Lotto Smirk vs Cable - LOTTO WINS

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NBL Season 9


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Cable Lotto Smirk

[Lotto Smirk]

I'm good for 10

[Cable]

here and 10 is good

[Lotto Smirk]

no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades
no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades
play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god
hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job
trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag
so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag
hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later
Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker
u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels
blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels

Over

[Cable]

i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions
once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection
kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked
stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death
the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid
if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch
spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak
have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets
ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi
that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie

[JShazo]

Giving it to lotto,, better bars, punches hit harder imo

[Schadenfreude]

Opener, Neat Sparkys & colostomy bag.
Decent drop, overdosed on the name plays, had some nice hits, nonetheless.

Opener, famine & closer.
Good showing (ducked me tho..lol), the one major problem was the lack of personals.

Overall this was pretty close imo, could go either way, but I give the slight edge to CABLE, due to the fresher use of concepts, otherwise this was extremely even.

[e11even]

no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades
no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades
eh
play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god
hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job
nah
trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag
so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag
so-so, wording is eh
hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later
Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker
I like this one
u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels
blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels
harsh, but could be worded a lil better

Over

i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions
once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection
lol, cool self name flip
kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked
stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death
wording in setup is bad, nice punch though
the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid
if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch
nah... wording was a stretch
spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak
have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets
another stretch, but ok
ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi
that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie
lol, nice finisher

close battle, but I've seen better from lotto for sure. MVGT Cable for the edge.

[SHECK WES]

no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades
no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades
decent
play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god
hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job
decent, could have been a lot better
trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag
so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag
i liked this
hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later
Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker
alright
u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels
blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels
could have been fire if u twerked ur setup a little, but not bad


vs




i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions
once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection
alright
kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked
stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death
famine wp had to tie-in, hurt the punch. Just random wp smh
the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid
if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch
nah lol
spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak
have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets
this one was better, cool
ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi
that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie
alright


Ok ok ok, lotto was consistent in his verse with some mediocre lines and some cool ones. Cable had the harder hitting ones but more misses because of the random wp being used to make a punch. I ranked all of lottos lines at least decent or better where cable had the couple of bad ones I wasn't into. Therefore I'm going wit lotto

Vote Lotto

[Saitama]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades
no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades
^ 50 shades reference seen alit over the months, so push..

play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god
hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job
Not bad, nothing crazy

trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag
so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag
Feels used..

hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later
Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker
Simple wording but effective

u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels
blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels
Ok.

Originally Posted by Cable

i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions
once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection
Aight not bad, cool self flip

kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked
stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death
^ played and flip was eh

the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid
if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch
Not a fan of single O nameflips, the concept I would've scrapped tbh
Bcuz its indirect ' O feel ya'

spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak
have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets
wording issue but ok

ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi
that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie
lotb. this was cool.

Hard call. Cable had my fave line but more misses, while lotto had more ok lines..
I went lotto, then re read and cables wording overall helped his wp, imo..

Slight edge to Cable, vote - Cable

[Wanderer]

no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades
no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades
Ok
play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god
hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job
Dunno who/what neat sparkys is.
trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag
so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag
Feels likes it's gotta been done but I liked it
hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later
Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker
Not feeling
u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels
blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels
One of the better Brussels lines. Nothing amazing

Over

Vs

i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions
once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection
Self hype kinda bar, using your own name for wordplay, not a fan
kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked
stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death
Not really feeling
the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid
if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch
Nah
spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak
have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets
Nah.. Overdosing on the word plays now too/B]
ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi
that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie
[B]Not terrible


Vote - Lotto, dude takes this for me.

[jilti]

no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades
no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades
^no
play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god
hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job
^lol
trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag
so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag
^fire
hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later
Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker
^liked this
u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels
blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels
^cool


Vs.

i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions
once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection
^more swag & flowish
kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked
stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death
^above average
the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid
if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch
^stretch
spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak
have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets
^cool
ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi
that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie
^nah



Vote- lotto

[Toil]

Lotto: 50 shades, colostomy bag, RCD breaker
Cable: famine and tunic were both decent wordplays but would've been better if they worked with ways.

Vote= Lotto