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Orc
04-04-2016, 06:08 AM
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Toil @Wear Shhh

SHECK WES
04-04-2016, 11:59 AM
Don't guilt trip me yo lol I just wanna do reg cause I got no showed last week

Only gimmick I'll do is if you're des & I'm muff

Toil
04-04-2016, 12:11 PM
I got no idea what that means. Lmao. Reg battle it is I guess

SHECK WES
04-07-2016, 12:25 AM
Sent 14 Toil

Toil
04-07-2016, 03:14 PM
Ext please

Toil
04-08-2016, 05:41 AM
Vs Batshit

I spaffed in ya dame she lay flat as I came..
Fixed her up by inserting little Ts..like Orc with HabiTaT’s name
I’ll send ya to the world beyond as I smother ya pride..
..at least now ya future matches ur sexuality: Bat’s for the other side
I’ll puncture his lungs, watch B’s pleas at T’s knees
..the medics'll have to slap a tube to this pussy...just call him a she wee
Got T at the wheel. Push the pedal flat with my heal
I’ll leave Bat's head stretched across my bonnet like the batmobile
I'll bleed out this heathen, when I cut through his spleen, 'n
..leave his blood endlessly streaming more than Spotify premium
Ya beckon and say ‘heeeeeeeey’, one’ve the biggest gays in town
Fucksake. Bats are meant to see through sound waves..not have a see-through wave sound
Always dreamed u’d face me, I’m the star ya love reading
Facing T got u all 'pumping heart and deep breathing' more than the cpr you'll be needing


Orc I dropped

SHECK WES
04-08-2016, 12:14 PM
Ur old, tired & beat, u dnt quit now I'll have the beamer' barkin
put a big round under ur eye.. boy you need to sleep more often
Best believe I'm next up, shank get antsy if u think this is yo time
Knife got a fastpass, that mean if toil crew In front then I'm cuttin the whole line
Old gats for u old heads. raise ya blood pressure & split ya head
Homie I'll hit u wit the 40 then the 45.. I call em nik & des
Nigga I'm bout to bless ya soul! But at the same time Ima pack the heat..
Cuz when my arm start wavin' & I start sprayin just kno I ain't a catholic priest
Ur set can get merkd while u chillin, wat im packin a make ya core leak
Clean out ur whole section wit the auto.. that Roomba's a sure beast
Meet you and ya girl on the beach, we'll spend the whole day whilin'
dat'll b the last time u see this Guyana girl together, cuz I'll em both dead on the island
I'll leave this player dead, trust. He can get it wit the hands or even the tommy
have you running away from so many arms u'll feel like ur playin nazi zombies

Hush
04-08-2016, 01:24 PM
Vs Batshit

I spaffed in ya dame she lay flat as I came..
Fixed her up by inserting little Ts..like Orc with HabiTaT’s name
----eh
I’ll send ya to the world beyond as I smother ya pride..
..at least now ya future matches ur sexuality: Bat’s for the other side
---nice
I’ll puncture his lungs, watch B’s pleas at T’s knees
..the medics'll have to slap a tube to this pussy...just call him a she wee
/---eh
Got T at the wheel. Push the pedal flat with my heal
I’ll leave Bat's head stretched across my bonnet like the bat-mobile
---eh so so
I'll bleed out this heathen, when I cut through his spleen, 'n
..leave his blood endlessly streaming more than Spotify premium
---ok
Ya beckon and say ‘heeeeeeeey’, one’ve the biggest gays in town
Fucksake. Bats are meant to see through sound waves..not have a see-through wave sound
---nah
Always dreamed u’d face me, I’m the star ya love reading
Facing T got u all 'pumping heart and deep breathing' more than the cpr you'll be needing
---nah

Orc I dropped

Ur old, tired & beat, u dnt quit now I'll have the beamer' barkin
put a big round under ur eye.. boy you need to sleep more often
---nope
Best believe I'm next up, shank get antsy if u think this is yo time
Knife got a fastpass, that mean if toil crew In front then I'm cuttin the whole line
---nice
Old gats for u old heads. raise ya blood pressure & split ya head
Homie I'll hit u wit the 40 then the 45.. I call em nik & des
---eh
Nigga I'm bout to bless ya soul! But at the same time Ima pack the heat..
Cuz when my arm start wavin' & I start sprayin just kno I ain't a catholic priest
---nope
Ur set can get merkd while u chillin, wat im packin a make ya core leak
Clean out ur whole section wit the auto.. that Roomba's a sure beast
---almost
Meet you and ya girl on the beach, we'll spend the whole day whilin'
dat'll b the last time u see this Guyana girl together, cuz I'll em both dead on the island
---nope
I'll leave this player dead, trust. He can get it wit the hands or even the tommy
have you running away from so many arms u'll feel like ur playin nazi zombies
---nope




Toil got This his missed weren't as bad even tho wear had lotb his bad lines were really bad


V toil

Barcotic
04-08-2016, 03:11 PM
normally I don't go for one letter np or even self np for that matter but I'll give toil's opener a decent on creativity n humor alone lol
tube to this pussy was dope af
endlessly streaming was coo

vs

cuttin the whole line was nice
nik & des was funny
closer wasn't bad, decent

this was actually pretty close imo, toil just had the better wording on his hitters. that she wee line was crazy if u know what a she wee is, good shit

v/toil barely

Habitat
04-08-2016, 04:36 PM
Toil
I spaffed in ya dame she lay flat as I came..
Fixed her up by inserting little Ts..like Orc with HabiTaT’s name
-Maybe I'm outta the loop but what the fuck does inserting little t mean? Like if I knew what the fuck that meant i'm pretty sure this would be good but as is I can't honestly give it to ya
I’ll send ya to the world beyond as I smother ya pride..
..at least now ya future matches ur sexuality: Bat’s for the other side
-not diggin tihs
I’ll puncture his lungs, watch B’s pleas at T’s knees
..the medics'll have to slap a tube to this pussy...just call him a she wee
-haha nice
Got T at the wheel. Push the pedal flat with my heal
I’ll leave Bat's head stretched across my bonnet like the batmobile
-not a fan
I'll bleed out this heathen, when I cut through his spleen, 'n
..leave his blood endlessly streaming more than Spotify premium
-aight
Ya beckon and say ‘heeeeeeeey’, one’ve the biggest gays in town
Fucksake. Bats are meant to see through sound waves..not have a see-through wave sound
-nah
Always dreamed u’d face me, I’m the star ya love reading
Facing T got u all 'pumping heart and deep breathing' more than the cpr you'll be needing
-this was decent

wear SHH
Ur old, tired & beat, u dnt quit now I'll have the beamer' barkin
put a big round under ur eye.. boy you need to sleep more often
-ehh this is ok
Best believe I'm next up, shank get antsy if u think this is yo time
Knife got a fastpass, that mean if toil crew In front then I'm cuttin the whole line
-dope
Old gats for u old heads. raise ya blood pressure & split ya head
Homie I'll hit u wit the 40 then the 45.. I call em nik & des
-im guessing this is referring to these old dudes ages lol aight
Nigga I'm bout to bless ya soul! But at the same time Ima pack the heat..
Cuz when my arm start wavin' & I start sprayin just kno I ain't a catholic priest
-this was ok
Ur set can get merkd while u chillin, wat im packin a make ya core leak
Clean out ur whole section wit the auto.. that Roomba's a sure beast
-not diggin this
Meet you and ya girl on the beach, we'll spend the whole day whilin'
dat'll b the last time u see this Guyana girl together, cuz I'll em both dead on the island
-ur missing a word here.. Double check ur shit. I'ma give this to u tho cause I know what u were going for
I'll leave this player dead, trust. He can get it wit the hands or even the tommy
have you running away from so many arms u'll feel like ur playin nazi zombies
-not a fan


I've gotta give this to SHH. Was feeling more of his shit. I think even if I understood little t's from toil this owuld still go to SHH. Cool battle tho some heat from both sides. Props

v - shh

jilti
04-10-2016, 12:55 AM
I spaffed in ya dame she lay flat as I came..
Fixed her up by inserting little Ts..like Orc with HabiTaT’s name
^decent opener
I’ll send ya to the world beyond as I smother ya pride..
..at least now ya future matches ur sexuality: Bat’s for the other side
^nah
I’ll puncture his lungs, watch B’s pleas at T’s knees
..the medics'll have to slap a tube to this pussy...just call him a she wee
^lol
Got T at the wheel. Push the pedal flat with my heal
I’ll leave Bat's head stretched across my bonnet like the batmobile
^ok
I'll bleed out this heathen, when I cut through his spleen, 'n
..leave his blood endlessly streaming more than Spotify premium
^ok
Ya beckon and say ‘heeeeeeeey’, one’ve the biggest gays in town
Fucksake. Bats are meant to see through sound waves..not have a see-through wave sound
^nope
Always dreamed u’d face me, I’m the star ya love reading
Facing T got u all 'pumping heart and deep breathing' more than the cpr you'll be needing
^cool

Vs.

Ur old, tired & beat, u dnt quit now I'll have the beamer' barkin
put a big round under ur eye.. boy you need to sleep more often
^lol
Best believe I'm next up, shank get antsy if u think this is yo time
Knife got a fastpass, that mean if toil crew In front then I'm cuttin the whole line
^solid
Old gats for u old heads. raise ya blood pressure & split ya head
Homie I'll hit u wit the 40 then the 45.. I call em nik & des
^lol
Nigga I'm bout to bless ya soul! But at the same time Ima pack the heat..
Cuz when my arm start wavin' & I start sprayin just kno I ain't a catholic priest
^nice
Ur set can get merkd while u chillin, wat im packin a make ya core leak
Clean out ur whole section wit the auto.. that Roomba's a sure beast
^Nah
Meet you and ya girl on the beach, we'll spend the whole day whilin'
dat'll b the last time u see this Guyana girl together, cuz I'll em both dead on the island
^dope
I'll leave this player dead, trust. He can get it wit the hands or even the tommy
have you running away from so many arms u'll feel like ur playin nazi zombies
^ok


Wear tough to beat when he's on his game
V- wear

Artifice
04-10-2016, 06:07 AM
Toil

I spaffed in ya dame she lay flat as I came..
Fixed her up by inserting little Ts..like Orc with HabiTaT’s name
I’ll send ya to the world beyond as I smother ya pride..
..at least now ya future matches ur sexuality: Bat’s for the other side

I'll bleed out this heathen, when I cut through his spleen, 'n
..leave his blood endlessly streaming more than Spotify premium

Always dreamed u’d face me, I’m the star ya love reading
Facing T got u all 'pumping heart and deep breathing' more than the cpr you'll be needing


Batshit/Wear Shhh

Best believe I'm next up, shank get antsy if u think this is yo time
Knife got a fastpass, that mean if toil crew In front then I'm cuttin the whole line
Old gats for u old heads. raise ya blood pressure & split ya head
Homie I'll hit u wit the 40 then the 45.. I call em nik & des

Meet you and ya girl on the beach, we'll spend the whole day whilin'
dat'll b the last time u see this Guyana girl together, cuz I'll em both dead on the island


Cool reads from both, but I got Toil edging this. Can see it going either way depending on personal preference, good looks from both imo.

v/ Toil

Cashius
04-10-2016, 02:02 PM
Enjoyed Toils verse. No horrible misses but nothing made me go wow. Didn't really like bat mobile or closer that much.

Wear Shhhh had some nice concepts but worded them poorly. Nik/Des and cut the line were pretty good. I think he had the content to win but the wording took away the impact.


I got toil here.

Sharp
04-10-2016, 02:05 PM
I spaffed in ya dame she lay flat as I came..
Fixed her up by inserting little Ts..like Orc with HabiTaT’s name
Ok lol
I’ll send ya to the world beyond as I smother ya pride..
..at least now ya future matches ur sexuality: Bat’s for the other side
solid
I’ll puncture his lungs, watch B’s pleas at T’s knees
..the medics'll have to slap a tube to this pussy...just call him a she wee
not feeling that
Got T at the wheel. Push the pedal flat with my heal
I’ll leave Bat's head stretched across my bonnet like the batmobile
kinda works for me
I'll bleed out this heathen, when I cut through his spleen, 'n
..leave his blood endlessly streaming more than Spotify premium
seen a lot of stream bars so I know it's coming, but it's not a miss imo
Ya beckon and say ‘heeeeeeeey’, one’ve the biggest gays in town
Fucksake. Bats are meant to see through sound waves..not have a see-through wave sound
kinda funny but we're on bat flip number 3 already
Always dreamed u’d face me, I’m the star ya love reading
Facing T got u all 'pumping heart and deep breathing' more than the cpr you'll be needing
definitely don't need the quotes, okish




Ur old, tired & beat, u dnt quit now I'll have the beamer' barkin
put a big round under ur eye.. boy you need to sleep more often
light imo
Best believe I'm next up, shank get antsy if u think this is yo time
Knife got a fastpass, that mean if toil crew In front then I'm cuttin the whole line
solid
Old gats for u old heads. raise ya blood pressure & split ya head
Homie I'll hit u wit the 40 then the 45.. I call em nik & des
funny, haven't seen this exact angle with the age thing but it doesn't really hit Toil as much as those two. Solid bar though
Nigga I'm bout to bless ya soul! But at the same time Ima pack the heat..
Cuz when my arm start wavin' & I start sprayin just kno I ain't a catholic priest
ok
Ur set can get merkd while u chillin, wat im packin a make ya core leak
Clean out ur whole section wit the auto.. that Roomba's a sure beast
so many gunflips at this point I just can't say I'm feeling another
Meet you and ya girl on the beach, we'll spend the whole day whilin'
dat'll b the last time u see this Guyana girl together, cuz I'll em both dead on the island
ok
I'll leave this player dead, trust. He can get it wit the hands or even the tommy
have you running away from so many arms u'll feel like ur playin nazi zombies
not feeling that


Toil had too many name flips and zelph had too many gun bars. I'd quote Toils first 4 and zelph fastpass/40 lines so I gotta give the edge to Toil for having personal/relevant angles. That just tends to work more for me. But I got this pretty close, definitely could end either way

V/Toil by a hair

Lotto Smirk
04-10-2016, 03:48 PM
Toil - few ok lines nothing that really stood out with that wow factor but misses wasn't too bad.

Wear - some nice idea's and concepts bro but your wording took away all the impact of the punch I felt, nik n des was ok but work on your wording your getting better

This could of gone either way but i have toil edging just from his misses being better misses

V - toil

Kenny the OG
04-11-2016, 12:03 AM
Opener, other side, spotify and wave sound bars were dope to me. Very creative and well done

Vs

Fastpass was hard, 40/45 was funny and Catholic priest was OK.

Good battle
Vote toil