Wanderer 5-3 vs HaBiTaT 0-0 - Habitat wins

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Wanderer HaBiTaT

[Habitat]

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10 - 12

[Wanderer]

Check. Droppin soon..

[Habitat]

Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors
I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way
Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away
So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace
if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place
Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers
Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter
shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin
If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007

[Wanderer]

Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab
put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame
Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game
See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing
Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting
You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you
Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to
Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!"
You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet

[Schadenfreude]

Opener, wanderlust & apparel.
Pretty good verse, u use crisp wording which makes the impact of your punches a lot heavier, than they would be otherwise.

versus

Drinking game & Police record.
This was mediocre drop tbh, the word wasn't as polished as your usual & those concept weren't fresh enough to make up for it.

Overall HABITAT took it, maybe Wan took him light or was just being lazy..Idk.

[Joe Boston]

Hab





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Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors
I like the wordplay collide a scope but came off more of a,statement then a directed punch

I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way
Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away
Seen this wordplay done before nice flip on it

So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace
if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place
Dope nameplay and direct punch

Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers
Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter
I like the wordplay and all but i felt wording wise couldve been more polished

shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin
If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007
Nice nameplay

Wander




Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab
Setup and finish didnt tie in together both were irrelevant with each other

put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame
Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game
I liked the direction of the punch but paper on the head not sure what drinking game reference ties into it

See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing
Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting
Lol ok better reference good flip

You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you
Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to
Played

Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!"
You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet
Wording was bad

Hab has some creative nameplays and some better of attempts i felt he couldve polished up better. Wandee not much from him wording hurt him a ton only line that stood out was the Police Record line.

V/Hab

[Barcotic]

kaleidoscope was decent
didn't like altar boy much at all
wanderlust was okay
apparel is way too played n there wasn't a fresh twist on it
wanderlei was done by resin already this seas

vs

habit broken was decent
paper on ur head/drinking game was a nice concept, but the wording was iffy
police record was funny, I liked it
seen manhandle done before n this one wasn't special
closer was whack

v/wanderer

[Adverse]

Hab:
Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors
^ Thought this was cool, but I also think it was sort of a reach, but cool none the less

I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way
Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away
^ idk didn't really hit for me but was okay

So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace
if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place
^ hmm alright

Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers
Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter
^ I like this wordplay

shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin
If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007
^ yeah this was cool too

Wander:
Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab
^okay-ish

put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame
Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game
^ kinda iffy to me, but alright

See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing
Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting
^ I feel it.

You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you
Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to
^ Not too fresh a concept, or that hard either.

Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!"
You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet
^ thought this was alright too.

I think I got Hab taking this, just a better overall verse, Wander had a lot of cool concepts but just didn't execute them that well to be honest. So I got Hab, cool drops to both though!

Vote - Hab

[SHECK WES]

Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors
cool wp
I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way
Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away
decent cuz wording
So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace
if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place
this was cool
Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers
Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter
alright
shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin
If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007
wanderlei been done and this flip was soft

Vs


Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab
this could have been a lot better if the wording was better and dif setup
put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame
Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game
ehh decent at best
See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing
Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting
lol good
You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you
Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to
alright
Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!"
You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet
ooo this was nice even tho wording wasn't too good


Habitat loves wordplay I see. His verse was pretty good, consistent with only one bar I wasn't feeling really. Pretty sure he's an alias. Wan had some good content in his verse but it felt very rushed due to poor wording and choice of set ups. I'm going with habitat in this one.

Vote Habitat

[riffic]

Habitat

Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors
- pretty cool wordplay & the imagery was good.
I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way
Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away
So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace
if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place
- gay jokes <<
Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers
Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter
- tired wordplay & the rhyme isn't very good
shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin
If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007
- okay punch. wording was kinda weird.

Wanderer:

Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab
- haaa I liked this. nice inner multi.
put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame
Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game
- cool concept, weird wording
See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing
Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting
- it's good but I've heard this before
You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you
Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to
- gay jokes <<
Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!"
You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet
- again, it's good, but I've heard this before (a lot)

vote Wanderer

[Artifice]

Habitat:

Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors

So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace
if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place
Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers
Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter
shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin
If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007

I dug it all but the altar, boy line. dunno, for whatever reason that line just was meh to me. Everything else I liked. Cool wp with kaleidoscope, apparel, and the nameplays (particularly the closer, was pretty dope).

Wanderer:

Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab

See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing
Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting

Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!"
You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet

Those were the lines I dug from u. Cool shit, you had some interesting concepts as well, but i just feel like Habitat executed his a little better. Came across w/ more sting. Good reads from both...

v/ Habitat

[Plot]

I give this one to Wand.
Hab had some seriously crisp wording but I've seen all of the concepts before, and some we're really old lol. but fresh wording/flips.
Where Wand's critique is pretty similar, just that his paper on head, and teachers pet concepts were fresh to me. Esp the Paper on head, I've played that game.

So vote Wand for being a lil fresher.
Dope battle, both dropt nice verses.

[Cashius]

Kaleidoscope, altar boy

Vs.

Manhandle

Those were the standouts. No real misses from either guy. I had Habitat taking this one. He had one more quotable and his verse felt a bit more harsh to me.

Habitat.

[Toil]

Hab: opener, wanderlust
Wand: drinking game, manhandle

This one's close and you both had some nice punches. I got hab as slightly more consistent.

Vote =Habit

[Lotto Smirk]

Hab- opener

Wand - paper on head, manhandle

I feel like I'm gonna go for wand with this it was very close I was close to quoting alter boy for Hab but seen stuff like that before felt like you polished up a lot of old concepts, wand came a bit fresher overall decent battle but got wand edging it

[Cred]

Habitat had alter boy & wanderlust

Vs

Opener, paper on ur head was fire & teachers pet was decent

Wanderer barely edges this one. Cool battle

[Hush]

Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors
fire
I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way
Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away
nah, this dont make sense,wp is light
So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace
if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place
another wp that is not really working for me, it was kinda creative but didnt hit tbh
Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers
Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter
this is played
shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin
If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007
this is light, kinda simple and just meh


Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab
so overworded u killed any momentum this punch could of had
put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame
Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game
[/B]ok[/B]
See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing
Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting
aight
You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you
Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to
thats gay
Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!"
You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet
nice



habitat had the best line but wander was super consistent and edged him out

v/wander

[Kenny the OG]

Wanderlust was nice. Apparel was decent. Wanderlei was creative.

Vs

Sting line was worded well and hit effectively. Manhandle was aight.

Vote habitat

[jilti]

Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors
^kaleidoscope is played
I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way
Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away
^dope
So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace
if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place
^cool
Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers
Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter
^dope
shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin
If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007
^not sure if its pronounced wanderlei or vanderlei but decent punch overall

Vs.

Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab
^barely
put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame
Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game
^dope
See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing
Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting
^cool
You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you
Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to
^cool
Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!"
You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet
^dope


Vote- wanderer in a good close one

[Orc]

i think that Wanderer had fresher ideas and that the paper on your head line was the LOTB. the Sting line was okay too due to it's wording. Hab was smooth but he shows signs of rust and the Wanderer nameplays have already been done. His execution was nice but I'd seen all of those bars used in similar ways. I have Wanderer here

The battle is 8-8

First up by 2 wins

[SuckaFreeCashier]

Habitat

Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors
wording felt a little off but i liked this idea
I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way
Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away
looool alright
So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace
if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place
this was pretty cool, dope nameflip
Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers
Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter
Didn't really hit for me. Kind of easy concept, nothing special
shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin
If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007
wow crazy finish. Really liked this


Wanderer

Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab
this was light to me. jihad/rehab doesn't really work for me either
put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame
Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game
pretty clever, nice
See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing
Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting
ight, this was solid
You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you
Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to
not really feelin this, felt fillery
Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!"
You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet
I've heard a looot of teachers pet lines before along this concept, so it kinda fell flat to me


Good battle here. Overall I felt like habitat was more consistent throughout so that's who i'm going with.

V/ habitat