Wanderer 5-5 vs Blam Newton 6-4 - BLAM WINS

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[Wanderer]

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[Blam Newton]

I've read your verses. I've never seen such worse bull.
I'll have this bitch surrounded by so many barrels u'd think it was a Jim bean commercial.
Stick to online dating, the last girl u met took off and hurled.
Any woman experiencing Wanderlust is probably running away across the world.
You don't have a single notable win, every one of your accomplishments' minor.
Nigga, you're not the Future of this league everyone thinks you're more like Desiigner.
My finger's on the trigger, I'm itchin' to use the handguns bad.
And have your homies pouring out more liquor than Lil Wayne in that Samsung ad.
I'm stay giving dimes some deep dick and putting them to sleep quick.
Ur girls are ugly cuz whenever a Wand comes out, it's usually followed by a cheap trick.
This battle isn't fair, no one thinks this lame could intrigue.
It makes sense that we call u Wanderer when u can't seem to find a place in this league.

[Wanderer]

Had barely any time to write and I'm bout to catch a flight to Prague. I'll key something soon

[Wanderer]

I'm young & in my prime while u washed up & don't go hard, u wack
New Age so damn badly & no chick listens when you claim to be part of that
Drive by with the tec & I'm poppin. hit dudes chest & I'll drop him
When u laid out flat in the road people stop in their tracks, pedestrian crossin
Getting calls from foreign numbers from chicks who want me to hit it
U got 0 chance to fuck Abroad no matter how many countries you visit
Got too much cash to spend so the chicks stay loyal to my patch
If they say u associated with deep pockets it's in reference to ur girls snatch
this faggot talkin straps and cash, man I swear this dude lies
Tells thugs the heat'll have em lifted then takes em on hot air balloon rides
Creep in ur house while U writing wack bars. The gat do more than just hurt ya
There'll be blood & gore all over Newsdesk like a TV anchor reporting on murder

[Kenny the OG]

I've read your verses. I've never seen such worse bull.
I'll have this bitch surrounded by so many barrels u'd think it was a Jim bean commercial.
Avg execution
Stick to online dating, the last girl u met took off and hurled.
Any woman experiencing Wanderlust is probably running away across the world.
ehh ok
You don't have a single notable win, every one of your accomplishments' minor.
Nigga, you're not the Future of this league everyone thinks you're more like Desiigner.
ok I like this one
My finger's on the trigger, I'm itchin' to use the handguns bad.
And have your homies pouring out more liquor than Lil Wayne in that Samsung ad.
ehh
I'm stay giving dimes some deep dick and putting them to sleep quick.
Ur girls are ugly cuz whenever a Wand comes out, it's usually followed by a cheap trick.
Ok solid bar
This battle isn't fair, no one thinks this lame could intrigue.
It makes sense that we call u Wanderer when u can't seem to find a place in this league
alittle bland for my taste

Not a bad verse overall but nothing really stood out to me tbh. This was a serviceable drop for a mid-tier/low level opponent.

Vs

I'm young & in my prime while u washed up & don't go hard, u wack
New Age so damn badly & no chick listens when you claim to be part of that
Cool concept & name play but the wording hurt it a lot
Drive by with the tec & I'm poppin. hit dudes chest & I'll drop him
When u laid out flat in the road people stop in their tracks, pedestrian crossin
OK
Getting calls from foreign numbers from chicks who want me to hit it
U got 0 chance to fuck Abroad no matter how many countries you visit
Played
Got too much cash to spend so the chicks stay loyal to my patch
If they say u associated with deep pockets it's in reference to ur girls snatch
Nah
this faggot talkin straps and cash, man I swear this dude lies
Tells thugs the heat'll have em lifted then takes em on hot air balloon rides
kinda humorous
Creep in ur house while U writing wack bars. The gat do more than just hurt ya
There'll be blood & gore all over Newsdesk like a TV anchor reporting on murder
couldve been executed differently to give it more effect


A few bigger misses than the competing verse but was also more versatile than his opponent.

This battle is very close. Its gonna come down to style prefernces. I think wanderer took more chances and had a fresher verse bexause of it. But he was also more inconsistent. Blam was more solid although bland in spots. I'm still not even sure who I wanna give it to smh. Gonna give it a second read and edit in a vote later


Vote- wanderlust by the smallest of margins.

[Schadenfreude]

BLAM NEWTON took this, Wand didn't have any effective punches, a couple concepts had potential, but the execution wasn't there. Blam didn't say anything crazy, but the verse was consistently solid.

[jilti]

I've read your verses. I've never seen such worse bull.
I'll have this bitch surrounded by so many barrels u'd think it was a Jim bean commercial.
^generic
Stick to online dating, the last girl u met took off and hurled.
Any woman experiencing Wanderlust is probably running away across the world.
^this nameplay was used on him 2 weeks ago
You don't have a single notable win, every one of your accomplishments' minor.
Nigga, you're not the Future of this league everyone thinks you're more like Desiigner.
^im missing something here
My finger's on the trigger, I'm itchin' to use the handguns bad.
And have your homies pouring out more liquor than Lil Wayne in that Samsung ad.
^generic
I'm stay giving dimes some deep dick and putting them to sleep quick.
Ur girls are ugly cuz whenever a Wand comes out, it's usually followed by a cheap trick.
^blah
This battle isn't fair, no one thinks this lame could intrigue.
It makes sense that we call u Wanderer when u can't seem to find a place in this league.
^this nameplay was used on him last week

Vs.

I'm young & in my prime while u washed up & don't go hard, u wack
New Age so damn badly & no chick listens when you claim to be part of that
^ok
Drive by with the tec & I'm poppin. hit dudes chest & I'll drop him
When u laid out flat in the road people stop in their tracks, pedestrian crossin
^no
Getting calls from foreign numbers from chicks who want me to hit it
U got 0 chance to fuck Abroad no matter how many countries you visit
^abroad is soooo played
Got too much cash to spend so the chicks stay loyal to my patch
If they say u associated with deep pockets it's in reference to ur girls snatch
^no
this faggot talkin straps and cash, man I swear this dude lies
Tells thugs the heat'll have em lifted then takes em on hot air balloon rides
^blah
Creep in ur house while U writing wack bars. The gat do more than just hurt ya
There'll be blood & gore all over Newsdesk like a TV anchor reporting on murder
^coulda been dope if worded better


V/ wanderer in a lackluster battle

[Schadenfreude]

^

[Junto]

Stick to online dating, the last girl u met took off and hurled.
Any woman experiencing Wanderlust is probably running away across the world.
My finger's on the trigger, I'm itchin' to use the handguns bad.
And have your homies pouring out more liquor than Lil Wayne in that Samsung ad.
I'm stay giving dimes some deep dick and putting them to sleep quick.
Ur girls are ugly cuz whenever a Wand comes out, it's usually followed by a cheap trick.

vs.

Drive by with the tec & I'm poppin. hit dudes chest & I'll drop him
When u laid out flat in the road people stop in their tracks, pedestrian crossin
this faggot talkin straps and cash, man I swear this dude lies
Tells thugs the heat'll have em lifted then takes em on hot air balloon rides

all these was cool... cheap trick and hot air balloon rides pretty nice
both had some played bars but wand had more misses to me

V/newton

[Toil]

Blam: Jim Beam, cheap trick

Wanderer: fuck abroad, deep pockets

Both verses were pretty inconsistent, some nice lines and some really basic ones. I got this pretty close with 2 hard hitters each. Blam takes it just as the Cheap Trick punch was LOTB.

Vote = Blam Newton

[Saitama]

jim beam decent flip, cheap trick

air balloon (seen it from hush)

Wandered had some played ideas like that abroad stuff, wording seemed rushed, make that shit concise..
blam had some used angles on wanderer but wording was better, took a safe route to win..

V Blam

[Og smokinstein]

Blam got this.. cheap trick and designer bars were dope.
Wand verse wasn't really hitting on too much.

Blam gets this off of better attempts

[Ghost1]

I've read your verses. I've never seen such worse bull.
I'll have this bitch surrounded by so many barrels u'd think it was a Jim bean commercial.

Eh this is ok

Stick to online dating, the last girl u met took off and hurled.
Any woman experiencing Wanderlust is probably running away across the world.

Ok

You don't have a single notable win, every one of your accomplishments' minor.
Nigga, you're not the Future of this league everyone thinks you're more like Desiigner.

Eh

My finger's on the trigger, I'm itchin' to use the handguns bad.
And have your homies pouring out more liquor than Lil Wayne in that Samsung ad.

Cool

I'm stay giving dimes some deep dick and putting them to sleep quick.
Ur girls are ugly cuz whenever a Wand comes out, it's usually followed by a cheap trick.

Lol aight

This battle isn't fair, no one thinks this lame could intrigue.
It makes sense that we call u Wanderer when u can't seem to find a place in this league.

Ok





I'm young & in my prime while u washed up & don't go hard, u wack
New Age so damn badly & no chick listens when you claim to be part of that

Wording way off

Drive by with the tec & I'm poppin. hit dudes chest & I'll drop him
When u laid out flat in the road people stop in their tracks, pedestrian crossin

Ehhhh this is ok

Getting calls from foreign numbers from chicks who want me to hit it
U got 0 chance to fuck Abroad no matter how many countries you visit

Played

Got too much cash to spend so the chicks stay loyal to my patch
If they say u associated with deep pockets it's in reference to ur girls snatch

Eh

this faggot talkin straps and cash, man I swear this dude lies
Tells thugs the heat'll have em lifted then takes em on hot air balloon rides

Concepts cool....I don't like the way u took it tho

Creep in ur house while U writing wack bars. The gat do more than just hurt ya
There'll be blood & gore all over Newsdesk like a TV anchor reporting on murder

Too wordy



This was light on both ends. Nothing here really blew me away. Blam wording was better tho and was the difference maker imho.


V blam