Unfukwitable 2-4 vs Artifice 1-2 - ART WINS

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NBL Season 9


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[Unfukwitable]

check

[Artifice]

check.

[Artifice]

might need an ext. Unfukwitable if that's cool...

[Unfukwitable]

Ok, cool. *Granted*
Artifice

[Artifice]

this loser reigns on the block where he can't write any nice shit
bitch between ur name & league record u're set for an identity crisis
get choked up when leavin' the league but it's all for the better
cuz my desire to win's innate & he makes u retire... Conor McGregor
seen ur posts & u ain't funny or a pimp... & trust u ain't a G
pussy with no wit so the bitches withhold it... he's unfuk-able basically
how many lines to sever his head & spine? ten'll do plenty
cuz this bitch isn't money... so he ain't gonna face a new twenty
& by the end everyone has seen that this veteran bled
my blade's a winner & u better believe i'll give him its competitive edge

[Unfukwitable]

BADA BOOM BADA BING!



think Cronus vs. Sharp... When I come with a Pistol grip;
cos no Bar can sway a win, when the 9 got u looking Ridiculous.
Fuck the guns, I'll grab a Ice pick and puncture, son;
..."Houston we've got a problem " Now watch blood Flood his lungs
U can't King this league, It's no chance of dude earnin him a name;
If Art gets a crown it's over bullshit, it'll have Basquiat turnin in his grave.
&How many asswhoppins will u take for ya wife, 40 bro?;
u get battered over the cookie & she just kicks back eatin fried oreos.
I got NO RESPECK! I'm ready to finish u and turn u to minerals;
This Bird tryna C tha god.. But his Life gon be shorter than that Interview.

[Kenny the OG]

Mcgregor +2
Unfukable +1
New 20 +2

Vs

opener +2
Closer +1


Not a bad battle here at all. Both sides had some solid bars and the misses weren't completely terrible at least. Overall I think art had the cleaner verse and being slightly more consistent, meaning less misfires. If unfuckwitable had one less miss (ex. Oreo bar) and one more haymaker he coulda won this. But since he didn't...

Vote-artifice in a debatable.

[Schadenfreude]

UNFUCKWITABLE convincingly imo, Art had that dope opener, but all else was nada. It was a combo of both lackluster concepts & mediocre wording, no harshness or cleverness. I've read a few impressive joints from u Art, but this verse fell flat. Un had some shit tho, not mind-blowing, but very clever & effective. Actually the only line I didn't like was the 'oreo' flip..huffness tbh, the rest was nasty tho.

[Toil]

Art: identity crisis, new twenty

Fuk: blood flood, Basquiat

I got this being quite close. I like a lot of Art's concepts but don't think he words them harsh enough. Fuk has tidier phasing, but didn't think his concepts were as creative. Close, but I'm going with Art

Vote = Art

[Sharp]

2-1 Art

Up

[Barcotic]

innate

vs

opener

pretty weak battle I'm sure I've seen a lot better from both especially unfuk, came down to the standout I preferred

v/art

[Adverse]

Art took this in my eyes. Unfuk had a couple cool lines but I wasn't feeling some, the Houston bar felt too generic to me and like it could have had more impact if worded better. Art had the opener and unfukable and the closer and competitive edge bars weren't bad either. Unfuk's closer and Basquiat lines were cool but I think Art just overpowered him here

Vote-Art

[Habitat]

art
this loser reigns on the block where he can't write any nice shit
bitch between ur name & league record u're set for an identity crisis
-yeah decent personal
get choked up when leavin' the league but it's all for the better
cuz my desire to win's innate & he makes u retire... Conor McGregor
-diggin it
seen ur posts & u ain't funny or a pimp... & trust u ain't a G
pussy with no wit so the bitches withhold it... he's unfuk-able basically
-played
how many lines to sever his head & spine? ten'll do plenty
cuz this bitch isn't money... so he ain't gonna face a new twenty
-not a fan
& by the end everyone has seen that this veteran bled
my blade's a winner & u better believe i'll give him its competitive edge
-played concept and not well done

unfuk
think Cronus vs. Sharp... When I come with a Pistol grip;
cos no Bar can sway a win, when the 9 got u looking Ridiculous.
-maybe the reference is what i dont' get here but not a fan of this
Fuck the guns, I'll grab a Ice pick and puncture, son;
..."Houston we've got a problem " Now watch blood Flood his lungs
-cool, if dudes actually from houston or even texas makes it even better
U can't King this league, It's no chance of dude earnin him a name;
If Art gets a crown it's over bullshit, it'll have Basquiat turnin in his grave.
-not a fan
&How many asswhoppins will u take for ya wife, 40 bro?;
u get battered over the cookie & she just kicks back eatin fried oreos.
-nah
I got NO RESPECK! I'm ready to finish u and turn u to minerals;
This Bird tryna C tha god.. But his Life gon be shorter than that Interview.
-lite

I got it 2 -1 in quotables in favour of art.

v - artifice