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Allen Knight
03-06-2016, 07:18 PM
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Pinot Grij Hush

Pinot Grij
03-06-2016, 11:06 PM
20.

Hush
03-06-2016, 11:16 PM
Yup

Hush
03-10-2016, 09:05 PM
Ext can't get in the mjndstste today

Pinot Grij
03-10-2016, 09:38 PM
Ok bro

Pinot Grij
03-10-2016, 09:39 PM
Make this a double ext cuz I don't want Hush gettin -2

Hush
03-12-2016, 12:16 AM
U can't talk gun bars bro. U grew up way too rural
One shot put ur face on the wall. They can trace it for ur RIP mural
Ya girl a hoe. Vag got no walls, when u in it u feel the grime
That pussy been gone viral way before it was hit for the millionth time
If I pull up know everyone in my crew shottas
Fly solo or I got a beast riding shotgun like Chewbacca
Act dumb and the Mac drum. Dead him for respect
No special olympics play Retarded and get this metal to ya neck
U got the swag of a fag. Type to bejewel ya handgun
style and get a round on ya head. U the type to rock a man bun
How u and ya bro both txted. Homie that ain't living
U ain't the best in the nbl or at ur dinner table at thanksgiving
ranking the battlers in ya fam the polls gonna sit firm
Everyone got Kung fu grip over pulse like a Indian wrist burn
Silencer on the grip. Let it pop and make no commotion
shell to the side of ya face let's see if you can hear the ocean
Buck shot from the shotty barrel u can die where u lay
All the small holes in u got u looking like a vampire buffet

Pinot Grij
03-12-2016, 02:48 AM
All that shit you say is embarrassing, stop forcing that junk
If you end up with ur foot in ur mouth it’s so I could stuff ur corpse in the trunk
My goons real ruthless, so don’t go playin’ with the champ
I got a couple dogs that’ll split ya noodle like Lady and the Tramp
I put the hit out with my crew, they got intentions to dead ya, fam
They like homeless dudes, they ain’t gettin’ paid unless they returnin’ empty cans
Get a fucking job! You live at home cuz ya unemployed so just face it
That new Rihanna hook sounds like ya mom yellin’ at you in the basement
When ya girl heard my gun bars, she let me and the homey roll thru in her puss
I told her I got a Desert Eagle, I guess this bird in the hand is worth two in her bush
And you been munchin’ that box! Fuck that – Ionno where that whore been
But I’m Gladiator, cuz I gave it the thumbs down and just stuck my sword in
You spend ya whole life on the boards and ya lines is all stank
I’ll put a hole through this poster like I was escapin’ from Shawshank
You a internet pussy, got no place amongst violent things
Watch me hold this cat up like that scene from the Lion King
Thinkin’ your shit’s hot – it ain’t a secret you suck, buddy
People would pay for you to shut the fuck up if they sayin’ Hush Money

Og smokinstein
03-12-2016, 10:08 AM
U can't talk gun bars bro. U grew up way too rural
One shot put ur face on the wall. They can trace it for ur RIP mural
Cool
Ya girl a hoe. Vag got no walls, when u in it u feel the grime
That pussy been gone viral way before it was hit for the millionth time
lmao dope
If I pull up know everyone in my crew shottas
Fly solo or I got a beast riding shotgun like Chewbacca
dope..i was thinking of a Chewbacca bar
Act dumb and the Mac drum. Dead him for respect
No special olympics play Retarded and get this metal to ya neck
lite
U got the swag of a fag. Type to bejewel ya handgun
style and get a round on ya head. U the type to rock a man bun
ok.. bar more funny, than dope
How u and ya bro both txted. Homie that ain't living
U ain't the best in the nbl or at ur dinner table at thanksgiving
Dope
ranking the battlers in ya fam the polls gonna sit firm
Everyone got Kung fu grip over pulse like a Indian wrist burn
dope
Silencer on the grip. Let it pop and make no commotion
shell to the side of ya face let's see if you can hear the ocean
that was aite..
Buck shot from the shotty barrel u can die where u lay
All the small holes in u got u looking like a vampire buffet
ehh..




All that shit you say is embarrassing, stop forcing that junk
If you end up with ur foot in ur mouth it’s so I could stuff ur corpse in the trunk
That was mean..fire opener imo
My goons real ruthless, so don’t go playin’ with the champ
I got a couple dogs that’ll split ya noodle like Lady and the Tramp
I heard a smililar bar from someone..cant remember who tho
I put the hit out with my crew, they got intentions to dead ya, fam
They like homeless dudes, they ain’t gettin’ paid unless they returnin’ empty cans
That was cool..i liked
Get a fucking job! You live at home cuz ya unemployed so just face it
That new Rihanna hook sounds like ya mom yellin’ at you in the basement
Work work work work work...lmao dope shit
When ya girl heard my gun bars, she let me and the homey roll thru in her puss
I told her I got a Desert Eagle, I guess this bird in the hand is worth two in her bush
lite imo
And you been munchin’ that box! Fuck that – Ionno where that whore been
But I’m Gladiator, cuz I gave it the thumbs down and just stuck my sword in
ok
You spend ya whole life on the boards and ya lines is all stank
I’ll put a hole through this poster like I was escapin’ from Shawshank
dope
You a internet pussy, got no place amongst violent things
Watch me hold this cat up like that scene from the Lion King
ehh
Thinkin’ your shit’s hot – it ain’t a secret you suck, buddy
People would pay for you to shut the fuck up if they sayin’ Hush Money
slick

This was one of the dopest battles I read since ive been here.
This was tough af to judge,i read this shit 4 times.
But I gotta give it to pinot..

The battle was even, for the most part. Both guys used some played material.
Also both guys had some low points.

But imo the openers, is what separated this battle .

Hush had cool opener, but wasn't stronger than his opponent

SHECK WES
03-12-2016, 10:50 AM
U can't talk gun bars bro. U grew up way too rural
One shot put ur face on the wall. They can trace it for ur RIP mural
real light, not feelin
Ya girl a hoe. Vag got no walls, when u in it u feel the grime
That pussy been gone viral way before it was hit for the millionth time
good shit
If I pull up know everyone in my crew shottas
Fly solo or I got a beast riding shotgun like Chewbacca
alright, light but works
Act dumb and the Mac drum. Dead him for respect
No special olympics play Retarded and get this metal to ya neck
concept played but decent flip
U got the swag of a fag. Type to bejewel ya handgun
style and get a round on ya head. U the type to rock a man bun
alright
How u and ya bro both txted. Homie that ain't living
U ain't the best in the nbl or at ur dinner table at thanksgiving
nah
ranking the battlers in ya fam the polls gonna sit firm
Everyone got Kung fu grip over pulse like a Indian wrist burn
alright
Silencer on the grip. Let it pop and make no commotion
shell to the side of ya face let's see if you can hear the ocean
lawd this was dope, I liked this
Buck shot from the shotty barrel u can die where u lay
All the small holes in u got u looking like a vampire buffet
lol nah

Vs



All that shit you say is embarrassing, stop forcing that junk
If you end up with ur foot in ur mouth it’s so I could stuff ur corpse in the trunk
alright
My goons real ruthless, so don’t go playin’ with the champ
I got a couple dogs that’ll split ya noodle like Lady and the Tramp
this was cool
I put the hit out with my crew, they got intentions to dead ya, fam
They like homeless dudes, they ain’t gettin’ paid unless they returnin’ empty cans
some might like this and I almost did but it didn't make complete sense for me. I guess it was a bit forced for me. Creative concept but yeah forced
Get a fucking job! You live at home cuz ya unemployed so just face it
That new Rihanna hook sounds like ya mom yellin’ at you in the basement
nah
When ya girl heard my gun bars, she let me and the homey roll thru in her puss
I told her I got a Desert Eagle, I guess this bird in the hand is worth two in her bush
fire
And you been munchin’ that box! Fuck that – Ionno where that whore been
But I’m Gladiator, cuz I gave it the thumbs down and just stuck my sword in
nah
You spend ya whole life on the boards and ya lines is all stank
I’ll put a hole through this poster like I was escapin’ from Shawshank
this is ok
You a internet pussy, got no place amongst violent things
Watch me hold this cat up like that scene from the Lion King
light but decent
Thinkin’ your shit’s hot – it ain’t a secret you suck, buddy
People would pay for you to shut the fuck up if they sayin’ Hush Money
meh not feelin this much, I guess decent at best


I got Hush edging this 5-4 with LOTB

Vote Hush

jilti
03-12-2016, 10:50 AM
U can't talk gun bars bro. U grew up way too rural
One shot put ur face on the wall. They can trace it for ur RIP mural
^wasnt a miss but wasnt a quotable either
Ya girl a hoe. Vag got no walls, when u in it u feel the grime
That pussy been gone viral way before it was hit for the millionth time
^cool
If I pull up know everyone in my crew shottas
Fly solo or I got a beast riding shotgun like Chewbacca
^ok
Act dumb and the Mac drum. Dead him for respect
No special olympics play Retarded and get this metal to ya neck
^lol
U got the swag of a fag. Type to bejewel ya handgun
style and get a round on ya head. U the type to rock a man bun
^cool
How u and ya bro both txted. Homie that ain't living
U ain't the best in the nbl or at ur dinner table at thanksgiving
^ok
ranking the battlers in ya fam the polls gonna sit firm
Everyone got Kung fu grip over pulse like a Indian wrist burn
^nice
Silencer on the grip. Let it pop and make no commotion
shell to the side of ya face let's see if you can hear the ocean
^nice
Buck shot from the shotty barrel u can die where u lay
All the small holes in u got u looking like a vampire buffet
^blah


Vs


All that shit you say is embarrassing, stop forcing that junk
If you end up with ur foot in ur mouth it’s so I could stuff ucorpse in the trunk
^dope
My goons real ruthless, so don’t go playin’ with the champ
I got a couple dogs that’ll split ya noodle like Lady and the Tramp
^danny myers used that bar against charlie clips
I put the hit out with my crew, they got intentions to dead ya, fam
They like homeless dudes, they ain’t gettin’ paid unless they returnin’ empty cans
^lmao dope
Get a fucking job! You live at home cuz ya unemployed so just face it
That new Rihanna hook sounds like ya mom yellin’ at you in the basement
^filler
When ya girl heard my gun bars, she let me and the homey roll thru in her puss
I told her I got a Desert Eagle, I guess this bird in the hand is worth two in her bush
^blah
And you been munchin’ that box! Fuck that – Ionno where that whore been
But I’m Gladiator, cuz I gave it the thumbs down and just stuck my sword in
^blah
You spend ya whole life on the boards and ya lines is all stank
I’ll put a hole through this poster like I was escapin’ from Shawshank
^cool
You a internet pussy, got no place amongst violent things
Watch me hold this cat up like that scene from the Lion King
^sorta
Thinkin’ your shit’s hot – it ain’t a secret you suck, buddy
People would pay for you to shut the fuck up if they sayin’ Hush Money
^seen that bar used against hush before


Pinot had the best 2 bars of the entire battle but hush had consistency on his side

V/ Hush

ill nik-A
03-12-2016, 11:13 AM
Shell bar is bonkers

Dope battle

Schadenfreude
03-12-2016, 05:52 PM
Chewbacca, Special Olympics, Man bun, Thanksgiving & Shell/ocean.
Sick drop as usual, a couple misses & more personals would be dope, but brazy bars nonetheless.

Lady in the Tramp, Returning cans, Rih Rih, Eagle & Shawshank.
Nice verse, some of the concepts read as forced, simpler wording would help. But mostly the punches landed well.

Overall HUSH just hit heavier, though PG's dope & had a great run.

Saint
03-12-2016, 06:28 PM
U can't talk gun bars bro. U grew up way too rural
One shot put ur face on the wall. They can trace it for ur RIP mural
Ya girl a hoe. Vag got no walls, when u in it u feel the grime
That pussy been gone viral way before it was hit for the millionth time
If I pull up know everyone in my crew shottas
Fly solo or I got a beast riding shotgun like Chewbacca

How u and ya bro both txted. Homie that ain't living
U ain't the best in the nbl or at ur dinner table at thanksgiving
Silencer on the grip. Let it pop and make no commotion
shell to the side of ya face let's see if you can hear the ocean

vs

All that shit you say is embarrassing, stop forcing that junk
If you end up with ur foot in ur mouth it’s so I could stuff ur corpse in the trunk
I put the hit out with my crew, they got intentions to dead ya, fam
They like homeless dudes, they ain’t gettin’ paid unless they returnin’ empty cans
Get a fucking job! You live at home cuz ya unemployed so just face it
That new Rihanna hook sounds like ya mom yellin’ at you in the basement
You spend ya whole life on the boards and ya lines is all stank
I’ll put a hole through this poster like I was escapin’ from Shawshank

Thinkin’ your shit’s hot – it ain’t a secret you suck, buddy
People would pay for you to shut the fuck up if they sayin’ Hush Money
^ played, but decent flip..

this was close... both had some lines I wasn't feeling and some played ideas.
I like the chewbacca line and shell to ear was cool..
Pinots opener was raw and that rhianna line was a cool personal..
Both had some gun lines ai seen like lady and the tramp..
Hush closer didnt do much for me...kung personals could've been slightly better...
Pinot lost steam somewhat near the end, wasnt feeling that lion king line or gladiator ones..

But overall I'm edging it to Hush

e11even
03-13-2016, 01:31 AM
U can't talk gun bars bro. U grew up way too rural
One shot put ur face on the wall. They can trace it for ur RIP mural
Damn
Ya girl a hoe. Vag got no walls, when u in it u feel the grime
That pussy been gone viral way before it was hit for the millionth time
Lol.
If I pull up know everyone in my crew shottas
Fly solo or I got a beast riding shotgun like Chewbacca
Heard this one before
Act dumb and the Mac drum. Dead him for respect
No special olympics play Retarded and get this metal to ya neck
so-so
U got the swag of a fag. Type to bejewel ya handgun
style and get a round on ya head. U the type to rock a man bun
Lol
How u and ya bro both txted. Homie that ain't living
U ain't the best in the nbl or at ur dinner table at thanksgiving
Lol. Nice
ranking the battlers in ya fam the polls gonna sit firm
Everyone got Kung fu grip over pulse like a Indian wrist burn
Lol, clever
Silencer on the grip. Let it pop and make no commotion
shell to the side of ya face let's see if you can hear the ocean
Lol
Buck shot from the shotty barrel u can die where u lay
All the small holes in u got u looking like a vampire buffet
Nice

All that shit you say is embarrassing, stop forcing that junk
If you end up with ur foot in ur mouth it’s so I could stuff ur corpse in the trunk
Lmao. Nice opener
My goons real ruthless, so don’t go playin’ with the champ
I got a couple dogs that’ll split ya noodle like Lady and the Tramp
Nice
I put the hit out with my crew, they got intentions to dead ya, fam
They like homeless dudes, they ain’t gettin’ paid unless they returnin’ empty cans
Damn
Get a fucking job! You live at home cuz ya unemployed so just face it
That new Rihanna hook sounds like ya mom yellin’ at you in the basement
Lmaaaooo
When ya girl heard my gun bars, she let me and the homey roll thru in her puss
I told her I got a Desert Eagle, I guess this bird in the hand is worth two in her bush
Wow.
And you been munchin’ that box! Fuck that – Ionno where that whore been
But I’m Gladiator, cuz I gave it the thumbs down and just stuck my sword in
Lol. Harsh.
You spend ya whole life on the boards and ya lines is all stank
I’ll put a hole through this poster like I was escapin’ from Shawshank
Lol
You a internet pussy, got no place amongst violent things
Watch me hold this cat up like that scene from the Lion King
So-so
Thinkin’ your shit’s hot – it ain’t a secret you suck, buddy
People would pay for you to shut the fuck up if they sayin’ Hush Money
Dope finisher

damn. Good battle MVGT pinot. That fool is lit.

Allen Knight
03-13-2016, 04:55 PM
Ya girl a hoe. Vag got no walls, when u in it u feel the grime
That pussy been gone viral way before it was hit for the millionth time
U got the swag of a fag. Type to bejewel ya handgun
style and get a round on ya head. U the type to rock a man bun
How u and ya bro both txted. Homie that ain't living
U ain't the best in the nbl or at ur dinner table at thanksgiving
ranking the battlers in ya fam the polls gonna sit firm
Everyone got Kung fu grip over pulse like a Indian wrist burn




Vs


All that shit you say is embarrassing, stop forcing that junk
If you end up with ur foot in ur mouth it’s so I could stuff ur corpse in the trunk
I put the hit out with my crew, they got intentions to dead ya, fam
They like homeless dudes, they ain’t gettin’ paid unless they returnin’ empty can
When ya girl heard my gun bars, she let me and the homey roll thru in her puss
I told her I got a Desert Eagle, I guess this bird in the hand is worth two in her bush
You spend ya whole life on the boards and ya lines is all stank
I’ll put a hole through this poster like I was escapin’ from Shawshank

V/Hush, damn this was close as fuck both had fire an i only think hush
won for lotb...tied in quotes. coulda quoted the lady an tramp line but alien did that jawn an ur flip isnt really different.
but shawshank line was fire, this can go either way, props to both.

JShazo
03-13-2016, 06:20 PM
Pretty neck n neck.. hush just had a couple bars I was feeling more. So edged in his favor

Vote hush

sral
03-14-2016, 08:31 AM
If I pull up know everyone in my crew shottas
Fly solo or I got a beast riding shotgun like Chewbacca
How u and ya bro both txted. Homie that ain't living
U ain't the best in the nbl or at ur dinner table at thanksgiving
ranking the battlers in ya fam the polls gonna sit firm
Everyone got Kung fu grip over pulse like a Indian wrist burn
Silencer on the grip. Let it pop and make no commotion
shell to the side of ya face let's see if you can hear the ocean


vs


I put the hit out with my crew, they got intentions to dead ya, fam
They like homeless dudes, they ain’t gettin’ paid unless they returnin’ empty cans
Get a fucking job! You live at home cuz ya unemployed so just face it
That new Rihanna hook sounds like ya mom yellin’ at you in the basement
And you been munchin’ that box! Fuck that – Ionno where that whore been
But I’m Gladiator, cuz I gave it the thumbs down and just stuck my sword in
You spend ya whole life on the boards and ya lines is all stank
I’ll put a hole through this poster like I was escapin’ from Shawshank


I've got Hush edging it slightly, both had some played shit, I've seen Knux or ALIEN drop a Lady in the Tramp line previously so that didn't hit as hard to me. I could have maybe quoted Hush manbun shit because it was pretty funny it just didn't hit as hard as others here. The indian burn was nice and that shell to your face shit was on point like a motherfucker, it's hard to look past that... Shawshank from Pinot was dope, I liked the Gladiator line too. Close battle. I've got Hush edging it out though.

Respect.