CBA vs Unfukwitable - (UNFUKWITABLE WINS)

[Orc]

Due Thursday

CBA Unfukwitable

[Unfukwitable]

12 it is CBA

[CBA]

Sounds good

[Unfukwitable]

BADA BOOM, BADA BING!



Ya girl walks over you, While u're sexually Idle she's got the Viral twat;
U're just a Broaden Horizon she forces u to think out side her Box.
Ur bars in Netcees vs. RMBVA was a snooze fest, that's purely facts;
U gave everyone from the Lyme Disease & it's no cure for that.
Idk if if u went off the top of the head, But u was rotted & dead;
seeing Sn00p & The Wash he gave u - Dre knew U needed another DR. instead.
RMBVA: FlossedOut 3 -
SuckaFreeCashier's views flurished when he made this dude rubbish;
Cash blew with 1 stripe...and left U suckin dick for a New Hundred.
Im sick in the head, I'll have ur Organs Blended to potions;
Tell ya Daughter get a cup & Pour your heart out like Vented emotions.
HOF? VET? U bout to be wiped frm NC history & that's a given;
think Double Jeopardy, Once I clear ya name.. A comebacks forbidden.

[CBA]

It's CBA, you never heard of me? I got a rep for being unstable
Unfukwitable? I'll take out this "fuckwit" and leave you lookin "unable"
If you got beef, I'm going after your family, I'm sick as hell
Watch me bring the pain to your blood like sickle cell

I wrote my bars at your girl's house, she let me into her place, Fuk
Ironic cuz I went to that house just to face Fuk
You gay cuck, you be washing my jizz stains out of your chick's Futon,
She even "handed me off" in a limousine - that's Grey Poupon

What type of shit is you on? Son I'll tear off your mandible
And call you Dr. Do Little, cuz now you talkin' to an animal,
Unfukwitable, this dumb fuck's pitiful
Call me Michaelangelo when I nunchuck hit a fool

[Aero]

U:

Ya girl walks over you, While u're sexually Idle she's got the Viral twat;
U're just a Broaden Horizon she forces u to think out side her Box.
broad in her eyes 'n right? first read it's dope, 2nd its light
Ur bars in Netcees vs. RMBVA was a snooze fest, that's purely facts;
U gave everyone from the Lyme Disease & it's no cure for that.
KK
Idk if if u went off the top of the head, But u was rotted & dead;
seeing Sn00p & The Wash he gave u - Dre knew U needed another DR. instead.
NIGGA you could've made this dope
RMBVA: FlossedOut 3 -
SuckaFreeCashier's views flurished when he made this dude rubbish;
Cash blew with 1 stripe...and left U suckin dick for a New Hundred.
niiiiiiice
Im sick in the head, I'll have ur Organs Blended to potions;
Tell ya Daughter get a cup & Pour your heart out like Vented emotions.
circa 2006
HOF? VET? U bout to be wiped frm NC history & that's a given;
think Double Jeopardy, Once I clear ya name.. A comebacks forbidden.
I dig it

cool here, good concepts, wording though not your best


B:

It's CBA, you never heard of me? I got a rep for being unstable
Unfukwitable? I'll take out this "fuckwit" and leave you lookin "unable"
I dig it I dig it
If you got beef, I'm going after your family, I'm sick as hell
Watch me bring the pain to your blood like sickle cell
aight

I wrote my bars at your girl's house, she let me into her place, Fuk
Ironic cuz I went to that house just to face Fuk
lol at writing at his girl's house... bar is funny even though unconventional
You gay cuck, you be washing my jizz stains out of your chick's Futon,
She even "handed me off" in a limousine - that's Grey Poupon
lol

What type of shit is you on? Son I'll tear off your mandible
And call you Dr. Do Little, cuz now you talkin' to an animal,
braggo, cool for a braggo verse
Unfukwitable, this dumb fuck's pitiful
Call me Michaelangelo when I nunchuck hit a fool
nigga what


humorous verse, could've been cleaner



Entertaining battle... I think CBA last 2 line were his undoing though but I enjoyed everything else... Unfuk blew line and personals got him this




Vote: Unfuk

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BADA BOOM, BADA BING!
not sure i get this whole intro..


Ya girl walks over you, While u're sexually Idle she's got the Viral twat;
U're just a Broaden Horizon she forces u to think out side her Box.
this is Meh, I get the wp but wasn't feelin it too much really
Ur bars in Netcees vs. RMBVA was a snooze fest, that's purely facts;
U gave everyone from the Lyme Disease & it's no cure for that.
decent
Idk if if u went off the top of the head, But u was rotted & dead;
seeing Sn00p & The Wash he gave u - Dre knew U needed another DR. instead.
alright
RMBVA: FlossedOut 3 -
SuckaFreeCashier's views flurished when he made this dude rubbish;
Cash blew with 1 stripe...and left U suckin dick for a New Hundred.
ok
Im sick in the head, I'll have ur Organs Blended to potions;
Tell ya Daughter get a cup & Pour your heart out like Vented emotions.
noooo
HOF? VET? U bout to be wiped frm NC history & that's a given;
think Double Jeopardy, Once I clear ya name.. A comebacks forbidden.
decent

Vs


CBA, you never heard of me? I got a rep for being unstable
Unfukwitable? I'll take out this "fuckwit" and leave you lookin "unable"
hmm alright
If you got beef, I'm going after your family, I'm sick as hell
Watch me bring the pain to your blood like sickle cell
theres no way in hell sickle cell lines aren't played but idk for sure, light bar but it's decent
I wrote my bars at your girl's house, she let me into her place, Fuk
Ironic cuz I went to that house just to face fuk
lol made me laugh, not bad but just a really weird structured bar
You gay cuck, you be washing my jizz stains out of your chick's Futon,
She even "handed me off" in a limousine - that's Grey Poupon
lol cuck, ok
What type of shit is you on? Son I'll tear off your mandible
And call you Dr. Do Little, cuz now you talkin' to an animal,
nahhhhh
Unfukwitable, this dumb fuck's pitiful
Call me Michaelangelo when I nunchuck hit a fool
whyd you waste a bar on this bro


Man this shit was difficult to judge really. Unfuk came with some wordy bars and some bars that were ok and some that weren't good. CBA had some weird unorthodox style that I'm not used to seeing lol maybe that's normal at rmbva but I haven't battled there before so idk. So I'm just gonna vote for the verse I enjoyed reading more this time around because other than that I can't pick a winner. CBA's verse made me laugh so I'm going with that.

Vote CBA

[Hush]

BADA BOOM, BADA BING!



Ya girl walks over you, While u're sexually Idle she's got the Viral twat;
U're just a Broaden Horizon she forces u to think out side her Box
nahh lol kinda a reach to me.
Ur bars in Netcees vs. RMBVA was a snooze fest, that's purely facts;
U gave everyone from the Lyme Disease & it's no cure for that.
seen this sorta line before, so it didnt wow me b
Idk if if u went off the top of the head, But u was rotted & dead;
seeing Sn00p & The Wash he gave u - Dre knew U needed another DR. instead.
this is kool
RMBVA: FlossedOut 3 -
SuckaFreeCashier's views flurished when he made this dude rubbish;
Cash blew with 1 stripe...and left U suckin dick for a New Hundred.
ok kool
Im sick in the head, I'll have ur Organs Blended to potions;
Tell ya Daughter get a cup & Pour your heart out like Vented emotions.
fire!
HOF? VET? U bout to be wiped frm NC history & that's a given;
think Double Jeopardy, Once I clear ya name.. A comebacks forbidden.
eh


It's CBA, you never heard of me? I got a rep for being unstable
Unfukwitable? I'll take out this "fuckwit" and leave you lookin "unable"
eh this is soso
If you got beef, I'm going after your family, I'm sick as hell
Watch me bring the pain to your blood like sickle cell
ok kool, but I seen this and heard it
I wrote my bars at your girl's house, she let me into her place, Fuk
Ironic cuz I went to that house just to face Fuk
nah
You gay cuck, you be washing my jizz stains out of your chick's Futon,
She even "handed me off" in a limousine - that's Grey Poupon
fire
What type of shit is you on? Son I'll tear off your mandible
And call you Dr. Do Little, cuz now you talkin' to an animal,
saw this before
Unfukwitable, this dumb fuck's pitiful
Call me Michaelangelo when I nunchuck hit a fool
nah


Unfuk got this but it was close. I edged it to the more creative verse.

[Kenny the OG]

The wash concept and $100 bill concept won the battle. Straight fire.

Low key CBA is my new favorite textcee. He's different y'all. The grey poupon concept was dope and the closer.... that closer!! Gawwwwwd damn!!! Just watch, all y'all niggas gonna be writing like this nigga cba here. Too fuckin funny..The Dot of netcees.

Determination over trust, but this time I gotta go with unfuckwitable. Dope shit

[jilti]

Unfuk had the snoop line

Cba had the Handed me off line

But inbetween unfuk separated himself

V/unfuk

[Orc]

I think CBA handed me off line was flames. Opener was cool too. Unfuk had the snoop line. I think the rest fell flat because they were variations of old ideas. I have to go against the grain because I think CBA had two quotes and one maybe vs UFs one quite and one maybe. CBA needs to touch up his style a little bit for next week, no throwaway bars like the closer. UF needs to shake the that and steer away from the longbarish concepts

I got CBA

[Useless]

Unfuk's broaden horizon bar was nice. Lyme disease was aite I liked the angle. Sn00p line was nice. CBA had face fuck and gray poupon but the difference is unfuks nonquktes were ehh whereas CBA's were pretty terrible


V. Unfuk

[Artifice]

I got Unfuckwitable taking this... felt his verse overall had better attempts...

CBA had the Grey Poupon line (which I didn't think was as 'fire' as everyone else seems to, probably why i have a losing record tho lol) and his opener i thought was cool. everything else was pretty basic in concept and just wasn't effective to me. Unfuckwitable didn't have a slamming verse but his punches were more consistent and overall more creativity from him. His opener, the snoop/dre line, and his closer i thought were cool.

v/ Unfuckwitable

[Saint]

CBA had grey poupon, opener an idea I had but played, maybe? thats my gut reaction.. closer was bullshitting lol

Unfuk, snoop line, closer, hunnid, was all okkk. No obvious throwaways but no haymakers, imo..

vote un

[Adverse]

I got Unfuk, and I don't think there's much of a breakdown needed here.
He had the sn00p line, I also liked the vented emotions one, I haven't been around much and haven't seen that idea floated around.
Though I liked Grey Poupon line from CBA and the opener was cool as well, I thought the strength of the two bars I liked from Unfuk were better than CBA's, it was a pretty good match up though.

V - Unfuk