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Orc
03-20-2016, 02:26 PM
NBL Season 9


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Hush
03-20-2016, 04:29 PM
Ok then
Any special way u wana do it homie or just max lines all bars

Orc
03-20-2016, 05:43 PM
nah no gimmicks my dude

ur barring out lately so let's do the damn thing

Hush
03-26-2016, 02:09 AM
When it comes to rankings u won't pass me in ya life span
Yea u made noise, but u was always behind me like a hype man
Difference between us is I'm wit the shits. U not bout life
I keep that ratchet in the crib, u try to turn a hoe into a house wife
Orc know he can't beat me. Before it started the battle was over
came here expecting to get lit up . This nigga a scavenger smoker
U ain't think up half the bars u use. Say different u dam liar
In this battle shit u got to bite to survive I guess you a vampire
hustling been my way to eat, u talk that shit cuz its trendy
your only meal ticket is a coupon for a free burger from Wendy's
Try to play joker get maimed when I pull the card of this lame
Gun to a clowns mouth, get his balloon bust no carnival game
U the pussiest Irishman ever, fag u never been in a scrap
You literally never landed a punch that wasn't in a internet rap
This a star war, n ironically u been my apprentice and clone soldier
Give u the cold shoulder or push ur wig to the side get a comb over
Ya mom can get 5 shots, give ya brother and daddy double
Potatoe on the barrel to empty ya stomach, that's famine trouble
It's bodybag season, when I write outlines this man a get chalked
Silencer whisper in ya ear.. Get ya spirit lifted but it ain't a pep talk

Orc
03-26-2016, 08:35 AM
.
.

Aiyyoooo,


I'm likened to heavy hitters. trust Orc is a savage
&You're the Mike Tyson of text. Mainly because you both talk like a faggot
This dude isn't slick; 'Burd plz word this before I ruin the flip'
Maaan I edited so much of your shit over the years I became fluent in lisp
In our prime years I was writing stuff for this man's crew
Let's get one thing straight; If I ever did bite lines trust you'd be banned too
.. Quit with the tough talk. We KNOW that kid is a nerd
Dog... If you been Spraying Repeatedly it's because you've said a difficult word
Well done; u joined a Gym after yrs of being the lamest of vets
.. About time you realised them Pencil arms won't get you a Trace of respect
Been barking off alot bout Frac & them but u should try let it go
How u gonna trash-talk the old generation &&then lose to Resin 5times in a row?!
U ain't balling. H don't push heavy plates n' he's plenty fake
Most kids dream of a Tree house. not about growing Weed in their Mom's at 28
Talking bout my Misses?! Quit getting all in my face, fam
The word alone will have u spitting on the floor like Michael Jordan in SpaceJam
Been dropping oldass gunbars like what u say is the future
It's maddd ironic you haven't had any Drive in yrs & now you slaving for Uber
Orc got BARS; A whole range n' over the years they don't fade
You got One Line people remember. It's that creepy Moustache u won't shave

Schadenfreude
03-26-2016, 04:02 PM
Opener, house wife, scavenger, carnival game, internet rap, famine & closer.
Dope verse, had 2 or 3 misses, but mostly you were landing crazy, especially w/ the personals.

Fluent in lisp, banned too, difficult word, pencil/trace, Resin 5x, treehouse, Uber & closer.
Killer verse, very personal, very harsh. The minor flaw was that ya attacked his speech impediment too much.

Overall this battle was BRAZY, great haymekers & personals from both, making this extremely close to call. Since I have to select a winner, I'm giving the edge to ORC. Only because I realize he literally had ONE more quotable than Vic. Much propers.

jilti
03-26-2016, 05:07 PM
When it comes to rankings u won't pass me in ya life span
Yea u made noise, but u was always behind me like a hype man
^doooope
Difference between us is I'm wit the shits. U not bout life
I keep that ratchet in the crib, u try to turn a hoe into a house wife
^lol
Orc know he can't beat me. Before it started the battle was over
came here expecting to get lit up . This nigga a scavenger smoker
^funny
U ain't think up half the bars u use. Say different u dam liar
In this battle shit u got to bite to survive I guess you a vampire
^vampire/bite lines are mad played but the survive part made it good
hustling been my way to eat, u talk that shit cuz its trendy
your only meal ticket is a coupon for a free burger from Wendy's
^Wtf? Hell no nigga u know better
Try to play joker get maimed when I pull the card of this lame
Gun to a clowns mouth, get his balloon bust no carnival game
^ok
U the pussiest Irishman ever, fag u never been in a scrap
You literally never landed a punch that wasn't in a internet rap
^decent
This a star war, n ironically u been my apprentice and clone soldier
Give u the cold shoulder or push ur wig to the side get a comb over
^noooooooooooo
Ya mom can get 5 shots, give ya brother and daddy double
Potatoe on the barrel to empty ya stomach, that's famine trouble
^blah
It's bodybag season, when I write outlines this man a get chalked
Silencer whisper in ya ear.. Get ya spirit lifted but it ain't a pep talk
^cool

Vs.


I'm likened to heavy hitters. trust Orc is a savage
&You're the Mike Tyson of text. Mainly because you both talk like a faggot
^lol dope opener
This dude isn't slick; 'Burd plz word this before I ruin the flip'
Maaan I edited so much of your shit over the years I became fluent in lisp
^Fuccckkkkkkk just spit out my food.. DEAD
In our prime years I was writing stuff for this man's crew
Let's get one thing straight; If I ever did bite lines trust you'd be banned too
^tough
.. Quit with the tough talk. We KNOW that kid is a nerd
Dog... If you been Spraying Repeatedly it's because you've said a difficult word
^OMG just spit out my food again, damn u orc!!
Well done; u joined a Gym after yrs of being the lamest of vets
.. About time you realised them Pencil arms won't get you a Trace of respect
^not feeling
Been barking off alot bout Frac & them but u should try let it go
How u gonna trash-talk the old generation &&then lose to Resin 5times in a row?!
^miss
U ain't balling. H don't push heavy plates n' he's plenty fake
Most kids dream of a Tree house. not about growing Weed in their Mom's at 28
^nah man
Talking bout my Misses?! Quit getting all in my face, fam
The word alone will have u spitting on the floor like Michael Jordan in SpaceJam
^lol
Been dropping oldass gunbars like what u say is the future
It's maddd ironic you haven't had any Drive in yrs & now you slaving for Uber
^ok
Orc got BARS; A whole range n' over the years they don't fade
You got One Line people remember. It's that creepy Moustache u won't shave
^dope



Vote/Orc

Cashius
03-26-2016, 05:36 PM
Hush-
When it comes to rankings u won't pass me in ya life span
Yea u made noise, but u was always behind me like a hype man
- eh kinda simple to me.

Difference between us is I'm wit the shits. U not bout life
I keep that ratchet in the crib, u try to turn a hoe into a house wife
- ok

Orc know he can't beat me. Before it started the battle was over
came here expecting to get lit up . This nigga a scavenger smoker
- ok. Concept is simple but had some sting.

U ain't think up half the bars u use. Say different u dam liar
In this battle shit u got to bite to survive I guess you a vampire
- came off kinda corny to me

hustling been my way to eat, u talk that shit cuz its trendy
your only meal ticket is a coupon for a free burger from Wendy's
- ok

Try to play joker get maimed when I pull the card of this lame
Gun to a clowns mouth, get his balloon bust no carnival game
- ok

U the pussiest Irishman ever, fag u never been in a scrap
You literally never landed a punch that wasn't in a internet rap
- ok

This a star war, n ironically u been my apprentice and clone soldier
Give u the cold shoulder or push ur wig to the side get a comb over
- nah

Ya mom can get 5 shots, give ya brother and daddy double
Potatoe on the barrel to empty ya stomach, that's famine trouble
- I like the idea but didn't like the execution

It's bodybag season, when I write outlines this man a get chalked
Silencer whisper in ya ear.. Get ya spirit lifted but it ain't a pep talk
- didn't like it.



Orc-
I'm likened to heavy hitters. trust Orc is a savage
&You're the Mike Tyson of text. Mainly because you both talk like a faggot
-ok

This dude isn't slick; 'Burd plz word this before I ruin the flip'
Maaan I edited so much of your shit over the years I became fluent in lisp
-this is DOPE

In our prime years I was writing stuff for this man's crew
Let's get one thing straight; If I ever did bite lines trust you'd be banned too
- Ok.

.. Quit with the tough talk. We KNOW that kid is a nerd
Dog... If you been Spraying Repeatedly it's because you've said a difficult word
- dope

Well done; u joined a Gym after yrs of being the lamest of vets
.. About time you realised them Pencil arms won't get you a Trace of respect
- I like it

Been barking off alot bout Frac & them but u should try let it go
How u gonna trash-talk the old generation &&then lose to Resin 5times in a row?!
-ok

U ain't balling. H don't push heavy plates n' he's plenty fake
Most kids dream of a Tree house. not about growing Weed in their Mom's at 28
- not feeling this

Talking bout my Misses?! Quit getting all in my face, fam
The word alone will have u spitting on the floor like Michael Jordan in SpaceJam
- dope

Been dropping oldass gunbars like what u say is the future
It's maddd ironic you haven't had any Drive in yrs & now you slaving for Uber
-nah. Concept feels old.

Orc got BARS; A whole range n' over the years they don't fade
You got One Line people remember. It's that creepy Moustache u won't shave
- Yes. DOPE.



Hush is the G but this felt a bit one sided. Hush came with his usual straight forward shit but it didn't have he sting that it normally does. The last verse I read from him, I think it was last weeks champ match, was fire but this wasn't doing it for me. Orc killed his verse. It was harsh and funny. He prolly used the lisp angle one too many times but they were all dope. He took it for me.

Orc.

SHECK WES
03-26-2016, 05:50 PM
When it comes to rankings u won't pass me in ya life span
Yea u made noise, but u was always behind me like a hype man
this is dope
Difference between us is I'm wit the shits. U not bout life
I keep that ratchet in the crib, u try to turn a hoe into a house wife
lol alright
Orc know he can't beat me. Before it started the battle was over
came here expecting to get lit up . This nigga a scavenger smoker
this was cool
U ain't think up half the bars u use. Say different u dam liar
In this battle shit u got to bite to survive I guess you a vampire
negative
hustling been my way to eat, u talk that shit cuz its trendy
your only meal ticket is a coupon for a free burger from Wendy's
you did this to yourself
Try to play joker get maimed when I pull the card of this lame
Gun to a clowns mouth, get his balloon bust no carnival game
decent could have been better
U the pussiest Irishman ever, fag u never been in a scrap
You literally never landed a punch that wasn't in a internet rap
nah
This a star war, n ironically u been my apprentice and clone soldier
Give u the cold shoulder or push ur wig to the side get a comb over
felt like I seen one of these on wanderer before, but not bad
Ya mom can get 5 shots, give ya brother and daddy double
Potatoe on the barrel to empty ya stomach, that's famine trouble
theres another famine line this week, this one is better but still not good if that makes sense
It's bodybag season, when I write outlines this man a get chalked
Silencer whisper in ya ear.. Get ya spirit lifted but it ain't a pep talk
alright


Vs



I'm likened to heavy hitters. trust Orc is a savage
&You're the Mike Tyson of text. Mainly because you both talk like a faggot
lol good
This dude isn't slick; 'Burd plz word this before I ruin the flip'
Maaan I edited so much of your shit over the years I became fluent in lisp
lol ok
In our prime years I was writing stuff for this man's crew
Let's get one thing straight; If I ever did bite lines trust you'd be banned too
ok personal
.. Quit with the tough talk. We KNOW that kid is a nerd
Dog... If you been Spraying Repeatedly it's because you've said a difficult word
lmfaooooooooo I'm done
Well done; u joined a Gym after yrs of being the lamest of vets
.. About time you realised them Pencil arms won't get you a Trace of respect
ooo this was clean
Been barking off alot bout Frac & them but u should try let it go
How u gonna trash-talk the old generation &&then lose to Resin 5times in a row?!
ehhh
U ain't balling. H don't push heavy plates n' he's plenty fake
Most kids dream of a Tree house. not about growing Weed in their Mom's at 28
ooo this was good
Talking bout my Misses?! Quit getting all in my face, fam
The word alone will have u spitting on the floor like Michael Jordan in SpaceJam
another one? Still good
Been dropping oldass gunbars like what u say is the future
It's maddd ironic you haven't had any Drive in yrs & now you slaving for Uber
decent but uber bars getting redundant
Orc got BARS; A whole range n' over the years they don't fade
You got One Line people remember. It's that creepy Moustache u won't shave
ooo nice


After reading Hushs verse I was like damn ok Orc isn't beating that. Hush did have a few fillers and throwaway bars in there but his hits were good hits. The misses were dreadful. Orc had a beast verse, maybe he od'd a little on hush lisp game but damn it was all fire. He had maybe 1
Or 2 out the whole mix I wasn't feeling. Anyways Orc gets this. Good shit.

Vote Orc

Useless
03-26-2016, 11:11 PM
Hush had like 2 dope lines but the rest of his verse felt dated. A lot of his shit was played concepts with tweeked wording. Felt like he just wanted to get rid of the title here. That's cool, u tried and failed last week lol.

Orc had a dope verse with only like 1 or 2 ehh bars. I liked his lisp shit, he had some original angles for it, which is crazy considering how played it is vs hush.



V. Orc

e11even
03-26-2016, 11:19 PM
When it comes to rankings u won't pass me in ya life span
Yea u made noise, but u was always behind me like a hype man
lol
Difference between us is I'm wit the shits. U not bout life
I keep that ratchet in the crib, u try to turn a hoe into a house wife
nice
Orc know he can't beat me. Before it started the battle was over
came here expecting to get lit up . This nigga a scavenger smoker
lol
U ain't think up half the bars u use. Say different u dam liar
In this battle shit u got to bite to survive I guess you a vampire
so-so
hustling been my way to eat, u talk that shit cuz its trendy
your only meal ticket is a coupon for a free burger from Wendy's
nice
Try to play joker get maimed when I pull the card of this lame
Gun to a clowns mouth, get his balloon bust no carnival game
not feeling this one
U the pussiest Irishman ever, fag u never been in a scrap
You literally never landed a punch that wasn't in a internet rap
eh
This a star war, n ironically u been my apprentice and clone soldier
Give u the cold shoulder or push ur wig to the side get a comb over
setup was nice, punch was sloppy
Ya mom can get 5 shots, give ya brother and daddy double
Potatoe on the barrel to empty ya stomach, that's famine trouble
nah?
It's bodybag season, when I write outlines this man a get chalked
Silencer whisper in ya ear.. Get ya spirit lifted but it ain't a pep talk
feel like I saw this punch recently, not great finisher

.
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Aiyyoooo,


I'm likened to heavy hitters. trust Orc is a savage
&You're the Mike Tyson of text. Mainly because you both talk like a faggot
nice opener
This dude isn't slick; 'Burd plz word this before I ruin the flip'
Maaan I edited so much of your shit over the years I became fluent in lisp
harsh, lmaaaooo
In our prime years I was writing stuff for this man's crew
Let's get one thing straight; If I ever did bite lines trust you'd be banned too
damn, heavy
.. Quit with the tough talk. We KNOW that kid is a nerd
Dog... If you been Spraying Repeatedly it's because you've said a difficult word
wow lol
Well done; u joined a Gym after yrs of being the lamest of vets
.. About time you realised them Pencil arms won't get you a Trace of respect
lol, nice
Been barking off alot bout Frac & them but u should try let it go
How u gonna trash-talk the old generation &&then lose to Resin 5times in a row?!
heavy
U ain't balling. H don't push heavy plates n' he's plenty fake
Most kids dream of a Tree house. not about growing Weed in their Mom's at 28
nice
Talking bout my Misses?! Quit getting all in my face, fam
The word alone will have u spitting on the floor like Michael Jordan in SpaceJam
nah, its a miss lol.
Been dropping oldass gunbars like what u say is the future
It's maddd ironic you haven't had any Drive in yrs & now you slaving for Uber
lol
Orc got BARS; A whole range n' over the years they don't fade
You got One Line people remember. It's that creepy Moustache u won't shave
lol. decent closer


Orc came prepared with like 80% personals, versus a tame Hush. MVGT Orc for bringing that shit.

King
03-27-2016, 08:55 AM
Difference between us is I'm wit the shits. U not bout life
I keep that ratchet in the crib, u try to turn a hoe into a house wife
It's bodybag season, when I write outlines this man a get chalked
Silencer whisper in ya ear.. Get ya spirit lifted but it ain't a pep talk

vs

This dude isn't slick; 'Burd plz word this before I ruin the flip'
Maaan I edited so much of your shit over the years I became fluent in lisp
Well done; u joined a Gym after yrs of being the lamest of vets
.. About time you realised them Pencil arms won't get you a Trace of respect
Talking bout my Misses?! Quit getting all in my face, fam
The word alone will have u spitting on the floor like Michael Jordan in SpaceJam
Been dropping oldass gunbars like what u say is the future
It's maddd ironic you haven't had any Drive in yrs & now you slaving for Uber

cool battle. those are just standouts to me, neither had many real misses. Hush had a lot more bars that felt like jabs to me. concept worked, wording worked, but not a lot of sting. Orc had a few that landed heavy. almost every lisp bar hit hard, i think the fluent in lisp one was fucking hilarious.

vote Orc

Junto
03-27-2016, 06:36 PM
When it comes to rankings u won't pass me in ya life span
Yea u made noise, but u was always behind me like a hype man
nice
Difference between us is I'm wit the shits. U not bout life
I keep that ratchet in the crib, u try to turn a hoe into a house wife
wording seem lazy as hell but the play is fresh
It's bodybag season, when I write outlines this man a get chalked
Silencer whisper in ya ear.. Get ya spirit lifted but it ain't a pep talk
tough

vs.

This dude isn't slick; 'Burd plz word this before I ruin the flip'
Maaan I edited so much of your shit over the years I became fluent in lisp
haha this was good
.. Quit with the tough talk. We KNOW that kid is a nerd
Dog... If you been Spraying Repeatedly it's because you've said a difficult word
lol solid
U ain't balling. H don't push heavy plates n' he's plenty fake
Most kids dream of a Tree house. not about growing Weed in their Mom's at 28
harsh... I like that
Talking bout my Misses?! Quit getting all in my face, fam
The word alone will have u spitting on the floor like Michael Jordan in SpaceJam
gettin a little redundant here but this mighta been the best one
Orc got BARS; A whole range n' over the years they don't fade
You got One Line people remember. It's that creepy Moustache u won't shave
haha this cool too

Both had others that hit too but this was the highlights to me...
Hush started off strong but I wasn't feelin a lot between meal ticket & famine trouble
Concepts were aight but lacked pop
Orc came heavy wit the personals & the speech impediment jokes worked well
Started to OD on personals to be real, but the ones that hit were tough

Good read.

V/ Orc

Saint
03-28-2016, 06:02 AM
Orc got it, the lisp jokes hit, only had a few down points, trace and banned too, but still were decent. spray repeatedly, fluent lisp, tree house all nice to me..

Hush had a couple like the first two, made noise, spirit lift, scavenger smoker.. but a few trailed to either jabs, and some lines were a bit too simple for my taste ( internet rap, vampire)

Vote Orc

Toil
03-28-2016, 08:10 AM
Hush: opener, carnival game, famine trouble
Orc: Tyson, edits, spraying repeatedly, closer

Hush seemed to drop some filler in the middle (vampire, meal ticket) which surprised me. Orc took it

Vote=Orc