Allen Knight 2-0 vs Joe Boston 0-1 - ALLEN KNIGHT WINS

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[Joe Boston]

Check how many Allen Knight

[Allen Knight]

12-14.

[Joe Boston]

Allen Knight Orc

14

Go Run n play in traffic no one gives a fuck bout u son
Just be quick to Deke Al cuz im hoping ur face gets plastered on a window into a replica of one
All my bitches got nice buns get em stunned when im deep with the Rod
If u were to go farther in a chick it involves taking off ur shirt exposing ur dad bod
Better pray to fucking God there isnt a cold day i meet ya
Blades will have ur face swapped they'll be adding the stabwounds to ur snapchat features
Im a creature of habitat u never see no signs of me being frozen on the facial
Your a bitch you've put up more Cold Fronts then predicted this April
Leave ur body covered in stapels show u what i do to herbs who act ungreatful
For this money im Hungry, Jack you then have those insides leaking Vermont Maple
Lets see what wack crew u can finagle ill fuck em up and not waste my breath
One shot will make em feel New Orlean them ill have ur block looking like Will Smiths death
Theres nothing left in you ur costantly running on an empty tank
Sovereign at text? Im kicking you the fuck out just like Santander Bank

[Joe Boston]

Yo Orc if he need an extension im cool with it

[Allen Knight]

ight joey boy it goes...


got duel desert eagles aimed at ya body sparkin'
if Jolene towards me im pumpin Dbl D's in his chest like Dolly Parton
ur w/p's a reach faggot, them rb heads gassing u fuck
i kno Wyatt so forced, u gotta family of retards always backing u up
ur slut gets trained out 24/7, she'll let anyone hit reckless
Joey Gallo on a guy & gettin her vag ripped wide enough to fit Texas
ur a snitch w/ no crew, ya loyaltys a crime u weak ho
i'd neva Baccarat like u, i'll break ur legs & dump u outside of a Casino
i'll snipe u while ya w/ ur ppl, scope im poppin the truth
once a shell Tagalong distance out u'll be the only 1 dropped in the group
a bitch saw ur ugly ass in the VBL & let out a heavy scream
that Video Converter from watchin battles to listening to'em on MP3
& dont answer hushs battle call, get ur weight up rookie
any Video Vixen would make all ur VBL shit look straight up pussy

[Tic]

Allen Knight Orc

14

Go Run n play in traffic no one gives a fuck bout u son
Just be quick to Deke Al cuz im hoping ur face gets plastered on a window into a replica of one
Way too wordy, Joe. Pretty good concept though.
All my bitches got nice buns get em stunned when im deep with the Rod
If u were to go farther in a chick it involves taking off ur shirt exposing ur dad bod
This doesn't work for me. Farther WITH a chick would've been better, but still nah.
Better pray to fucking God there isnt a cold day i meet ya
Blades will have ur face swapped they'll be adding the stabwounds to ur snapchat features
Not feeling this either.
Im a creature of habitat u never see no signs of me being frozen on the facial
Your a bitch you've put up more Cold Fronts then predicted this April
This is ok....except it's warm this April.
Leave ur body covered in stapels show u what i do to herbs who act ungreatful
For this money im Hungry, Jack you then have those insides leaking Vermont Maple
Joe what is going on.
Lets see what wack crew u can finagle ill fuck em up and not waste my breath
One shot will make em feel New Orlean them ill have ur block looking like Will Smiths death
UGh.
Theres nothing left in you ur costantly running on an empty tank
Sovereign at text? Im kicking you the fuck out just like Santander Bank
Nah

ight joey boy it goes...


got duel desert eagles aimed at ya body sparkin'
if Jolene towards me im pumpin Dbl D's in his chest like Dolly Parton
Double D's is played.
ur w/p's a reach faggot, them rb heads gassing u fuck
i kno Wyatt so forced, u gotta family of retards always backing u up
Wyatt is played, execution ok.
ur slut gets trained out 24/7, she'll let anyone hit reckless
Joey Gallo on a guy & gettin her vag ripped wide enough to fit Texas
Joey Gal Low? Not feeling this either.
ur a snitch w/ no crew, ya loyaltys a crime u weak ho
i'd neva Baccarat like u, i'll break ur legs & dump u outside of a Casino
Fire. Haven't seen baccarat before lol, nice.
i'll snipe u while ya w/ ur ppl, scope im poppin the truth
once a shell Tagalong distance out u'll be the only 1 dropped in the group
Not bad.
a bitch saw ur ugly ass in the VBL & let out a heavy scream
that Video Converter from watchin battles to listening to'em on MP3
Lol.
& dont answer hushs battle call, get ur weight up rookie
any Video Vixen would make all ur VBL shit look straight up pussy
Not bad.
Allen took this convincingly. Joe, I wasn't feeling any of your bars man. Some of your concepts were ok but your flips just weren't there. Allen, that Baccarat bar was dooope. You started off slow but the end was nice.

[SuckaFreeCashier]

Joe Boston
Go Run n play in traffic no one gives a fuck bout u son
Just be quick to Deke Al cuz im hoping ur face gets plastered on a window into a replica of one
the wording in the punch is all over the place, completely fucks with the fluidity of the concept. I liked the concept of the wordplay you used, just not effective for me with how it's worded
All my bitches got nice buns get em stunned when im deep with the Rod
If u were to go farther in a chick it involves taking off ur shirt exposing ur dad bod
not hitting hard for me.
Better pray to fucking God there isnt a cold day i meet ya
Blades will have ur face swapped they'll be adding the stabwounds to ur snapchat features
this was nice
Im a creature of habitat u never see no signs of me being frozen on the facial
Your a bitch you've put up more Cold Fronts then predicted this April
"creature of habitat" isn't a thing lol, it's creature of habit. Decent punch
Leave ur body covered in stapels show u what i do to herbs who act ungreatful
For this money im Hungry, Jack you then have those insides leaking Vermont Maple
Ehh just so-so for me
Lets see what wack crew u can finagle ill fuck em up and not waste my breath
One shot will make em feel New Orlean them ill have ur block looking like Will Smiths death
The wording doesn't work for me. What does "feel new" mean? Major reach just to set up the New Orleans / Will Smith play, which i thought was just an easy topical
Theres nothing left in you ur costantly running on an empty tank
Sovereign at text? Im kicking you the fuck out just like Santander Bank
Guessing this is a personal? Not hitting super hard for me



Allen Knight
got duel desert eagles aimed at ya body sparkin'
if Jolene towards me im pumpin Dbl D's in his chest like Dolly Parton
This was tight, setup was a little weak tho
ur w/p's a reach faggot, them rb heads gassing u fuck
i kno Wyatt so forced, u gotta family of retards always backing u up
Could have done a lot more with this imo, didn't hit hard for me
ur slut gets trained out 24/7, she'll let anyone hit reckless
Joey Gallo on a guy & gettin her vag ripped wide enough to fit Texas
nah, not hitting for me
ur a snitch w/ no crew, ya loyaltys a crime u weak ho
i'd neva Baccarat like u, i'll break ur legs & dump u outside of a Casino
damn how haven't i heard this wordplay? dope
i'll snipe u while ya w/ ur ppl, scope im poppin the truth
once a shell Tagalong distance out u'll be the only 1 dropped in the group
see what you were going for, felt just ok tho. a lil forced
a bitch saw ur ugly ass in the VBL & let out a heavy scream
that Video Converter from watchin battles to listening to'em on MP3
lmao this was nice
& dont answer hushs battle call, get ur weight up rookie
any Video Vixen would make all ur VBL shit look straight up pussy
felt like you should have said this first then ended with your previous bars, as this didn't hit all that hard


Overall I thought this was pretty close. I feel like both had hits and misses and suffered from some poor wording. Gotta edge to who I thought hit harder when he hit, which was allen

V/ Allen Knight

[SHECK WES]

Go Run n play in traffic no one gives a fuck bout u son
Just be quick to Deke Al cuz im hoping ur face gets plastered on a window into a replica of one
u had the concept going but the second line was way too stretched and killed the potential bro
All my bitches got nice buns get em stunned when im deep with the Rod
If u were to go farther in a chick it involves taking off ur shirt exposing ur dad bod
nah this was corny man
Better pray to fucking God there isnt a cold day i meet ya
Blades will have ur face swapped they'll be adding the stabwounds to ur snapchat features
alright not bad
Im a creature of habitat u never see no signs of me being frozen on the facial
Your a bitch you've put up more Cold Fronts then predicted this April
-___________- this couldn't possibly work for so many reasons yo lmao
Leave ur body covered in stapels show u what i do to herbs who act ungreatful
For this money im Hungry, Jack you then have those insides leaking Vermont Maple
damn another good concept that was hurt by how you finished the second line...
Lets see what wack crew u can finagle ill fuck em up and not waste my breath
One shot will make em feel New Orlean them ill have ur block looking like Will Smiths death
dispite the wording I liked this, concept good, wp was good, solid
Theres nothing left in you ur costantly running on an empty tank
Sovereign at text? Im kicking you the fuck out just like Santander Bank
hmmm nah man


Vs


got duel desert eagles aimed at ya body sparkin'
if Jolene towards me im pumpin Dbl D's in his chest like Dolly Parton
double d's played, even I've used that, but the flip was decent
ur w/p's a reach faggot, them rb heads gassing u fuck
i kno Wyatt so forced, u gotta family of retards always backing u up
decent at best
ur slut gets trained out 24/7, she'll let anyone hit reckless
Joey Gallo on a guy & gettin her vag ripped wide enough to fit Texas
lol nah
ur a snitch w/ no crew, ya loyaltys a crime u weak ho
i'd neva Baccarat like u, i'll break ur legs & dump u outside of a Casino
alright good
i'll snipe u while ya w/ ur ppl, scope im poppin the truth
once a shell Tagalong distance out u'll be the only 1 dropped in the group
alright good again
a bitch saw ur ugly ass in the VBL & let out a heavy scream
that Video Converter from watchin battles to listening to'em on MP3
first line stupid but lol
& dont answer hushs battle call, get ur weight up rookie
any Video Vixen would make all ur VBL shit look straight up pussy
ehh decent at best


Joe had 2 good ones. Didn't like how allens verse started but he picked up after the third line. Not allens best that's for sure, and if Joe dropped nicer he could have beat it but Allen takes this comfortably.

Vote AK

[Adverse]

Boston:

Go Run n play in traffic no one gives a fuck bout u son
Just be quick to Deke Al cuz im hoping ur face gets plastered on a window into a replica of one
^ didn't really live up to its potential

All my bitches got nice buns get em stunned when im deep with the Rod
If u were to go farther in a chick it involves taking off ur shirt exposing ur dad bod
^ Nah I didn't feel this

Better pray to fucking God there isnt a cold day i meet ya
Blades will have ur face swapped they'll be adding the stabwounds to ur snapchat features
^this one is okay

Im a creature of habitat u never see no signs of me being frozen on the facial
Your a bitch you've put up more Cold Fronts then predicted this April
^Nooooooope.

Leave ur body covered in stapels show u what i do to herbs who act ungreatful
For this money im Hungry, Jack you then have those insides leaking Vermont Maple
^ The wording needs work, the ideas are there though

Lets see what wack crew u can finagle ill fuck em up and not waste my breath
One shot will make em feel New Orlean them ill have ur block looking like Will Smiths death
^ I didn't really like this, it felt forced.

Theres nothing left in you ur costantly running on an empty tank
Sovereign at text? Im kicking you the fuck out just like Santander Bank
^No, def wasn't strong enough for a closer.

Allen:
got duel desert eagles aimed at ya body sparkin'
if Jolene towards me im pumpin Dbl D's in his chest like Dolly Parton
^ Fresh twist on a played concept, I don't know if everyone caught the 'Jolene' part as well

ur w/p's a reach faggot, them rb heads gassing u fuck
i kno Wyatt so forced, u gotta family of retards always backing u up
^this one was okay

ur slut gets trained out 24/7, she'll let anyone hit reckless
Joey Gallo on a guy & gettin her vag ripped wide enough to fit Texas
^ felt a little forced but it was a mad decent idea.

ur a snitch w/ no crew, ya loyaltys a crime u weak ho
i'd neva Baccarat like u, i'll break ur legs & dump u outside of a Casino
^ dopeeeee.

i'll snipe u while ya w/ ur ppl, scope im poppin the truth
once a shell Tagalong distance out u'll be the only 1 dropped in the group
^ alright alright

a bitch saw ur ugly ass in the VBL & let out a heavy scream
that Video Converter from watchin battles to listening to'em on MP3
^ LOL dope bar.

& dont answer hushs battle call, get ur weight up rookie
any Video Vixen would make all ur VBL shit look straight up pussy
^ Nah this didn't work very good as a closer.

Allen did his thing here while Joe didn't have much of anything. Easy win for AK.

Vote - Allen Knight

[Barcotic]

decal
cold fronts
(both could've been dope w/ better wording but still decent)

vs

wyatt
baccarat
tagalong
video converter

v/ak

[Orc]

Joes opener was a nice concept. Snapchat was okay too. Meet ya doesnt rhyme with features though. I expected really good rhyming here considering you said my perfect slant rhymes were off. Overall you need to cut out the extra words in ya verses so that you can fulfil your potential. Make your verses more concise. Allen had the baccarat line which was cool and the video converter was funny. Opener was nice too actually. AK didn't go in too hard on Joe but he knew what to do to win.

Vote AK