Week 4: Chat and Predictions

[asylum]

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Season 6



Week 4

Painbot & Arid vs. Pharaohs Army & 2tripple0

Pinot Grij & Nigma vs. Alice White & Mr. J

Maximus & Echo vs. Frank & MMLP

Asylum & Artifice vs. The Law & Breathless

Jesodist & Godcomplex vs. Adonis & Zee Dee

Symetrik & Vividly Vague vs. Razah & Just Write



As A Team decide on 1 story lead by Wednesday 11:59 PST or a story lead will be appointed for you. I encourage you to PM your Topical Teammates to cohesively work together on your topic. PM Each other back and forth to create a collaboration.

One of the members of the team must then PM me the final product by the due date in its desired format. I will then post the combined verses in a singular post.

I repeat: DO NOT POST YOUR VERSES INDIVIDUALLY. PM me 1 verse as a Team, which I will then post on your behalf.

This week is all about Teamwork boys and girls. Verses will be judged by overall seamlessness, contrasting style, etc.

Good luck

[MMLP]

Fooks this lol?

I never signed in, just volunteered as a willing sub for last minute writing only!

Frank pick a topic and follow ur lead!

[sral]

HAHAHHAHAA

this is a dope idea

should maybe have let ppl choose their own partners though

[UnbornBuddha]

This is a cool idea, one thing though what happens if my partner doesn't show up. Jes usually logs in last minute.

[sral]

Zee Dee isn't around much/if ever anyway

[sral]

also LOL @ the alice white/just write combination after alice no showed him/no showed last week and ppl were saying she should be struck from the league.. now she's partnering her former opponent and he needs her to show to win haha!

what a plot twist!

[Echo]

we probably should have been told about it beforehand, maybe given the opportunity to choose our partners/sign out for a week. im matched up with a guy who noshowed me last week. come on, bro.

[Pinot Grij]

It's your opponent from last week

[Echo]

It's your opponent from last week

i gathered as much man haha

usually when someone noshows they're booted the week after. it is what it is, though. Maximus let's do it.

[2tripple0]

Ugh different topics please

[Mr. J]

Ugh different topics please

How many votes do you need again? Should have done that instead of playing in the cypher

[Dabble MC]

some of these match ups are wild as shit.


also Nigma swears that not only will he not no-show. he said he'll even let Pinot write his verse to show his remorse.

[symetrik]

Pinot Grij & Nigma vs. Alice White & Just Write

yo what's up with alice getting in each week? I checked for votes and there is none. you two banging? ;)
rules are a one week suspension, follow that shit please.

[Adonis]

asylum so the line length will remain the same?

[Just Write]

Yea fuck this, I'm out..... guarantee you I will not write shit with this lowly bitch. I forfeit

[timeless]

Phew I'm glad I signed out when I did lol. Smell alot of hate coming into this thread.

Carry on. See ya next week.

[Just Write]

It's your opponent from last week

Yea except me being paired with this dumb bitch who never shows, didn't vote last week and is still in. Looking at most of these matches would imply that me and vv would be partnered.... asylum got me fucked up... you tripping bruh... pinot and nigma can have the win... you ain't gunna do me dirty like that and not hear shit from me about it

[Pinot Grij]

i gathered as much man haha

usually when someone noshows they're booted the week after. it is what it is, though. Maximus let's do it.
My opponent no-showed too, homey. Nigma, you ready to do this shit??

[Pinot Grij]

Just Write - if asylum agrees, we can do a straight up one-on-one - me vs you since we both got no-showed.... Ionno, just trying to think of solutions.

I've been no-showed in my past 4 topicals, so it's getting pretty frustrating for me as well.

[Just Write]

Just Write - if asylum agrees, we can do a straight up one-on-one - me vs you since we both got no-showed.... Ionno, just trying to think of solutions.

I've been no-showed in my past 4 topicals, so it's getting pretty frustrating for me as well.

If it was just me verse you I would Def show bro but I'm not collabing with this eHoe lmao.. people need to stop giving these Internet bitch special treatment because they female. I mean da fuck is this shit? Lmao

[Pinot Grij]

I hear you, but I also like the two-on-two concept, but yea, this person has no-showed quite a bit. So asylum... any thoughts?

[Mr. J]

LOOOOL

[Just Write]

I hear you, but I also like the two-on-two concept, but yea, this person has no-showed quite a bit. So asylum... any thoughts?

Yea so do I but you do notice how everyone for the most part is paired with their opponent from last week except me and you I believe right? asylum laughing right now thinking he a funny guy.. I guarantee you though I will not write shit with her lmao. I'm going fishing tmrw morning until Saturday and then flying out to DC until Tuesday to go easter egg hunt on the white house lawn... unless this whole fake ass partner thing is sorted I'm not logging in until Tuesday lol.

[Echo]

ay JW take a deep breath there fella

[Just Write]

ay JW take a deep breath there fella

Nah fuck that

[Just Write]

I'm rampaging today lmao

[Echo]

i agree with your frustration; i was paired with someone who ns'd also. however, calling her a dumb bitch for not showing up for an internet topical match is a little dramatic. it's not that deep. don't be that guy.

[Just Write]

i agree with your frustration; i was paired with someone who ns'd also. however, calling her a dumb bitch for not showing up for an internet topical match is a little dramatic. it's not that deep. don't be that guy.

I'll call you a dumb bitch too, you know why? Cuz this is the fuckin internet, don't take shit so serious... why you sticking up for her? You expect some epussy or sumn? Don't be "that guy"

[Just Write]

Captain save a hoe over here sticking up for someone who in all reality is most likely another dude lmao. You realize you're on netcees where nothings as it seems right?

[symetrik]

Not in lol.... not even a little

but if you treat her right.. who knows. you could be in AYYYYYYYY.
no but really alice ain't in this week. start following the rules that's why they're there.

[Mr. J]

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[Just Write]

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[Echo]

hahaha nah Just Write. you got me twisted. i'm not the awkward nerd type. i wasn't tryna white knight. this isn't shit to me.

[Just Write]

hahaha nah Just Write. you got me twisted. i'm not the awkward nerd type. i wasn't tryna white knight. this isn't shit to me.

Lmao hope not bruh, asylum the long time homie... pretty sure he knew exactly how my bi-polar ass would react and that was 75% of the reason he did this lmao.. and bro the reason I'm heated is cuz she's in on my team after no showing twice in a row and I'm undefeated so far.. yea fuckin right, against pinot and my nig-ma, who are both top notch writers. I don't mind facing them alone... but not with her... asylum stop playin

[Razah]

So many LOLs in here.

This is gonna' be difficult to do. Mr. J, I dunno how you wanna do this. But, it seems like I'm going to have to frequently log in to check PMs and random bullshit. Eh, let me know what your plans are.

timeless, you can download the free version of Starcraft 2 on their website. It lets you play online, and lets you play a couple campaigns for free.

[timeless]

So many LOLs in here.

This is gonna' be difficult to do. Mr. J, I dunno how you wanna do this. But, it seems like I'm going to have to frequently log in to check PMs and random bullshit. Eh, let me know what your plans are.

timeless, you can download the free version of Starcraft 2 on their website. It lets you play online, and lets you play a couple campaigns for free.

Word good looks I'll check it out later for sure

[Maximus]

Echo I'm so so sorry I didn't show up last week, I hardly do that and this week I'm in bro u can bet on that, so how is this gonna go down?

[Mr. J]

So many LOLs in here.

This is gonna' be difficult to do. Mr. J, I dunno how you wanna do this. But, it seems like I'm going to have to frequently log in to check PMs and random bullshit. Eh, let me know what your plans are.

timeless, you can download the free version of Starcraft 2 on their website. It lets you play online, and lets you play a couple campaigns for free.

Idk what we are gonna do tbh I woke up and saw this and thought I was still dreaming...




turns out its a reality...PM me a few ideas and we will mull it over

[asylum]

Lmao hope not bruh, asylum the long time homie... pretty sure he knew exactly how my bi-polar ass would react and that was 75% of the reason he did this lmao.. and bro the reason I'm heated is cuz she's in on my team after no showing twice in a row and I'm undefeated so far.. yea fuckin right, against pinot and my nig-ma, who are both top notch writers. I don't mind facing them alone... but not with her... asylum stop playin

I was not aware of your feelings about your intended partner.

Contemplating a solution to your particular dilemma.
I in no way intended to offend you.

[Just Write]

I was not aware of your feelings about your intended partner.

Contemplating a solution to your particular dilemma.
I in no way intended to offend you.

Lmao, nah you didn't offend me bro, you the homie... I'm just saying did she even vote this week? She should 100% not be in this competition at this point... i'd rather face them alone... that i'd do.. I'm not gunna write with someone who no shows every week. I'm gunna end up writing my part and then have a half ass piece.. I thought you were just trying to start some live drama in this bitch lol

[Just Write]

asylum give me sraL if he's willing or let me write alone yea?

[asylum]

Pinot Grij I knew just write would show that's why you got him.

As for Alice White, I'm going to be needing to hear from you immediately.
Just Write I was assured alice would be showing and thought I had given you a worthy partner, my apologies. we're going to sort this out.

Great things don't always happen inside of your comfort zone. In fact... sometimes it's good to get away from it as possible.

EVERYONE PLEASE BEGIN CONTACTING YOUR PARTNERS IMMEDIATELY.

I will be paying close attention to my PM's and we will make this week work one way or another. It will be an unforgettable experience.

[Echo]

Echo I'm so so sorry I didn't show up last week, I hardly do that and this week I'm in bro u can bet on that, so how is this gonna go down?

it's all good man, no sweat. have a look and pick some topics you'd like and we can narrow it later in the week via PM.

[Just Write]

Voting on four battles is required. If you win and don't vote the requirement you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote the requirement, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your four votes in the voting thread.


Please show me the 4 battle she voted on this week to bypass the suspension please

[asylum]

This is a cool idea, one thing though what happens if my partner doesn't show up. Jes usually logs in last minute.

In this case, the abandoned party will gain full creative control over their verse.

[asylum]

Ugh different topics please

If you've never done story leads, it's a cornerstone of topical writing.
You simply start where it puts you, give very little background information, and move forward allowing the story to tell itself. It's a fun process and will be beneficial to you in particular.

[Mr. J]

Ill team with Alice & write PPs verse that should end the controversy and allow you to write a mag

[Just Write]

Plot twist..... I'm alice white

[asylum]

Ill team with Alice & write PPs verse that should end the controversy and allow you to write a mag

I love you, J. Seriously man. Thank you.

[Mr. J]

Alice White you better not make me write 80 lines otherwisr I'll send 2tripple0 at you



PP I got the opening lines for your verse...


Call me Cheddar because I'm making it grate
I'm cracking your eggs & baking a cake
out in Vegas feeding calfs & raising the stakes..


you like?

[Adonis]

I love you, J. Seriously man. Thank you.

You didn't answer the most important question, which will always be mine. What is the line length? I see you want one verse between two writers, so I assume you a regular length, cause I know I usually write twenty, but my partner likes the 60 line verse. Holler

[Alice White]

Plot twist..... I'm alice white

Sorry, can't bother quoting all of your comments here now, so I'll just make it quick.

in reference to your post: well, thankfully you're not.

Just to let you know, this time you observed it correctly, I didn't vote on the battles yesterday, which rightfully results in my suspension this week.

OAN: Thanks for all the lovely comments you made about me. It actually made for an interesting read.

[Just Write]

OAN: Thanks for all the lovely comments you made about me. It actually made for an interesting read.

Anytime...

[sral]

asylum give me sraL if he's willing or let me write alone yea?

I'm headed to Ireland bro, I won't be around, it's my first wedding anniversary!

[Just Write]

I'm headed to Ireland bro, I won't be around, it's my first wedding anniversary!

Congrats! Have fun bro, we got it sorted.

I'm going to bora bora in June for my honeymoon... was very close to picking ireland.. maybe next year

[Razah]

Alice White you better not make me write 80 lines otherwisr I'll send 2tripple0 at you



PP I got the opening lines for your verse...


Call me Cheddar because I'm making it grate
I'm cracking your eggs & baking a cake
out in Vegas feeding calfs & raising the stakes..


you like?

And you're not in the NBL why!?

[Mr. J]

And you're not in the NBL why!?

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[FLOOR LINED]

I predict that, in general, whoever is taking the time to post the awesome magazines will have less time to write their peace in the competitions and therefore might not win as many as they normally would!!! Good job on the mags!

[asylum]

I'm headed to Ireland bro, I won't be around, it's my first wedding anniversary!

Happy Anniversary bro!

[asylum]

You didn't answer the most important question, which will always be mine. What is the line length? I see you want one verse between two writers, so I assume you a regular length, cause I know I usually write twenty, but my partner likes the 60 line verse. Holler

I am thinking 20 per contender. 40 line pieces, smooth this along.

What you guys think?

[Alice White]

Anytime...

Oh I don't think it would be exciting to see another live drama performance/bitching by you, but thanks.

[ZeeDee]

Zee Dee isn't around much/if ever anyway

Baron? I think so, hello Mr Englishman

[Just Write]

Oh I don't think it would be exciting to see another live drama performance/bitching by you, but thanks.

Well hot damn this is the most active you've been in this league in the last 2 weeks. Maybe all you need someone to tighten your leash a bit to get you to perform better... you're welcome

[Mr. J]

2tripple0 you bean bag.....what do you think of your opening lines...

[Mr. J]

asylum give me a pic from last week you wanted to see used...I'm bored...

[Mr. J]

You do know that Love Is War piece was written to the train station scene right?


I'm still pissed no one liked my Leonardo DiCaprio references in last weeks piece by the way.


I hate you UnbornBuddha

[Mr. J]

I haven't smoked in 2 weeks Adonis.....I am saddened by this

[Mr. J]

Just so you all know I am 2tripple0

[Mr. J]

Smh @ 'Out in Vegas feeding calfs & raising the stakes LOOOOL

[Mr. J]

shiiiiit.....I took it upon myself to come up with something asylum

[sral]

Baron? I think so, hello Mr Englishman

sup Dic?

stick around

[MMLP]

Topic: There’s a guy sitting on a park bench reading a newspaper…

interests me the most Frank

[Diablo]

tbr anyone complaining about topics sucks

end of discussion

man up you pussies (no offence Alice White)

[2tripple0]

Lol in on vere all the time just don't post much will be sure to drop something I'll but I'm running low on ideas

[Frank]

Topic: There’s a guy sitting on a park bench reading a newspaper…

interests me the most Frank
sraL

8.He turned the key in the lock and opened the door. To his horror, he saw…

[Mr. J]

whats the line limit...80...

[asylum]

VERSES MAY NOT EXCEED 64 Lines

[Mr. J]

Frank is going to convince MMLP to let him write 128 line story about life on a park bench

[Pinot Grij]

Asylum, you paired me with 2 of the past 4 guys who no-showed me. And J did it on purpose because he's a scared little cunthole. Plus Alice White who no-showed two weeks in a row. Count me out, dog.

[sral]

sraL

8.He turned the key in the lock and opened the door. To his horror, he saw…

MMLP isn't me, yo

We've even posted video mags here previously with us both in lol

[Mr. J]

Alice White & Sylvia Black


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[Razah]

Alice White & Sylvia Black


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I just laughed out loud.

lmao

[Echo]

Asylum, you paired me with 2 of the past 4 guys who no-showed me. And J did it on purpose because he's a scared little cunthole. Plus Alice White who no-showed two weeks in a row. Count me out, dog.

asylum, you can pair up Maximus with Nigma. i'd also like to step out this week. i will be back the following week.

[Sylvia Black]

[QUOTE=Mr. J;575085]Alice White & Sylvia Black

Mr. J
What's up?

[Mr. J]

Mr. J
What's up?

Just admiring the grey area....or is it gray...welcome

[Sylvia Black]

Thank you.

I told them life wasn't black and white.
They didn't believe me.

[Mr. J]

Thank you.

I told them life wasn't black and white.
They didn't believe me.

May your stay be an interesting one...we have all sorts of nut jobs here


In fact I hear one calling my name now..

O tortured soul who lay in the bottom of a hole
Why must you bother me so...?
Where is your heart? Show me a part of your soul..

never mind...it was no one...

[Maximus]

Nigma are u down?.. Apparently Echo aint showing up

[MMLP]

Cant see all these battles happening tbh. Poor timing all round

Ppl should of been allowed to pick if they wanted to do this and who they wanted to partner up with!

I've started writing tho!

[Frank]

MMLP

Right backatcha.

[asylum]

I hope you all find it in yourselves to work with your assigned partner or at least produce something so your opponent isn't no showed.
Just PM me something to include alongside your partners if communication is proving difficult. Good luck this week, everyone.

[Mr. J]

How fun..

[breathless]

Haven't received even an "alright" response from The Law in a day and a half, so, I'm just going to write a verse to a topic, and another split 4 bar stanza/hopefully back and forth piece with spots for him to fill in if he doesn't get at me tonight. I mean shit, collabs aren't that complicated to arraign, and are actually fun when it's thrown on you unexpectedly. Its a true test of your abilities I both commend and condemn pat for this, although I find it a great challenge to have to endure during the return of my all too long hiatus, I also instantly foresaw it as being a major hinderance to many of these pussy ass bitches

[Mr. J]

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[asylum]

Artifice hey bro check your PM's and get back at me real quick!

[Mr. J]

Don't give them an ext. give them guts

[Adonis]

Haven't received even an "alright" response from The Law in a day and a half, so, I'm just going to write a verse to a topic, and another split 4 bar stanza/hopefully back and forth piece with spots for him to fill in if he doesn't get at me tonight. I mean shit, collabs aren't that complicated to arraign, and are actually fun when it's thrown on you unexpectedly. Its a true test of your abilities I both commend and condemn pat for this, although I find it a great challenge to have to endure during the return of my all too long hiatus, I also instantly foresaw it as being a major hinderance to many of these pussy ass bitches



I couldn't agree with this any more. I welcomed the challenge, and in theory see why this is a dope idea, while simultaneously wish nobody ever tries this again unless you get a set partner for a tournament.

Which would be pretty sick by the way Frank should host

[asylum]

that would be amazing.

[Adonis]

that would be amazing.


My list of potential teammates for this fictitious Tag Team Topical Tourney would be...

patrown - for sure
Frank - because I feel like I could write a verse, send it to him and it would just give him more ammo to work with
King Ra. and Razah- Cause we write about similar shit

And Finally

@Godcomplex - cause I could expand on his verses and make them even more condensed



The others are inactive but would be top of my list in order

3PA/ Three-Planes-Aligned/ Johnathan Mercy
Paytience/ Anjahl
Devoid of Orbit/ Tali Rodriguez

[Maximus]

asylum Echo said he aint showing up so apparently I have no partner

[Adonis]

asylum Echo said he aint showing up so apparently I have no partner

Just write a verse then. Simple. No need for a partner

[Razah]

The tag team topical tournament would be really dope.

[Mr. J]

*Imagine Passive Aggressive Complaint here*

[Razah]

How many weeks will this season be??

[Mr. J]

Dont sign out yet Razah

[Razah]

Don't be telling me what to do Mr. J

[Mr. J]

thats an order...

[Razah]

But I'm lazy though

[Pharaohs Army]

Unfortunately, despite an extension, I have discovered that I will not be able to participate this week..
I'm very sorry, as I thought I could do this week 4 (signed in for that reason), but something has come up. and I will not be available to work on things or be online for a few days or more
Truly sorry triple0 my teammate,
If anyone is without a partner currently, and if there is any possible lastminute way to pair them up. hope so
and sorry again League. good luck

[Mr. J]

If controversy got me worried then Im not a writer...
Its Saturday night & I havent written shit, gotta work..
Got a lighter? Got a gallon? I got the high, got the thirst.
Hopping fires, jack be nimble, jack be quick on a verse...
On a wire, trying to find a balance while watchin Clerks
Poppin tires swerving from thread to thread, GOD! the nerve...
Watch supplier, you got the time...but not the work...
Im waiting for the mag drop, batters up in the sandlot
GTA is my sandbox, got my ass showing with my pants off
look at the haves & have nots, just hand jobs on my Hancock
John, moved the magnavox & brought in his first Smart TV
silly kid...tricks are for those who hang back idolize eazy e...
nothing against him but I was more into D O C & maybe Earl
thats DMX dont make me have to wet up your jheri curl...

[Mr. J]

Ima write to one of your topics for fun til you drop that mag asylum

[Mr. J]

well I had fun with one of your topics asylum...


Alice White Im ready when you are :D

[e11even]

Just Write just sent our verse to asylum. Hope you guys are showing :)

[Mr. J]

BORED!

[UnbornBuddha]

Yeah I would like to hear Mr. J flowing. If his not scared that is ;)

[asylum]

BORED!

yeah lets get you on the mic see how bored you get g.

[asylum]

im bound to keep it flowin like a jet ski
feel that bass kickin like jet li
when i get free you bet we can't get beat
that's right. fret free. haha, check me.

[Just Write]

Just Write just sent our verse to asylum. Hope you guys are showing :)

Razah

[Adonis]

ZeeDee do I need to finish the verse or you got it?

[Mr. J]

yeah lets get you on the mic see how bored you get g.

But...but....Im too deadly

[Mr. J]

I think Ill write another fun verse for you asylum, seems like Im the only one using these topics

[Razah]

Razah

symetrik

[symetrik]

symetrik

what you need bruh

[Razah]

Nothing, you were just the only one who wasn't tagged out of our battle.

Anyways, asylum been had our verse.

[symetrik]

Nothing, you were just the only one who wasn't tagged out of our battle.

Anyways, asylum been had our verse.
aight. see you soon (gun fingers bang bang)

[Just Write]

Washington D.C. is dope as fuck... didn't know the pentagon was so big

[e11even]

Washington D.C. is dope as fuck... didn't know the pentagon was so big

That bitch is humangous.

[e11even]

symetrik Razah Just Write
Just cuz.

[Adonis]

@godcomplex UnbornBuddha you changed your name back?

verse is already sent to pat. Not sure, but it was something like 50 lines or just under, if you care.


G/Luck brother. Wish our first match was more traditional, maybe next time

[Just Write]

asylum you know I wrote more than half of that verse in our battle too right? Not just razah

Ive read some nice meshing of styles so far, good verses guys

[asylum]

Did not know that. THANK YOU SIR. fyi I wrote last weeks piece with you as my intended audience and im very glad you enjoyed it. Your vote confirmed I was successful.

[Just Write]

Also asylum... I have to show you something when I get back to cali... I've been working on that site we talked about bro

[Just Write]

Did not know that. THANK YOU SIR. fyi I wrote last weeks piece with you as my intended audience and im very glad you enjoyed it. Your vote confirmed I was successful.

Was my favorite of the week too... by far :)

[asylum]

Also asylum... I have to show you something when I get back to cali... I've been working on that site we talked about bro

Excellent. Trying to keep bandwidth low, utilizing free services will be the optimal approach. Longevity is intended, dont plan on using aggressive banners. You da real mvp.

Edit : thank you very much.

[UnbornBuddha]

@godcomplex UnbornBuddha you changed your name back?

verse is already sent to pat. Not sure, but it was something like 50 lines or just under, if you care.


G/Luck brother. Wish our first match was more traditional, maybe next time

Yes, I reverted back to my former self. And best of luck to you as well. Its a little disappointing having to face two people by myself. Oh well. I'm sure we will meet again in a more traditional manner.

[Mr. J]

well that was an anticlimactic partnership...











I was going to fool around & write another fun verse asylum but had to approach this on my lonesome sadly...


oh well...

[asylum]

Artifice ??

[Just Write]

well that was an anticlimactic partnership... had to approach this on my lonesome sadly...
oh well...
So let me get this right? That bitch no showed 3rd week in a row? Lmao throw that bitch out on the street where she belongs haha

[Adonis]

Yes, I reverted back to my former self. And best of luck to you as well. Its a little disappointing having to face two people by myself. Oh well. I'm sure we will meet again in a more traditional manner.



Yeah, my partner was a no show as well. I wrote half a verse and he was supposed to finish it, I did late last night or the verse would have been a for sure loss given it was incomplete. Good luck though buddha

[Mr. J]

Should have used the verse I dropped in the OM -_-



I'll get my votes in soon.

[Razah]

asylum you know Just Write wrote more than half of that verse in our battle too right? Not just me

[Just Write]

asylum you know Just Write wrote more than half of that verse in our battle too right? Not just me

But you came up with the sick ass twist at the end <3

[Razah]

damn, so I only got one battle to vote on?

crazy.
asylum, how long is the season?

[Just Write]

Personally, I think the people who didn't show should get a loss, even if their team won. It's not fair to put all the weight on one person in a team battle

[Just Write]

damn, so I only got one battle to vote on?

crazy.
asylum, how long is the season?

16 weeks

[symetrik]

damn, so I only got one battle to vote on?

crazy.
asylum, how long is the season?

does that mean I only need to vote on the one, instead of four?
just curious, my day is packed. want to make sure I don't get dq'd lmao

[Mr. J]

asylum you know Just Write wrote more than half of that verse in our battle too right? Not just me

I thought it was just Razah....

























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[Mr. J]

double post of death........but Im done voting.. asylum close these up and lets get next week started

[Mr. J]

There's only 2 battles open...tf is the hold up?






Yall got extensions every week and this is how.you repay the bossman? Tf!?!

[asylum]

If you guys would drop some votes, that'd be greeeeeat.

[Artifice]

Stuck at work for 4 more hours, leave the battles open and I'll vote soon as I get home

[Just Write]

If you guys would drop some votes, that'd be greeeeeat.

voted, sorry man i tried to do it yesterday but i got pissed off because my long ass vote got deleted and im on vacation so i was frustrated. ill be home tonight and ready for the new week to start though

[Razah]

Will vote later tonight.

On my phone and at the hospital.

:/

[asylum]

Will vote later tonight.

On my phone and at the hospital.

:/

Are you okay buddy? What happened? I hope everyone's okay.

[timeless]

asylum keep me signed in for the upcoming week por favor

[Just Write]

2 battles and can barely get enough votes? Lmao

Anyways finally back to cali <3

P.s. fuck American Airlines

[Just Write]

at the hospital.

:/

You good?

[asylum]

asylum keep me signed in for the upcoming week por favor

i got you g.

[Adonis]

2 battles and can barely get enough votes? Lmao

Anyways finally back to cali <3

P.s. fuck American Airlines



Sounds like a good story that you're not telling us. Either use it as a verse or tell us, cause you've peeked my interest. I love American Airlines except the one time they lost my luggage, but that was half my fault for checking in mad late and they had it fed exed two days later

[Echo]

this week was a write-off. i'm looking forward to next week

props to asylum for pushing out the envelope, tho. unfortunately, us storytellers are undoubtedly a fickle lot.

[Mr. J]

piqued my interest*

[Just Write]

Sounds like a good story that you're not telling us. Either use it as a verse or tell us, cause you've peeked my interest. I love American Airlines except the one time they lost my luggage, but that was half my fault for checking in mad late and they had it fed exed two days later

well, they changed their policy so only active military get pre-board privileges, and so that people with small children cant pre-board either. plus they tried to separated my fiance, our 3 year old, and myself from each other on one of our flight (who does that?) and on another flight my little girl was sick and this fuckin prick of an old man in front of me kept mad dogging her so i told him if he casts one more dirty look towards my daughter their wasn't enough tsa agents in the world that could keep me from choking the shit out of him, practically got a round of applause from most the passengers but the flight attendants didnt like it much, another flight the dude with the soda cart ran over my toe while i was sleeping (in Jordan flip flops btw) and then instead of saying sorry told me i need to watch where i put my feet, keep in mind im 6'5 and barely able to fit my legs in these aisles that were built for midgets.. i dont know man, just horrible trip back from D.C. on the way there it was chill though.i mean not tryin to bitch or anything though lmao



asylum when the new battles going up? we already lost almost 2 days. can we post the new ones and leave these up too or something?

[Razah]

PS: I'm fine guys.

The "cold" I thought I had was acute bronchitis. My doctor wasn't available and it was hard for me to breathe so I ended up taking a trip to the hospital. I'm good though

This week is taking too long though. Hurry this shit uppp.

[Adonis]

Patience league. A moderator can't always be available. Just cause you are free now doesn't mean pat is. But if asylum you need help I got topics on deck, though they will just be a famous and old rock group song titles.

[Just Write]

Patience league. A moderator can't always be available. Just cause you are free now doesn't mean pat is. But if asylum you need help I got topics on deck, though they will just be a famous and old rock group song titles.

Definitely not on pat, I more mean the voters are slacking. Pat's doing a great job