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Orc
02-29-2016, 07:06 AM
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Orc
03-02-2016, 11:51 AM
Glizzy

bruh

Glizzy
03-02-2016, 12:05 PM
Glizzy

bruh


Here

Orc
03-03-2016, 10:46 AM
12.



I knowww u think that lame shit is dope but it's basic & bogus
Trust Orc will put you in your place quicker than 10Senses chasing a Bonus
I hold Trophies Up cuz I come in & win... then I run it again
^You've never Lifted a single time in ya life. you're like Hush in the gym
I'll leave a wackkk dude wet. U don't got a planned move set,
It's foul.. ur idea of a Booby Trap is pushing ya chest togetha on Chatroulette
Orc'll graba a Heater or 2 &&& start sneaking on dude;
Then 'fuckn Pull behind ya back'. like when your bitch is Cheating on you
U think ur on that OVOsound swag but ur not known on the block
Alllll your boys call you ''PartyNextDoor''.. cuz it's what ur told when you knock
U got a fat slob girl. Lawd, stop it.. acting like that broad popping
been riding a Mammoth for yrs. you unlocked a FarCry trophy before copping

Glizzy
03-04-2016, 10:58 AM
Go back 2 Germany bitch, cuz u will Nazi this banana clip like u should
So when I yell a KKK, the ending result won't be ya head in a white hood
I'm throwing wanna be vets over bored, so enter my ship come on abroad
Cuz the choppers'll leave O,scars unattended 2 like blacks at the awards
Money moves my fate n bitch moves all u been doin as of late, trying 2 get a w
Saw I no showed against Newton....signed in n figure u'd take the same route 2
Whipped the glizzy out even Mrs.O know what's good so fuck what b say
Cuz after I Robertson 4 that green, send off 2 bucks n I ain't talkin bout the NBA
Slap this wanna be bitch quick, Orc name went backwards from the hits
So we've been seeing Cro,nus verses since back when he was on his bitting shit
W/ text dying ain't much material 4 u 2 recycle, so u Running Scared lookin sweat
U'd think he's Paul Walker searching high n low praying 2 God that he find the heat

Orc
03-04-2016, 11:03 AM
props for showing up

OPEN FOR VOTES

Hush
03-04-2016, 12:16 PM
12.



I knowww u think that lame shit is dope but it's basic & bogus
Trust Orc will put you in your place quicker than 10Senses chasing a Bonus
---don't get it
I hold Trophies Up cuz I come in & win... then I run it again
^You've never Lifted a single time in ya life. you're like Hush in the gym
---ok this is cool
I'll leave a wackkk dude wet. U don't got a planned move set,
It's foul.. ur idea of a Booby Trap is pushing ya chest togetha on Chat roulette
---punch is fire but wish u could of set it up with a relevant line
Orc'll graba a Heater or 2 &&& start sneaking on dude;
Then 'fuckn Pull behind ya back'. like when your bitch is Cheating on you
---kinda light but it's aiite. Like how u set this one up better
U think ur on that OVOsound swag but ur not known on the block
Alllll your boys call you ''PartyNextDoor''.. cuz it's what ur told i you knock
---this is fire
U got a fat slob girl. Lawd, stop it.. acting like that broad popping
been riding a Mammoth for yrs. you unlocked a FarCry trophy before copping
---I get it but it didn't land with much impact for me ni



Go back 2 Germany bitch, cuz u will Nazi this banana clip like u should
So when I yell a KKK, the ending result won't be ya head in a white hood
--- I don't get this. When u yell kkk what does that mean in relevance to a diss or something clever ?
I'm throwing wanna be vets over bored, so enter my ship come on abroad
Cuz the choppers'll leave O,scars unattended 2 like blacks at the awards
---this is clever. Wording is a bit messy but the concept is creative and cool
Money moves my fate n bitch moves all u been doin as of late, trying 2 get a w
Saw I no showed against Newton....signed in n figure u'd take the same route 2
---ok cool personal I guess but I find it kinda bland
Whipped the glizzy out even Mrs.O know what's good so fuck what b say
Cuz after I Robertson 4 that green, send off 2 bucks n I ain't talkin bout the NBA
---URL type bar. It is hard to make em land in txt I got what u doin but it's not so great when u read it. Would be better live
Slap this wanna be bitch quick, Orc name went backwards from the hits
So we've been seeing Cro,nus verses since back when he was on his bitting shit
---huh? Lol how long u been txting cuz if u know this there is no excuse for this line. Trash
W/ text dying ain't much material 4 u 2 recycle, so u Running Scared lookin sweat
U'd think he's Paul Walker searching high n low praying 2 God that he find the heat
---nah




Orc got it

King
03-04-2016, 04:16 PM
I hold Trophies Up cuz I come in & win... then I run it again
^You've never Lifted a single time in ya life. you're like Hush in the gym
I'll leave a wackkk dude wet. U don't got a planned move set,
It's foul.. ur idea of a Booby Trap is pushing ya chest togetha on Chatroulette
U think ur on that OVOsound swag but ur not known on the block
Alllll your boys call you ''PartyNextDoor''.. cuz it's what ur told when you knock

vs

I'm throwing wanna be vets over bored, so enter my ship come on abroad
Cuz the choppers'll leave O,scars unattended 2 like blacks at the awards

Orc got it. Lawd gotta shake a lil rust, tough draw for ya first battle homie.

Vote Orc

Saitama
03-04-2016, 04:19 PM
I have Orc here. First two were good to me. Wording and execution better.
Fresher concepts...

Glizzy had some wording and choppy execution. Concepts are there, just wasnt fluid, imo..

Vote orc

jilti
03-05-2016, 02:50 AM
I hold Trophies Up cuz I come in & win... then I run it again
^You've never Lifted a single time in ya life. you're like Hush in the gym
I'll leave a wackkk dude wet. U don't got a planned move set,
It's foul.. ur idea of a Booby Trap is pushing ya chest togetha on Chatroulette
Orc'll graba a Heater or 2 &&& start sneaking on dude;
Then 'fuckn Pull behind ya back'. like when your bitch is Cheating on you
U think ur on that OVOsound swag but ur not known on the block
Alllll your boys call you ''PartyNextDoor''.. cuz it's what ur told when you knock

Vs.

I'm throwing wanna be vets over bored, so enter my ship come on abroad
Cuz the choppers'll leave O,scars unattended 2 like blacks at the awards


V / orc

Junto
03-05-2016, 05:28 AM
I hold Trophies Up cuz I come in & win... then I run it again
^You've never Lifted a single time in ya life. you're like Hush in the gym
sound like a discussion post I missed. nice wording though & still hits
I'll leave a wackkk dude wet. U don't got a planned move set,
It's foul.. ur idea of a Booby Trap is pushing ya chest togetha on Chatroulette
cool
Orc'll graba a Heater or 2 &&& start sneaking on dude;
Then 'fuckn Pull behind ya back'. like when your bitch is Cheating on you
goon shit... I fuck wit it
U think ur on that OVOsound swag but ur not known on the block
Alllll your boys call you ''PartyNextDoor''.. cuz it's what ur told when you knock
nice

vs.

I'm throwing wanna be vets over bored, so enter my ship come on abroad
Cuz the choppers'll leave O,scars unattended 2 like blacks at the awards
good idea but don't hit that hard since O-scars is a different sound to it
Whipped the glizzy out even Mrs.O know what's good so fuck what b say
Cuz after I Robertson 4 that green, send off 2 bucks n I ain't talkin bout the NBA
nice concept... woulda worked better wit Andre Rob her son not rob hurt son

Glizzy got some concepts but missin on a few here...
opener and Cro, nus I wasn't feelin
Orc came consistent. Pull behind ya back and partynextdoor was good

V/ Orc

sral
03-05-2016, 09:16 AM
Orc got it

better wording. 10senses and Hush at the gym were both nice.. liked he party next door shit too

liked Glizzys Robertson line but HATED THE FUCK out that pause between Oscars/O scars yo! That's a huge no no for me personally


Orc with the win

Useless
03-05-2016, 10:17 AM
I knowww u think that lame shit is dope but it's basic & bogus
Trust Orc will put you in your place quicker than 10Senses chasing a Bonus

This line is fire lol


Orc got it, he had 2 or 3 good lines and only like one miss. Other dude had some good attempts but all his lines felt off. With work on his wording he could be aite cuz some of his concepts were good. That O scars line coulda been nice.


V. Orc

sral
03-05-2016, 11:01 AM
O SCARS IS TERRIBLE

FUCK OFF

Allen Knight
03-06-2016, 04:14 AM
I hold Trophies Up cuz I come in & win... then I run it again
^You've never Lifted a single time in ya life. you're like Hush in the gym
I'll leave a wackkk dude wet. U don't got a planned move set,
It's foul.. ur idea of a Booby Trap is pushing ya chest togetha on Chatroulette
U think ur on that OVOsound swag but ur not known on the block
Alllll your boys call you ''PartyNextDoor''.. cuz it's what ur told when you knock


Vs


Money moves my fate n bitch moves all u been doin as of late, trying 2 get a w
Saw I no showed against Newton....signed in n figure u'd take the same route 2


V/orc, i think he was way more consistent here he had the lotb w/ that nextdoor jawn shit was fire...
glizzy has concepts tbh but his wording is killing them from
hittin to wordy...but that newton jawn wass tough, props to both.