Lotto Smirk 6-5 vs Blam Newton 5-4 - (BLAM NEWTON WINS)

[Orc]

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Lotto Smirk Blam Newton

[Lotto Smirk]

10 - 12 g/l

[Blam Newton]

60/40?!

The shots to your chest will have you breathing like a bitch in labor.
I'm a vet, rook...We wouldn't be in the same boat if you were Diode's neighbor.
I got your wife tasting my girth, the only guns you're spraying are nerf.
All it takes is a couple of shots for me to wipe a Smirk...off the face of the earth.
Machine gun under the coat, by the time you see it u won't realize you're in slight danger.
The Tommy hasn't surprised someone this much since he turned out to be the White Ranger.
Your wife was laid up in the hospital, going through stress and fatigue.
It's ironic how she was dealing with chemo yet you're the cancer to this league.
Asking Me, Orc and Hush for advice won't make you one of the best, b.
Shit, You probably pm'ed me on my other account for pointers against me.

[Lotto Smirk]

May need ext

[Lotto Smirk]

even Zelph don't think ya dope cus ya lyrics make us wretch
so if there's a Blam featured in a mag it's more like a cartoon sketch
shots are fired off w/ aim ill kill all this faggots family
everything hit the floor around Newton he'll think he discovered gravity
votes on some dumb shit n u using it to get wins kid
u posting wack verses ain't strange but the way u robbed him w/ one is
Blam don't get pussy, no girl wants a gunbar geek
if blam out searching for a girl she'll stay hidden like playing hide n seek
tricking people w/ that alias, ain't got the skills to back it up
cus u nowhere near as good a neighbor and I class HIM as wack as fuck

over

[SHECK WES]

The shots to your chest will have you breathing like a bitch in labor.
I'm a vet, rook...We wouldn't be in the same boat if you were Diode's neighbor.
someone else had one of these this week too, it's decent
I got your wife tasting my girth, the only guns you're spraying are nerf.
All it takes is a couple of shots for me to wipe a Smirk...off the face of the earth.
ooo nah didn't like the way you did this one
Machine gun under the coat, by the time you see it u won't realize you're in slight danger.
The Tommy hasn't surprised someone this much since he turned out to be the White Ranger.
alright I dig it
Your wife was laid up in the hospital, going through stress and fatigue.
It's ironic how she was dealing with chemo yet you're the cancer to this league.
hmm ok
Asking Me, Orc and Hush for advice won't make you one of the best, b.
Shit, You probably pm'ed me on my other account for pointers against me.
nah this isn't much

Vs


even Zelph don't think ya dope cus ya lyrics make us wretch
so if there's a Blam featured in a mag it's more like a cartoon sketch
fuck u, cool bar tho
shots are fired off w/ aim ill kill all this faggots family
everything hit the floor around Newton he'll think he discovered gravity
damn nice
votes on some dumb shit n u using it to get wins kid
u posting wack verses ain't strange but the way u robbed him w/ one is
light so decent
Blam don't get pussy, no girl wants a gunbar geek
if blam out searching for a girl she'll stay hidden like playing hide n seek
lmao no
tricking people w/ that alias, ain't got the skills to back it up
cus u nowhere near as good a neighbor and I class HIM as wack as fuck
nah

Close battle. Both had some hits and some misses. Depends on the voters cause it can go either way. I got lotto cause his first two bars were better than blams best bars.

Vote Lotto

[jilti]

This was not a good battle..


Blams verse was mostly blah, and lottos verse was played bars tho that strange bar was nice

Overall blam took it

[Saitama]

Tommy

Cartoon Sketch

I felt both had some played material but blam had better wording, I've seen a few diode boat flips, Newton gravity, smirk face lines, so they weren't as strong to me, imo..

Ima go with blam, due to his verse appealing to me more.

[Useless]

Lotto had a good verse all the way thru until those last two. Those really killed an otherwise enjoyable verse. Blam had white ranger and cancer of the league which was hard af and a lil fucked up but that's why I liked it lol. He had a couple misses too but not as bad as Lottos and that's why he gets my vote. Lottos gravity, featured in the Mag and strange lines were good tho




V. Blam

[Artifice]

Machine gun under the coat, by the time you see it u won't realize you're in slight danger.
The Tommy hasn't surprised someone this much since he turned out to be the White Ranger.
Your wife was laid up in the hospital, going through stress and fatigue.
It's ironic how she was dealing with chemo yet you're the cancer to this league.

vs

even Zelph don't think ya dope cus ya lyrics make us wretch
so if there's a Blam featured in a mag it's more like a cartoon sketch
votes on some dumb shit n u using it to get wins kid
u posting wack verses ain't strange but the way u robbed him w/ one is


this was a close match... blam had slightly better wording so that's giving him a slight edge. both had some nice bars and some stuff that didn't connect, or played lines (i used a 'wipe smirk off the face of the earth' line 3 weeks ago against him in the Battle Arena). If lotto's wording and flow were a little crisper, he might've taken it, but as it stands...

v/ Blam

[Kenny the OG]

The wiping smirk off the face of the earth and white ranger bars we're cool. The rest of the verse was very average, just gotta be honest. But the fact that lotto only had the newton bar which I felt was dope, and everything felt real lazily do to me, gave blam enough space to eek out a win.
Also..
Orc needs to give that hide & seek bar "cmon bro line of the week" smh. Shame on you for that one lotto. Shame.

Vote- blammy

[Destroyer]

this wasn't my favorite read tbh
I got only one quoteable from each of u
white ranger for Blam
and Newton for Lotto

out of the two, I liked white ranger more
think blam's misses were a bit stronger too

v/Blam

[Sharp]

The shots to your chest will have you breathing like a bitch in labor.
I'm a vet, rook...We wouldn't be in the same boat if you were Diode's neighbor.
basic but alright
I got your wife tasting my girth, the only guns you're spraying are nerf.
All it takes is a couple of shots for me to wipe a Smirk...off the face of the earth.
seen way to much like this against him
Machine gun under the coat, by the time you see it u won't realize you're in slight danger.
The Tommy hasn't surprised someone this much since he turned out to be the White Ranger.
alright
Your wife was laid up in the hospital, going through stress and fatigue.
It's ironic how she was dealing with chemo yet you're the cancer to this league.
not feeling that. see what you're doing but i never really dug fake personals
Asking Me, Orc and Hush for advice won't make you one of the best, b.
Shit, You probably pm'ed me on my other account for pointers against me.
cool idea but not feeling the delivery


even Zelph don't think ya dope cus ya lyrics make us wretch
so if there's a Blam featured in a mag it's more like a cartoon sketch
ok. see what you're going for but delivery is a little light
shots are fired off w/ aim ill kill all this faggots family
everything hit the floor around Newton he'll think he discovered gravity
solid. havent seen blam battle before so idk how often this is done but fresh to me
votes on some dumb shit n u using it to get wins kid
u posting wack verses ain't strange but the way u robbed him w/ one is
seen stuff like this before but its personal so its cool
Blam don't get pussy, no girl wants a gunbar geek
if blam out searching for a girl she'll stay hidden like playing hide n seek
Not feeling that at all
tricking people w/ that alias, ain't got the skills to back it up
cus u nowhere near as good a neighbor and I class HIM as wack as fuck
I like what you're going for but execution isn't there. closer to a diss of neighbor

kinda disappointed. Both dudes felt kinda rushed

got diode's boat and tommy vs gravity and strange

went back and forth here I got Lotto cause I felt his two quotes were just a hair stronger. could see this go either way but I thought gravity was the lotb cause I'm a sucker for personal lines. Close shit though, I guess the difference was that I wasn't feeling the chemo line and I'm surprised the diode boat line isn't being quoted more

v/lotto

[Adverse]

Blam:
The shots to your chest will have you breathing like a bitch in labor.
I'm a vet, rook...We wouldn't be in the same boat if you were Diode's neighbor.
^alright

I got your wife tasting my girth, the only guns you're spraying are nerf.
All it takes is a couple of shots for me to wipe a Smirk...off the face of the earth.
^ I didn't like this, super played, actually I seen a bar just like this one a couple weeks ago used by Artifice.

Machine gun under the coat, by the time you see it u won't realize you're in slight danger.
The Tommy hasn't surprised someone this much since he turned out to be the White Ranger.
^LOTB.

Your wife was laid up in the hospital, going through stress and fatigue.
It's ironic how she was dealing with chemo yet you're the cancer to this league.
^ ouch. personal damage.

Asking Me, Orc and Hush for advice won't make you one of the best, b.
Shit, You probably pm'ed me on my other account for pointers against me.
^nah hella weak for a closer.

Lotto:
even Zelph don't think ya dope cus ya lyrics make us wretch
so if there's a Blam featured in a mag it's more like a cartoon sketch
^ decent enough.

shots are fired off w/ aim ill kill all this faggots family
everything hit the floor around Newton he'll think he discovered gravity
^ I liked this bar a lot.

votes on some dumb shit n u using it to get wins kid
u posting wack verses ain't strange but the way u robbed him w/ one is
^ felt like the set-up could have been better but it was alright

Blam don't get pussy, no girl wants a gunbar geek
if blam out searching for a girl she'll stay hidden like playing hide n seek
^ NO.

tricking people w/ that alias, ain't got the skills to back it up
cus u nowhere near as good a neighbor and I class HIM as wack as fuck
^ I didn't like this.

Wasn't exactly a heavyweight bout, but Blam took this convincingly, also I liked the little shoutout to my prediction at the beginning of your verse, way to use that as motivation and get an 'upset' victory, good battle gents.

Vote - Blam

[Cashius]

Wipe smirk

Vs.

Gravity, strange was ok

Not feeling much in this but I thought lotto got it.