Championship Match: Hush 5-1 vs Strange 4-0 - Hush wins

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Hush Strange

[Hush]

Where you get the novel idea to name yaself after a Batman villian ?


Lol
Check

[King]

The interwebs

Check

[Hush]

Aim at ya brain. Last thing u hears the lead banging
Nickname the 40 shame shit a leave your head hanging
This chubby white guy log online and turn thug txter
Lift guns? Only thing dangerous Fatty raise is his blood pressure
It's nothing to let off the glock then tuck it hot
Act of bravery. one shot to show how much guts he got
Nigga we ain't rivals. U copy my blueprint I'm damn near ur idol
I give him a a buck 50 then tell him turn the other cheek. I'm the bible
I go beast. You just obese. Gluttony is the bane of This sinner
U got a eating disorder called desert always before dinner
Wana be a batman villian just like me now that you ain't King
We equal the day wrangler jeans an wrangler jeep are the same thing
On the other site u was top dog. Here u just fail
On rb u was the big fish and offline u always be considered a whale
kill ur whole family and never snitch. Tell the judge that my gat pop
give a fuck about a lower case they can put my sentence on caps lock
U ain't been thru the shit that I ride thru. Pistol beside u
For chicken we Bucket out the window this the kfc drive thru
Even ya chick say Ima marksmen she know I hit the spot
Long dick a thot. Aim and spray it's 3some head. Split the top

[King]

We similar but not the same. I got premo, u puffin some reg
I roll on fakes w/ the heat, He trippin on sugar pills covered in sweat
Been streakin. but if he think this politics as usual then son batty
He's gettin stomped n tossed the fuck out, this politics at a Trump rally
I kill wack rapper nerds. Faggot we can take it past the words
U got two choices n neither good, battlin me gets u hurt bad or worse
We know he dont duck, he's too short, but watch this guy hide
When I raise arms u'll see the running start like I offered him a high five
Ya whip prolly 4 colors. I bet u smoke dog shit n get rocked son
Short spanish stoner w/ a 'stache? U'll be cheech n chongin the shotgun
Real recognize real, s'why ya new style started losin u respect
My gun's money, I never miss.Your gun's bitcoin, u only use it on the net
David vs Goliath w/ no slingshot. The odds are lookin poor kid
This lil geek 'bout 5'4, so I'd bet 3 To 1 my fire hits launch him into orbit
This kid is trash. Shots hit em in the mouth, cut his lip in half
U'll see me split his 'stache like the crew hit em for everything he has
n If u hit on dimes ur just spinnin wheels, short aint attractive
Halfling bastard, if u peel off a skrrt it's cuz u saw me comin n gassed it
He 30 still actin 16. Life passed em by n he front like it dont hurt
Hush in his 2nd childhood, too bad this one dont come w/ a growth spurt

[El Muffin]

Bored at work.

If it's permitted ...

Here

Hush

Opener was cool. Clean execution..oddly enough never heard of that angle . Thought it was fresh
Fatty raise is a clean compact flip on a really old concept . OK bar I suppose
Bible was aight
Gone @ desert line tho . Lol that would get some laughs in a crowd ..IMHO
Wrangler was more snf ish but I'm fucking w/ it coz thus far it fits the verse ur putting out . Under closer inspection wasn't much there but on to the next
Whale eh a
Caps lock sheeesh . That's a bar for a track fuck u doing
Chicken bucket was cleaaan
Closer was nuttts . Something about the aim and spray it's 3some head seemed clunky but split the top/ sharing dutiesfellatio angle was nice

Good shjt hush u barring can't front


King

Open. Mmm iono ..the roll on fakes w/ the heat sugar pill link was on some jiggly puff shit iono
Trump was eh to me
Bad to worse was clean af but kinda light imo
Love running start. Loved how you tweaked the latter phrase ..evocative
Cheech n chong was creative
Bitcoin was cool
The launch scheme was cute . No homo . Thought that was an odd but refreshing approach on a gunbar
The second stache bar was prolly a bad idea. Trouble is I liked this one more than the previous ..unfortunately part of me is like bro but u just used a stache play
Skirt was fucking fire
Closer came off ass to me

I think I have it tied ? Ionoo lol too many variables. Hush lackadaisical approach n some segments ...almost as if he were free flowing conceptually n just decided to stick w/ what resulted from a "session"

Anddd

Kings usage of the two stache plays?

N his slow start?



Iono homie started off slow but picked up in a major way


I'm thinking hush got it by a slim margin tho ..desert line was lotb n in retrospect he seemed a bit more consistent

V/hush

Interesting battle fellas

[SHECK WES]

Aim at ya brain. Last thing u hears the lead banging
Nickname the 40 shame shit a leave your head hanging
lol the bold gets me every time. But I liked this line, simple but good
This chubby white guy log online and turn thug txter
Lift guns? Only thing dangerous Fatty raise is his blood pressure
ok
It's nothing to let off the glock then tuck it hot
Act of bravery. one shot to show how much guts he got
haaaaaaaan
Nigga we ain't rivals. U copy my blueprint I'm damn near ur idol
I give him a a buck 50 then tell him turn the other cheek. I'm the bible
wording killed it
I go beast. You just obese. Gluttony is the bane of This sinner
U got a eating disorder called desert always before dinner
this is lulz but light
Wana be a batman villian just like me now that you ain't King
We equal the day wrangler jeans an wrangler jeep are the same thing
nah
On the other site u was top dog. Here u just fail
On rb u was the big fish and offline u always be considered a whale
lol good play
kill ur whole family and never snitch. Tell the judge that my gat pop
give a fuck about a lower case they can put my sentence on caps lock
fuckin fire
U ain't been thru the shit that I ride thru. Pistol beside u
For chicken we Bucket out the window this the kfc drive thru
alright
Even ya chick say Ima marksmen she know I hit the spot
Long dick a thot. Aim and spray it's 3some head. Split the top
bit of a reach but decent


Vs



We similar but not the same. I got premo, u puffin some reg
I roll on fakes w/ the heat, He trippin on sugar pills covered in sweat
decent at best
Been streakin. but if he think this politics as usual then son batty
He's gettin stomped n tossed the fuck out, this politics at a Trump rally
alright
I kill wack rapper nerds. Faggot we can take it past the words
U got two choices n neither good, battlin me gets u hurt bad or worse
decent
We know he dont duck, he's too short, but watch this guy hide
When I raise arms u'll see the running start like I offered him a high five
this is cool
Ya whip prolly 4 colors. I bet u smoke dog shit n get rocked son
Short spanish stoner w/ a 'stache? U'll be cheech n chongin the shotgun
hmmm I wanna like it but idk it's not really anything special.
Real recognize real, s'why ya new style started losin u respect
My gun's money, I never miss.Your gun's bitcoin, u only use it on the net
oooooo nice, good shit
David vs Goliath w/ no slingshot. The odds are lookin poor kid
This lil geek 'bout 5'4, so I'd bet 3 To 1 my fire hits launch him into orbit
kinda wordy here dunno, not really diggin it
This kid is trash. Shots hit em in the mouth, cut his lip in half
U'll see me split his 'stache like the crew hit em for everything he has
alright
n If u hit on dimes ur just spinnin wheels, short aint attractive
Halfling bastard, if u peel off a skrrt it's cuz u saw me comin n gassed it
this was good
He 30 still actin 16. Life passed em by n he front like it dont hurt
Hush in his 2nd childhood, too bad this one dont come w/ a growth spurt
meh

Damn this is very close. LOTB was act of bravery IMO. Idk this can go either way I think, but I edge it Hushes way because the quality of his good ones were just somewhat better than the other guys.

Vote Hush

[Pinot Grij]

Hush.. After reading, I think this is a solid drop, but not as fierce as some of your past drops. You got them bars that are very simple in their flips, which works very well when you pull it off, but can kinda come off lame if you don't have that razor sharp wording.

Aim at ya brain. Last thing u hears the lead banging
Nickname the 40 shame shit a leave your head hanging
^Dope.

This chubby white guy log online and turn thug txter
Lift guns? Only thing dangerous Fatty raise is his blood pressure
^ Ehh. Too simple.

It's nothing to let off the glock then tuck it hot
Act of bravery. one shot to show how much guts he got
^Pretty good, but it's walking that line.

Nigga we ain't rivals. U copy my blueprint I'm damn near ur idol
I give him a a buck 50 then tell him turn the other cheek. I'm the bible
^I don't like this.

I go beast. You just obese. Gluttony is the bane of This sinner
U got a eating disorder called desert always before dinner
^I like the in-rhymes in the setup, but the punch was too basic.

Wana be a batman villian just like me now that you ain't King
We equal the day wrangler jeans an wrangler jeep are the same thing
^^ This is kinda funny, but not that direct. Setup wording is straight weird.

On the other site u was top dog. Here u just fail
On rb u was the big fish and offline u always be considered a whale
^^ Too simple.

kill ur whole family and never snitch. Tell the judge that my gat pop
give a fuck about a lower case they can put my sentence on caps lock
^^Dope.

U ain't been thru the shit that I ride thru. Pistol beside u
For chicken we Bucket out the window this the kfc drive thru
^^Dope.

Even ya chick say Ima marksmen she know I hit the spot
Long dick a thot. Aim and spray it's 3some head. Split the top
^^Closer a little wordy.

It's about a 50/50 split for me with lines I was feeling and lines that I thought were a little too simple or forced.

Strange - there's a chink on the armour of the champ as far as I'm concerned, so I'm hoping you can take advantage of that because Hush doesn't have many off-days

We similar but not the same. I got premo, u puffin some reg
I roll on fakes w/ the heat, He trippin on sugar pills covered in sweat
^^Not my style of diss.

Been streakin. but if he think this politics as usual then son batty
He's gettin stomped n tossed the fuck out, this politics at a Trump rally
^^ok reference.

I kill wack rapper nerds. Faggot we can take it past the words
U got two choices n neither good, battlin me gets u hurt bad or worse
^^that's just kinda bad, bro.

We know he dont duck, he's too short, but watch this guy hide
When I raise arms u'll see the running start like I offered him a high five
^^decent concept but the wording is fucking it up a bit.

Ya whip prolly 4 colors. I bet u smoke dog shit n get rocked son
Short spanish stoner w/ a 'stache? U'll be cheech n chongin the shotgun
^That's pretty good visuals and tie-ins with the setup. Solid.

Real recognize real, s'why ya new style started losin u respect
My gun's money, I never miss.Your gun's bitcoin, u only use it on the net
^^Dope.

David vs Goliath w/ no slingshot. The odds are lookin poor kid
This lil geek 'bout 5'4, so I'd bet 3 To 1 my fire hits launch him into orbit
^^Dope again. That's actually hilarious. Picking up some steam now.

This kid is trash. Shots hit em in the mouth, cut his lip in half
U'll see me split his 'stache like the crew hit em for everything he has
^^Alright.

n If u hit on dimes ur just spinnin wheels, short aint attractive
Halfling bastard, if u peel off a skrrt it's cuz u saw me comin n gassed it
^^I don't like.

He 30 still actin 16. Life passed em by n he front like it dont hurt
Hush in his 2nd childhood, too bad this one dont come w/ a growth spurt
^^Don't like.

Yo Strange, a pretty slow start, imo. It started picking up with the Cheech and Chong line, and had a few good haymakers after that. I still think Hush got more hits than Strange. I gotta take voerall feel of the entire verse into account too, and Hush's felt more aggressive and raw in tone.

Vote -- Hush

[Suthaveli]

Hush had-

Opener
Guts bar
The fat joke whale bar
The bigger sentence bar


Strange had-
Cheech & chonging shotgun
Bitcoin line
Split his stache

Hush had gd line. I've also recalled hush coming better. Last week obv took a lot out of him. Rightfully so, was a real dope read from both opponents. This is something I'd consider as a slouch vrse from him. I felt strange could've capitalize on. But Imo strange didn't start to catch fore till the last few bars of his verse. I felt like some of his beginning bars were mirror image rebuttal bars from what he read on hush verse before he decided to post. It's weird. Hush flips a drug bar. Strange flips a drug bar. Hush came w.fat jokes. Strange flip stashe jokes.so much of these factors i can break dwn here, but I'm on my phone & don't feel like it. But very interesting battle.

Mvgt Hush tho.