Barcotic 1-0 vs Sharp 1-1 - (SHARP WINS)

[Orc]

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Barcotic Sharp

[Sharp]

10?

[Barcotic]

if we droppin early sure

if not match me, gl

[Barcotic]

dude can only score with the fattest & shittiest of hoes
any bitch that T-Bone got enough meat on her for like 50 of those
Chef always disappoints on main stage. By the end 16 his verse is in ashes
It's fitting that C-Class is the one with no mileage and only good for crashes
No one's feeling you. You're at the bottom dropping lame as fuck
Ain't a soul in K Camp. Ironically it's cause for you the Only Way is Up
... gtfoh w/ that garbage

ur on dream street. I mean, nice clean sweep to ken
Initial thoughts? this faggot better not address me as B, C or M
test mike, I'll aim the tek right below ur noggin
1squeeze'll have u squirtin from ur chest like the joker's pocket
claim u slang bin loads? chances are slim tho, big dog
cuz u couldn't leave the trap without losing a limb, no jigsaw
forget about a woman's needs, u wouldn't please shit
she'd rather take a few blades over ur digits.. that's wolverine's fist
u HOF where? not fair, a lawn chair could rip u
draco malfoy the 2nd; if we see u in the hall there's an issue
u ain't half the man u once were so bury ur pride
do the math, u haven't been relevant since u carried the Nine
first inf and now sharp?! this is ocean view easy yo
s'like I hit the Lotto. U couldn't even hit ur opponent 2 weeks ago
trust me if it ever got physical I'm positive u'd sink
treat ur body like a date rape drug; hidden til I toss it in the drink

16

going 20 if u need the ext.

[Sharp]

Again?we battled on rb not too long ago

If you can call it a battle... I had no idea you were Ridiculous


I CRUSHED you as Ridiculous n you had to remind me. That's the hard truth
Amazing that Riddle leave me w/ no questions except 'wait, who the fuck are you?'
Afraid to lose on your own name? The aliases are at a shameful amount
I could drop played Ridiculous bars but that's all you ever did w/ that account
Guy's such a fag. Denying he's Bi but really I doubt it
Cro could definitely go 2 ways. Shit I thought Bags' thread was about him
Biter wants to talk integrity in writing. Excuse all of us with hard lives
How can you hate extensions in the league when you're an extension of the archives?
That bitch out over extensions was pathetic. I still can't fathom
But Cro dont worry about deadlines. He just accepted his verse always has em
Madness. You used a 'Reg eh' bar??? Whoever said its dope lied, queer
That Reggaeton woulda been better if it was Spanish dudes screaming in my ear
Adverse n Zelph on your dick. Scrubs hand you wins its plain to see
Can't deny that's your text life to the Letter when you got riders from A to Z
Been coasting on HOF votes for years. Been struggling to flip shit
No fuckin content and dumbass readers made you. You're just shitty fan fiction

[Aero]

B:

ur on dream street. I mean, nice clean sweep to ken
Initial thoughts? this faggot better not address me as B, C or M
LOL.. good punch, but yo get outside no way you should've caught that
test mike, I'll aim the tek right below ur noggin
1squeeze'll have u squirtin from ur chest like the joker's pocket
coo
claim u slang bin loads? chances are slim tho, big dog
cuz u couldn't leave the trap without losing a limb, no jigsaw
I dig it
forget about a woman's needs, u wouldn't please shit
she'd rather take a few blades over ur digits.. that's wolverine's fist
a better setup would've made this fire, good anyway
u HOF where? not fair, a lawn chair could rip u
draco malfoy the 2nd; if we see u in the hall there's an issue
do I have to look this up? I get the jist
u ain't half the man u once were so bury ur pride
do the math, u haven't been relevant since u carried the Nine
ooooooo
first inf and now sharp?! this is ocean view easy yo
s'like I hit the Lotto. U couldn't even hit ur opponent 2 weeks ago
no
trust me if it ever got physical I'm positive u'd sink
treat ur body like a date rape drug; hidden til I toss it in the drink
ehhhh

I like this Barcotic right here. no od'ing on wp and weird continuations... humor and concepts


S:

I CRUSHED you as Ridiculous n you had to remind me. That's the hard truth
Amazing that Riddle leave me w/ no questions except 'wait, who the fuck are you?'
aight I get it
Afraid to lose on your own name? The aliases are at a shameful amount
I could drop played Ridiculous bars but that's all you ever did w/ that account
irony here is strong
Guy's such a fag. Denying he's Bi but really I doubt it
Cro could definitely go 2 ways. Shit I thought Bags' thread was about him
aight, current discussion
Biter wants to talk integrity in writing. Excuse all of us with hard lives
How can you hate extensions in the league when you're an extension of the archives?
lol I like
That bitch out over extensions was pathetic. I still can't fathom
But Cro dont worry about deadlines. He just accepted his verse always has em
cooo
Madness. You used a 'Reg eh' bar??? Whoever said its dope lied, queer
That Reggaeton woulda been better if it was Spanish dudes screaming in my ear
almost
Adverse n Zelph on your dick. Scrubs hand you wins its plain to see
Can't deny that's your text life to the Letter when you got riders from A to Z
LOL NAH MAN AND LOLOL AT BAR FOR POINTING THE initial bars out it make his harder
Been coasting on HOF votes for years. Been struggling to flip shit
No fuckin content and dumbass readers made you. You're just shitty fan fiction
ooo I like the idea not the execution


cool here, at one point I thought you were heating up



Good battle but it goe to Barc




Barc

[SuckaFreeCashier]

Barcotic
ur on dream street. I mean, nice clean sweep to ken
Initial thoughts? this faggot better not address me as B, C or M
if you're going to post quotes / link to something, you gotta punch hard. this just didn't do it for me
test mike, I'll aim the tek right below ur noggin
1squeeze'll have u squirtin from ur chest like the joker's pocket
this was cool
claim u slang bin loads? chances are slim tho, big dog
cuz u couldn't leave the trap without losing a limb, no jigsaw
little bit of a played out concept w/ jigsaw imo
forget about a woman's needs, u wouldn't please shit
she'd rather take a few blades over ur digits.. that's wolverine's fist
wow this was amazing
u HOF where? not fair, a lawn chair could rip u
draco malfoy the 2nd; if we see u in the hall there's an issue
lol nah man
u ain't half the man u once were so bury ur pride
do the math, u haven't been relevant since u carried the Nine
i feel like there is something there but the way you presented it just didn't really work for me
first inf and now sharp?! this is ocean view easy yo
s'like I hit the Lotto. U couldn't even hit ur opponent 2 weeks ago
lol alright, this was decent
trust me if it ever got physical I'm positive u'd sink
treat ur body like a date rape drug; hidden til I toss it in the drink
once again a cool concept, but toss a body in the drink makes zero sense



Sharp
I CRUSHED you as Ridiculous n you had to remind me. That's the hard truth
Amazing that Riddle leave me w/ no questions except 'wait, who the fuck are you?'
eh this was just ok. like i said with barcotic tho, if you are quoting/linking to something you better punch hard.
Afraid to lose on your own name? The aliases are at a shameful amount
I could drop played Ridiculous bars but that's all you ever did w/ that account
lol i liked this
Guy's such a fag. Denying he's Bi but really I doubt it
Cro could definitely go 2 ways. Shit I thought Bags' thread was about him
ehh, not really feeling this
Biter wants to talk integrity in writing. Excuse all of us with hard lives
How can you hate extensions in the league when you're an extension of the archives?
This was tight
That bitch out over extensions was pathetic. I still can't fathom
But Cro dont worry about deadlines. He just accepted his verse always has em
Kinding harping on the same topic, but it was decent enough
Madness. You used a 'Reg eh' bar??? Whoever said its dope lied, queer
That Reggaeton woulda been better if it was Spanish dudes screaming in my ear
didn't land for me
Adverse n Zelph on your dick. Scrubs hand you wins its plain to see
Can't deny that's your text life to the Letter when you got riders from A to Z
ok, solid
Been coasting on HOF votes for years. Been struggling to flip shit
No fuckin content and dumbass readers made you. You're just shitty fan fiction
Fan fiction has content tho ... not hitting for me


Thought that barcotic got this off consistency alone. Sharp had a lot of decent ideas that ended up falling flat for me based on what direction he took them / how he worded them. Wolverine bar was line of the battle

V/ Barcotic.

[SHECK WES]

ur on dream street. I mean, nice clean sweep to ken
Initial thoughts? this faggot better not address me as B, C or M
lmao talk about research wtf nice bar but damn get a life
test mike, I'll aim the tek right below ur noggin
1squeeze'll have u squirtin from ur chest like the joker's pocket
nice I liked this
claim u slang bin loads? chances are slim tho, big dog
cuz u couldn't leave the trap without losing a limb, no jigsaw
hmm ok
forget about a woman's needs, u wouldn't please shit
she'd rather take a few blades over ur digits.. that's wolverine's fist
ha alright
u HOF where? not fair, a lawn chair could rip u
draco malfoy the 2nd; if we see u in the hall there's an issue
is this a joke? Lol nah
u ain't half the man u once were so bury ur pride
do the math, u haven't been relevant since u carried the Nine
ehh decent
first inf and now sharp?! this is ocean view easy yo
s'like I hit the Lotto. U couldn't even hit ur opponent 2 weeks ago
hmm ok not bad
trust me if it ever got physical I'm positive u'd sink
treat ur body like a date rape drug; hidden til I toss it in the drink
uh nah lol


Vs



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Originally Posted by Sharp View Post
Again?
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Originally Posted by Barcotic View Post
we battled on rb not too long ago
If you can call it a battle... I had no idea you were Ridiculous


I CRUSHED you as Ridiculous n you had to remind me. That's the hard truth
Amazing that Riddle leave me w/ no questions except 'wait, who the fuck are you?'
decent
Afraid to lose on your own name? The aliases are at a shameful amount
I could drop played Ridiculous bars but that's all you ever did w/ that account
ha ok
Guy's such a fag. Denying he's Bi but really I doubt it
Cro could definitely go 2 ways. Shit I thought Bags' thread was about him
hmm decent here
Biter wants to talk integrity in writing. Excuse all of us with hard lives
How can you hate extensions in the league when you're an extension of the archives?
oooo I liked this
That bitch out over extensions was pathetic. I still can't fathom
But Cro dont worry about deadlines. He just accepted his verse always has em
ok
Madness. You used a 'Reg eh' bar??? Whoever said its dope lied, queer
That Reggaeton woulda been better if it was Spanish dudes screaming in my ear
lmao this shouldn't have made me laugh as much as it did, cool bar
Adverse n Zelph on your dick. Scrubs hand you wins its plain to see
Can't deny that's your text life to the Letter when you got riders from A to Z
not bad
Been coasting on HOF votes for years. Been struggling to flip shit
No fuckin content and dumbass readers made you. You're just shitty fan fiction
didnt really like this
Sharp is online now Add to Sharp's Reputation Report Post


Damn this is too close to call right now I'll come back later


Vote Sharcotic

[Joe Boston]

On phone my bad

Barcotic nice personal with the opener also little humor factor
2nd bar dope metaphorical comparison direct hit
Didnt like how the jigsaw concept was worded
Nice flip with the wolverines fist creative metaphore
Draco malfoy concept worded poorly
Okish personal not hardhitting tho
Another okish personal
Closer nah

Couple jabs on personals couple metaphorical comparisons that hit nicely

Sharp

Opener decent personal nice flip
Again solid personal 2nd bar like the flip
Ok personal i felt finisher was a little wordy though
Nice dope flip 5th bar
Personals flying here
Lol nice flip and personal with the reg eh reggaeton wordplay
Damn nice personal adverse n zelph flip
Didnt like closer too wordy

Well sharp went in with personals very consistent. Bar had a decent opener and couple metaphore flips like wolverines fist and jokers pocket was dope. I felt the personals were soft tho.

V/Sharp
Just overall better personals and consistent i liked the twist on the flips he did also

[Kenny the OG]

Both battles have enough experience doing this so I'll just give the og shakedown

Opener +2
Jokers pocket +2
Jigsaw +2
Do the math +2

Vs

Opener +2
Ridiculous bars +2
Extension +2
Reggaeton +2
A to Z +2

I don't know much about sharp and he surprised me last week. He definitely surprised me this week too. I figured barcotic would take this one but I guess I should stop sleeping on sharp. His verse hit hard. A lot of personals from creative angles. He just overpowered barcotic here, and barcotic had a very solid verse too. Very few misses and clear wording throughout. But overall I think sharp landed the harder punches even though they were both landing punches at the same rate.

Vote - sharp

[Schadenfreude]

Opener, joker flower, wolverine's fist, hit the lotto & closer.
Good verse, nothing stood out as a haymaker, but it was consistent through out.

versus

Opener, Ridiculous bars, extensions, deadlines & closer.
Nice drop, was full of hard personals, one flaw was some of the punches were too straightforward.

Overall SHARP gets it, CroBar had a ok joint, but nothing crazy, while Sharp's personals made the difference.

[Useless]

ur on dream street. I mean, nice clean sweep to ken
Initial thoughts? this faggot better not address me as B, C or M

Then...


Adverse n Zelph on your dick. Scrubs hand you wins its plain to see
Can't deny that's your text life to the Letter when you got riders from A to Z


Lmaoooo



Both had decent verses but sharp had a couple wack bars whereas bar didn't. Bar had the harder hitters too



V. Bar

[Unfukwitable]

ur on dream street. I mean, nice clean sweep to ken
Initial thoughts? this faggot better not address me as B, C or M
test mike, I'll aim the tek right below ur noggin
1squeeze'll have u squirtin from ur chest like the joker's pocket
u ain't half the man u once were so bury ur pride
do the math, u haven't been relevant since u carried the Nine
first inf and now sharp?! this is ocean view easy yo
s'like I hit the Lotto. U couldn't even hit ur opponent 2 weeks ago


vs


I CRUSHED you as Ridiculous n you had to remind me. That's the hard truth
Amazing that Riddle leave me w/ no questions except 'wait, who the fuck are you?'
Afraid to lose on your own name? The aliases are at a shameful amount
I could drop played Ridiculous bars but that's all you ever did w/ that account
Madness. You used a 'Reg eh' bar??? Whoever said its dope lied, queer
That Reggaeton woulda been better if it was Spanish dudes screaming in my ear
Adverse n Zelph on your dick. Scrubs hand you wins its plain to see
Can't deny that's your text life to the Letter when you got riders from A to Z


this battle was a good read here but I felt one slightly took it, the other was 1 dope bar short of the win in my opinion. v/Sharp

[Barcotic]

^

[Useless]

Lmao

[Orc]

4-3, first to two votes wins

[Cashius]

Jokers pocket, wolverine

Vs.

Bags

Those were the standouts. No horrible misses by either. I think Cro's non-quotables were stronger and just thought his verse was more entertaining. Almost quoted trap and drink. For sharp I almost quoted extension. But still felt barcotic took it.

[jilti]

address me, jokers pocket, wolverines fist, lotto


Vs


Bags thread, extension, reggaeton, a to z


4 a piece



Damn super close so i'll go with my fav line of the battle..

the wolverine line was super creative


V/ Barcotic

[Allen Knight]

test mike, I'll aim the tek right below ur noggin
1squeeze'll have u squirtin from ur chest like the joker's pocket
forget about a woman's needs, u wouldn't please shit
she'd rather take a few blades over ur digits.. that's wolverine's fist
u HOF where? not fair, a lawn chair could rip u
draco malfoy the 2nd; if we see u in the hall there's an issue


Vs


I CRUSHED you as Ridiculous n you had to remind me. That's the hard truth
Amazing that Riddle leave me w/ no questions except 'wait, who the fuck are you?'
Biter wants to talk integrity in writing. Excuse all of us with hard lives
How can you hate extensions in the league when you're an extension of the archives?
Madness. You used a 'Reg eh' bar??? Whoever said its dope lied, queer
That Reggaeton woulda been better if it was Spanish dudes screaming in my ear


V/sharp, close & good battle, i think its tied in qoutes but sharp had lotb imo.
enjoyed bars joker line that was nice..props to both.

[Blam Newton]

ur on dream street. I mean, nice clean sweep to ken
Initial thoughts? this faggot better not address me as B, C or M
I felt that this was cool. Not a haymaker but it was cool.
test mike, I'll aim the tek right below ur noggin
1squeeze'll have u squirtin from ur chest like the joker's pocket
I thought that this was creative.
claim u slang bin loads? chances are slim tho, big dog
cuz u couldn't leave the trap without losing a limb, no jigsaw
This was ok. Something was off about it though.
forget about a woman's needs, u wouldn't please shit
she'd rather take a few blades over ur digits.. that's wolverine's fist
This was dope. This was probably your best line.
u HOF where? not fair, a lawn chair could rip u
draco malfoy the 2nd; if we see u in the hall there's an issue
No. I don't like this.
u ain't half the man u once were so bury ur pride
do the math, u haven't been relevant since u carried the Nine
This was cool.
first inf and now sharp?! this is ocean view easy yo
s'like I hit the Lotto. U couldn't even hit ur opponent 2 weeks ago
I don't really like this.
trust me if it ever got physical I'm positive u'd sink
treat ur body like a date rape drug; hidden til I toss it in the drink
Nope. I don't like this one either.

I CRUSHED you as Ridiculous n you had to remind me. That's the hard truth
Amazing that Riddle leave me w/ no questions except 'wait, who the fuck are you?'
Your wording hurt you here.
Afraid to lose on your own name? The aliases are at a shameful amount
I could drop played Ridiculous bars but that's all you ever did w/ that account
This was a dope personal.
Guy's such a fag. Denying he's Bi but really I doubt it
Cro could definitely go 2 ways. Shit I thought Bags' thread was about him
This was cool.
Biter wants to talk integrity in writing. Excuse all of us with hard lives
How can you hate extensions in the league when you're an extension of the archives?
Oh, this was the line of the battle.
That bitch out over extensions was pathetic. I still can't fathom
But Cro dont worry about deadlines. He just accepted his verse always has em
I like the way this was worded.
Madness. You used a 'Reg eh' bar??? Whoever said its dope lied, queer
That Reggaeton woulda been better if it was Spanish dudes screaming in my ear
No. I didn't like this.
Adverse n Zelph on your dick. Scrubs hand you wins its plain to see
Can't deny that's your text life to the Letter when you got riders from A to Z
This was cool.
Been coasting on HOF votes for years. Been struggling to flip shit
No fuckin content and dumbass readers made you. You're just shitty fan fiction
Didn't like it at first but the concept grew on me.

I thought that this battle was super close. Bar's second half was just dead though. Sharp was more consistent. Vote= Sharp.

[Ghost1]

ur on dream street. I mean, nice clean sweep to ken
Initial thoughts? this faggot better not address me as B, C or M

This is cool

test mike, I'll aim the tek right below ur noggin
1squeeze'll have u squirtin from ur chest like the joker's pocket

Ok

claim u slang bin loads? chances are slim tho, big dog
cuz u couldn't leave the trap without losing a limb, no jigsaw

Fire

forget about a woman's needs, u wouldn't please shit
she'd rather take a few blades over ur digits.. that's wolverine's fist

Fire again

u HOF where? not fair, a lawn chair could rip u
draco malfoy the 2nd; if we see u in the hall there's an issue

Not feeling it

u ain't half the man u once were so bury ur pride
do the math, u haven't been relevant since u carried the Nine

Nope

first inf and now sharp?! this is ocean view easy yo
s'like I hit the Lotto. U couldn't even hit ur opponent 2 weeks ago

Hate these bars

trust me if it ever got physical I'm positive u'd sink
treat ur body like a date rape drug; hidden til I toss it in the drink

Lmfao the drink ? Watre u one of the Knights of the round table? Who talks like this

16

going 20 if u need the ext.



[QUOTE=Sharp;579018]If you can call it a battle... I had no idea you were Ridiculous


I CRUSHED you as Ridiculous n you had to remind me. That's the hard truth
Amazing that Riddle leave me w/ no questions except 'wait, who the fuck are you?'

Nice

Afraid to lose on your own name? The aliases are at a shameful amount
I could drop played Ridiculous bars but that's all you ever did w/ that account

Okish

Guy's such a fag. Denying he's Bi but really I doubt it
Cro could definitely go 2 ways. Shit I thought Bags' thread was about him

Lol

Biter wants to talk integrity in writing. Excuse all of us with hard lives
How can you hate extensions in the league when you're an extension of the archives?

LOL fiiiiiire

That bitch out over extensions was pathetic. I still can't fathom
But Cro dont worry about deadlines. He just accepted his verse always has em

Played

Madness. You used a 'Reg eh' bar??? Whoever said its dope lied, queer
That Reggaeton woulda been better if it was Spanish dudes screaming in my ear

Nah

Adverse n Zelph on your dick. Scrubs hand you wins its plain to see
Can't deny that's your text life to the Letter when you got riders from A to Z

Ok

Been coasting on HOF votes for years. Been struggling to flip shit
No fuckin content and dumbass readers made you. You're just shitty fan fiction

Ok




Thought sharp was more consistent w better misses. Both had big hits....although shares extension of the archives was lot for me. I haven't read cro in a long ass time but looks like he switched his style up a bit here. Jigsaw was fire as fuck. Some other shit I wasn't feeling tho.


V sharp

[Saitama]

I have Barcotic here

Barc had my fave line w/ wolverine, initial an jigsaw was good....went a lil light towards the end..

Sharp had riddle, extension and some ok personals. I feel barc was cleaner execution wise & thats why I edge it to him.

V/barc