VividlyVague vs Wear Shhh - VividlyVague wins

[Orc]

NBL Season 9


Due THURSDAY

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
NO recycling
You must check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

Vividlyvague Wear Shhh

[SHECK WES]

50 lines

Let's ride

[SHECK WES]

Orc let me get someone who's gonna show bro lol..

[e11even]

Hola.

[e11even]

Wear Shhh got 12

@Orc (http://netcees.org/member.php?u=11) let me get someone who's gonna show bro lol..


@Orc (http://netcees.org/member.php?u=11) let me get @Cred (http://netcees.org/member.php?u=1596) this week cause bet money Viv not showing



I'm here nigga! I'm still kickin, and your lame ass is getting blasted.
You just mad cuz none of your bars claimed titles. That's a Kendrick tracklist.
I knuckle up faggot, you'll need a week off work for dental care
These hands got spring in em, they'll never give a winta wear.
When I get WS on cam gettin socked, WorldStar would nominate awards
The way I beat this bitch in public, his eyes'll be shut like Ray Rice's elevator doors.
Oh I bet this lazy boy never leaves the house... scary what this geek weighs.
His last trip was over a shoe. The couch landing was three spring breaks.
I'll beat this bitch face on the curb and ride my skateboard off his jibs...
Wasn't a tony hawk trick ta see viv grind across the lip
When I rap n fight, i'll wear shhh out til i'm dead...
But this bitch'll probably knit my sweater the way he whining thru threads.

[SHECK WES]

sus but...

this nigga dead. i wont stop till he's 6 feet under
gat like a glow stick.. once it pop all u see is colors
u were never sly with the ladies, theres no way ur a player
ur idea of Kiss The Girls meant to kill em & leave em in ur lair
u bang? fuck wit coke? lol stop it u afraid of dem toys
silencer on the lid soda pop wont make not one bit of noise
& his parents are drug addicts. trust me im not lying
one hit'll have your mom fiendin' and send ur pops flying
nigga im ruthless, ive had enough wit yall thinkin this lame is tough
so ima put each of his family members ina box til they feel like the Brady Bunch
u always scared away the ladies, ur whole date game was a riot
the last time u found some booty u had to duke it out with a pirate

[Schadenfreude]

Opener, winter wear & lip grind.
You had a lot of wording/delivery issues, but the concepts were there. Even the quotables weren't as polished. Your concepts are nice asf, just refine your execution.

versus

THE WHOLE ENTIRE VERSE WAS BARS.
SIKE! I lied nigga. You had nothing tbh. For all of the trolling, you didn't drop shit. Played concepts & simplistic wording, wtf dude? So thirsty for VV to post & this is all?

Overall VIVIDLYVAGUE took this fairly easy, even w/ a flawed verse.

[jilti]

I'm here nigga! I'm still kickin, and your lame ass is getting blasted.
You just mad cuz none of your bars claimed titles. That's a Kendrick tracklist.
^clean opener
I knuckle up faggot, you'll need a week off work for dental care
These hands got spring in em, they'll never give a winta wear.
^creative
When I get WS on cam gettin socked, WorldStar would nominate awards
The way I beat this bitch in public, his eyes'll be shut like Ray Rice's elevator doors.
^noooooo
Oh I bet this lazy boy never leaves the house... scary what this geek weighs.
His last trip was over a shoe. The couch landing was three spring breaks.
^eh
I'll beat this bitch face on the curb and ride my skateboard off his jibs...
Wasn't a tony hawk trick ta see viv grind across the lip
^nice
When I rap n fight, i'll wear shhh out til i'm dead...
But this bitch'll probably knit my sweater the way he whining thru threads.
^no,no,no


Vs.


this nigga dead. i wont stop till he's 6 feet under
gat like a glow stick.. once it pop all u see is colors
^ok
u were never sly with the ladies, theres no way ur a player
ur idea of Kiss The Girls meant to kill em & leave em in ur lair
^nah, not good
u bang? fuck wit coke? lol stop it u afraid of dem toys
silencer on the lid soda pop wont make not one bit of noise
^eh
& his parents are drug addicts. trust me im not lying
one hit'll have your mom fiendin' and send ur pops flying
^blah
nigga im ruthless, ive had enough wit yall thinkin this lame is tough
so ima put each of his family members ina box til they feel like the Brady Bunch
^dont know if this is played or not but it was cool
u always scared away the ladies, ur whole date game was a riot
the last time u found some booty u had to duke it out with a pirate
^lol


Vivid had 2 really bad misses that hurt him here, tho his punches that landed were better than wears punches. In a rather short battle that made the difference.

V/ wear

[SHECK WES]

This is open for votes you know

[King]

I'm here nigga! I'm still kickin, and your lame ass is getting blasted.
You just mad cuz none of your bars claimed titles. That's a Kendrick tracklist.

vs

nothing i was really feeling.


not a great battle. a lot of played concepts without any original flip to them. Viv would have also had the spring break line, i actually liked the idea but the wording was weak.

vote Viv

[JShazo]

Better punches edged it for viv

[Toil]

Viv: first 2 pinches, plus Tony Hawks
Wear: opener plus Brady Bunch

Quite close but vite = Viv