flips unless it's cus u fell asleep at the wheel again
damn this was nice af
don't understand ya swag don't rate ya as top old head
just another average American this morons only the pefect example for a diode thread
nahhh
u known for hitting trees, in a car or smoking that shit man
getting stoned'll be the death of you, rocks chuck'd at ur head like u a criminal of islam
ok, could have been better
I'm packed w/ 2 weapons so best believe ur falling too g
im squeezing w/ both triggers when I shoot u just do that in call of duty
cod flips getting old but decent here
Orc let u in cus he felt sorry for this spotty teen n his nerdy thing
When he said u had the skills for making the royale he ment ur only fit to work in burger king
Alright, feelin it
u far from the best w/ text after the bal u was done son
hush setting an example w/ the league then it's never to let this faggot try n run one
meh

hush flips, royale

Hush flips got LOTB for me but Hush came more consistent and had more quotables. Lotto prob could have came better if he had more time or w/e

Vote: Hush

Pinot Grij
02-26-2016, 01:09 PM
Hush

Kettle line is good.
Sofa bed doesn't do anything for me.
Countries, not counties - spelling mistake takes away from a decent punch. I think someone else had a Risk line last week tho.
Rooted is good.
Choking line is dope af.
Recycling is dope.
Gasoline is dope.
I don't get the closer.

Nice hits - different attacks throughout.

Lotto

Hush flips is dope.
I come to expect a discussion forum bar from you every week - maybe switch it up - its getting predictable.
Islam line is good but can be worded a little more straightforward
That's the 4th Call of Duty line in the league so far, so its getting a little old.
Royale line is decent - "spotty teen and nerdy thing" is a bit weird tho.
Closer ok.

Vote -- Hush. Lotto was a rush job. Hush had a few solid haymakers. I liked the choke line the best.

Witty
02-26-2016, 08:54 PM
Oh ur British right. Well ok mate you can get the metal
Couple shots split your t in half like u invited me over for a kettle
Over for a kettle wouldn't be the correct phrase when speaking of English people having tea together, but cool anyway.
I ain't leaving til u stop breathing. I'm sending over lead
Then skate off ,I roll out when u get put to sleep that's a sofa bed
Not bad
lift the biscuit over seas. Ain't that a krumpit to u lames and shit
play me And I'll movie peices in other counties like the game of Risk
I'm assuming you just missed the 'r' here, this was dope
This is ur nightmare. Took u under my wing but I'm ending ya life here
U the guy I rooted for so when your planted in the dirt I'll be right there
cool
This pyrotechnics once u make ya entrance u get hit with the flame
U been Choking your whole career in the ring that's undertaker and Kane
this was nice
And fuck whoever said I lost to Jackie 4/chan. I'd bar ur life away
Or Drive up and dump the cans in front of ur house. It's recycle day
creative, dead @ jackie 4/chan
this dudes a fsggot , his favorite flavor in the world is Vaseline
U can't hold a candle to me. But I will to u when ur covered in gasoline
nah, not terrible, but kinda simple
An all my hammers got laser lights. I hold the pistol Low
hit ya block with that special beam cannon Like my name was piccolo
lol this was dope

vs

u tired & worn out n it's poor now how u write w/ the pen
don't wanna see any hush flips unless it's cus u fell asleep at the wheel again
awkward to me, but cool hit
don't understand ya swag don't rate ya as top old head
just another average American this morons only the pefect example for a diode thread
ehh, could have been a lot better tbh
u known for hitting trees, in a car or smoking that shit man
getting stoned'll be the death of you, rocks chuck'd at ur head like u a criminal of islam
i get the play on stoned from weed/stoned to death by rocks, but why are people throwing rocks? you didn't really tie that in to the punch, I thought this was a reach
I'm packed w/ 2 weapons so best believe ur falling too g
im squeezing w/ both triggers when I shoot u just do that in call of duty
cool
Orc let u in cus he felt sorry for this spotty teen n his nerdy thing
When he said u had the skills for making the royale he ment ur only fit to work in burger king
this was nice
u far from the best w/ text after the bal u was done son
hush setting an example w/ the league then it's never to let this faggot try n run one
ok

Hush got this, Lotto has posted better, and he did say it was rushed so props for showing, but Hush just out barred him here.

Vote - Hush

Saint
02-26-2016, 09:07 PM
Hush had a more solid verse..
Lotto had the opener a jab or two..
Hush had the opener, choking and a couple flips like the recycling line which is very url to make
But I almost fucked w/ that piccolo line lol
Lotto keyed as he said

Vote - Hush

Schadenfreude
02-27-2016, 07:54 AM
Risk, choke career, recycle day, closer

Opener, Islam crime, royale

Overall HUSH slipped passed, had Lotto actually wrote, probably would've gotten the upset.

Wanderer
02-27-2016, 07:17 PM
Oh ur British right. Well ok mate you can get the metal
Couple shots split your t in half like u invited me over for a kettle
Why are people saying this is decent? Definite miss. Doesn't make any sense.
I ain't leaving til u stop breathing. I'm sending over lead
Then skate off ,I roll out when u get put to sleep that's a sofa bed
Stretch but I'm feeling it
lift the biscuit over seas. Ain't that a krumpit to u lames and shit
play me And I'll movie peices in other counties like the game of Risk
Punch was ok but no, a biscuit is not a krumpit to us
This is ur nightmare. Took u under my wing but I'm ending ya life here
U the guy I rooted for so when your planted in the dirt I'll be right there
Nah. & I can't make there and here rhyme
This pyrotechnics once u make ya entrance u get hit with the flame
U been Choking your whole career in the ring that's undertaker and Kane
Ok
And fuck whoever said I lost to Jackie 4/chan. I'd bar ur life away
Or Drive up and dump the cans in front of ur house. It's recycle day
I guess
this dudes a fsggot , his favorite flavor in the world is Vaseline
U can't hold a candle to me. But I will to u when ur covered in gasoline
Nah
An all my hammers got laser lights. I hold the pistol Low
hit ya block with that special beam cannon Like my name was piccolo
Ok


Vs

u tired & worn out n it's poor now how u write w/ the pen
don't wanna see any hush flips unless it's cus u fell asleep at the wheel again
Dope
don't understand ya swag don't rate ya as top old head
just another average American this morons only the pefect example for a diode thread
Ok
u known for hitting trees, in a car or smoking that shit man
getting stoned'll be the death of you, rocks chuck'd at ur head like u a criminal of islam
Not feeling
I'm packed w/ 2 weapons so best believe ur falling too g
im squeezing w/ both triggers when I shoot u just do that in call of duty
No
Orc let u in cus he felt sorry for this spotty teen n his nerdy thing
When he said u had the skills for making the royale he ment ur only fit to work in burger king
I guess
u far from the best w/ text after the bal u was done son
hush setting an example w/ the league then it's never to let this faggot try n run one
not feeling


Literally just key'd this we can get a proper battle soon just got a verse up so u can get votes so up to u if u accept it.

This a tight one to call. Hush, I'm a fan of yours and you've usually got that heat man but your verse here was a lot of weird shit aimed at the fact he's British and although I knew where you were coming from with the tea/kettle & crumpit shit, the way they were worded just made no sense, speaking as a Brit. Lotto, your verse had some okish stuff and then LOTB with hush flips. This was pretty much even on misses to hits but out of the few hits there were, lotto takes the crown with Hush flips. Gotta go lotto

V/lotto

Blam Newton
02-28-2016, 10:31 AM
Oh ur British right. Well ok mate you can get the metal
Couple shots split your t in half like u invited me over for a kettle
Cool.
I ain't leaving til u stop breathing. I'm sending over lead
Then skate off ,I roll out when u get put to sleep that's a sofa bed
Not bad.
lift the biscuit over seas. Ain't that a krumpit to u lames and shit
play me And I'll movie peices in other counties like the game of Risk
Dope.
This is ur nightmare. Took u under my wing but I'm ending ya life here
U the guy I rooted for so when your planted in the dirt I'll be right there
Not really feeling this.
This pyrotechnics once u make ya entrance u get hit with the flame
U been Choking your whole career in the ring that's undertaker and Kane
Cool.
And fuck whoever said I lost to Jackie 4/chan. I'd bar ur life away
Or Drive up and dump the cans in front of ur house. It's recycle day
Dope.
this dudes a fsggot , his favorite flavor in the world is Vaseline
U can't hold a candle to me. But I will to u when ur covered in gasoline
Nothing special.
An all my hammers got laser lights. I hold the pistol Low
hit ya block with that special beam cannon Like my name was piccolo
Funny but not really hard hitting.

u tired & worn out n it's poor now how u write w/ the pen
don't wanna see any hush flips unless it's cus u fell asleep at the wheel again
Dope.
don't understand ya swag don't rate ya as top old head
just another average American this morons only the pefect example for a diode thread
Nice but couldve been tougher.
u known for hitting trees, in a car or smoking that shit man
getting stoned'll be the death of you, rocks chuck'd at ur head like u a criminal of islam
Same thing. wording was off.
I'm packed w/ 2 weapons so best believe ur falling too g
im squeezing w/ both triggers when I shoot u just do that in call of duty
Ok. Not bad.
Orc let u in cus he felt sorry for this spotty teen n his nerdy thing
When he said u had the skills for making the royale he ment ur only fit to work in burger king
dope.
u far from the best w/ text after the bal u was done son
hush setting an example w/ the league then it's never to let this faggot try n run one
Not bad.

Yeah. this was very close. Hush was solid but Lotto surprised me. Nothing really bad just wording issues and even those were pretty decent. Im going to go with Lotto because he had more stingers. Vote- Lotto.

Og smokinstein
02-28-2016, 11:02 AM
Oh ur British right. Well ok mate you can get the metal
Couple shots split your t in half like u invited me over for a kettle
That was a cool opener
I ain't leaving til u stop breathing. I'm sending over lead
Then skate off ,I roll out when u get put to sleep that's a sofa bed
That was str8
lift the biscuit over seas. Ain't that a krumpit to u lames and shit
play me And I'll movie peices in other counties like the game of Risk
Warming up..ok ok
This is ur nightmare. Took u under my wing but I'm ending ya life here
U the guy I rooted for so when your planted in the dirt I'll be right there
Wasn't feeling
This pyrotechnics once u make ya entrance u get hit with the flame
U been Choking your whole career in the ring that's undertaker and Kane
Dope
And fuck whoever said I lost to Jackie 4/chan. I'd bar ur life away
Or Drive up and dump the cans in front of ur house. It's recycle day
Wasn't feeling that
this dudes a fsggot , his favorite flavor in the world is Vaseline
U can't hold a candle to me. But I will to u when ur covered in gasoline
LMao..that imo
An all my hammers got laser lights. I hold the pistol Low
hit ya block with that special beam cannon Like my name was piccolo
cool closer could've worded it better.




u tired & worn out n it's poor now how u write w/ the pen
don't wanna see any hush flips unless it's cus u fell asleep at the wheel again
Clever imo
don't understand ya swag don't rate ya as top old head
just another average American this morons only the pefect example for a diode thread
didn't get it
u known for hitting trees, in a car or smoking that shit man
getting stoned'll be the death of you, rocks chuck'd at ur head like u a criminal of islam
that was cool.
I'm packed w/ 2 weapons so best believe ur falling too g
im squeezing w/ both triggers when I shoot u just do that in call of duty
weak
Orc let u in cus he felt sorry for this spotty teen n his nerdy thing
When he said u had the skills for making the royale he ment ur only fit to work in burger king
That was decent
u far from the best w/ text after the bal u was done son
hush setting an example w/ the league then it's never to let this faggot try n run one
weak

This was a str8 battle, it was tough to call tho.
both had good openers and some weak ass closers. But with that being said, I felt like hush mid verse was better.

Cred
02-28-2016, 02:47 PM
Opener was nice, i liked the rooted joint, undertaker/kane was dope, & i liked the recycle line too

vs

Hush flips was nice, stoned was dope bro, royale was light

This was a nice battle here. Both yall had two bangers, but hush brought more consistency wit his verse. Good read y'all

Vote - Hush

Tic
02-28-2016, 10:05 PM
Hush gets this with consistency and had some nice lines. Lotto had the opener which was fire. Other than that I wasn't feeling much.

Hush got it.