Schadenfreude 8-5 vs Jilti 4-2 - (JILTI WINS)

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Schadenfreude jilti

[Schadenfreude]

If u're showing, just match.

[Schadenfreude]

Got 12 jilti

[jilti]

'gainst orc u had the Platform to show skills but got dusted
didnt even make a little splash. shoulda got a perfect score from all judges
so to sum it up.. u took a shot at the Crown and started to fold
ironic cuz u'll double over when taking one to the top part of your skull
that means i'll put a ruger to ur wig & empty shells squeez'n
shit'll get pushed all the way back from a .22 extension like the nbl season
but im not all gunbars, im also bout the blade. get found slain
bound & maimed. butcher Schadenfreude worse than trying to pronounce his name
fucka german. im used to facin the leagues best since ive been here
now im making plays on a no name overseas. feels like allen iversons career
this queer be cryin & beggin me not to pull out the rifle & aim
be all tears when seeing that .24 one last time, but aint cuz its kobe's final game



12.

[Schadenfreude]

Check this out...

Saw himself as NC’s next great, but that never came true
all those losses to the Vets made him generation X, like Destroyer’s age group.
Was super tough at Hush, could’ve saved the embarrassment
cuz during the battle, fool gave u the business as if the shit was inheritance.
Facts! Look if u can’t live it how u say it, no respect is felt..
if ya ever saw a gun prolly wet ya’self, only shoot techs when ya sexting Zelph.
Quick question: which are u caucasian or latin persuasion?
either way the .50’s trained & waiting to let one race in u, that’s segregation.
Kiss ya bitch, it’s best to NOT the way she ingests the cock
yet some how she never lets u drip in, only put the tip in - suggestion box.
I’ll have this bitch in the real world holding on for dear life
& the same shit applies online coward, won’t know if this a forum or career site.

..BODY.

[SHECK WES]

'gainst orc u had the Platform to show skills but got dusted
didnt even make a little splash. shoulda got a perfect score from all judges
lol dope
so to sum it up.. u took a shot at the Crown and started to fold
ironic cuz u'll double over when taking one to the top part of your skull
ehh decent at best here
that means i'll put a ruger to ur wig & empty shells squeez'n
shit'll get pushed all the way back from a .22 extension like the nbl season
i never really like .22 bars cause that's squirrel gun caliber but the NBL season helped make this not bad
but im not all gunbars, im also bout the blade. get found slain
bound & maimed. butcher Schadenfreude worse than trying to pronounce his name
this was good
fucka german. im used to facin the leagues best since ive been here
now im making plays on a no name overseas. feels like allen iversons career
nahhh
this queer be cryin & beggin me not to pull out the rifle & aim
be all tears when seeing that .24 one last time, but aint cuz its kobe's final game
This only works because the Kobe reference made it nice, if it went any other way I wouldn't quote it


vs



Saw himself as NC’s next great, but that never came true
all those losses to the Vets made him generation X, like Destroyer’s age group.
nah
Was super tough at Hush, could’ve saved the embarrassment
cuz during the battle, fool gave u the business as if the shit was inheritance.
lol this was cool
Facts! Look if u can’t live it how u say it, no respect is felt..
if ya ever saw a gun prolly wet ya’self, only shoot techs when ya sexting Zelph
i got what you were Tryna go for but this was too wordy
Quick question: which are u caucasian or latin persuasion?
either way the .50’s trained & waiting to let one race in u, that’s segregation.
nice I liked this
Kiss ya bitch, it’s best to NOT the way she ingests the cock
yet some how she never lets u drip in, only put the tip in - suggestion box
light but ok
I’ll have this bitch in the real world holding on for dear life
& the same shit applies online coward, won’t know if this a forum or career site.
wasnt feeling this


Damn this was close. Jilti had the opener, butcher and closer. Fraud had business, segregation and suggestion box.

I think Jilti barely edged this because I got him having only 1 clear miss and fraud having 2 clear misses. This can go either way tbh.

Vote jilti

[Kenny the OG]

Battles dope. Y'all don't really need a critique so this how it shakes out for me..

Segregation +2
Inheritance +2
Suggestion box +1

Vs

Little splash +2
22 extension +2
Iversons career +2

Vote-jitty

[Schadenfreude]

Someone break it down.

[King]

gainst orc u had the Platform to show skills but got dusted
didnt even make a little splash. shoulda got a perfect score from all judges
that means i'll put a ruger to ur wig & empty shells squeez'n
shit'll get pushed all the way back from a .22 extension like the nbl season
but im not all gunbars, im also bout the blade. get found slain
bound & maimed. butcher Schadenfreude worse than trying to pronounce his name

these 3 hit imo. 22 was ok, splash and butcher were real dope ideas. double over was close just not enough to it. last 2 punches were kinda similar and neither really hit that hard.

vs

Quick question: which are u caucasian or latin persuasion?
either way the .50’s trained & waiting to let one race in u, that’s segregation.
Kiss ya bitch, it’s best to NOT the way she ingests the cock
yet some how she never lets u drip in, only put the tip in - suggestion box.

opener missed imo. inheritance wasnt bad but i've seen so many give the business plays just like it. segregation was cool, suggestion box was cool. the applies online play was close for me, just thought the wording was off.

cool battle, definitely close. Jilti just landed more a lil more consistently

vote jilti

[Barcotic]

little splash
22 ext (lotb)
butcher schad

vs

gave u the business
50's trained

I mean, this was pretty close n kinda dope but schad was a little wordy w/ a couple that could've hit or been fire, otherwise he might've taken it, 22 extension was flames by jil n his wording was just more on point here

v/jilti

[Artifice]

that means i'll put a ruger to ur wig & empty shells squeez'n
shit'll get pushed all the way back from a .22 extension like the nbl season
but im not all gunbars, im also bout the blade. get found slain
bound & maimed. butcher Schadenfreude worse than trying to pronounce his name
fucka german. im used to facin the leagues best since ive been here
now im making plays on a no name overseas. feels like allen iversons career
this queer be cryin & beggin me not to pull out the rifle & aim
be all tears when seeing that .24 one last time, but aint cuz its kobe's final game


vs.

Saw himself as NC’s next great, but that never came true
all those losses to the Vets made him generation X, like Destroyer’s age group.
Was super tough at Hush, could’ve saved the embarrassment
cuz during the battle, fool gave u the business as if the shit was inheritance.
Quick question: which are u caucasian or latin persuasion?
either way the .50’s trained & waiting to let one race in u, that’s segregation.
Kiss ya bitch, it’s best to NOT the way she ingests the cock
yet some how she never lets u drip in, only put the tip in - suggestion box.

I got this as being really close, same number of punches from each that i felt landed well... the edge going to jilti cuz I feel like his butcher line was lotb... good reads from both, but i got jilti taking it slightly.

v/ Jilti

[CBA]

'gainst orc u had the Platform to show skills but got dusted
didnt even make a little splash. shoulda got a perfect score from all judges
Cool
so to sum it up.. u took a shot at the Crown and started to fold
ironic cuz u'll double over when taking one to the top part of your skull
Alright.... but these types of lines personally never make me go crazy
that means i'll put a ruger to ur wig & empty shells squeez'n
shit'll get pushed all the way back from a .22 extension like the nbl season
lawl, not too crazy tho
but im not all gunbars, im also bout the blade. get found slain
bound & maimed. butcher Schadenfreude worse than trying to pronounce his name
Eh...
fucka german. im used to facin the leagues best since ive been here
now im making plays on a no name overseas. feels like allen iversons career
Alright
this queer be cryin & beggin me not to pull out the rifle & aim
be all tears when seeing that .24 one last time, but aint cuz its kobe's final game
I dug it, always like topical bars

vs

Saw himself as NC’s next great, but that never came true
all those losses to the Vets made him generation X, like Destroyer’s age group.
Ehhh.....
Was super tough at Hush, could’ve saved the embarrassment
cuz during the battle, fool gave u the business as if the shit was inheritance.
Not bad but nothing over the top
Facts! Look if u can’t live it how u say it, no respect is felt..
if ya ever saw a gun prolly wet ya’self, only shoot techs when ya sexting Zelph.
:D
Quick question: which are u caucasian or latin persuasion?
either way the .50’s trained & waiting to let one race in u, that’s segregation.
Not a fan
Kiss ya bitch, it’s best to NOT the way she ingests the cock
yet some how she never lets u drip in, only put the tip in - suggestion box.
Alright
I’ll have this bitch in the real world holding on for dear life
& the same shit applies online coward, won’t know if this a forum or career site.
Eh...

Going with Jilti, not a bad read from either dude though, fun battle

[Adverse]

Jilti
'gainst orc u had the Platform to show skills but got dusted
didnt even make a little splash. shoulda got a perfect score from all judges
^ Cool way to open it up.

so to sum it up.. u took a shot at the Crown and started to fold
ironic cuz u'll double over when taking one to the top part of your skull
^ it was decent for me

that means i'll put a ruger to ur wig & empty shells squeez'n
shit'll get pushed all the way back from a .22 extension like the nbl season
^ nbl season flip made this bar dope.

but im not all gunbars, im also bout the blade. get found slain
bound & maimed. butcher Schadenfreude worse than trying to pronounce his name
^ I liked this, cool concept.

fucka german. im used to facin the leagues best since ive been here
now im making plays on a no name overseas. feels like allen iversons career
^ mehhhhh

this queer be cryin & beggin me not to pull out the rifle & aim
be all tears when seeing that .24 one last time, but aint cuz its kobe's final game
^boom, dope closer.

Schaden:
Saw himself as NC’s next great, but that never came true
all those losses to the Vets made him generation X, like Destroyer’s age group.
^ mehhh it was alright

Was super tough at Hush, could’ve saved the embarrassment
cuz during the battle, fool gave u the business as if the shit was inheritance.
^ felt kind of played to me.

Facts! Look if u can’t live it how u say it, no respect is felt..
if ya ever saw a gun prolly wet ya’self, only shoot techs when ya sexting Zelph.
^ okay this one was a decent hit.

Quick question: which are u caucasian or latin persuasion?
either way the .50’s trained & waiting to let one race in u, that’s segregation.
^ damn this one is good

Kiss ya bitch, it’s best to NOT the way she ingests the cock
yet some how she never lets u drip in, only put the tip in - suggestion box.
^ alright good hit

I’ll have this bitch in the real world holding on for dear life
& the same shit applies online coward, won’t know if this a forum or career site.
^didn't feel hard enough for a closer

This may have been battle of the week gents, both of you did real good and had some dope punches but I feel like Jilti only had one miss and it's really hard to overcome something like that, Schaden just didn't have enough firepower in my eyes, still a dope battle though.

Vote - Jilti