Plot 1-0 vs Adverse 0-0 - ADVERSE WINS

[Orc]

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Adverse Plot

[Adverse]

What's good? I'm down for anything 12-16, let me know.

[Plot]

Drop 12

[Adverse]

Boy you're getting merked, I set it in motion with this verse
And stay 'exposing plot' like a spoiler alert
You ain't banging shit, everybody knows that you a fake dude
The way 'Ad pop up' in your 'windows' with a 'mac' not even a firewall could save you
Swear he models his battle tactics after his girl when they're sexin'
Because she either doesn't show at all or is always asking for an extention
You Outback dweling faggot, your girlfriend's on my mattress
And I swear I had that 'Australian Open', yellin till neigbors were complainin' bout the 'racket'
Your time has come, dudes heckle him on site to get a rise out 'em
But what's most ironic, you went from beefin' with Bags to being put inside of one.
Lets start the list...
The cunts that ruin this site...
Bags
He went the name change route, trying to disguise this loser, but he botched
So call me Orwell, the way I'm putting 'Dystopian future' in a 'plot'

[Plot]

You aint ever had quotes fucking liar, I'll slam this faker
Trying to spin us with imaginary lines, whats next? your the damn Equator.
You just live a shameful existence, so fuck those lies you spittin
Ironic that your names Ad, when your sexlife consists of all + sized women.
Fucking that fierce bitch, she's seriously burnt some men
She gave me such an ugly tounge-lashing, I'll never unzip for her again.
Packin angry heat, both gats wanna make you slouch
Scram when these grumpy beasts pop outta the can, that's Oscar the Grouch.
Pouncin on this faggot old skool, he don't wanna see these bars
Coz I'm taking Ad outta the show like pausing the TV while recording VCRS.
You don't know me kid, fuck your research just talking rubbish
Verse verse so full of misconceptions it more resembles an abortion bucket.

[Toil]

Ad: fire wall, extension
Plot: Oscar the grouch

All the quotes in Ads verse made me assume it was awful, but when I ignored them some of the concepts were quite nice. Plot had nice wording but simpler concepts.

Vote = Ad

[Barcotic]

yo ad, lose those unnecessary quotations around ur shit, capitalize certain words if anything/if u absolutely have to, cuz they just take away from the overall impact of punches

but I gotta say

ad pop up in ur window shit was fire
australian open was dope too, could've been worded a bit better tho
opener had mad potential but u didn't do enough w/ the concept

vs

imaginary lines was pretty decent
plus sized women was simple but funny n worded well
oscar the grouch had potential but it was worded soft, verse kinda fell off after that

I gtg w/ ad here, he just had more firepower in the ones that hit

v/adverse

[Schadenfreude]

Opener, firwell, Ext & Aussie Open.
Nice verse, surprised how great u dropped tbh. The last 2 bars were ineffective though.

versus

I could quote the first 4 bars, which were decent, but they were impactful to yoour opponent. They just soft jabs, rendered ineffective by your wording. It was as if I was reading a passive-agressive verse tbh.

Overall I have to give this to ADVERSE, his punches weren't crazy, but they did land well.

[SHECK WES]

Boy you're getting merked, I set it in motion with this verse
And stay 'exposing plot' like a spoiler alert
the concept was good but this was way too short and simple, decent here
You ain't banging shit, everybody knows that you a fake dude
The way 'Ad pop up' in your 'windows' with a 'mac' not even a firewall could save you
lose the quotation things, otherwise this was cool
Swear he models his battle tactics after his girl when they're sexin'
Because she either doesn't show at all or is always asking for an extention
lmaoooooo
You Outback dweling faggot, your girlfriend's on my mattress
And I swear I had that 'Australian Open', yellin till neigbors were complainin' bout the 'racket'
alright not bad, bars are funner when they aren't so obvious tho, hence why I say lose the quotations lol
Your time has come, dudes heckle him on site to get a rise out 'em
But what's most ironic, you went from beefin' with Bags to being put inside of one.
too played man
He went the name change route, trying to disguise this loser, but he botched
So call me Orwell, the way I'm putting 'Dystopian future' in a 'plot'
mmm idk it had potential but execution and wording was off

Vs


You aint ever had quotes fucking liar, I'll slam this faker
Trying to spin us with imaginary lines, whats next? your the damn Equator.
ok had potential for more but just too simple
You just live a shameful existence, so fuck those lies you spittin
Ironic that your names Ad, when your sexlife consists of all + sized women.
multiple things goin on in here but none connected
Fucking that fierce bitch, she's seriously burnt some men
She gave me such an ugly tounge-lashing, I'll never unzip for her again.
wasnt feelin this
Packin angry heat, both gats wanna make you slouch
Scram when these grumpy beasts pop outta the can, that's Oscar the Grouch.
this could have been dope if done a lil differently
Pouncin on this faggot old skool, he don't wanna see these bars
Coz I'm taking Ad outta the show like pausing the TV while recording VCRS.
nah
You don't know me kid, fuck your research just talking rubbish
Verse verse so full of misconceptions it more resembles an abortion bucket.
ehh


This was kinda one sided to me, I thought plot was a topical guy but he had some concepts just needed to execute them harsher or what not. Ad had some good sht just needs to drop the ''''''' stuff

Vote Ad

[Sharp]

Boy you're getting merked, I set it in motion with this verse
And stay 'exposing plot' like a spoiler alert
light cause most plot flips are done with him by now imo
You ain't banging shit, everybody knows that you a fake dude
The way 'Ad pop up' in your 'windows' with a 'mac' not even a firewall could save you
solid wording but Mac and Windows have been used that way before. The Ad tie in was a nice touch. Don't need the quotes for us to understand imo
Swear he models his battle tactics after his girl when they're sexin'
Because she either doesn't show at all or is always asking for an extention
dope
You Outback dweling faggot, your girlfriend's on my mattress
And I swear I had that 'Australian Open', yellin till neigbors were complainin' bout the 'racket'
again don't need the quotes. Funny, decent
Your time has come, dudes heckle him on site to get a rise out 'em
But what's most ironic, you went from beefin' with Bags to being put inside of one.
sorry bro Bags flips been done for years. The personal aspect of it makes me wanna like it but that's been done a lot thanks to Bag's
He went the name change route, trying to disguise this loser, but he botched
So call me Orwell, the way I'm putting 'Dystopian future' in a 'plot'
about the same as the opener, I just seen it enough on him to know it's coming


You aint ever had quotes fucking liar, I'll slam this faker
Trying to spin us with imaginary lines, whats next? your the damn Equator.
you're*. Solid concept
You just live a shameful existence, so fuck those lies you spittin
Ironic that your names Ad, when your sexlife consists of all + sized women.
not really feeling the delivery though I like where it came from. Alright
Fucking that fierce bitch, she's seriously burnt some men
She gave me such an ugly tounge-lashing, I'll never unzip for her again.
not really feeling it
Packin angry heat, both gats wanna make you slouch
Scram when these grumpy beasts pop outta the can, that's Oscar the Grouch.
Lol cool
Pouncin on this faggot old skool, he don't wanna see these bars
Coz I'm taking Ad outta the show like pausing the TV while recording VCRS.
there was a concept here but the vcr shit isn't really... Well fresh for me
You don't know me kid, fuck your research just talking rubbish
Verse verse so full of misconceptions it more resembles an abortion bucket.
nope


Imo Adverse had slightly better delivery. Thought it was closer than votes are showing right now, I only gave it to adverse cause the extension line was lotb.

V/Adverse

[SMaSH]

Vote adverse

Y? Better punches and material in general. Plot had a a lot of basic concepts that just wasn't hitting. The equator line was alright. And I've heard so many Oscar the grouch lines I cringed when I read it.

[jilti]

Adverse started cool with the first 3 bars then just totally fell apart after that

Plot had equator, oscar the grouch, take Ad out, and misconceptions


Vote- plot

[Artifice]

Adverse

Boy you're getting merked, I set it in motion with this verse
And stay 'exposing plot' like a spoiler alert
You ain't banging shit, everybody knows that you a fake dude
The way 'Ad pop up' in your 'windows' with a 'mac' not even a firewall could save you
Swear he models his battle tactics after his girl when they're sexin'
Because she either doesn't show at all or is always asking for an extention
You Outback dweling faggot, your girlfriend's on my mattress
And I swear I had that 'Australian Open', yellin till neigbors were complainin' bout the 'racket'



Plot

You aint ever had quotes fucking liar, I'll slam this faker
Trying to spin us with imaginary lines, whats next? your the damn Equator.

Pouncin on this faggot old skool, he don't wanna see these bars
Coz I'm taking Ad outta the show like pausing the TV while recording VCRS.
You don't know me kid, fuck your research just talking rubbish
Verse verse so full of misconceptions it more resembles an abortion bucket.


Cool reads from both, but Adverse had more that I enjoyed. I dug the concept in Plot's closer, but the rhyme doesn't work great from me... do u have an accent that makes the slant rhyme work better? also, abortion bucket seems like a weird concept... maybe if you had've used talking gibberish/abortion clinics it would've landed harder, imo.


v/ Adverse

[SuckaFreeCashier]

Adverse

Boy you're getting merked, I set it in motion with this verse
And stay 'exposing plot' like a spoiler alert
Didn't like the wording on this. To make sense it would just be like a spoiler. if you give say spoiler alert you give someone the chance to not get the spoiler lmao
You ain't banging shit, everybody knows that you a fake dude
The way 'Ad pop up' in your 'windows' with a 'mac' not even a firewall could save you
that's wordplay. this was alright, kinda played out concept tho
Swear he models his battle tactics after his girl when they're sexin'
Because she either doesn't show at all or is always asking for an extention
lmao this was nice
You Outback dweling faggot, your girlfriend's on my mattress
And I swear I had that 'Australian Open', yellin till neigbors were complainin' bout the 'racket'
this wasn't hitting for me. shoud have just stuck with the previous two and moved on
Your time has come, dudes heckle him on site to get a rise out 'em
But what's most ironic, you went from beefin' with Bags to being put inside of one.
Ok, ok
He went the name change route, trying to disguise this loser, but he botched
So call me Orwell, the way I'm putting 'Dystopian future' in a 'plot'
at first i fucked with this, but what does the second meaning mean? what are you putting in plot? you're just giving him a dystopian future, and him alone? how can you do this without affecting your own livelihood. gotta think about these "plot" lines when you're writing battle rhymes man, this shit got levels


Plot

You aint ever had quotes fucking liar, I'll slam this faker
Trying to spin us with imaginary lines, whats next? your the damn Equator.
the equator isn't imaginiary ... it's a line of reference
You just live a shameful existence, so fuck those lies you spittin
Ironic that your names Ad, when your sexlife consists of all + sized women.
lmaoo liked this
Fucking that fierce bitch, she's seriously burnt some men
She gave me such an ugly tounge-lashing, I'll never unzip for her again.
Fuh fuh filllller. Filler yeah
Packin angry heat, both gats wanna make you slouch
Scram when these grumpy beasts pop outta the can, that's Oscar the Grouch.
idk, i've heard a lot of oscar the grouch lines so this wasn't hitting for me
Pouncin on this faggot old skool, he don't wanna see these bars
Coz I'm taking Ad outta the show like pausing the TV while recording VCRS.
This is such an over the top analogy lmao. Why wouldn't you just say "coz im takin ad outta the show like my dvr". Keeps the rhyme and makes it so much more effective.
You don't know me kid, fuck your research just talking rubbish
Verse verse so full of misconceptions it more resembles an abortion bucket.
hahahaha that wordplay. what is an abortion bucket? I think you have a misconception about missed conceptions


plot made me laugh more but ad had a more effective verse

V/ Adverse