MFTastik 0-0 vs Lotto Smirk 6-6 - MF WINS

[Orc]

NBL Season 9


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MFtastick Lotto Smirk

[MFtastick]

Checking in.

16?

[Lotto Smirk]

12

[MFtastick]

Whatever. 12 it is

[Lotto Smirk]

Ext

[MFtastick]

Orc do I just post the verse here

[Orc]

Yeah man or you can send it to me

[MFtastick]

Off the rip. Dog, your shit. Nobodies ever been glad they read your battles./
Your punches fall flat. You build up to nothing like finding out Bowser left this castle/
Let me find out where you live. Squad full of Donkey Kongs. That mean we all lifting barrels/
Knock knock. Open the door to a bunch of 40s singing like Christmas carols/

I see Lotto rockin some mean Jordan's, Jeans sportin the crease on em?/
Then ima swing on em. I Call my jab a dentist the way my it's taking teeth off him/
Pocket check, keys, wallets, im snatchin whatever he keeps on him/
Then Pull double beams on him and clap cans like Steve Austin./

Il Split your fucking face open, either hand got the meanest jab./
Pull the k and put the arm to his face.. Watch him Lean and dab.
I Catch him taking out the trash He getting killed on the porch./
I put this kid in a box but We ain't building a fort./

[Lotto Smirk]

Yo been mad busy but can key Sumin up quick if you'll allow it?

[Lotto Smirk]

fuck 16 I wasted 10, but one punch'll end this weak whore
one bar'll lift him up to drop him back down to the floor that's a seesaw
have the gun make ya sweat knowing ya life'll end soon
cus when arms raised w/ metal on his face it's certain mf doom
u no sort of threat, I'll lay u out if u try n question that
feet'll get dragged across before ya step when I treat ya like a welcome mat
when it comes to sex no chick can say if your bad or good
cus no girl wanna play w/ MFD cus he struggles to get wood
said all sort of shit before the intersite then fraze put u in a hearse
u claimed everyone on netcees wack but that only applies when u post a verse

Keyed ten take it or leave it....

[CBA]

Off the rip. Dog, your shit. Nobodies ever been glad they read your battles./
Your punches fall flat. You build up to nothing like finding out Bowser left this castle/
Gave me a chuckle but can't give this a thumbs up
Let me find out where you live. Squad full of Donkey Kongs. That mean we all lifting barrels/
Knock knock. Open the door to a bunch of 40s singing like Christmas carols/
I dug it
I see Lotto rockin some mean Jordan's, Jeans sportin the crease on em?/
Then ima swing on em. I Call my jab a dentist the way my it's taking teeth off him/
Nah
Pocket check, keys, wallets, im snatchin whatever he keeps on him/
Then Pull double beams on him and clap cans like Steve Austin./
:D
Il Split your fucking face open, either hand got the meanest jab./
Pull the k and put the arm to his face.. Watch him Lean and dab.
Eh
I Catch him taking out the trash He getting killed on the porch./
I put this kid in a box but We ain't building a fort./
Felt this could've been a lot more creative

vs

fuck 16 I wasted 10, but one punch'll end this weak whore
one bar'll lift him up to drop him back down to the floor that's a seesaw
Alright
have the gun make ya sweat knowing ya life'll end soon
cus when arms raised w/ metal on his face it's certain mf doom
Too predictable
u no sort of threat, I'll lay u out if u try n question that
feet'll get dragged across before ya step when I treat ya like a welcome mat
Nah
when it comes to sex no chick can say if your bad or good
cus no girl wanna play w/ MFD cus he struggles to get wood
Wacky punch line, wasn't sure if you were talking about MDF type of wood tho lol
said all sort of shit before the intersite then fraze put u in a hearse
u claimed everyone on netcees wack but that only applies when u post a verse
Nah

Props to Lotto for putting in something and showing up but MF got this, even though MF didn't say or do anything crazy in this one.

[Kenny the OG]

Tbh the singing like X'mas carols concept feels dated. As well as the clapping cans/Steve Austin connection. And by now, any bars referring to dabs are played unless u REALLY flip it on some other shit. The dentist/taking teeth bar was too basic. I liked the closer tho that was solid.

I HATED that seesaw bar. And the closer was super basic. But the doormat bar was cool but could've been dope with better wording. The my doom bar was cool as well but also, could've hit harder with better execution.

Below average battle but I gotta go with loti dadi.

[Toil]

MF: Christmas carols, clap cans

Lotto: MF Doom

Hmm not the best battle fellas. Lotto's opener was garbage, but it picked up a bit after that. MF Doom line was quite creative. MF had a couple of gun quotables, and just edged it for me.

Vote = MF

[Hottest Vixen]

This battle could have been better & stronger enough Lotto Opener need more work MF More Creative compare to Lotto.

vote- MF

[Saitama]

eh battle.. give it to mf I guess, rmbva shoe in

[Og smokinstein]

I gotta go with mf, even tho he had some played shit

lotto versed seem a lil rushed, would've won if he was able to use max effort.

Okay battle.. vote mf

[Ghost1]

Off the rip. Dog, your shit. Nobodies ever been glad they read your battles./
Your punches fall flat. You build up to nothing like finding out Bowser left this castle/

Lol...ehhhhh...flows cool punch left me a little underwhelmed tho

Let me find out where you live. Squad full of Donkey Kongs. That mean we all lifting barrels/
Knock knock. Open the door to a bunch of 40s singing like Christmas carols/

Lol stylin. Dk barrels is played. I fuck w that carols part hardbody tho.

I see Lotto rockin some mean Jordan's, Jeans sportin the crease on em?/
Then ima swing on em. I Call my jab a dentist the way my it's taking teeth off him/
Pocket check, keys, wallets, im snatchin whatever he keeps on him/
Then Pull double beams on him and clap cans like Steve Austin./

Swear I've seen that steve Austin line before??? If not its fire haha. Dentist shit was played an wack.


Il Split your fucking face open, either hand got the meanest jab./
Pull the k and put the arm to his face.. Watch him Lean and dab.

Sum1 just did this the other day too....i swear. Fuck w it tho

I Catch him taking out the trash He getting killed on the porch./
I put this kid in a box but We ain't building a fort./

LOL

Dope verse honestly tho





fuck 16 I wasted 10, but one punch'll end this weak whore
one bar'll lift him up to drop him back down to the floor that's a seesaw

This is fire

have the gun make ya sweat knowing ya life'll end soon
cus when arms raised w/ metal on his face it's certain mf doom

Prolly played on him. Dope tho.

u no sort of threat, I'll lay u out if u try n question that
feet'll get dragged across before ya step when I treat ya like a welcome mat

Played

when it comes to sex no chick can say if your bad or good
cus no girl wanna play w/ MFD cus he struggles to get wood

Nope

said all sort of shit before the intersite then fraze put u in a hearse
u claimed everyone on netcees wack but that only applies when u post a verse

Nothin here





Man mf had sum played shit but he had sum bangers too an just an overall more appealing style to me. Lotto should've matched him cuz the 10 he threw up wasn't enuff. Seesaw was good tho.



V mf

[Schadenfreude]

MFTASTIK not because he was crazy, actually other than his opener & closer, I've literally seen every concept he used. Yet the verse was clean & concise, even w/ the familiar concepts through out the verse. As for Lotto, he was disappointing because he didn't capitalize & go for the jugular, only the first 2 bars were nasty, the rest were weak asl.

[jilti]

Agreed on 12 lines but lotto only dropped 10.

Anyways got castle, carol, dab, and fort by MF

Got seesaw, welcome mat, and MFD by lotto


V/ MF