Wanderer vs Suthaveli - WANDERER WINS

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Wanderer Suthaveli

[Suthaveli]

Wanderer..

History repeats. & a bum like you won't stop the beatin's
Your drop in week 10 proves that this week you'll drop a weak 10
I'ma beastin savage. Aimin at nuts w.tasers, wreakin havoc..
Trust watts'll get in his sack- Call it the Texans defense package
I spit that ready yay. Meanwhile, you bih & steady sway..
Everything i do is awesome. Proof?:You tell ya bih she is every day
Yo broad a gamer that gets high & I pipe her, w.notta doubt..
Poundin her box'll give me life- The 1up shrooms just pop on out
While ya strainin to clinch a tech, I'm rangin to grip ya neck..
Hammer ya brain in ya gut til ya resemble Krang from Dimension X

10, btw...

[Wanderer]

Look..

We all wanna see multiple rounds chew you up if I'm painfully honest
So I'll make all the Mag content disappear like Allen Knight breaking a promise
Putting cowards outta their misery. dude... I'm simply more bold
You'll be shaking til the metal puts an end to your worries, that's sieving for gold
Pissed your bitch want me? I'm palming the blade so it's hopeless son
I'll smash ya girl's Box, Cutter & then slash your throat open with one
Your chick an ugly hoe, fuck. Now I'm wasting her, that's zero luck
Ain't exactly Marilyn Monroe but she still getting her mid-section blown up
Take a second to chew the facts... You've lost your way dude just relax
Cross Paths with wan? I'll have eyes on ya street every day & I ain't talkin google maps

[jilti]

Thought this was gonna be a dope match but wasnt really feeling either. Suth had a couple really bad misses so ima have to vote wanderer for less misses

[Schadenfreude]

Awesome girl & closer
Drudgingly two quotes, I've never read your stuff, but I assume this mediocre showing's do to severe rust.

Opener, siffing & box cutter.
Nothing too crazy, but the quotes landed decent enough.

Overall WANDERER did just enough to edge a win, Suth must be out of practice.

[SHECK WES]

History repeats. & a bum like you won't stop the beatin's
Your drop in week 10 proves that this week you'll drop a weak 10
nah these type of bars stopped working in like 06 or somethin lol
I'ma beastin savage. Aimin at nuts w.tasers, wreakin havoc..
Trust watts'll get in his sack- Call it the Texans defense package
wtf bro nominee
I spit that ready yay. Meanwhile, you bih & steady sway..
Everything i do is awesome. Proof?:You tell ya bih she is every day
decent, wording hurt it tho
Yo broad a gamer that gets high & I pipe her, w.notta doubt..
Poundin her box'll give me life- The 1up shrooms just pop on out
lol u had a concept but the execution wasn't good, almost
While ya strainin to clinch a tech, I'm rangin to grip ya neck..
Hammer ya brain in ya gut til ya resemble Krang from Dimension X
cool closer


Vs


We all wanna see multiple rounds chew you up if I'm painfully honest
So I'll make all the Mag content disappear like Allen Knight breaking a promise
ha, this was good
Putting cowards outta their misery. dude... I'm simply more bold
You'll be shaking til the metal puts an end to your worries, that's sieving for gold
decent imo, could have been better wit twerked wording
Pissed your bitch want me? I'm palming the blade so it's hopeless son
I'll smash ya girl's Box, Cutter & then slash your throat open with one
fireeeeee, wording & execution on point here. Good shit
Your chick an ugly hoe, fuck. Now I'm wasting her, that's zero luck
Ain't exactly Marilyn Monroe but she still getting her mid-section blown up
ehhh not really feelin it
Take a second to chew the facts... You've lost your way dude just relax
Cross Paths with wan? I'll have eyes on ya street every day & I ain't talkin google maps
nah

Damn I thought suth was gonna come nice this week cause last week he had some dope concepts. Wanderer had some cool stuff and also a couple misses. That box cutter line was LOTB and outweighed anything in suth'S verse alone.

Vote Wanderer

[Hush]

Wanderer..

History repeats. & a bum like you won't stop the beatin's
Your drop in week 10 proves that this week you'll drop a weak 10
its aight bro, nothing crazy. too simple to leave any lasting impact
I'ma beastin savage. Aimin at nuts w.tasers, wreakin havoc..
Trust watts'll get in his sack- Call it the Texans defense package
creative but kinda eh
I spit that ready yay. Meanwhile, you bih & steady sway..
Everything i do is awesome. Proof?:You tell ya bih she is every day
nah
Yo broad a gamer that gets high & I pipe her, w.notta doubt..
Poundin her box'll give me life- The 1up shrooms just pop on out
ok cool
While ya strainin to clinch a tech, I'm rangin to grip ya neck..
Hammer ya brain in ya gut til ya resemble Krang from Dimension X
fire

10, btw...

Suth had a stronger drop last week in my opnion, this one felt a bit rushed and didnt sting and the punches didnt land clean

Look..

We all wanna see multiple rounds chew you up if I'm painfully honest
So I'll make all the Mag content disappear like Allen Knight breaking a promise
idea is cool exection aint really hit
Putting cowards outta their misery. dude... I'm simply more bold
You'll be shaking til the metal puts an end to your worries, that's sieving for gold
pretty dope, wording as eh
Pissed your bitch want me? I'm palming the blade so it's hopeless son
I'll smash ya girl's Box, Cutter & then slash your throat open with one
good idea lazy ass wording
Your chick an ugly hoe, fuck. Now I'm wasting her, that's zero luck
Ain't exactly Marilyn Monroe but she still getting her mid-section blown up
ok thats dope
Take a second to chew the facts... You've lost your way dude just relax
Cross Paths with wan? I'll have eyes on ya street every day & I ain't talkin google maps
nah


Some real dope ideas held back from some pretty weak wording



Wanderer had the better lines and more creative angles so I got him with the edge.

[e11even]

Wanderer..

History repeats. & a bum like you won't stop the beatin's
Your drop in week 10 proves that this week you'll drop a weak 10
very light
I'ma beastin savage. Aimin at nuts w.tasers, wreakin havoc..
Trust watts'll get in his sack- Call it the Texans defense package
nice, hadta read that twice, wording a little off though
I spit that ready yay. Meanwhile, you bih & steady sway..
Everything i do is awesome. Proof?:You tell ya bih she is every day
lol, but so-so
Yo broad a gamer that gets high & I pipe her, w.notta doubt..
Poundin her box'll give me life- The 1up shrooms just pop on out
nah b, this had potential though
While ya strainin to clinch a tech, I'm rangin to grip ya neck..
Hammer ya brain in ya gut til ya resemble Krang from Dimension X
not feeling this one.
10, btw...

Look..

We all wanna see multiple rounds chew you up if I'm painfully honest
So I'll make all the Mag content disappear like Allen Knight breaking a promise
lol, kinda harsh
Putting cowards outta their misery. dude... I'm simply more bold
You'll be shaking til the metal puts an end to your worries, that's sieving for gold
nah
Pissed your bitch want me? I'm palming the blade so it's hopeless son
I'll smash ya girl's Box, Cutter & then slash your throat open with one
eh
Your chick an ugly hoe, fuck. Now I'm wasting her, that's zero luck
Ain't exactly Marilyn Monroe but she still getting her mid-section blown up
so-so
Take a second to chew the facts... You've lost your way dude just relax
Cross Paths with wan? I'll have eyes on ya street every day & I ain't talkin google maps
this could have been better, had potential


This battle was not as good as it could have been. There were some wasted concepts in there that still have potential if explored and reinvented. Good shit though. MVGT Suth for barely edging in punches.

[Cred]

I'ma beastin savage. Aimin at nuts w.tasers, wreakin havoc..
Trust watts'll get in his sack- Call it the Texans defense package
While ya strainin to clinch a tech, I'm rangin to grip ya neck..
Hammer ya brain in ya gut til ya resemble Krang from Dimension X

vs

Putting cowards outta their misery. dude... I'm simply more bold
You'll be shaking til the metal puts an end to your worries, that's sieving for gold


Another cool match up here. Both had there punches they got off. I thought lotb was that head in guts shit by suth. Marirlyn line was pretty played and so was that box cutter joint.

Vote - Suth

[Saitama]

History repeats. & a bum like you won't stop the beatin's
Your drop in week 10 proves that this week you'll drop a weak 10
This is a played angle, I'm almost disappointed..

I'ma beastin savage. Aimin at nuts w.tasers, wreakin havoc..
Trust watts'll get in his sack- Call it the Texans defense package

Kinda creative but wtf lol status

I spit that ready yay. Meanwhile, you bih & steady sway..
Everything i do is awesome. Proof?:You tell ya bih she is every day

Put anything after do, everything i do is sweet/hot/great etc...but a do line? really?

Yo broad a gamer that gets high & I pipe her, w.notta doubt..
Poundin her box'll give me life- The 1up shrooms just pop on out

Okish. Pound in box not a real thing any1 says..

While ya strainin to clinch a tech, I'm rangin to grip ya neck..
Hammer ya brain in ya gut til ya resemble Krang from Dimension X

Cool closer

10, btw...

We all wanna see multiple rounds chew you up if I'm painfully honest
So I'll make all the Mag content disappear like Allen Knight breaking a promise

This has been done too much early in the league, pass

Putting cowards outta their misery. dude... I'm simply more bold
You'll be shaking til the metal puts an end to your worries, that's sieving for gold

Cool concept, execution eh

Pissed your bitch want me? I'm palming the blade so it's hopeless son
I'll smash ya girl's Box, Cutter & then slash your throat open with one

Decent concept but I'm tired if er/her lines tbh, its aight

Your chick an ugly hoe, fuck. Now I'm wasting her, that's zero luck
Ain't exactly Marilyn Monroe but she still getting her mid-section blown up

I get it. Not feeling.

Take a second to chew the facts... You've lost your way dude just relax
Cross Paths with wan? I'll have eyes on ya street every day & I ain't talkin google maps

Lazy setup, just nah miss

One had older concepts with smooth execution, other had fresher ideas w/ weak execution, wording has gotten better... I liked the krang line vs sieving for gold. difference was krang was better done. Allen mag lines were done heavy early league but it would've been a decent idea, just too late. Suths opener played, as is awesome.. watts was weird but decent.. 1up shroom aight vs Marilyn Monroe line, box cutter..

Vote Suth, barely. His better lines and worse lines saved by technical execution, but that weak 10 and awesome lines weren't good lol. Wander had sieving, box cutter almost, mag almost..

[Cashius]

Neither had any haymakers. I think box cutter decent from wanderer. But I preferred the style of Suth. The content from Suth was just a bit too light for me. The weak 10 and awesome lines were pretty bad misses for me. Close but I'll give it to Wanderer.

[Toil]

Suth: 1up/box, Krang
Wand: sirving for gold, Marilyn Monroe

Closest battle this week. Giving it to Suth, just because he had the LOTB (Krang punch)

Vote=Suth

[Orc]

5-4 to Wanderer. First up by 2 votes wins.

[Orc]

I wasn't feeling much from the boy Suth this week. The swag was on point as always but the concepts just felt dated. He's still shaking the rust and that's to be expected. I liked the closer I thought that was dope. Wanderer is changing his verses every week, I think he's fine tuning a style that will be very effective once he works out what he should use and what he shouldn't. I liked the Box Cutter and the Marilyn line. I think Wanderer's misses weren't as bad as Suth's too. Suth's opener was played and set a bad tone for his verse. Wanderer gets my vote due to having one more quoteable and less bad misses.