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Orc
04-04-2016, 06:09 AM
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Aero Cashius

Aero
04-04-2016, 08:23 AM
You need this.

12.

Cashius
04-04-2016, 10:52 AM
Check.

Cashius
04-08-2016, 12:09 AM
Sent 12.

Aero
04-08-2016, 02:46 AM
done.

Aero
04-08-2016, 05:30 AM
When I'm in the club and it' closing time

Your girl grabs my wrist, we get into some personal shit
If she grabs your wrist you've asked about the girth of my dick
Catch us in your car, the way its shaking with hisses & moans
You'll think it's possessed & it will by the bank that issued the loan
I'll rape your daughter, I'm a pedo with a gun to her head
No imagination when she says there's a monster under her bed
I REALLY live gun bars, "Not my glock" is what I said on the stand
He's in hot water over a burner too, grabbing boiled eggs w/ his hand
I'm at his throat w/ a saber orrrr choke him til his vocals are labored
On sheer strength, cashier strength got him the job at the local bodega
You're closed off, shy but Allen Knight STILL stepped on your face
It'd baffle Trump how you put up walls but can't make a Mexican pay

Orc
04-08-2016, 05:41 AM
Eat a dick or meet me with hands next time I'm in NY which will be New Years.

Man you're a fake...Dog, If I saw you in real life you'd probably panic and skate
You could be blind your WHOLE LIFE...and still NEVER meet someone with hands to the face
He SWEARS being African's a fact...no one believes that shit...he's actually just whack
If anyone's giving Aer quotes...It's sarcastically...around words like "talented" and "black"
I got crazy weapons...shiiiit, arrows will murk and bloody this guy
If YOU hit a Target with a Cross Beau...you fags are arguing over what curtain colors to buy
I bet ol' feather dick is surprised...if a chick ever lets him get it inside
For real...If a bitch even put a pulmonary probably have an embolism and die
Check it, it's fact you queer ...YOU requesting ME disrespected the battle tiers
But I'm not surprised....Cause your broke ass has been begging for cash for YEARS
Your hoe got cookies stuffed in her palms and randomly yells "These muffins the bomb!"
But she is quite a catch...your shoulders dislocate whenever she jumps in your arms

Wanderer
04-08-2016, 07:20 AM
When I'm in the club and it' closing time

Your girl grabs my wrist, we get into some personal shit
If she grabs your wrist you've asked about the girth of my dick
Cool
Catch us in your car, the way its shaking with hisses & moans
You'll think it's possessed & it will by the bank that issued the loan
What loan? I get the possessed wordplay but what're u tryna say?
I'll rape your daughter, I'm a pedo with a gun to her head
No imagination when she says there's a monster under her bed
Nah
I REALLY live gun bars, "Not my glock" is what I said on the stand
He's in hot water over a burner too, grabbing boiled eggs w/ his hand
Not feeling
I'm at his throat w/ a saber orrrr choke him til his vocals are labored
On sheer strength, cashier strength got him the job at the local bodega
Haha ok
You're closed off, shy but Allen Knight STILL stepped on your face
It'd baffle Trump how you put up walls but can't make a Mexican pay
Is Allen knight Mexican?.. I never knew.. Either way, this pretty weak


Man you're a fake...Dog, If I saw you in real life you'd probably panic and skate
You could be blind your WHOLE LIFE...and still NEVER meet someone with hands to the face
Dope
He SWEARS being African's a fact...no one believes that shit...he's actually just whack
If anyone's giving Aer quotes...It's sarcastically...around words like "talented" and "black"
Haha nice, harsh
I got crazy weapons...shiiiit, arrows will murk and bloody this guy
If YOU hit a Target with a Cross Beau...you fags are arguing over what curtain colors to buy
Hilarious
I bet ol' feather dick is surprised...if a chick ever lets him get it inside
For real...If a bitch even put a pulmonary probably have an embolism and die
Errr.. not getting the wordplay
Check it, it's fact you queer ...YOU requesting ME disrespected the battle tiers
But I'm not surprised....Cause your broke ass has been begging for cash for YEARS
too simple & own nameplay.. pretty damn weak
Your hoe got cookies stuffed in her palms and randomly yells "These muffins the bomb!"
But she is quite a catch...your shoulders dislocate whenever she jumps in your arms
haha ok, cool



Clear winner here for me & that is Cash. Better wording and harder hitting punches. Aero didn't seem to come hard with much although I see you. Dug that grab your wrist line even though it was kinda simple.

V/Cash

Barcotic
04-08-2016, 07:40 AM
grabs ur wrist was decent, could've been done better
hot water over a burner was cool, light but creative
cashier strength was alright

vs

hands to the face was dope, nice creative personal
air quotes made me lol, good stuff
pulmonary was fire, great np

kinda seems like aero revised his lines a few times too many an maybe overthought some of his shit when he should've been focusing more on impact n perhaps some more appealing concepts. he had a few that hit but nothing was a haymaker

v/cashius

SHECK WES
04-08-2016, 12:42 PM
When I'm in the club and it' closing time

Your girl grabs my wrist, we get into some personal shit
If she grabs your wrist you've asked about the girth of my dick
decent
Catch us in your car, the way its shaking with hisses & moans
You'll think it's possessed & it will by the bank that issued the loan
????????????
I'll rape your daughter, I'm a pedo with a gun to her head
No imagination when she says there's a monster under her bed
ehhhh decent barely
I REALLY live gun bars, "Not my glock" is what I said on the stand
He's in hot water over a burner too, grabbing boiled eggs w/ his hand
haha this was cool
I'm at his throat w/ a saber orrrr choke him til his vocals are labored
On sheer strength, cashier strength got him the job at the local bodega
this is good too
You're closed off, shy but Allen Knight STILL stepped on your face
It'd baffle Trump how you put up walls but can't make a Mexican pay
lol'd alright

Vs


Man you're a fake...Dog, If I saw you in real life you'd probably panic and skate
You could be blind your WHOLE LIFE...and still NEVER meet someone with hands to the face
ha cool
He SWEARS being African's a fact...no one believes that shit...he's actually just whack
If anyone's giving Aer quotes...It's sarcastically...around words like "talented" and "black"
ooo I liked this one lol solid
I got crazy weapons...shiiiit, arrows will murk and bloody this guy
If YOU hit a Target with a Cross Beau...you fags are arguing over what curtain colors to buy
lol ok
I bet ol' feather dick is surprised...if a chick ever lets him get it inside
For real...If a bitch even put a pulmonary probably have an embolism and die
this went together smooth, solid
Check it, it's fact you queer ...YOU requesting ME disrespected the battle tiers
But I'm not surprised....Cause your broke ass has been begging for cash for YEARS
wasnt feeling this
Your hoe got cookies stuffed in her palms and randomly yells "These muffins the bomb!"
But she is quite a catch...your shoulders dislocate whenever she jumps in your arms
lol ok


Idk what aero was thinking with his first 3 bars, I wasn't really feeling them at all tbh. The last 3 of his were all nice, funny and well done. Alright now cash came with the shits this week. I liked just about every bar except one, they all hit nicely for the most part.

Vote Cash

Destroyer
04-09-2016, 03:19 PM
aero's last three were ok.
cash had opener, aer quotes (lotb) and closer was decent

this was pretty one-sided I think.

v/cashius

Saint
04-09-2016, 04:53 PM
I've got cashius here, pretty clearly..

Aeros opener and was funny, closer was ok.. cashier strength could've been better, didnt like how u used strength twice.

Cashius aer quotes was nice... quite a catch, opener sealed it. better executed concepts, verse came across harsher.

Vote Cashius.

Tic
04-10-2016, 12:28 AM
Aero had clean wording but not his usual verse. Bodega was dope and closers was ok.

Cash had his first 2 which were personal and hit nice. Pulmonary was a reach for me. I've never heard it pronounced that way. Cash still got it, but barely. Personals were pretty good but it was much close than the votes suggest.