Cable 0-0 Vs Texcellence 0-0 - (Cable wins)

[Allen Knight]

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Cable Texcellence

[Cable]

here, how many you wanna go man?

[Texcellence]

here, how many you wanna go man?

12?

[Cable]

12?

thats good with me, i'll be done soon

[Texcellence]

thats good with me, i'll be done soon

Cool

[Texcellence]

I'm currently on the road, just passing stone henge
and I can't take you serious,
when your purpose is to be plugged in at both ends
i nearly no showed, see my laptop battery's unstable
because I packed the plug but as always, forgot the cable
i damage chicks, teeth constantly snag on my dick
and Cable damages chicks when they hang off a bridge
table, able, label, don't think I'm desperate dude
just thought I'd list of a few things as relevant as you
we ALL know you suck Tex, you haven't got to pretend
shit! started dissing myself because I forgot you again
my laptop is near it's end, this verse contained no lies
But I was confident I could beat you before my battery....


*stone henge is in England. I am from England. I travel for work.

Links to follow.

[Cable]

u dont want a gun war pussy, dont doubt my shotty
shells like rogue once they touch ya skin it'll snatch the life out ur body
ya dad avoids ur moms nasty bush, actions to swerve the clit
pussy got so much furlough he took a leave of absence from workin it
a marksmen like deadshot, ruger clappin'em fast
ima beast w/ the iron, hollows i centaur ur abdomen in half
ur dream girls a hoe, dont believe the sluts lies
that ur chick? budwieser ass always gettin trained out by drunk guys
all u do's flip the archives, i'll leave this a fuckin mess
i binaca fag out like u before but u'll get killed for spittin nuthin fresh
no one even knows u exist, nbl should boot this wack clown
bars dishonored 2 many sites & made u look like a shadow in the background

[Schadenfreude]

Forgot Cable
Super duper old keystyle style of punching, would've been dope had u used some updated, more cleverly constructed flips. Because your verse mostly read as lazy and/or too straight-forward.

Opener, furlough & Budweiser
Decent verse, forced a good portion of yo wordplay, but otherwise u offered some nice material through out.

Overall CABLE won this one handedly, Tex just needs to modernize..lol, his punch style & he's be aight.

[SHECK WES]

I'm currently on the road, just passing stone henge
and I can't take you serious,
when your purpose is to be plugged in at both ends
setup was kind of irrelevant, but this ended decent
i nearly no showed, see my laptop battery's unstable
because I packed the plug but as always, forgot the cable
meh, execution took away from the potential of this
i damage chicks, teeth constantly snag on my dick
and Cable damages chicks when they hang off a bridge
nah lol
table, able, label, don't think I'm desperate dude
just thought I'd list of a few things as relevant as you
nah again
we ALL know you suck Tex, you haven't got to pretend
shit! started dissing myself because I forgot you again
lmao nah
my laptop is near it's end, this verse contained no lies
But I was confident I could beat you before my battery....
lol nah

Like schaud said, you have an old style of texting. Reminds me of the 05-06 days. You had one I liked but the rest was bland and didn't hit.


Vs


u dont want a gun war pussy, dont doubt my shotty
shells like rogue once they touch ya skin it'll snatch the life out ur body
cool
ya dad avoids ur moms nasty bush, actions to swerve the clit
pussy got so much furlough he took a leave of absence from workin it
furlough is forced, decent here
a marksmen like deadshot, ruger clappin'em fast
ima beast w/ the iron, hollows i centaur ur abdomen in half
ok
ur dream girls a hoe, dont believe the sluts lies
that ur chick? budwieser ass always gettin trained out by drunk guys
haha nice
all u do's flip the archives, i'll leave this a fuckin mess
i binaca fag out like u before but u'll get killed for spittin nuthin fresh
didnt like
no one even knows u exist, nbl should boot this wack clown
bars dishonored 2 many sites & made u look like a shadow in the background
nahh

You had some good shit in here. Def an alias. Joog? Anyways nice little verse for the most part, kind of fell off at the end though.

Vote cable

[Og smokinstein]

This battle was cool, ima have to give it cable tho. Simply cause he had more attempts at punches.

Tex verse was funny but rushed, and not too much effort.

[jilti]

Cable had some forced punches, some landed tho
Texcellence told a story but not really punches

V/ cable

[JShazo]

Cable overall just better. May break down more later... vote cable

[e11even]

I'm currently on the road, just passing stone henge
and I can't take you serious,
when your purpose is to be plugged in at both ends
This could have been worked into a harsher punch. Ok. No setup tho.
i nearly no showed, see my laptop battery's unstable
because I packed the plug but as always, forgot the cable
Eh.
i damage chicks, teeth constantly snag on my dick
and Cable damages chicks when they hang off a bridge
So-so, but teeth snagging tho?
table, able, label, don't think I'm desperate dude
just thought I'd list of a few things as relevant as you
nope.
we ALL know you suck Tex, you haven't got to pretend
shit! started dissing myself because I forgot you again
eh.
my laptop is near it's end, this verse contained no lies
But I was confident I could beat you before my battery....
Ended like a topical = no.


*stone henge is in England. I am from England. I travel for work.

Links to follow.

u dont want a gun war pussy, dont doubt my shotty
shells like rogue once they touch ya skin it'll snatch the life out ur body
So-so.
ya dad avoids ur moms nasty bush, actions to swerve the clit
pussy got so much furlough he took a leave of absence from workin it
Lol
a marksmen like deadshot, ruger clappin'em fast
ima beast w/ the iron, hollows i centaur ur abdomen in half
Nice
ur dream girls a hoe, dont believe the sluts lies
that ur chick? budwieser ass always gettin trained out by drunk guys
dope
all u do's flip the archives, i'll leave this a fuckin mess
i binaca fag out like u before but u'll get killed for spittin nuthin fresh
Not digging this one
no one even knows u exist, nbl should boot this wack clown
bars dishonored 2 many sites & made u look like a shadow in the background
Not feeling this one.

Tex had a decent opening punch. The rest kinda dragged. Cable had a better structure and hit more. Not too many harsh punches though. MVGT Cable for the overall better verse.