Wanderer vs Artifice - WANDERER WINS

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Wanderer Artifice

[Wanderer]

Let's get it. Got time for 10-12

[Artifice]

10-12 sounds good, we'll just match whoever drops first.

[Artifice]

if it goes down to the letter u'll never write this victory
cuz when I take the W... i'm takin' U out twice as efficiently
trigger happy text is pathetic, see what this bitch ignoring
is that in real life he couldn't put up a fight against a trigger warning
watch u drop once I'm roastin', pour it on to top me up
u'll have to learn to handle bein' on the side like a coffee cup
truth hurts, to preserve what tiny rep remains can it soon
cuz the only one feelin' Wan... is another gay spanish dude
so go dance away, ain't a damn shame u can't stay
u never made the cut but still suck... straight rip-off like a bandaid

[Wanderer]

Which clown said you'd be dope at text? This easy to me
someone might've told you you're 'hitting but it's fake'. WWE
Pistol to ya skull. Feel like a millennium waiting for the bullet to enter
I'm pointing at the Dome & waiting for the flash like tourists in London's city center
Ya girl comes home, I got the knife to your neck & she's no chance to hide
When I push she goes running for the door like I've let her know I'm outside
& that pussy was a fuckin mess. Everybody nutted on her cum stained chest
See we all call her Bermuda.. cos entering her triangle results in unexplained deaths
You're definitely queer. It's all about gay bars when you on the mack
So for being a faggot I'll body Art & I ain't talking bout the butterfly tattoo on ya back

[SHECK WES]

if it goes down to the letter u'll never write this victory
cuz when I take the W... i'm takin' U out twice as efficiently
uh what?
trigger happy text is pathetic, see what this bitch ignoring
is that in real life he couldn't put up a fight against a trigger warning
nah man
watch u drop once I'm roastin', pour it on to top me up
u'll have to learn to handle bein' on the side like a coffee cup
lol this is stupid but it made me laugh
truth hurts, to preserve what tiny rep remains can it soon
cuz the only one feelin' Wan... is another gay spanish dude
wan/Juan is played on him
so go dance away, ain't a damn shame u can't stay
u never made the cut but still suck... straight rip-off like a bandaid
nah



Vs


Which clown said you'd be dope at text? This easy to me
someone might've told you you're 'hitting but it's fake'. WWE
wording and execution weird here. Plus not feeling this concept
Pistol to ya skull. Feel like a millennium waiting for the bullet to enter
I'm pointing at the Dome & waiting for the flash like tourists in London's city center
alright, prob could have done without London city center, but still not bad here
Ya girl comes home, I got the knife to your neck & she's no chance to hide
When I push she goes running for the door like I've let her know I'm outside
not feeling this
& that pussy was a fuckin mess. Everybody nutted on her cum stained chest
See we all call her Bermuda.. cos entering her triangle results in unexplained deaths
lol cool
You're definitely queer. It's all about gay bars when you on the mack
So for being a faggot I'll body Art & I ain't talking bout the butterfly tattoo on ya back
ha alright

Art seems somewhat new, his concepts and wording this week were off, mostly basic concepts that had no real thought in them idk. Wan came a little below average this week than he usually does, prob because the quality of his opponents verse he knew he didn't have to go all out. Wan had a few decent ones, no haymakers in this battle tbh but wanderer gets this one easily.

Vote Wanderer

[Toil]

Art: coffee cup
Wan: London dome, body art

Art had some creative concepts, but he didn't word them aggressively even for me.

Vote = Juan

[Habitat]

Artifice
if it goes down to the letter u'll never write this victory
cuz when I take the W... i'm takin' U out twice as efficiently
-nah bro.. double u, really?
trigger happy text is pathetic, see what this bitch ignoring
is that in real life he couldn't put up a fight against a trigger warning
-no good
watch u drop once I'm roastin', pour it on to top me up
u'll have to learn to handle bein' on the side like a coffee cup
-i get it, but... saying he on the side make it sound like he's ur side bitch. could been good but this shit is weak as is
truth hurts, to preserve what tiny rep remains can it soon
cuz the only one feelin' Wan... is another gay spanish dude
-this is veryyy lite.
so go dance away, ain't a damn shame u can't stay
u never made the cut but still suck... straight rip-off like a bandaid
-nahhh bro

Wanderer
Which clown said you'd be dope at text? This easy to me
someone might've told you you're 'hitting but it's fake'. WWE
-nah this is not good
Pistol to ya skull. Feel like a millennium waiting for the bullet to enter
I'm pointing at the Dome & waiting for the flash like tourists in London's city center
-ehh i guess this is iight.....
Ya girl comes home, I got the knife to your neck & she's no chance to hide
When I push she goes running for the door like I've let her know I'm outside
-nah bro
& that pussy was a fuckin mess. Everybody nutted on her cum stained chest
See we all call her Bermuda.. cos entering her triangle results in unexplained deaths
-not diggin this
You're definitely queer. It's all about gay bars when you on the mack
So for being a faggot I'll body Art & I ain't talking bout the butterfly tattoo on ya back
-I've seen many body art np's in my time... This one was not put together well, but it may still be the lotb.

Not impressed with either performance. Wanderer got this though.

v/wanderer

[Schadenfreude]

Artifice your wording really hurt u here, because a few of those concepts would have landed well w/ harsher, more polished wording. Wanderer pretty much post a 'good enough' verse & it was..lol. Nothing crazy in your offering, just did the job, giving to WANDERER.

[JShazo]

vote wanderer -

both had more misses than hits, imo, but got wanderer edging with the london and tattoo bars, art didn't really have anything that hit for me. the coffee cup line was OK tho.

[Joe Boston]

Artifice

if it goes down to the letter u'll never write this victory
cuz when I take the W... i'm takin' U out twice as efficiently
No this is a,very basic flip been done for ages

trigger happy text is pathetic, see what this bitch ignoring
is that in real life he couldn't put up a fight against a trigger warning
Had potential couldve worded better

watch u drop once I'm roastin', pour it on to top me up
u'll have to learn to handle bein' on the side like a coffee cup
Bein/bean if thats the wordplay kinda corny

truth hurts, to preserve what tiny rep remains can it soon
cuz the only one feelin' Wan... is another gay spanish dude
Played np

so go dance away, ain't a damn shame u can't stay
u never made the cut but still suck... straight rip-off like a bandaid
Nah played

Wanderer


Which clown said you'd be dope at text? This easy to me
someone might've told you you're 'hitting but it's fake'. WWE
Didnt like the wording of this

Pistol to ya skull. Feel like a millennium waiting for the bullet to enter
I'm pointing at the Dome & waiting for the flash like tourists in London's city center
Dope

Ya girl comes home, I got the knife to your neck & she's no chance to hide
When I push she goes running for the door like I've let her know I'm outside
Nah

& that pussy was a fuckin mess. Everybody nutted on her cum stained chest
See we all call her Bermuda.. cos entering her triangle results in unexplained deaths
Lmao

You're definitely queer. It's all about gay bars when you on the mack
So for being a faggot I'll body Art & I ain't talking bout the butterfly tattoo on ya back
Ive seen bodyart np flips before this was displayed good but overall played.

Art didnt have much quotable to me bunch of basic hits no creativity wording was off. Wanderer that london dome line was dope and the bermuda line nice humor factor.

V/Wanderer

[jilti]

Coffee cup by artifice was cool

Wanderer had wwe, waiting for the flash which was flat out nasttyyy, and butterfly tattoo which was funny


Voye- wanderer

[Destroyer]

wanderer killed this
coffee cup was all I was feeling from the other dude and that was simple and not hard hitting jut clever

v/wanderer