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Geno
02-29-2016, 07:46 PM
The anti christian -catholic, will twist ya cap in different aspects
Leonardo da vinci status, i bleed uncut heroin, mixed with acids
Dark schoolastics, madness, intellect of the beast, molecular deep
Baphomet in the streets, horns on my head are essentially steep
In deceit, i bring death n decay, brain waves a conceptual maze
Dove into hell like its seconds away, as i free fell heavens restraint
Hit the ground, intense is the pain, as my wings just melt in the rain
Turn feathers, bones and chromosones into cellular waves
became seltzer, i drank, until my cup runeth under the brim
S'when i sent cupid to hunt for a bitch, you cant commit lovelier sins
had to covet the wench, birthed adam n eve with the ugliest pig
She fell in love with the dick, its thick, demon like in the sack
Swag, i asked forgiveness, and found out jesus christ was a fag
Back then, was no license for that, it wasnt righteous at all
Was asked to accept him as dad, punched him right in the jaws
My reflexes lighting for frauds, since then i fought for my goals
Taught you to sin hard, and roll with no regard for your souls
Until the bible sold garbage to folks, confusing your ass
i made music, like black sabath, to view a more beautiful path
until the dumb fuck chewed on a bat, i aint tell him to do it, relax
Cant argue with the facts, some people are to stupid for math

Mr. J
02-29-2016, 08:09 PM
Better hand me the reins bruh

Geno
03-01-2016, 04:02 PM
What you mean bredren?

Alice White
03-01-2016, 06:55 PM
I really liked the tone of this. Flow-wise, I thought it was quite good, very smooth with a quite nice usage of multis. This was really entertaining, and you had several interesting metaphors as well as some great imagery in this, I also really liked the references, such as in the Baphomet and cupid lines. I love the closing line, a rather clever and fittingly satirical approach. Interesting work.

Mr. J
03-02-2016, 01:53 AM
What you mean bredren?

Jesus take the wheel...


This was more on point than that other piece you had going though bruh
I really enjoyed the vibe you put out there & some of the lyricism is slick

S'when i sent cupid to hunt for a bitch, you cant commit lovelier sins
had to covet the wench, birthed adam n eve with the ugliest pig
^^^^

That was a cool concept but I felt kind of weird with the use of pig...
perhaps it has something to do with the religion based concept you were going for
either way I thought this was more cohesive & it makes me want to punch a motherfucker
on a sidenote...do not strive to be who you were yesterday Geno...
growth is what makes us stronger as writers & it is time to look forward to a more glorious day.
but this style makes me want to revive the OM to its heyday

Geno
03-02-2016, 03:55 PM
PerhPs we shall old boy. Im feeling pretty good about our beautiful OM as of late. And u have a lot to do with this. How woulx u like to be crowned mod as well as alreay being clowned prince? I can make this happen Mr. J
If any deserves it its u

Mr. J
03-02-2016, 04:22 PM
I wouldnt mind helping out around here bruh..











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Geno
03-04-2016, 09:39 AM
Cool. Will flex my weight. Holla soon

Witty
03-05-2016, 08:04 PM
This was dope.