Tic vs VividlyVague - TIC WINS

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NBL Season 9


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Tic Vividlyvague

[e11even]

Yo.

[Tic]

Sup. 12?

[e11even]

Sup. 12?

Yea. I'm down.

[Tic]

Listen up...

Sex life doomed as it is, so you with a girl is humorous, Viv
Shit, the last bitch with Vivid memories was sexually abused as a kid
You won’t see me sneak up, and once I shoot I’m out
Ready w/ my Arm extended, roll up & click! I call it the computer mouse
See ya life before you. The future's what this kid allures to..
Now Picture ya brains detailed allll over the wall. That's a Vivid mural
Ya girl can't get enough. She loves my D cuz it's better
She'll come clean but leave wearin a White Mask like V for Vendetta
Fuck a Wired jaw, when the Shotty blast ya head'll be missin
Dog. You'll have more 12 Gauge runnin thru you than a car stereo system
Quit Milkin ya wins. They're no shows, it's like a fad every week
This fgt is Meek, so it's no surprise not ONE verse that Pasteurize has any Heat

[Netcees Battle League]

VividlyVague's verse:


Stop text, bro. NY has enough faggot gimics.
The Big Apple? I'll destroy it's core for having a fat tic in it.
Seriously, your girl wanna ride me cuz she can't stand a tard.
We spoke and I pegged her... Bitch said your frame can't handlebars.
T bones? HA! He gets no ass! His bitch laughs when she sees him!
You wouldn't even see this romantic in the grass by the colosseum.
But fa real. You gotta wrap it up with his chick if you take it there...
His bitch stays wit balloons in her, she's the prize basket at the fair.
You fight so hard for Ls, I'll donate the only one in my name, bruh.
Knuckles? These hands'll be on you faster than you can scream "day spa".
Dude you're such a fuckboy... I dare a Tic ta visit my stoop, b.
You trespass and I'll ice t like they did in that movie.

[Schadenfreude]

Tic u had your opener, the mural & stereo bars that landed nicely. Read as a dope, but quick key style, so the wording was wierd at points in the verse, otherwise good shit.

Vivid u had the pegs/handlebars line, as well as the balloon joke, the rest of the verse was mediocre tbh. The namplys was badly worded and/or forced, read as really lazy.

Overall TIC took it, somewhat of a disappointing battle because both are FAR better than these verse showed.

[SHECK WES]

Sex life doomed as it is, so you with a girl is humorous, Viv
Shit, the last bitch with Vivid memories was sexually abused as a kid
alright not bad
You won’t see me sneak up, and once I shoot I’m out
Ready w/ my Arm extended, roll up & click! I call it the computer mouse
lol this was corny af my man
See ya life before you. The future's what this kid allures to..
Now Picture ya brains detailed allll over the wall. That's a Vivid mural
ooo I liked this one
Ya girl can't get enough. She loves my D cuz it's better
She'll come clean but leave wearin a White Mask like V for Vendetta
lol alright
Fuck a Wired jaw, when the Shotty blast ya head'll be missin
Dog. You'll have more 12 Gauge runnin thru you than a car stereo system
alright
Quit Milkin ya wins. They're no shows, it's like a fad every week
This fgt is Meek, so it's no surprise not ONE verse that Pasteurize has any Heat
ehh dunno bout this one, feel like that wp has been used, could be wrong tho


Vs


Stop text, bro. NY has enough faggot gimics.
The Big Apple? I'll destroy it's core for having a fat tic in it.
hmm decent here
Seriously, your girl wanna ride me cuz she can't stand a tard.
We spoke and I pegged her... Bitch said your frame can't handlebars.
alright cool wp
T bones? HA! He gets no ass! His bitch laughs when she sees him!
You wouldn't even see this romantic in the grass by the colosseum.
romantic wp didn't really make sense in this case, forced bar
But fa real. You gotta wrap it up with his chick if you take it there...
His bitch stays wit balloons in her, she's the prize basket at the fair.
lol damn this could have been so dope but the way you ended it took some umph away, this was ok
You fight so hard for Ls, I'll donate the only one in my name, bruh.
Knuckles? These hands'll be on you faster than you can scream "day spa".
lol nah didn't like this one
Dude you're such a fuckboy... I dare a Tic ta visit my stoop, b.
You trespass and I'll ice t like they did in that movie.
ice t had mad potential but if used way differently than u did it here, this is decent at best as it is


Not a terrible battle, this nigga schaduenblablahfraud needs to chill and give ppl some more credit for their bars. Aside from a few corny lines in the battle it wasn't that bad of a match, both had concepts and some good lines. Tic had some more quality in his verse tho, and less misses than Viv. Viv still came ok but doesn't win because he had more misses.

Vote Tic

[Joe Boston]

Fucking wifi sucks at work broke verses down and everything but lost connection when submitted so im gonna do a basic break down from phone sorry yall

Vivid wording hurt u alot my dude u had some potential concepts but butchered them and np was forced. Romantic was forced and i wouldve liked it if worded better. Handlebars was ok and the ballonons concept had potential. Tic Vivid mural white mask v for vendetta and also 12 gauge which i really dug. All nice concepts creative and good impact.

V/Tic

[Saint]

Tic got it... better concepts worded better..

Viv - handlebars, concepts and execution a little boand for me..

Tic - vivid mural, 12 gauge.. mouse line was corny bro tho lol

Vote Tic

[Toil]

Tic: Vivid mural, V for Vendetta
Vivid: handlebars

Some decent bars, but Tic took this. I really like the Vendetta concept, reckon it couldn've been worded better though

Vote = Tic

[jilti]

Sex life doomed as it is, so you with a girl is humorous, Viv
Shit, the last bitch with Vivid memories was sexually abused as a kid
You won’t see me sneak up, and once I shoot I’m out
Ready w/ my Arm extended, roll up & click! I call it the computer mouse
Ya girl can't get enough. She loves my D cuz it's better
She'll come clean but leave wearin a White Mask like V for Vendetta
Fuck a Wired jaw, when the Shotty blast ya head'll be missin
Dog. You'll have more 12 Gauge runnin thru you than a car stereo system

Vs.


Seriously, your girl wanna ride me cuz she can't stand a tard.
We spoke and I pegged her... Bitch said your frame can't handlebars.
T bones? HA! He gets no ass! His bitch laughs when she sees him!
You wouldn't even see this romantic in the grass by the colosseum
You fight so hard for Ls, I'll donate the only one in my name, bruh.
Knuckles? These hands'll be on you faster than you can scream "day spa".
Dude you're such a fuckboy... I dare a Tic ta visit my stoop, b.
You trespass and I'll ice t like they did in that movie.

4 quotables a piece, but tics were better

V/tic